【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ x- r6 H+ G( z9 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( l( I! U" \, N# D' O0 c3 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  i1 l5 k/ l9 Z8 l/ w+ n# fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 V- Y- q- v- i# j3 XSeeing the sky content with its love
% M  @4 K# _+ E4 ]) y. q1 N) xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# Z' W( [8 j/ g5 ^$ j9 R7 Y- _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 Z, v& i, A" o% G( t1 I" FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 ^6 q* ^0 L: r: R) N  bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ A4 E; i* f7 t# i" u1 F4 V3 [- yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ O: k& V  O+ @1 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 o  ]% c) x5 z6 P6 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  J' M( ~% P0 m- p8 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ x* O, j, A  yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( o2 ?& W5 P2 p5 P2 y2 H/ U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. h" c( T  p9 ~9 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 s' S2 T' i$ j8 w% y' ]6 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% T" d1 e( k! K  m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, J. B* u$ w3 M& o6 J) n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% a' G6 V7 ?8 s9 I3 q# P4 b. G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ ^% k* K9 y0 j7 Z0 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% w: {% M, O# R/ H1 |, w. X( y6 z" i6 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( L4 @6 Q' a: A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' Q0 E2 F7 A% M' _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ q% L, L* @1 ~- F, E& o, f5 Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 ]; S( G& ^- ]7 ~# U3 b4 d5 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 U! o& H) G$ F  m0 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, ~8 N/ K2 _% ^/ y% G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ w1 o  k; p: p2 y4 h3 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! y& U% V  h* x% J( s, y/ k4 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: a7 V5 X/ F# B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: z/ @. J0 i5 e- r3 M) G" z% I6 X# [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' ^, |+ M) }# S0 u3 ^+ A/ J/ a( a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 W/ }9 }  |3 {! N1 x: E8 B# l& v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 p3 k, j% @; j2 ^! u3 P) \& ]" ^4 |/ X1 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; s# R9 d6 U- q$ q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* s8 H  q/ Q9 v/ G9 d9 m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* u6 J4 q( z' Q  x: s: m' Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, i8 Q* j0 T5 U: U, I1 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" B5 Q7 Q# k* H我请你剖开它

. b8 M% W& t4 I) ?/ g2 Q0 c1 t. K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 N0 d' d0 q4 s9 ?* U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>