【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 V  g7 o4 L, R8 i$ ^# v4 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
& z, t6 S1 j+ W2 R/ N  J/ vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' z3 J+ }2 O; `" D) yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! Q# H4 }) K/ ~5 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( Y: c. L9 `( T/ T- x8 K. H9 _, }/ iThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 |: y% {# ]" @( \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* r3 s7 T. g2 e; RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 s' Y9 ^$ }1 N% k% k" G) H5 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* _  I( K0 |& s" }  v- t! ~% K( u4 y& _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! M: K  @1 ^9 B7 s9 l2 W; Y0 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 N" j  o% u" B$ h4 }% u3 bI’m still filled with fear
7 s7 b5 B: x1 |/ v! s2 l7 g+ OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 U, [% a; T: @I regret not dying
% I0 e; `: N; a  xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! F, G0 ^  W* T8 Q: tWith such a tongue as yours,
7 |* {* K% D/ j" Q+ }5 q9 y5 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 _2 l. T3 i* ]2 m( yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 p! }+ K1 O2 T( C+ K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 d6 G9 Z$ g8 C) ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ j4 E9 L: z* H3 c  E! X6 h/ V4 ~4 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 [7 [! q" k% b: @' P7 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: A8 P3 D! e8 U3 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ V7 M6 |. O& O  L5 Q( w. W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  F7 r4 g+ X$ b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- e" w1 t' I2 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 _& l4 W3 Y' w" m1 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. T1 X5 _. y& F; \" r! {<P>你无需担心</P>
: v! k, L# a' }- P" s! W" }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( q2 i* F* K5 ^5 x: |7 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 q) S  O8 ]- ^8 ]4 w# h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ B- \) Y7 l1 R' w  q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 X) z8 m6 u5 ^9 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 l' ?+ E/ |. E# Y+ f, s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. U3 b5 s! C1 H# Q! q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 K! A( x6 F) a: ~3 q! A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# t7 w. a  g4 H5 P6 L, C) k4 Y$ A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  e3 }! w: G7 ^6 P' {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% M/ k% v5 t. r+ m+ L<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 V, M$ {2 o6 I1 Z" j# V" E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: x+ Y0 }  b' }; C' e  [4 g, d8 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 o6 g' ^: j7 l5 J" p6 N/ J: y) V' g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: n: v  i! N" q) B+ u& q# b5 h! q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( d' O! k) Q2 U8 j$ }! l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ V% u* g) O. H" Y* E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) \- G" e- h$ O* n& i# f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" Z3 N- l; P0 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 u' b: N# {0 ~9 [0 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% X" H; y1 n/ V2 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 t6 x! \% L/ [/ q! G1 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>