【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 q2 z* ^& [# f$ c9 P" w+ f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) O$ w6 K1 w% d$ [! kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; J3 c4 C8 q0 M  j5 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* j3 G' Z  b5 C" @3 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( g0 ^3 N1 E% D. YThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 K$ Y+ C6 c( l. Q2 _6 M" RWith the moon kissing it every night
" {; n" D# U( \' M2 H% lSeeing the sky content with its love
" i; w* p1 a( z2 B/ ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 k3 @( z1 H+ b9 a3 E1 l- }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& i) S9 c. h" r* n7 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& e# a4 I) I3 b1 LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' Q, a% D3 {% D# [7 U4 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" m6 h& F; m- I1 s' O5 I' cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 k: |: Q& T0 V4 {% UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& ?/ F$ }7 [$ A+ |4 o3 q8 tI’m still filled with fear
* c" [8 r2 b+ Q$ z* E7 hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 i$ q; _, |+ \: EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" {! A! K8 n! L- ^' q+ A* @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 D" C, N3 e, |" C- iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) b: d% w6 c% J  O* `  D1 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ i6 t- d0 S: _/ q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! I& S8 K1 M0 S! r/ M1 b- P3 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 P" n' v! e# X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- R2 A6 y3 g3 d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 m9 x1 f) v6 P8 h5 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* N+ n5 n: {0 L8 ]4 R  t; Z6 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 m# c% X) I# B' A8 Y' l/ e  j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 w% [0 _+ A  a9 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% C6 g- N. {+ ^& L: M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 o- x" {* U" e  k* s, E+ l( N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, J' r, @% W( q* y. W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# {. }4 X! g1 v, {; B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 ], q# d3 o) F0 N! o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 o3 w, M4 H) t0 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 s! ^9 y) F+ g+ u. O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ J  {6 p6 N* x3 G. K$ }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& Q& [4 D# d* j, x. P! Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ i% [7 n/ I  o' Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 s+ Y/ k5 P3 C, q% z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 A/ S3 _0 K+ i5 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) v: u6 y& e; s% S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* [, o, O0 [$ R- P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 z7 L7 }( l/ o" H7 z) H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# }* L* F3 `! }5 C5 U( O# z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 u  p- u# J* w" h+ k$ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 V6 t+ J$ i0 H7 ]* _<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 O2 V" s0 ?- @( M: Y# J7 K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! P$ g2 @. u0 A6 ^2 f/ z9 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" K6 q" `% C0 n/ h  e: t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 O, B8 }8 q7 p$ w9 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& ?  D# K, _0 b7 @8 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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