【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ a2 u( I" J' H1 u& T4 V/ y5 x7 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; F9 j4 w! x2 V2 V: ?' a, C! KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 p. }3 K, U1 r. K3 E& T2 ?& ]  CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; s5 `$ _. J) Q# ^* K4 w1 lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# G  w1 \$ z7 tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 ~( Q6 i8 S; Y1 x4 w' {I’m still filled with fear
( B. W& w* n. ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) Q: F; u3 O" N' G' ?) WI regret not dying
4 G( B' U0 J7 e! t5 i7 E) iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" S, r9 N5 j- i1 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) t2 [) W" E6 _; PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ Z) V9 S3 O  J* \" l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 F; ^! D/ d& V) d: p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ Z1 R# k; g4 J5 l$ w& M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! @/ M3 x5 Z2 W  H: ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  d7 ]$ x: V9 a4 \' T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) e  x+ Q, K% q( Y7 D1 y3 o+ ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& B# q: W9 m( C; m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 D1 b# f8 X4 y3 ?# L% r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% b2 G8 J6 F0 ?4 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- F8 Q$ x' ]; B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! G8 @- @. @/ h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 v& [! \% n+ f4 ], d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* `; u7 q$ B% ]7 [& k6 g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# V) \' D/ M# J$ h0 e* i9 h2 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& F" \! `0 ]8 y3 X% ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 K# @# X& K4 r8 G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ x4 I$ t( O$ m+ B; R! E* v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' X8 `$ S2 a, R' U3 E/ A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ L0 L' i6 _; w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 F' K2 X# @+ d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 Y7 [$ p; u& D$ D, E/ t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" p4 w, p6 f( L9 g- f! Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ t0 }( ]( a$ t3 ~  P; w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, H! M1 {* S" [% d1 M1 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: @- Q' E: ^* c* O) K9 O8 F6 g0 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& f% n1 V7 ]; r' H+ o& M<P>I regret not dying</P>
, U. @8 ]3 D& H1 @7 r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 w: [7 u+ M9 z3 }8 A9 _" x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 v1 z1 A7 F- s9 w% |0 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 T8 l& U. j2 x# B" U2 G5 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 H5 w1 a$ H. `  v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 ?! m, b* x' z, \9 B4 q0 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 T8 R' C* ~: J) w: x  H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( P! \2 p& `( B# J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>