【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 Z) a* p6 u  qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, u* p5 w$ [% S; a( Q3 [; D6 B, VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; a; W  _8 Q! [; P8 n0 m/ eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! x, G+ u6 Z6 V* x" h7 G0 T, }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 {. {9 v. z: Z" wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% m# ~4 i% t0 A# KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* ?! \+ T; M$ S1 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ N1 j8 c4 f3 E5 \3 a" D- AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 u9 v  f5 T$ @" m$ \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  X% }8 g. b/ Q  ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! I% o, S' u- F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  h; Z% H4 v4 j$ ^9 P6 k. x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 P, G( |! v4 g% G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" V3 \& _" @# i! o  R: j, o& G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 H7 A" i; F. a( J+ S' I9 T3 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 A$ G6 R$ q6 @5 n2 [8 E/ O. n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ X7 @2 r3 h! o. ^( p" t, g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 S+ U6 C# y* {6 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" D# ~. P# a8 k- M# N' u2 Z) {4 `* C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 N! H; f2 g# U: ~1 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 T- c5 d* l0 R  @. D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) p- j8 ?: j5 n! e9 k9 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ d; p' P, q* O1 }1 A+ S& C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' b; F+ V( u  T  {1 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ?6 p; p) d# U# ]( A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; W3 ~0 ?- N/ T; W% R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ u$ U) u' r& h. z/ B" ~- J; q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( O2 A9 G' J1 q) y  t) s* J- d- G$ r& \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 Z+ n9 F# ]- J, D# L' o$ N8 ]! r, Y2 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ N% W) P! \2 c/ {6 _' f# P4 h, }% f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& {! g. F9 T' k4 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; ~& c. ?! Q2 {/ M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  [# {# W* u9 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
* F( Y7 o) ]7 u2 x/ |6 W9 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. j4 L' Z3 R% o: {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ q8 b! S6 i5 @/ d5 o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' B1 j0 `- o( [! B- c, ?0 J2 ]9 B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( H2 N8 P' q& G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! b4 p. g4 t* g4 Q; Y* I* Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) Q* u! V2 Y& Z* T4 C# \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; T6 ^9 p! D' {, f3 u+ k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: C8 o! J4 F$ o% a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ Q3 y& J2 D$ c3 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>