【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 k' ~8 f" Y: c8 [1 e# b, O& iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) e# K( v1 B8 p6 u$ DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* \2 G0 h; ?- d! x: C4 o6 ]+ d- m! f* rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 C9 \1 O9 v7 T" LThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ l, j) B( T0 ~* O+ n/ ]2 U! sWith the moon kissing it every night
0 ?* P8 S2 F) f. l$ RSeeing the sky content with its love
$ }* d# X7 i' K  Z+ DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ |0 R6 J" s/ I& XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; s4 X1 R  r4 w. o" ~; G$ ]! RI love you I love you with all my heart
; {0 i, U( B1 p0 z  i) o# wNothing can compare to my love
6 H" P1 W0 f: zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! N7 T) Z) y5 _4 Q- I" A' o8 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 L, K- p" x4 n& T* FI’m still filled with fear
9 F: D9 {, A/ R- p0 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 g) t% b8 }! R+ G/ W. z3 LI regret not dying
7 E6 O; o& X& w' p" UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 m: n. d1 A- y  {' ^. n4 U' uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- D6 T, c1 l: ?8 X9 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% R( X2 ^3 r' ~) p- e4 J4 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' Z. u; v# U1 ]4 x% T# P2 f9 ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ P5 E) K$ ?: D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  |( N+ B4 a; h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. l0 D& r9 U6 |: C7 F* ?0 {) A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# C" ~! A1 ]5 m% l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 |1 p3 Q+ j! \! _# o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. p; Z0 |4 y- |" q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 h* b9 j3 W# u1 }7 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; I2 e* _) ^7 w9 N: ^7 @: O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; e9 s8 q, A0 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& g7 N9 m  L4 a5 d6 r7 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 t5 o/ o  \# ~* M9 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 P! {# U  d& j" u, S% k: C: T5 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) c0 a6 V0 Z6 O+ G( T# ?/ L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) g7 j/ u% |: u3 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 P. L' _6 H7 O' Y& {7 l+ ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ x7 }+ d4 w5 ^/ }/ b# U3 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 G) h* {' S3 d* u7 F4 w: C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 W4 N1 Y* g6 r5 d9 E, C6 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% S+ R) v) C: t5 B9 s3 _  N9 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. c3 ^; u4 y) K& u5 R- l4 [* e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- r4 ^+ c/ V$ k: {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, e4 ]" J; S  E9 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( t9 ~4 h. G4 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 Y4 _/ C3 E" |8 [' k! K4 Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; ~# Z6 r3 ^+ ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 n* H3 ~1 d( W# c3 i! W* X! Y% o我请你剖开它

, q* k$ Z/ l- D2 r2 U2 r7 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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