【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 F5 h/ R3 R. g8 B: K3 G* u6 X. nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) h- B" |7 {2 ~$ WWith the moon kissing it every night
2 Y" h" h& G: CSeeing the sky content with its love
* l) M, v7 p7 e# F; qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( ?& m! Y! f; u7 nI really want to know just how much you love me
/ U. f9 W5 ^6 ?/ F' {. sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 s( E0 f% {) N$ K7 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 n  t" h; m1 q4 V0 II regret not dying
/ W  {' g# ]: k& A# y1 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 p+ w, l$ S) d1 Q0 q: AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ ~1 t. o# @+ R0 S' n* OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 r. _% P6 T, \0 d0 o$ m1 N0 bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ [8 {/ M7 g% ?* T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 A  b, R7 Z* Z9 @  U' B, m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 j4 i9 M7 t! x2 r0 E) y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: ]+ E4 P0 L" F1 H% _# M( c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' R4 L1 K4 q! W8 y4 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ u! D6 G( I1 [8 O3 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" i7 i/ h4 y9 w4 c2 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  m* `3 U3 i. T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) U3 U. O' V7 L: }6 J) p9 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% J, n: n! g' y. M. G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. r6 d( }5 Y2 S) \* r. G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 T& P6 d( [2 d" F- u* n, ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) M; F6 J. A- O, j7 k6 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 o1 Z( C9 v1 F; z2 a$ X3 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" N3 g2 }5 z: Q3 n+ C2 K- j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. H4 R9 O! f( d! q% `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- [, k+ ^- b+ o. c4 b/ S/ Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 b( j. ]: i) L/ Z* }/ s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ ?7 K; l1 g0 D, O! m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% O' c7 V9 Q( e/ T. }. X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* r5 U$ h+ g0 P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 n2 M/ ]7 t2 l5 C' l9 D5 S6 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 y3 F, B- F5 p0 {' d$ l% d6 i; y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) B& G2 G% [4 [$ {: c3 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 M4 G' D- k8 k1 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ }& d: J) E* p+ Q! p5 H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ n; {7 V* K. d  q) i2 b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- x5 |8 z! M# Q; i6 |: s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% k* g4 Y2 y; ?7 U; u  ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>