【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, W0 c4 g) V; {* \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; S( N: o$ H0 U8 V! r# T, Q+ r1 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
; U- O1 F+ s3 o# F7 b) \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" F- P3 l3 F  t( NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! G# q, U' G* ?4 r( ]- O& NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) H/ m% D7 ~. u4 x  w; u* NI really want to know just how much you love me
% C7 D$ h, h' o6 v( `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& a! Y. Z+ \9 w5 C$ [3 J' fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 V1 p9 G9 X) `3 j, qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' U0 i4 k; C7 x# G! pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 J- ]) `- S+ l, TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 u, q, |* [& y3 ^- jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 s9 a# j, G6 n# Q! d; IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ r  x. S# r$ V6 h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' M) P/ U2 ]: x" E2 X7 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* f% O! B) X0 [+ n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 e' @) m0 e0 X) c9 ?  Q! s1 X. j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ F1 T! l0 z/ R" R8 N8 O0 {! C0 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: X, t# d% f  t$ ?% j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* l, S4 F' V; r4 U! D- A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; p6 d! W, C9 c2 n/ ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% B3 p0 t: P: y( ^8 P$ H. A) T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) u5 w7 a6 X/ Z# \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  \8 s8 ^! K  T' O+ k& ]: c6 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 V! y. P' ^& e  Y% ?, Q& t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& _; _+ M3 t. X! o) Q5 e, P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) n7 ]# O3 h2 m0 `, w+ a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 D, h  E1 D+ W9 p9 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 b& V4 o/ w) c7 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ j2 ^+ t5 \! B9 F; F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 N8 f# n" c, H4 `' f  i# p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- V+ g7 M0 ?; n. T) J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& f: ~2 y' @4 z' h; R- @& L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- F: a2 c9 D4 u/ x& G$ L& x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 u5 {% n2 s- T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: `# l  s/ Y( q! k* A) e+ M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ ]! X/ ^1 ?/ k1 N8 E+ D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 x4 G2 x1 X& G: W' j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 n5 }, d: T/ \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ C0 L& [* }- D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* g+ P# K0 u8 X+ W3 S/ j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 Z4 x0 q5 `1 m# x7 D6 M0 f' L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) n! A- y' M& _# h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 V! ~6 e) {- S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 z6 n. ]( L. U$ g  A2 S, L2 s. c我请你剖开它

. `5 i% I1 }# g: ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; S% Q8 n2 u) `1 m: L+ O) Z1 ~; W& n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>