【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 T" |  s: d& T/ F) l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 X, V$ H2 o% K; h" O5 I/ TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; G) c1 H$ X$ QThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ n9 N8 P; G, S3 m$ P2 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! }! y9 z4 o  k8 y' |! HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ ?( l0 K. d; qI really want to know just how much you love me
: n! [8 k7 L3 RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& Y, r; K) t) g$ s9 W4 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 O2 T- I% S2 ?0 {  lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 M( W8 \, a, S# ]% o, j! vI’m still filled with fear
. \+ ?" n7 D  M, i6 K8 {( xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ I7 l, V1 f. ^2 J" a# w/ l& oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: [- r) {& O2 v* b% }; \! s, R  J8 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" W% w6 J5 U  ?$ U" d' d  ]; mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) ]8 D6 T+ w' r) e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' F, u# [8 W- P$ j6 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; b2 q$ U3 k: m) K  y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( {" T8 I! O' w$ f( D- v$ F& R' {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 s/ M# B; A+ K0 Q, i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 T* Q+ K) D4 l% b' \/ u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: L" O+ |/ ?1 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 T3 u. V1 H3 C* f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ ~9 D. @. x8 B# c& d1 z- S5 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 C3 T6 S) w. i, `/ e5 w* I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ i& U! P( j0 Z4 {1 ]) x- t+ L<P>你无需担心</P>
0 S  @! X! a, s0 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 y6 C( {$ m$ V; Z  H8 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# l; ^! I" L2 P: _* b& c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 X5 y' S! A2 k4 Q& f8 f1 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! i5 b# {0 s+ [; ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 \2 E- Z6 q# t5 s2 W. R* [# z. ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; M% Z. q7 o7 W6 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: [  }8 ]% v. c. ^; Q* D+ ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 J0 H2 k, W2 h2 Z# u9 G3 F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* l- T0 O! Y* E9 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; j% x2 w* F* e: E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, N3 b' S" i; V9 f. g( p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: l8 W( {6 I/ J8 g% z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 C' @; P9 J2 E: J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) ^: A0 k2 N/ _: Q8 y& g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- A; O$ ^* l7 ~- A8 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ n( U0 K$ l1 }3 g1 t% Y! x3 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" _8 }% `4 F8 q/ Z8 Y( Y9 H: r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, }" U2 K( r5 i4 D6 q" d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" n8 F: [, z; ]! Z+ \3 [0 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>