【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 A5 ~- x5 t! O2 m/ P5 R. SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* L+ ]% n& n6 q/ s2 B0 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- _) R7 o! v% q# j. @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" T8 j, t9 X: q; a) a: zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" D8 q# F6 V" m' [( p% dThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ t4 x* B# ^& tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 f) P" U( c% h2 e0 E7 W* `' {0 uYou needn’t fear anything
/ J* Y% T: S+ S6 nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% f: ?, B4 N8 I# }  RI really want to know just how much you love me
) S- E9 e  l8 h% [. F' A' DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 M9 @2 V% w2 F- [# p/ _, HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 w5 e. ~. {$ e$ sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% T9 @  L2 `# L* |& x$ gI want so much to see inside your heart
4 r$ H+ Z0 M! OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" T6 P/ E/ h5 T/ rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. T) M/ n6 b4 `+ i: {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' @! r# ?1 [8 L( t. x) ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 c% G* U, g3 F2 ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. x$ l% m: S% o0 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ Y5 a5 N+ O5 F& j' g( w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) u) T; W6 S, t9 {6 w8 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. ^! u! @$ a; j  `6 @3 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' ~" H- q2 V: _& P" l6 K) B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! n* J* |( f2 G1 g2 D5 D" |) @; o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 U( q  s4 A# Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 `1 x0 `* @# P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 x& I0 O" h) r9 @, K  Y/ X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 s! D! X' g! Z3 O! s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% _& I6 e  _- J+ Q8 v* ^5 u3 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% t4 N8 p* x3 T* ~. w% E( `' o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 f! B, h8 ~4 A, {6 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" n$ }& }% E) Z: G" Z2 V7 g7 \, E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% g, R/ f) X1 Q3 {) m  |9 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- ]7 q  j. ?, x8 R* B1 e7 `: K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  @2 Y/ Z4 ]8 X" ~1 u% K% ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ ]0 T  h  M1 m* [& B8 d<P>I regret not dying</P>
- S$ H/ \$ v; h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" }& `- W" Y4 E& O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ m7 p+ s0 ^  |/ ~% e0 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 T$ Z6 o, s( Q4 ~! ?5 @/ J5 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% b/ h4 d4 k& y$ p$ B6 X3 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 A1 `- w! [7 P( A* }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- R) X' @  K' y; ~5 j3 C( I$ R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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( x. D4 P: E  J. E$ ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>