【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* U8 @8 O' u. oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 S" c4 }- H2 p: hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ Y! n7 H9 u* D6 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ A& M1 p0 ~1 J$ `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 w' G# Z# `4 e4 Y* f3 s7 Q- J) DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 {4 }6 K4 {( E/ ]6 v, A$ wI really want to know just how much you love me
- j# p% F; c, Z; n+ Y* F& QI love you I love you with all my heart
$ n# L+ q! I- k2 @* l' UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 m5 o) M+ _6 b( y: O- }- k( O3 ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, @) G; l1 {' u2 ~2 B: DI regret not dying
4 c& g1 o! k& A: b" XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 m) Z6 Z' V/ G* L1 y% N5 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ v1 S' M" L! \4 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; N8 ]& p; |2 O7 `; s( c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 z  l. F' _1 }/ X: A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ o6 p) E! V; H% A9 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 a+ M) `. o0 K2 T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 S, y8 m; I! \! `$ d8 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( f5 e2 |& k: q1 F" e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 l$ w0 k7 [7 H( l/ R+ b+ ~1 d9 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 U$ h7 Q& J3 _3 e0 p' h( H) h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 V- \  k4 e: L' C2 h' P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- d* k. m8 f7 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ v1 Q  i& u/ x6 E% B. q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 Z9 K* Z9 t  F! H8 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 a" p1 [  m0 R. T. _9 f9 J( a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 c% h+ D4 T# J1 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' Q- g3 I! m- t5 Y  H( C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( H6 R# ~. T/ }3 V' U8 u$ k( T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, I! D* q2 I) j$ y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! P( Z  V: c% ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ n) r" ~; U; @. L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, n3 z$ H& i4 Y1 C% w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ Q" {# _8 w7 x  [<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 \) j- L8 t( p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 `( P- [% E. w5 M) v) X, m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>