【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  c5 n' O% C% ?歌词我附在后面。
2 t$ C% M" y* }" C- ?7 }% nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* T* ^4 \* \7 W* p/ kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 p1 x: r; C- V# K$ d- H- \' vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' s# ]4 Q% o- k$ D: pThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 i$ T7 h" @" n: ?% J  O5 YWith the moon kissing it every night
( ?# r9 o* A2 O4 f) L* h+ J) |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 }5 ^( C2 v8 `7 ]* x# Z3 a2 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 w5 [. c# c% w  gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! E7 B8 d2 s! F, ?# FI’m still filled with fear
# M. D8 ?$ }8 P: c4 g$ `, HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" L4 Z  N0 e$ l- JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 x/ |0 ?7 e& H( o1 _+ jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' X5 A6 Y7 _0 ~6 |8 B7 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" x2 j  L1 s) ?6 O( g2 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 j; D# T" F& R/ Z# O0 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 c- k8 k0 I2 ]* L! w3 m$ l) _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( V: B4 X5 o! C9 _+ q& f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* u+ h- _, a) m7 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) u- q9 N+ m% P4 Z' Z& Q: D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 z. T+ k  c" |7 P( l7 ^9 e<P>你无需担心</P>
) g  b: f. G- k6 V" P" A7 j  T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 I' x* T, b! c+ X$ U) K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: L/ j! j/ l5 c' i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 U6 L  P) s' w9 r1 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) y( Q5 L6 g* M7 `- i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 D" \% T! R  o$ o' p8 t7 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. t- o" k. F9 D: u) L% l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" p$ S* e5 i& l9 p: H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% [4 `, q4 p" P7 c$ i% O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 k8 s3 ]) a' d0 r  j: r6 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( O3 N0 G: s- u3 D/ \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 M1 E6 J, k! J! z3 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) c0 x3 P& M; K, v+ ]5 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 t0 l& S' g/ X: q6 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) h8 D* D9 F% Y. o/ a, |<P>I regret not dying</P>
! X& F) |2 [+ N1 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" H8 U4 g, p0 c% ]0 X3 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" `$ |& K3 l7 K+ i) W" b# @  N- D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) z+ ~  N" `: Q$ \5 q) b2 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! l2 d1 T8 _1 [- v$ z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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! ^, V4 ^, O5 }- O! e' D, X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* K4 _! N% y& k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>