【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' P- O1 [! s$ R; O8 r0 t. H1 c8 Z7 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 d- r) ?- V6 w+ @1 H) x2 ]( @- _( p) QThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 A, g8 o( W. n1 o* W3 A* l! [With the moon kissing it every night
" f7 G5 i$ x% k! B/ s& g1 x1 FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; z' y* s; S& e' w$ j! N( AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 k$ B) q% W+ g, T: OI love you I love you with all my heart
1 |, t/ B1 [# I8 ]2 F; ^' hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% P3 x: K; r9 V, i1 Q5 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* s  d* _$ ]' o" fI want so much to see inside your heart
+ y7 k& r! Q' U/ {% w3 C4 v4 Y* aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; M0 D+ K9 c8 r# m7 PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, @- E1 p, i0 A) Y  W+ Y1 v# u# I( ]5 rWith such a tongue as yours,
3 [( X9 W- Z& A/ {& ~. \* sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 e7 D) d& n$ T$ z# J  j. a' D4 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, B4 v5 V- e0 G$ b% J' q. B. W. S; `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! V6 Z$ z/ ?! N& S) B, v" ~; c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 X2 D/ i* E5 o0 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- g. k9 P( F6 K6 k1 [: I4 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: D/ @$ }1 J1 U  G3 a& o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. d; ^" O) x# D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& w# z* B' Z2 L1 f) t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ W9 O8 ]! G2 ^# Y! `8 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ L! v2 v. X- F0 k+ t2 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 E% N0 {7 T) W# O. ^$ g3 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% a, T2 |. }8 t* `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 V3 K7 e; a% i  ^3 \% H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 J" }$ D4 y( o/ M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" C% `! U7 [) E1 V' H, Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 d' K) h9 |; m4 y- j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 f; m6 W0 w0 A% g4 {8 N: N9 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# N! }- Q8 h9 b2 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' V7 s( {. {: N  J6 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ m9 N- O5 [0 R; r  w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  o2 s" N; p2 N& v( A1 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  c. x1 |! |0 o$ ]9 {7 W3 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% \6 ^5 ~, n' f! R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 X1 A: z. E5 C9 e$ E. |% h. F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! F7 U/ X+ \3 ?: m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 _' e* V+ G4 t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ F- `/ p5 T5 H1 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 X8 ]0 K8 ?. Z1 K) U  A) l+ M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) H3 Y! u3 f+ ]6 m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 p; t# r6 o! C! D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. _. E6 ]* e; Z1 J6 q# P( R: S我请你剖开它
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) l0 F+ a5 L- @9 ~0 {- ]; X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>