【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, K3 L* [' [( U2 M+ @4 H1 c8 J0 d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 e4 Q0 o. }) O0 `' YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( ^3 `# y9 @% [6 Z3 ~: }The sky is happy down to its soul
" q  j9 D) O. v% G: l' p! u1 yWith the moon kissing it every night
2 F# p  n/ e* [. _7 LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 q7 p) F& U, fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 N5 z7 n) A4 n9 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( X6 H5 g0 }1 |1 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
2 |6 R; t$ ?* @5 L& X+ V3 S7 X) zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& q4 ^$ U3 W2 M2 F8 @: KI regret not dying
1 U! W) I' X! II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 t- e0 Z4 ?  \+ I0 HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& \% y" o' V' hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 z5 O, z+ M+ N: sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ [8 G' s/ Y5 \' I6 k6 V/ O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! j* t: b. G. n3 j3 I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ V$ C* l# l& U# G, h+ }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# T1 A; j3 h7 M0 P) _7 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 y! Q8 E( g& w* B3 x* j# U! P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* c, W, T! ?) b) d8 K0 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 c% @" E* F! {# G, p7 ]) R, {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 i# `0 E5 W. b. {$ W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 p' [/ T2 h6 P( N& W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; K% [1 b$ F0 P0 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, s7 n. p3 A) t3 q' p0 z) d: o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 ]. z/ k/ {, Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ N$ H: m% a) W# E+ n' a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) v+ p- a" b( |  ?6 s: f1 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' P) X: O* q: e6 P3 A# d& e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 j6 A, S1 x+ u# M& T( H6 }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) S3 D9 h. `" |1 [! P1 m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# [' I, F  \3 `; A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ T8 Q" |) c( P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ G6 ^7 R- n! p4 q- B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  B* |5 v6 l3 P# f- ?3 B* S; h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# K- e7 C4 ?" K0 S6 T. [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( U* d7 x; S/ G. j/ Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 c! W7 R1 {; G9 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. h/ a) O( `7 F' l- ]. t<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 x7 X% {( v4 D' ~1 d1 y$ R6 Q9 y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" H6 e% r; |0 s' C% Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& H# {) R3 X# i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ f/ g% v7 b+ e6 S; r3 V, y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

3 z2 r2 |7 J  A1 j  z2 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% f6 m! v7 A/ Y7 w7 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>