【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' _; L: N7 O# D+ R4 C! N( V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, V- c/ r% s1 z  s8 }8 D6 J4 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 G; e3 D' w5 P: J7 ]2 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. C- j8 ]" Y3 N1 ?# oThe sky is happy down to its soul
' d4 t2 ?3 t* A$ u  p0 lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ P( K# g1 E  l! zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% U% d+ L! }' gEvery other word you utter is love
1 ^  {# G3 x0 t' {7 o' ~8 k* u3 fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% |' O5 r4 K8 J7 Y6 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) n) F: ^8 o5 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 X7 \' S7 p" q- R$ h1 W% RI’m still filled with fear
# r. A8 r: r& l- E3 N0 c' p# AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ b1 ^2 b, y2 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# v& j5 s- D& |) T7 W% ]1 ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# ^4 H* i; o) e( P- a- L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 R, _/ f1 Z" G+ l9 h! h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, @  c/ h1 j" X6 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! b/ q, V+ |8 _0 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- a  x  s2 N5 T0 X( v% d4 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 F$ i% d' i1 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* B+ o+ }8 x5 ?6 `2 n1 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ X5 Q% T+ g; i, H4 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: w2 ^" G1 h& ~& A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 r9 Q, A8 R. l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( Z5 ~3 k& K: U& B7 f$ Z4 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ r8 A: X3 x' k. ~<P>你无需担心</P>
; x& V% [' j! q/ ?: A, \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 _7 w$ x8 d: |& J4 ?' v$ S  T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. ]- e0 A. N- f/ T+ [* ?4 k* f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ]0 u  u: Z: e7 A/ U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- d4 F) c7 p; ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 u2 ]3 Z% R5 r) G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 [" R& C& w& D! P( G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! g1 ]/ R+ @$ i* i# q& N( W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 S( w9 f, ?+ o7 G5 h+ B' i  P2 E, r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# S! _/ Z# o( l! A2 [9 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 V$ `" d7 q! R. v8 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* b1 g7 c0 }9 k1 O! Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 E8 ^7 \, j3 _# r5 u' d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 V; X6 R+ g( {. D9 k3 L9 a0 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 t/ Y) H/ ]  Z" E! c* Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& }+ s8 O4 \8 h! b: x+ @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' p1 y" g" z: q9 {; J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ a/ m. T4 i5 ?$ g8 ]8 `3 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% c% e3 [$ i5 n9 t! k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 z) j4 ?, V% O% R4 ~) m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 e7 `6 M& |) T; Z2 V! |! A我请你剖开它

: a( x# f6 o- B  @  {& H3 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% W/ ?3 p+ Z4 W4 j" d1 K" [3 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>