【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# f1 Q% U& Y. J0 N3 x$ lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 B9 p! P# i2 a" JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  e5 B, ^7 ^9 [, ~' yThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 \5 K; \2 j1 W3 d5 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 c! x& i' X7 j4 m! sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 u" U$ U9 e  L5 L# WYou needn’t fear anything
. P# }9 o; U: {) J, K& E% w; HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  k7 i- j7 s- XI really want to know just how much you love me
5 q, l2 ?0 M) R, s' T+ \) bI love you I love you with all my heart
. U6 @- V' a" p" ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ ~3 |# v& o$ Z0 U( r4 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 C/ [  b6 u4 d! o) BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; z( [. n% P: v" j0 G1 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* b$ C/ r+ X) a  A, DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' T! a* o  O$ Y" A2 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 s! L& f* M/ e) ]5 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ W* C9 S2 S& A- t: s6 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! o3 Z( A% y, c. ~' k0 h- E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- i8 e- a- t' x4 J# m9 @/ y! a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  w( m% i- i* ?, x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& O# T6 K+ _3 D1 j2 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ [- U( I% V" Q* {/ y( v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( h$ c3 s2 j+ ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 G- p+ Q! o5 O; v( ]7 J1 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 C, y+ t, e; m5 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; }$ Q+ F- T5 J3 _) r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 ?+ A  x# L; o' S7 ^+ ~  A+ n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: ~4 |( b. {2 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- D5 u2 Z; _; h% B' s4 t5 w5 L# t) j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" w9 B3 V- Y: m0 H2 G' x$ `8 Y$ I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 g, n3 k5 ]& e2 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! ]' l* F7 D4 @1 n& h% Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 X% N+ }6 ^- Z+ ~) l% s. ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& p0 ^+ [" {1 Z) q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. a5 e2 {! g2 X4 f. ^0 m8 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, Y8 a5 l$ V0 p0 O3 @5 w5 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; t9 g/ x1 a7 M& ]5 [3 a5 i+ x/ ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>