【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! h% X) h. H2 a/ U2 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 K6 A# ^. c" T1 }The sky is happy down to its soul
, g) i3 B/ J+ Y2 h7 W' qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 K/ y; T3 A+ F4 B) `# @. i2 P# cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 Q1 C5 w5 H$ m- y, Y9 \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 V1 W1 g' s+ t( L( _5 {I love you I love you with all my heart
) i9 Z8 G4 `/ C+ \  g) aNothing can compare to my love
& _; }+ r" V9 Z0 Y) S. rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& {7 \8 s0 E7 ~  W* S7 W  a) JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 K) u( c" J! R2 bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 O4 i- w4 X' w% l) {$ ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' g( J& J2 U: k, T! p7 F4 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! j  [( s) \9 S8 a( E) w" {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ Z" P9 d: X1 S  L6 S) e$ v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- Z0 ]0 l2 f1 ~' z1 m4 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 Q6 f/ R( U' D: g( @, e0 Z8 K2 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 u% u2 f1 e% h* r& Z9 _/ i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: h- S# L, o( \5 M; Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 ~' O, Q7 ^1 E" e. y4 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 e4 b# o6 Z5 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& }/ K) t( x8 M5 O% o# i" `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, l: `/ k) t* |5 S: {6 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 R: {0 }) q2 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* B  R* ?! q  F* d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. M4 l5 X( m0 L, n4 p- B: h/ [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 I! ^! V1 G$ Z6 h5 F0 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- O, R7 r, G: f5 c/ h! m& P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 Q& x! t# V* H" t7 [. H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 i& X+ b. H: r2 F9 m7 K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ L6 Z# m- x7 x' I9 v% b. X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' \. V: u) i! n: Q5 D1 e  c( E: ~* o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 h5 s! n- a% {7 P" D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ J7 S& o1 c5 P7 j4 b: h- w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* I! w( ~4 D1 d% H: x  {. }: Z! s* A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! a! U* O# E" _3 }9 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 t. H0 |- Z8 f. N. Y) G# S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 j( j8 N/ H2 P& n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 e! v4 x3 ~) E) X- S. q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! q  \" s0 a: z. P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& U  z$ w, z' H% ^$ r) l; |( f( q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! ~4 O6 K* }9 C' K9 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ h4 `( B5 p) g  f8 {$ k6 m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) j4 \# a% a$ s6 {  a8 o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 m2 g8 P8 x/ K6 t2 F我请你剖开它

: P- x+ c$ N: b4 K* c* r( D0 z8 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ y2 M7 h5 a5 I* ]: ~0 p0 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>