【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: F( ]2 |. {' r$ N歌词我附在后面。
& K. Q* Z' C) ]. IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* {% i* ^2 J# A- n" R1 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ f. C( ]$ ?' A- \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 Q- C& \" P0 N' Z  jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) y# g7 q; P0 f4 J: t/ dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! P6 Q1 A, t! v% x( F$ {Nothing can compare to my love
- T6 L" g/ U0 f3 m) TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ t/ H. W4 X) o! O. W. c" SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; A4 r' P, U/ z0 a$ r% DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 N7 _: f: }7 `2 ~, U1 a& s8 z) G/ |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, F: r3 ?7 a0 E& q! gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" N7 ~; l0 a8 E. v& _7 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 [* W/ o4 `% j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- g: |1 N- M7 I! Y1 _! y( n' T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" K' V1 L. v( a" c* o" D" U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: w  Z# V. o# }9 Q1 T6 o2 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 E/ ^* L3 y$ ^9 X& c8 x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  U2 L  l# l& l) Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 R% \0 e) m, ]0 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. N6 Z: w8 o4 S/ Q1 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- [7 _4 U4 T3 x4 W' N0 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( }) j! j8 P% L) r5 {5 m( J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ `5 \  U0 N$ }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 W* I4 m0 f5 m8 }# t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ R6 t9 \0 m* d' |( w2 f9 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, d# l% k# V  E; U7 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 F' j: ~: t" e5 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; J0 H& U5 m/ R' A$ j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, b# P: p) J& K  I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! {) v, Z# J* h5 a! j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 Z8 }  F" p, Y* C8 C0 {; u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 `4 \4 l4 R5 ]& D6 b) W* m) @/ L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# k4 i& y- P+ A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- p! ~. a' J* k! y2 S. i, ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& b* m5 w8 {5 f1 y; _2 u我请你剖开它
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! n! X9 h, x6 X. q6 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>