【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 V; z3 u. d/ c9 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 d4 i/ k4 e8 P! CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% C3 G! K0 p0 r/ ^* @# IThe sky is happy down to its soul
% b1 }% @. R! c: _With the moon kissing it every night
3 j$ N! _5 k5 y) k6 g1 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 P( R; U& I" Q2 aEvery other word you utter is love
( B$ H5 E, g' Z+ kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 \: }8 G9 w6 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  m, C# h+ I" n) }1 ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! E* w+ V# z" X% ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ z" d! |( a0 aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# e, J6 y1 o' E- aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& m& q* D- T# k6 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ @3 Z, t* J) o  v  \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 N; _7 c# k+ t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# n& Z& D2 H% P2 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) T* x2 {: ]& k) L- A! Z/ X" @' j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' e( m6 S! r% d# t! G+ D( `7 p* I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ X9 Y1 H  {$ N2 z+ h% Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 q; Z& N: e$ r" R4 n) s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 |4 ~1 C! u& H" ^  g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" G3 s, j. ?# X; {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 v, Y# k9 q/ b  e0 f: z' r* X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  \6 q/ j) Z, U( i6 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* J  j  X6 F1 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  }7 W" H  t; o; A$ z. ?( W1 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ J6 \# r8 r- L1 v) w) [1 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 ?, f1 H' j+ j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 m4 n& G8 T( U. L# K* g2 h( J7 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; s& X+ H) i% v: e! u% r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" i+ h5 ?0 v& l9 A, I' q; S' c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& b2 h* a* M1 I1 I; _3 A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" l9 p2 N+ A- t8 A$ q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 z! H9 N2 r9 y8 T* l2 R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ G/ e+ K+ B- q3 M9 t4 w" ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( ~) @% x! U( Y2 J" _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, ^# z# ~# d6 h: d! E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. H% P! H7 _+ j7 m4 J( _8 o6 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 Z# s0 I5 M/ K7 x0 Q- m; o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. t  |' \9 S1 M! }6 {/ o我请你剖开它

" @' c7 E! e# A' A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" |' K( c2 j7 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>