【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 [9 b; [$ U- _0 L歌词我附在后面。
5 C0 p$ |" @- @2 T# g2 @* hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  }' L$ `2 v1 ~; c# }1 m1 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% A+ C3 Q8 h- H7 x  P7 v% V' F4 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 r4 F5 M2 N7 z3 m& eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& @: Y- |, ^, z5 v, y9 `* }/ u8 S  fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" y/ U  a5 a; L; t  J( H- VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- S* l' r6 Z" B: G; S6 w8 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 p2 c2 ~  |8 V7 J6 O' iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  I, w6 V) `; U0 s4 R9 vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% e1 Z) s# ^6 v! \/ KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 H: o; D6 R; H9 o! \* p& b: `With such a tongue as yours,
8 @" Z0 Y# s  _9 w7 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- W! N$ }" s1 b: RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 a, @8 q" ^4 Y4 N' ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# t0 _3 Y4 q  \, `/ t% E' `+ A  O) ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* L. J, c: F5 t, w2 D  s9 P- z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ w. ]( m4 d2 B7 c9 r8 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 t4 V5 ]  L7 Z+ w0 K$ v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ r7 j% m% z7 \9 j1 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! ~/ w$ A7 \7 U4 L; |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" M5 z6 G' `/ @/ }0 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- l. z/ ]8 E, ?0 M% V; E6 l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) R7 `  }: D( e* M/ n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- e4 y& K1 V0 D# h5 ^8 e( [$ Y8 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" z  S9 J! e$ ~* ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 r- a  d: D' D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. _9 P8 x- k, c6 m5 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ K# I$ \# Y& }2 u# F# Q7 R- u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& u' B, N3 P3 t/ t! |+ d8 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) _+ w" S( ^" S0 q. z2 W: g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- u1 G0 [' g9 o) u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 `4 q$ H0 Q0 e9 h* A: v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 ^' S9 a' ?# f0 x/ ?/ T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 h3 d* ?2 T1 n$ K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: {1 |, ]/ U) z0 {# A- m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- Y7 m+ I8 S0 Y& Z' _* \+ e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# G2 t5 H9 ]/ B/ M  \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 Q7 o; l+ d  L  [3 ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: g# q8 o# l$ l" H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>