【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" S2 L8 h6 G2 y5 x0 b歌词我附在后面。
% L2 g+ d. f# a* s# u% zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ E6 X( \/ ~" d4 ?( k/ FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ w; R6 a/ o1 h. hThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 C( P$ x' z; }# ?- V5 yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 e3 [# S, K& {6 g% K9 ?. J3 o# wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( {0 Q* t* \" U) \8 `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 c3 `  [6 @* }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, G  C# K; Z/ h3 ~1 V( MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- s! X8 _( x! c$ N0 @9 q0 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 C, i+ z7 G1 M4 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 L5 W2 k5 q- r5 ?+ ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 U$ J* D- d- m- Z4 aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: b( }/ a1 f0 z) Z- P$ z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 F, I/ N1 [  w- ^# ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, D  Y8 X: d5 C& i/ w, S9 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, y* C% L* I0 n' b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 J9 g- G+ M8 N- `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; E0 j# t; Q: {; m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 ^( v. h" E' ?( K/ G; k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 c- S4 E8 s+ `( j7 E  f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ Q- H3 Q1 J5 n; p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ \. W8 I+ L6 U* _7 E" t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) Z! I% P4 K: I' E7 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& M1 y* T* y) @5 v$ l- g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* O* D" H$ p( o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ A/ {0 H  P9 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( M: O9 V$ Z) }1 q2 c! y8 V+ g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 R) p6 |+ X8 d# Z, ~; ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, u3 A. b% u: @9 A/ Y. v% {" |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- a, ^4 S/ k5 q5 x2 v- h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ r# |2 k3 _% Q, m" _, l$ G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" p! T5 V6 b" x1 Y/ g: t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) T4 i5 V8 b1 S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. F1 e# ~. {+ D! d! _5 b/ H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 {/ g! |  V& C! v+ G. T" Q  n  j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 i) W  c7 m  q3 `8 O, s2 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: _8 `: h: o$ f# @+ [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* j+ _6 _2 o4 Y: O) ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 ]2 F+ x8 }: J9 }  Y$ ^- C4 {我请你剖开它

3 s3 r: }; S/ Y8 k+ }- ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>