【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- B" e% e- g  H: T  m7 r+ ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; L  C9 [( b  S% F% F3 t0 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' E: q0 L, o  |2 u8 l$ DWith the moon kissing it every night
5 \3 n# Q1 m" z/ U: a$ jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 z& v; M. G6 ]0 SI really want to know just how much you love me
5 e( H" C! t' v; ~! \8 ?) }- CI love you I love you with all my heart
* u6 `, r6 n4 |Nothing can compare to my love
$ q) w' B4 W" a6 p+ OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 ]) h8 d6 V& L% QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 t1 B+ a8 F1 R/ ^* G! a6 S% dI’m still filled with fear
1 A/ H* P4 V# kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 j1 i  |* N- n1 c3 U6 N: q; lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: m' V1 Q3 S: m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- q$ H3 m$ b. W7 |$ H3 t9 b& F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& O9 C; P/ u' r: K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, f# V- z% L, _# t$ O/ ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 v) _6 }: U0 C: ~% P/ W( c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: Z- d0 b8 ?4 ~' J' G; h# R$ N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# d6 Q, @# \$ F# W' Q4 C! [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 x7 r! {% {8 v2 E1 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 A: X1 [+ |5 \- W( E- C& d1 }0 E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 K9 J& f$ E" w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 O7 x* w( f9 o! ~& j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: e8 G' _1 ~7 ]5 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ N5 g8 f3 N3 }7 `* E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' u3 p: Y  h7 g2 G7 a1 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ~& Q- W0 B& a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% d% T& L0 ]5 {4 v& {( g6 d# r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ p: X- r! Y7 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ D5 F: N+ O" }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 y  s' G  X0 v$ d) j5 V9 H+ z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" |8 d  H" D" W) A+ C6 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# r) A% O; r5 f3 f  Y  G5 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& Y9 j: G# a' O2 C6 ^2 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ N% c1 g& b' z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 F/ c% p3 C' a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. Z# Z1 M: V7 ?. ], z0 {" E# i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! Z: ]0 c7 J# j1 Z* A# w1 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  X" u8 E3 t) U$ T( j) ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 l  I, M- [5 v1 e" @2 o3 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 o8 @5 L7 F- |! o1 x0 x" j& T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( i7 O4 x3 }9 i, ^3 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# N& g4 x, D# e" G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 l- S9 w/ o5 W7 M' ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>