【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 b4 \3 F9 Q# s歌词我附在后面。
3 R% g6 b- F4 _* a3 ]! [* h  yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- w5 z5 }( y* A2 p- q  E" }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ u2 Q$ b9 D* E- R" LThe sky is happy down to its soul
( B7 Q: H/ j0 vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& o2 N$ C. K6 b: p3 B0 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: A) A" K* i1 A6 MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 o2 D, t3 i  h+ {/ v  c- J1 uI really want to know just how much you love me
0 H% x4 O4 s% A3 H, q- aI love you I love you with all my heart
4 Q! e' g' [2 B3 H2 tNothing can compare to my love
8 m4 p+ ~+ d+ o6 U9 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( \1 p2 u$ U* |. a% a, j3 L4 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 ^$ {: g. U; z! uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% x& m  q! o5 t5 T* U8 {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: S; b, i/ G) D# _3 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ R; }2 F! P  j1 }. {; {0 aWith such a tongue as yours,
: i' H+ w) \9 m" eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( }0 k/ u" o3 i, iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; |/ l; r8 W. x5 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) Z" y: g' z: U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& R1 F: F2 k  ]2 h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: M3 f3 W* c9 B5 {" ^; }# z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& J. S1 F/ Z5 v- y$ _( l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 }" R# E! _1 _$ E# a# V7 ]1 y/ E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% C% K' f5 `$ O5 Q8 P" ~# @" L( A+ T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ G% `& z0 A- P% z/ ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 V0 W) i  h' H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- G  k" C( x4 [  E# j, p+ m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 h5 U4 Y0 O8 L1 Q5 J* E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ f5 m# v8 O5 r7 x3 O- F  j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( a$ v! \. @9 E8 ?3 G) X<P>你无需担心</P>
7 g! R" k3 r9 ~5 [6 A" L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) _) Q6 g' B6 ]0 g! G9 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 B/ B5 T( P2 e# v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ W; o+ {1 Q) d+ \: Q% s. g0 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 \3 j0 S+ Z: Z8 q8 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 V" L4 i6 y  c# y3 c8 ~' c$ I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ P$ z) N3 P( x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- ?" h0 v' e; W' X# ~: W, A) g9 I* n; S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ @* Y3 m' k4 o2 x4 G" b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  F5 `6 G% ?  x( s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. l: F% Q8 l* ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 U6 [3 u0 l! F! K/ o' q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 Q' e9 t2 a! e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! q% n" i7 O* a: q1 Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ n; E0 B, B! v0 Z' }4 r1 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  \$ d- O& B; ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>