【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ \( i7 w/ ]- a4 E( SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' `5 J4 h% Y7 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 y( y7 Y& b) u3 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ s6 {3 s  P  r, ~9 aWith the moon kissing it every night
: ?" l9 U& m8 A% m4 D6 u2 ySeeing the sky content with its love
  y; q+ W' k* M( vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" _. A0 |/ I2 j4 g: l( s/ |; ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ?$ \/ o( P. @- s0 u' ~* qEvery other word you utter is love
7 Q  E- d, I- Y$ }2 j9 ?. o; xI really want to know just how much you love me
/ P% ?5 v9 e+ h" j  _1 h; MI love you I love you with all my heart
4 ^3 Q- {4 m, J( x; {) ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" c$ T& [  a& BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 m. M1 K: f, x7 M4 T5 i. A% |7 OI want so much to see inside your heart
4 Y; b! y8 e2 P+ sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 W8 V6 F- J- a9 S2 P  R& Y, x( RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. c/ a- i4 Y% [+ F" v- X$ nI regret not dying
- v* G- q1 _$ k- U4 S# A, B- p3 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* O; j4 W6 x6 B7 z6 t: TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) S. S) v  k  K$ E4 G: h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 }2 X5 ?, k( y, F7 z! S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( {% T  i7 B3 n) F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- ^# I" B$ x5 N* K: [# a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 @7 H# ]+ {) s9 n; i. c1 u# i* Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ p$ Q. _' K! B) L0 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ]% W9 h- g* Y& B1 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' S$ w, p, G  l. j- ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, B' q) t5 ?3 I; Z<P>你无需担心</P>
* J8 I2 ~6 g, h# z9 w( V* m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! m( ]. C- I3 k* a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) I4 h, ?4 r* C' d" i8 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* l7 x9 }1 N2 o6 d# X" O; ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( N4 a9 i( i$ o8 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' h2 F% G: G$ L/ I7 G% ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! l! `2 s* d' `, \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) M9 u! ^( q! Z3 p5 s6 e6 x2 S- l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 N  X8 M% J- x; ]+ K, V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 A- `5 g' g2 ?8 m8 k) ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" C* _5 D" l) ?: U5 k# _/ G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 j! M9 S9 D- u' F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" f) Q% u( L+ l6 V8 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: _3 B: P5 p4 W( p8 n: [1 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% Y8 X$ s, {" V/ X8 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* _& X. ~- h0 Z1 o+ \" c我请你剖开它

5 Q' j  I# S8 C6 M2 s, o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 z6 y8 E: B- x' U" X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>