【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
9 C7 h2 _, d2 X" U+ M- d) j1 j- @' X3 vxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
' T1 Y8 @: V9 ovichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

9 l5 ^5 t1 K9 H6 J$ ?* ]2 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 [! t" S' o% m7 f2 S; S4 k9 v皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

# k1 I1 M7 O' C6 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 C4 T/ |  D  |% y月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
; U" s6 V8 F1 i+ U  s" B1 f) H一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
) r1 `- D7 V& ]( S0 d我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 R& t, j' P2 O3 z" b" C我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
$ g4 O* f) }& J" V3 r1 qEvery other word you utter is love
$ Q% U, @) h* D# X; a口口声声 说你爱我
' y) i0 Y5 w7 CI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
: h6 ^4 b1 Y+ Z2 |爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
( I4 L4 |: t2 W" a$ H世间万物  皆不能比

4 C; j- T* m0 [3 T- CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
( g2 g& c$ z0 O我真想看透你的心
$ l: b/ i$ x$ o8 lI invite you to rip it out
* U/ O* l" q5 u. H& j& Z! |# U你尽管把它掏去
& m8 M( F' A6 V9 h  C# X1 b/ PTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
2 u9 R, A/ h' k0 h3 z  q: E! h可我依然满心忧虑
6 c- k7 Q- L, u% k! o0 a1 |$ }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ g( |9 F6 A: Z. y5 S你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
% w6 a  ^( \; t8 V7 C真恨不能 以死明志
: U- n1 C  Y, z3 a2 z. jI only have one tongue
  P" E/ E: S0 n& o% ]! {" ?我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
8 u, U0 r3 O  j$ S+ p- _It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 r1 ^8 c& g/ N" f+ o0 ^也恨不得  多如千万
5 A6 \- O; o* S) yWith such a tongue as yours,
& V9 T  |) o6 @& j4 u你这张嘴 真真厉害
* u3 e! ^7 p3 V. r5 P. uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. L" E# d) ?5 s5 o. e8 E能说会道 无以伦比
, f: ?) I! R$ g* h# J1 Z! r# w: HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ ?, ?  E2 }+ H2 l! D" T若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
/ I/ b. p& A5 ?( zRambling on about a thousand words of love
# U% i; i2 O& [& a! i向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

- F0 U+ d. c( d6 d/ `+ z" xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. {% e2 a6 i2 F& ~( e从未向你吐露衷情
1 f' e" |, w+ ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; I; W6 R! y- K8 c# M5 o/ Q爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
7 h: e5 z: W6 K1 r5 c% aFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
% y* _3 U; k' U4 I- L1 UI already loved you with all my heart
3 \) P- D( o  k( W0 E8 p从此别无他意
$ N7 P! U) H6 F7 RWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
& [* m# f; n4 XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. v' a& Y: H- |' M5 M. b, m奈何从未谈及内心
" s- w: ?6 t3 t8 ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ x) f- D' p, Z) w+ T# {若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
) v9 T* ~' J$ G$ E4 y9 ^' S3 q) D+ p爱呀，爱就一个字
6 ]& A; i3 r2 UWhy is it so difficult to express?
, a, J; h7 {( v5 T. a为何如此难言？
# x! {) a2 D' kI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
/ J) {* j, U* Y却始终未曾出口
& v3 k( R* P- {4 O, w7 MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, t' e, k: \% z. _) b9 i只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
0 A8 Y  N) Y6 D8 F5 B+ Y' iIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 S# [+ y% s* A$ ]今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
1 G' J6 F9 f' c; @* H- dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
: d# d; X- Y" `Entrust my love within your heart
$ ~$ v5 A0 V( E0 }5 m2 W. o从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
5 J" i, P% S1 {0 l/ QWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 O0 Y8 M& [1 h4 l; C为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
" Q" F  c3 ~1 rBut I never did
- M1 t% k5 N1 W& p; ~2 v7 i却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
6 v% }3 @3 X; V8 L- G假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
! @+ e9 s5 s; j- ^' y4 J$ {5 [2 A( n/ OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 O" k: I7 L2 a1 f1 q4 B* b不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
. E8 o, @' t- Q) V0 V可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
1 P& b0 x4 [8 t" f从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
/ }- D1 U$ @! I7 S( ?老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
5 I3 h0 G" M! U  i, O) L刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
- n" t$ [% B& K' B2 d, Y老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
4 S4 H# ]9 F: _7 S刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。