【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 O4 v; q4 j6 o8 Q; ~6 M9 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 Q3 L  }* @, b  m5 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; ^$ d! X% X9 Z! o! KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ M9 D$ K# Y$ h8 S' j  ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" z4 i4 d! S) Z! F! b- w) K- y8 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
: X% K2 j0 d4 b& ]1 W4 p  b7 [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 g% x! O# i* VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 y% n5 h' @2 @( ?4 l# t' RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; {: L& c+ [# B* }# OEvery other word you utter is love
7 Q; r3 w5 F' Y; }, YI really want to know just how much you love me
9 f3 U+ [' Z* S+ F1 ^, w- `; H# ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 e6 g$ I, S8 O- V' ]4 OI’m still filled with fear
, f5 C8 Q. K) l3 u6 ^/ W$ a- rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 Q7 s7 m: \9 T$ s% @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: b5 `) r3 t5 r! p9 Y: d$ {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  S3 h, R8 d" H$ @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 q6 G$ c4 m: Z# m+ i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  \3 \' l- t% b- h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 O! s2 Q. O9 L9 V/ g- ^; |; `5 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) D2 U8 t& y' U/ S/ H: W/ f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" p1 X. y2 b1 ^6 U4 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 o, S/ {1 h7 C& }% X- [, @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# ?4 K5 ^6 [5 c" C9 {5 N; r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 X, t. g1 ^7 j8 L3 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 M* e5 P* V0 n/ G1 z' k8 K) j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" p4 K; j. h" O* W2 o2 q" R( A/ S1 L* A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& X# E% N. l4 _, [" V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, z$ B  C: j2 c$ N, e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' K5 D$ J' P, P4 E# O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" Y5 q4 s% z! `: ?$ B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# B# w' B$ z- d4 E" |" l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 B3 d; J3 S! f  z6 R# c" p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- o8 k! K. g' m* _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 @! q# ?9 w& @4 I7 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# s4 B* L/ \, _+ e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 S3 \; h/ n% M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! ]' Q0 g. w. v! M, f& l0 |/ r0 \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 H' m8 O9 j; Q: ^. }4 {我请你剖开它

2 c: X' J2 ^% k- v1 [0 F9 P9 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: S' y5 @7 N5 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>