【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ g+ k- ^; j$ ~* t5 Q: gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) _* Z0 U$ C/ I8 n  ]0 c) u  VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 ]' w0 m* A9 E0 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, r  k7 e* W8 o- u, e$ lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# Z' \. f* B/ p/ F4 KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% {" u# Z" v" b5 _) W$ I. wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 A  K5 l5 |; D8 t$ _I really want to know just how much you love me
5 I% f1 ]+ g6 b" ~0 {I love you I love you with all my heart
0 Q/ t0 |6 P. J! ~% D7 ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 y5 s9 j. Y* k) {- m: \" AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 ]9 B" V6 R7 I& e: WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, r- O$ w# W, R" YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ P) `' D4 t* K& ~& I+ X3 MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 P0 e' h) u  X5 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 i) B$ ?: o, I7 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 m7 v, Z. c+ J! e# p1 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 f# A, S+ Z! P  C0 L: `  n( `! i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. H$ P+ D) O2 j) @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 X4 v- Z( u5 v7 c8 B8 ~  n' ]& S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ R6 i( }2 L3 y& H" u# K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' z  X$ |; T( F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  M( s) u! m) I' w2 x6 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) E9 w1 q2 U: _  {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. \7 ]0 w$ g/ {6 S0 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; O0 u6 Z' q1 g# l' f7 d* I9 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. ]9 p7 Y3 D8 C1 {* a6 K& t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 j4 K, _* L+ \$ H* r" Y) o* b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ B3 o2 d" _7 m) Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ T- O4 h- a3 {) x" ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; U0 B& P# _- d8 R1 _9 k* i5 Q# j7 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 z: s! X, c( }/ k5 I- G* H5 e1 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 {3 D: z5 U, F' J" G0 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ i3 |# w1 |! L8 D* A  E! ]+ E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  d2 p" i6 c; k0 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 s$ v; W1 H4 X  _! b  o3 S+ L2 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( T1 J" J$ r' y* D8 f1 P  Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 a9 X4 i9 ~) }. G/ D! Z) ?8 m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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. N! |. h" @$ F, r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' c3 o' X6 H4 z8 |5 l5 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>