【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 ]5 O: s: {7 D- ^. @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; G' a% O1 x* oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 F  d$ z. u/ @* L: }% X; RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! {1 }& C( _' ]# d6 D/ p6 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 Y6 ^6 p3 F5 s7 a0 _4 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 p- J4 s' J5 t5 @' hI really want to know just how much you love me
, e3 N, q) Z1 d& Q3 h1 V. i9 {* A, lI love you I love you with all my heart
$ k. h1 j+ z1 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) a& n: x0 F7 W! u: k' I) rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ }; D2 ^( ?, I7 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 W+ `: O3 ~4 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: W# s- j# S. y: [+ g  D. L' c9 I9 o6 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 v. \5 S3 q5 t, o/ `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 g7 n2 |9 C3 r& C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; ?2 P: N. j$ Z0 U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! d( H) Z; @4 Y. G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( z2 N4 S, M1 h2 \# C3 e8 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  l/ g+ d- _, x0 N. ~; c1 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 w% K2 {5 V6 O" G4 Z+ \3 u5 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 {+ g3 M5 h) p5 @) w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 ?2 e) c" @$ ?1 ]4 Z3 n( S/ O+ W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 I* j# V  @+ W+ N$ X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# F* ]. k8 N0 z2 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 s, ]3 E( K8 k7 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; C% t  R/ n( @% H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% _8 c  G& m& c' ~/ u5 D6 E$ B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- y* D( R9 S+ N& f& ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  e2 Q  }1 Z% D4 c! J7 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" ^6 ?  a# Y9 v* f! L4 h! v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ p3 U7 G" D- D# ~. B7 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' G' }9 v4 E6 a+ p) J4 y! M( G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" J$ X$ z& I! T6 G0 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& w+ n7 V+ q  ~  J! o; q5 O2 X' H6 ^; ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; R7 W/ E) L. e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& K; G6 A3 a% U- A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>