【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: `, B* Y% P1 |$ M, E% b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ h! ?9 w  x% H7 _8 s8 B4 g3 B; hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; ^, w2 }' _8 w9 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# F8 g8 q2 p1 E  i# O0 [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! e5 X7 }4 _. bSeeing the sky content with its love
0 h" a1 w4 {' Q2 p& i% iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 C+ F* Y9 y1 E% y0 r! q5 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) H, H$ U! w# q- k8 q+ eEvery other word you utter is love
+ X( B/ S9 j* C1 D" ~# e+ eI really want to know just how much you love me
3 ^5 \& Z0 B" O+ p9 O0 @1 a1 jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. D9 C% d5 k: ?0 [  ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ ]  N% U/ u& N! FI want so much to see inside your heart
: j( ]: u7 s- y+ O6 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) B4 c4 J* s' n( eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, E3 i( x8 J- AWith such a tongue as yours,
1 |$ Z: s" o. @6 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# a7 \+ s# i. k7 c0 z4 L( n3 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 N" G0 B$ V7 m% m3 b, L* O4 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. r- A. q' _$ c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- y: o4 ^1 G' |6 d! w/ f. o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! z3 l8 s) u% U9 _3 _  m9 {* ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 p: f! u5 I; B( ~5 e6 i1 s! x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  S0 l/ u' }$ N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 Z* x+ z7 _/ i$ i, B3 N: S( }- j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 n) w4 `/ R& N8 y4 d- L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ?6 t) V4 M' p: `5 f* {' N  L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 m0 r9 T) o* V- B. ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 v6 E; P; G% p2 {) ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! C, h  T2 Q% S2 _/ ]: F2 }) D3 |4 F  Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ I- T. p# _' K4 {$ n; P% Z, Z. P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 _$ L" X* k4 X% x% u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 I# b9 N# J) U9 f: N4 m. j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, i$ a: z- P2 t9 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 n, L: U, f1 p6 A/ h% Q, P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 h+ d$ \% ~; _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( {/ e% C- j* W& {' r4 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; o0 F* j0 W/ Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& e- q* f8 o# F3 A& H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. ^# m7 d$ w0 T* g; \9 U& {% w8 J  z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( i: S" L7 h6 H# M: ?1 j6 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ v% j3 u6 q; i: N6 b7 Y) c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 ]  m1 t3 O' T* M8 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, H2 m$ o% |) w( k) d' U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ f8 ]$ o. n+ f4 L& U, @3 I4 e2 ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 @6 Q, U, X4 v/ y: i# M+ b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 d$ z4 B( m  l" n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>