【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: ]9 ~5 S  y4 P3 Y: aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 y- F9 \) `2 a# ]: ~, A" vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 [0 Y3 @3 e9 a0 J; p; a5 T6 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 Q/ g+ E0 G' S0 u  c7 S. ^! xWith the moon kissing it every night
& u3 P6 S# P2 H# R9 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ T0 U' u7 Q7 x. N9 BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" Z7 {) P$ H6 F5 o7 n) B, r( c1 d8 mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" C* L* [/ R4 {3 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; |. ]3 n' M3 C9 e6 m" n9 w" K* zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" \$ l9 b3 c' W. d9 b, C% ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 h( }+ X1 g- qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: e# B' d% a6 q1 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. ?: e& a* ?+ m5 v9 v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 j/ ?0 A9 c# }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. c' R  `% q! t  V* x8 A2 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& ?( C. S0 o5 b& Q; Q4 ?5 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  @* B& w$ O: A1 I  R- r& \# l; Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ J1 W4 _3 Q* o- `$ Q4 H$ y<P>你无需担心</P>
* [3 i+ R1 B0 B( ~( m( h, O& J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 r8 l* i% R+ s% w/ c- \; I% Y7 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' |3 I! b8 ~/ o9 o4 Q- }" i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 A+ U( w) I: s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 A  O( s  u/ w" Y* v* S8 o7 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" g! F* G" y# _3 p% u, D1 o4 v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 e( b5 A! M& `  i8 O  d1 ^4 ], F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 L4 \# A$ ?9 H3 y2 C( W& u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; R3 }$ J4 R2 u3 \  L  p' n" W8 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% G4 h( N0 `% C9 `0 f/ B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ S4 X& ?$ o0 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. Q% A+ o  T0 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' D% l/ p' v0 w* Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
' w2 m* @( Q3 @9 @6 N0 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% q) Z, A; i( p+ p! t4 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ f) D7 L0 w7 A. G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* x! G( q8 S0 r5 {. E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ c4 U+ \; [! `9 ?* Z+ E# L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 B5 B( J5 B, R' j; m) \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. t, f: c& I& c: U* c& F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) f2 n  _. d0 |, J% `% u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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- Y& B) F$ @" z/ |, w7 Q  E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>