【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 Z2 m1 C) G1 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; ?1 p9 U/ \. X. H7 a# hThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 B6 k/ Q" X  v7 L9 ]- Y" wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. m( x4 Y1 p6 M4 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ N2 x: H( y5 W! g$ m4 LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ a1 A5 p& |( E! ?$ A' pEvery other word you utter is love
1 x7 W' {) ^' J. N" k) A$ k- E$ S& PI really want to know just how much you love me
2 C8 ?; c1 b! {% t2 L3 n6 O1 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: Z3 {( ~- r* b0 O& dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! ^% J& o2 O2 [; N* e" X6 ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 [7 j$ ^3 U0 C, y( R5 D5 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; y+ A* x. W5 J$ t" E- Y  e) X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 |1 e5 C2 ~; ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 E8 K1 E+ H& r; P1 I, h/ f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 D/ Z' w5 G: T8 v3 W8 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 E- l, ^2 s. t* b% f9 ?8 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 o: Z( t0 \7 h1 ~* h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 _  g" w7 {, k. k' d- x& {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ I# J$ m: g3 }6 T1 R3 L  ~5 _* S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- p4 T& I; |; D- l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: ?/ g, V# }2 g  ?. {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. [& i0 L+ y6 M6 b' i1 M7 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- F0 e- K, O: g2 e6 N: k<P>你无需担心</P>
$ f% L6 X* ^" R  p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# ]. B6 B* `" ?* `8 O  f0 R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 {2 e& t3 H) c" u& `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 \2 i" T, J: ~: `' }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& d9 d) f" P/ `- m6 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( h+ g: f" b5 y. Z: @+ ]$ b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 w$ B! N- ?! F) f$ C3 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 g$ n  _. B5 n$ V( Z& I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! ?) A; d& F, _! r9 q$ `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. H  [! f7 e" S6 j! C$ R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% g' W6 ?: y) L4 e4 q5 p. t8 d' j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' P7 z; ?, M0 v$ E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 a) R/ w) V% b8 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 Z, h; C' ~4 b; y. c( V, D1 ?; a* {1 {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 Z  D# [' H- G/ C7 N0 x" S' c5 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! n; M4 B% v8 F5 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 e/ b' Z* i& x# L4 E" O1 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 C- a& h+ y& c3 G- f* v; P% V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>