【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* b( M; z. G* q' E3 ]- ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 |$ @6 d6 c! [5 \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* w) y# f7 n0 e$ X9 QYou needn’t fear anything
, y4 C8 @. D# C+ dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 W9 X. V* _9 B1 LEvery other word you utter is love
1 K) S! B; ^$ cI really want to know just how much you love me
* T% X0 _/ x" HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 Y  r- K% P  e* V2 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ c1 d% V* e) q2 i- _  S3 G4 gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: ^; S; k- \& H7 m8 `/ U5 ^, gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 }. ]4 P; d4 H7 J8 [- XI regret not dying
& S6 m1 ?5 T" C) S* F2 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' f5 @% I' F0 s' T/ J6 R3 a! ^, I# jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" g% n( j" @7 Z$ W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ t  b4 L( K+ t/ k$ h7 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 c7 h! x; q: d1 L- q; S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) I( B% A. H6 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 U- g; @8 L3 b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" _* m3 O5 O% W7 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 \" G7 r9 e8 |. x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ Q$ p' w. ^1 k5 r7 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 \. [! [. F; |/ Y) ^* P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; I2 q) x, R, L9 l' F, L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 I6 N, |5 u, O6 e" _' C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! C: c" J6 t" T* i- L) k5 S/ B3 h8 s<P>你无需担心</P>
! y# m0 K9 Q# x% {# ~! w. R" L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 |& ~0 A& A7 s" |% @- y8 o: p, G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 _# E8 f% C$ U# V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& \( k1 v6 K4 a. Z/ s( R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. w% O, e0 K& U: c* J0 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- m8 [3 @7 F0 ^- r" R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 q6 Z: t$ y" S4 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 ~6 P( H, o+ N: Q; y; J/ c, H& p+ I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* B% f, y1 Q. r0 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 l& U7 ]# ^5 T& B% v7 B& U/ L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 p  W% Z+ B: Z( o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" `+ u' O$ n( \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) o& q7 i- J( O: o" m3 n' s1 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* w) J9 @$ e: I/ S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" x# i* b+ w6 |  Q+ d- H8 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 i9 q& D3 f) t4 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 z4 N7 l+ [' K9 v+ U/ ^8 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 P# X. p2 B. J$ y2 D3 ?' [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 e9 F& t# z- b' d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 o* k. z8 Z, v8 A  y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>