【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( d) Y4 w" i! Z# K6 H# ^, rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 B. G. Y4 e% J+ S0 ~: K1 g/ wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& J" G$ ^% J. {  WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 ]3 ~. p, t' D" [/ C6 X  ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, v( T9 i9 d5 a; G4 U& u3 |You needn’t fear anything
  P" k# r: [; I' ?' `) ^# h: fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& q# j) J2 s9 s1 gEvery other word you utter is love
5 f. t. F. O8 d3 H" s5 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 B$ R6 s/ P9 ]6 G$ A- L+ QI want so much to see inside your heart
8 {. z* b+ @2 o$ R2 @3 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& R. X' u2 Z# [- n8 sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 r4 M5 X8 F( z1 @) nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( @6 H- y6 Y- L0 O8 rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; w" [# z- L4 S/ Q0 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- Z1 S5 l) B) P% s! R  o' C% r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% L' x( |* I: k" t# M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- ^8 V2 C' y" L7 K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 z! I$ e7 g& U3 _8 I' J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) \  ?  s) C. H* F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 g( o; g" }* m- x0 U* U1 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' A, [% i- n% i3 j" d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ N; V) [/ f1 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 _6 v, ]$ \: i1 U' x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 R& g4 a  Q$ y, x" G8 r6 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# c* Y  X7 I" J- a7 r  H& C! p9 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 O! M, I4 f) U' ?1 l  ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  _' a4 i8 V3 @3 w% Q( V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ K" k+ A2 S, Y( b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  H) i! ?/ |9 A5 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ p) _# W) y; `8 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ N; y  m: w" q1 A" S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# Y9 f" N* }- s5 ^5 D2 s; j$ U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) U! Y2 D' }: Z* O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% Q+ b' A5 n+ Q! b9 U5 e) u; v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. i$ T9 v( Q! I( I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; @6 @8 a1 c, P, |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 p( v3 z8 s/ C5 @+ y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 w5 r8 k% n# s; P" \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! w; W6 s9 [4 ]: N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 m' @% I7 S  b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 u' Y6 N) p! c5 b8 c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>