【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, \5 B( A) n9 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ H$ p) {# Y- @% g& `With the moon kissing it every night
/ N9 e. c" j. t) x) Q! ySeeing the sky content with its love
, J4 ]( I5 y, Q; R# J  z, WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. w2 T3 Z' ?% \0 Q3 wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ C, j7 ?! p1 X) Y) ?Every other word you utter is love
- m7 N( I2 Z9 q0 u- S6 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 D7 ]) w& d# cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 T# k4 z  g  H! z2 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" n( h- M/ C- K# v+ KI’m still filled with fear
' U- _, R4 G" y( UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 i8 Y% Y0 D8 v+ EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 S8 f4 }' T4 |$ b9 D" h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) f3 K5 C. c7 {% R  {  M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 S: |$ j# P& e3 ]4 M3 ]8 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. S; a4 Y8 l8 f9 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- |2 r: D% Q! w1 h6 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 [, D- |  t. B9 r  E5 g7 i& I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% n$ b+ b% D9 g  m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% n$ k$ g% i3 f. l* u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 N4 `9 R+ r$ V% ^% ?5 E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: D0 g% e, E3 u: F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 D+ P# H, @" i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 n+ C6 i) c$ K6 n( n: `% w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ o) h8 j) f: r6 }* M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  `; Y3 D: d" w3 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 p, a3 K, q3 |4 I9 R7 ~' o  J/ f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 ?6 b: a. l: J- O% P4 R" p% R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 s5 y0 @5 c' B2 E6 N+ d9 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 Z! ], T+ P3 l! h. Q/ Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 v6 j# w# e2 T* A0 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; l- A% P; Q/ v1 W3 {1 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& d, X1 R1 m+ A# L1 Y2 j( A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' v% W+ V* s/ K8 h/ I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# z; K( U( G2 Y& R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

  N* c0 |1 {: _- O% s/ ^! M4 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>