【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 i# K% V) i% K( \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# z+ b5 L8 I* d3 J4 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! j; N- q/ l2 Q0 R6 o# i4 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ l) m3 K$ b. {2 H! w6 o$ WWith the moon kissing it every night
) ^8 x$ S; c4 L' C% `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 ~  r: d1 d; u9 ~0 LI really want to know just how much you love me
- S; k: e7 L4 ~/ V9 T" k# A; FI love you I love you with all my heart
% ~5 v+ l; }! N4 m, M5 c* D$ CNothing can compare to my love
! u9 n; V+ n6 \. GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ |0 F& D7 i: v/ A' YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) z  `* Z, D1 _  ^9 h1 K- |1 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* n7 |& Q- H: ~9 F' V, Z  hWith such a tongue as yours,
1 U, S3 j* [! \4 Z" i, [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, T5 m. v  i: A1 yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; Y* s, j" f: q: b& Y: T9 B) v8 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% v0 e1 M9 |' W* c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ i8 |# V' U8 J% T0 m, V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: P9 p9 m: x' ?# G+ j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: Z2 P2 m* A3 c  Q' k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 C7 z+ i# l* T3 Z) Z: n( ^. m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( V% A4 X1 W" H, I2 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 u/ i- A- B9 }# F0 f* \" k3 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, i5 g9 q- x* @* A: N8 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  N% T9 L; X( P/ g4 ?3 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 X$ A* O% @8 X! S" k- }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 e& y: V& C$ r! J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! i6 J# O1 M8 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* H' b; p+ y& ?7 i& V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: W2 z/ u3 H. W: v/ b$ ]) Z7 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 h4 \! F0 C. j; U4 |5 W9 B3 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. z1 c$ Q2 F: u+ f1 S% S" U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) J$ {4 J: x, z) I/ E  ^0 G5 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- [  {' @/ `# t0 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 z: l7 E$ @2 j* J% O% x5 a9 \& o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* F# W1 f6 V# m9 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 {9 c6 |+ _  |3 X( R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ y) U4 ?# _; S1 V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 q0 v! g2 P) n+ W! m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: j* w% V" o" R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ u; ?2 }$ c5 v3 G0 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 z# H3 l. ~6 [* z: U+ ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) S  c; j* ]6 Z( d7 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>