【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  P. h# S, r" c: Q) U6 KThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 R- P) @0 X  R& }, W, T% JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 ?" Y5 I  X6 T2 k8 y3 \1 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) h: l# r+ Y6 D4 b! INothing can compare to my love
4 ]% l1 v6 o5 a- _+ t2 n; H" \9 H2 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' z5 I/ D2 ~' {* _I want so much to see inside your heart
1 C' q/ L) o) |5 P: A9 k! tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" S, O% D1 K/ w; ZI regret not dying
* [: V6 E. U6 X0 f( ~# c2 b8 }) kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. V$ W& `; w% g4 j. y, {3 t! |5 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: ]+ k5 d, Y3 C$ |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 f5 F  a' Q, M+ c( P! D6 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* Y) q& y' c5 \' q% g, h; G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) S7 i* l5 S: d6 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 d3 `" Y9 f9 F) Y3 g: b+ v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% x  s8 w- u' _/ E0 f+ t2 T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 ^6 y5 x$ x! |/ `. ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! g3 Z/ s* [/ A- K$ k2 r- J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ e5 D' c& M# B5 P$ L4 o# S4 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 d0 g2 o6 @- A% P4 M" V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; m( E3 \) }. F0 m/ `! o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! L% X5 h) X# z8 O7 ^2 R+ M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" _. @4 P8 n. L! d/ N3 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ x. |# n; v! x9 c! k- ~+ h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( H" u+ z6 [. m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 ]7 p/ J0 ^  I, c6 f) q6 D7 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- R$ ]9 [) ?# m$ g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) X6 P( Z( f' O7 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ }8 \  R9 T& s& D9 I$ Z" R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, \) k' x; ?8 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- p. k* M8 Y* l/ @# m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 r4 j4 n1 q/ g  H. i/ T9 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ B2 A5 ^' h$ I8 n/ V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  \' G- n" c# K# c. O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' r8 }& s. i5 q4 W; ]+ S5 b我请你剖开它

: j; K  T+ S: a! v" E$ K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' W' K7 q& z4 Q1 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>