【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; f! N4 L$ A( u歌词我附在后面。
: a/ [8 P! L% N( wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! o1 F, {3 |/ K' i8 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. v/ Q/ v) [3 q8 X' J4 x$ JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ]: o9 P# q# t' [* Z( x  {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 r& ^5 q3 i3 |% @8 X; aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" {( @( v9 ^# aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 q7 A; T. r# R! _I really want to know just how much you love me
" C5 u- R3 D7 r: w; iI love you I love you with all my heart
& N8 K1 t  y* |( C& VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. a! {. }) v' H1 E" q; y$ IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 O0 ]  m9 ~5 R: xI’m still filled with fear
0 g# ~0 ^' N  F9 Y2 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' Z' k/ B+ P& L! y2 D; Y8 {I regret not dying
1 k$ R6 Z5 [. Z/ M# dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ B7 Z7 _$ K* x$ t2 f- `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 G$ ~- r0 s/ M* r; Q6 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 ?  v0 B3 E4 r/ w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: S4 o9 S$ l4 \3 k, ~, G- @4 H' V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 G8 P: e; T5 S- S9 D3 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 A! x( h2 R( c( J2 r4 ^1 O% ~( x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. k4 p5 a, g! E! X5 b0 S  V: }6 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 A6 b- _6 E, j* X+ R' R. j  e6 D% ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 _& f5 ?1 z1 @2 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" e" K5 |0 R% F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 \5 T5 n# r/ R" T+ n3 \' K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 J. }) ?# I  Q. [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: W6 w& G3 X" S) k! H& L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( W9 K) S( m4 z% j; u' N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 m* Y+ Z; f  ~$ m' T- F1 B+ l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( o! l" Y3 ~' e# ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( D- M, D3 o+ t& \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 c6 y+ v2 f: m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 a- B0 J9 N' G8 F- ?1 q9 j  i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' X6 C8 l! ?3 q2 G' f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% f, ], u" g) ]% i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* R+ A. V. M8 Y5 [7 G3 j$ w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ R# ^+ o0 Y5 y* X  Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 k5 V# E5 o; ]+ L0 y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ D! X# m# D4 }+ O我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 \4 b5 R: G$ B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>