【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, D. J+ Y8 l& a, Z9 x/ LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, a' E8 V- d% s) b! zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 r  ]- k- c4 N, jThe sky is happy down to its soul
: \! s" m& F% H- W6 p$ tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ v5 D3 v$ e  h2 b1 {! tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; J) D5 d0 ~0 S- HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 o6 L9 Y9 i; r! zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 p- G0 m$ ?' j5 [3 [  _I love you I love you with all my heart
* k* O  G& M3 H' INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 m: }* M9 D3 I. d: p4 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" W7 o. n! p3 k+ H8 @. y% }% YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 [3 h7 M& j0 n; Z5 y5 N' WI’m still filled with fear
. m1 T0 X+ L2 ~! @8 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& Z9 @' }8 R' r- GI regret not dying
) ^) L$ b. G0 A" B/ KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& }, Q) n6 H3 R* r) _) C- iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( ]" F5 F' E# o: _; J. v" Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" h8 e; p# R2 l$ {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) f2 y7 g3 c3 X, u, D! }7 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 _! \3 a  r* h# O) Y/ H3 {! r( A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 b' ]! E0 d$ E( c% b* f& p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ n- I" |3 Z8 w: |) C. w& A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ U1 O- [2 c7 x, ]8 v' @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" d5 U0 k6 e6 f# H+ t) T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 e' R; p& c) H% X( Q  _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* l3 m+ X" _# e<P>你无需担心</P>
! h- T: ]$ c) G- V8 W6 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ S" W7 [1 i3 s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# P* P+ s( C; A, O3 A  V: m: h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ V( }. {3 H* P9 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' L% l, U0 D! Z, B! R; |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! b; B/ [4 `% R+ i% y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; q: _6 P8 p( s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( H9 m/ ^, P% [0 Q/ ~5 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 }, z; e  l5 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ o% F  R6 _# u- t$ ]. W; I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- D& n$ c% l! }+ U  u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ ~! N  S+ {4 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ {" T! R* d5 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 C  t; Y9 }( }: _) T, N. j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 h+ k# A9 h( [- p/ V5 o) E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 A! a5 z: f( M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' z. q8 m4 f5 u8 {5 V( Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 n% z2 X' W# K8 _6 z2 \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' A; W0 I4 @# J& e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ }" J3 ~, @* I6 B7 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>