【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- |/ F6 D; l6 X( ]' ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
% j! h: Y- C! R; NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ Y% m7 @0 @6 A' tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ T0 W3 O  }2 s1 B9 {The sky is happy down to its soul
8 X, y2 K6 O- i" SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% s: D+ w% G, X  ZEvery other word you utter is love
! W* K1 `% u) e0 aI really want to know just how much you love me
6 Y/ z6 @% x; I* ]0 HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* h5 f1 j/ @# N$ v0 pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( o% d/ o$ t1 I/ b" t! RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; ?& o. ?% v- w+ G2 X$ AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 G! I9 ]( Q5 B  F0 bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ K+ |' v" f1 ?' J. c' S& ^$ Z. k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* Q7 C( I, k7 x# A1 p3 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' g; C! o2 d8 z! U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% ~5 N5 F. r+ a$ H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 k( k; U6 S% w1 v  O4 p( K* J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% U5 N& {- c5 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ d& ^7 b& m2 u! _0 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
! y& ~- Z, y5 t! n" t' u( L3 e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, x- }: U0 ?! ], @+ z$ s$ Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 {5 t$ J9 h- p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. t# p# S6 D# n% b: e$ ]6 g. }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- M  a9 H3 D: @. I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; A& Y7 P+ r. V) u: E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 I! z/ O7 ~) o2 n. j: Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 B7 ~9 b2 @4 @% W1 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 E% {; g. E- V; ~+ }+ M5 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! I/ e  g3 o* k3 J8 u8 J( C! ]  m) |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- ~- C& i! z5 j, w0 B3 i5 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 n6 F5 A: I7 j  C0 p- ~4 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  [( X5 Q/ F: X+ r/ E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 \, P& k( A: x9 i5 C0 g; Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* L: B5 M" n5 I2 k- b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 p* M3 M) T( T/ l7 S$ P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>