【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ d" f, g- w- K8 c9 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 s  |+ [. d! }4 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ D' Y. @6 M) n, XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' q0 z: H/ w) Z3 i7 Y* LSeeing the sky content with its love
& k. A* {. q4 R: ~: h( |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 V  Z* a* S( k4 H% d# Z5 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' J+ h# p1 A- }* yI love you I love you with all my heart
" k7 w' L4 L1 |Nothing can compare to my love
$ p) r0 V# [- q" H& X5 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 b' z1 w5 I1 C5 W( m- ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 j3 C: U# E! D9 [I want so much to see inside your heart
; u- e& T; P) X6 l, R3 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- q6 p9 r$ H$ _" UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) m/ T- \9 b  [$ W: X# LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: p! x+ T" [" _! Y) I% bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 {+ L/ O9 J# N% N4 B! sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, Z. g# x, b2 T/ R$ L5 e2 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 w( @# B. Q9 X5 r6 S2 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( \7 R) z; ^5 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" h7 r% J* ?" t! w' S/ x4 g( A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" \  P# v6 K/ q) R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ K  w$ Z# K" @/ E/ A' H9 ~$ k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% p) e3 \/ h/ U. y<P>你无需担心</P>
% r; D) i% t6 N  y, ~4 p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) R/ a/ S8 C: y( _! j' o* Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. Z7 K" R1 q' Q2 i" ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# T8 ~$ s" c6 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% d7 T5 U3 F6 y- u; K- b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' J* N/ U! a' ~$ W% v. E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# D: h. |$ s! L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  L; Z: [% H1 \) j! b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 E) J  f# y/ Z& x! b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 I2 O* W2 l$ E2 L) u; {: I7 M" p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 D- M- i6 {. s+ n4 J2 Z" o% B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% n* ~. h% h# W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 P+ S& u: o8 z. `# x$ x5 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 _. T+ M& ~+ A! B( H) Z# f% f5 w+ p% P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 ~3 A* Z4 a- }: Y5 W9 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: M7 t; ]9 n6 ]$ C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 v! Y. a- A8 h; y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>