【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' i$ @+ G. h5 L+ D5 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 p4 Z% J# x$ M* }- bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ N9 x" s% J* ]! X2 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 O: a1 l8 v8 ^! K9 Q# S$ e3 bWith the moon kissing it every night
. V2 i0 A+ u0 m9 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 b; z( |, x: L1 q( l: cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* Y, V- m% w& t. t3 T2 M* ]I want so much to see inside your heart
' L& @* {. [! S4 W( E/ pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- ^1 a9 }3 G4 ?- w7 ^2 p$ X1 vI’m still filled with fear
9 z& c9 a8 p1 }$ f* h" UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ E6 d+ n8 h/ c* ^3 s0 |0 aI regret not dying
9 h, T# A" g. R1 a2 \. M) dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# M5 T2 ?- N5 ?/ X1 ~2 o+ ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; l' V5 Z/ ?7 c% ^2 v# [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: M! q7 M* C5 o# a9 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 E$ p/ s' p( \. Y- k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 t8 ~7 E/ `4 z, R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 g' }4 S: N: h4 v9 y) A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 g# \# H; s. B! c+ \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 P2 I, L0 L# V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( m5 w4 I8 w+ t7 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 Y* O" n4 _6 A  v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 r6 h! ]$ }( M0 l! }% B3 D! P: v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ D- [, F. L7 C6 ]3 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 j7 x3 P3 q) Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 H0 Q* A( A$ T1 c) p- t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* S" H; d. P! Y. Z% C/ E1 {8 ~( S0 |( r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 D1 B& C5 x- B1 T; k* O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 L0 N! u# b* W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' j* I) ^3 p- Q/ Q! B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# B/ C9 K# Q6 J- a$ P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' P" e$ \+ l! C# H# Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 x& N) L! J: d8 `, C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( g8 H0 U$ x. f+ s<P>I regret not dying</P>
, b- @$ g. l: x6 [; f2 J7 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ u0 L4 W8 v& f, h. O9 V/ `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 y/ Y4 H1 {. m3 ~" N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( C; l# |$ ~! S$ a" |' I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: J: F' ~0 d0 M5 j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 F# d! C& m8 b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: j/ p: s" Z# Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 {4 j# H- z+ M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
# i" s( h5 v, p" O
1 M7 B, s, B0 }4 q4 H5 z9 T我请你剖开它
) R! d2 {% l4 J4 p) ]9 x
# g1 G3 }* {1 ^; m9 |1 l$ u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- o* ]) I! A) T" p4 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>