【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* h: @% {0 t9 L5 b8 y7 p- B( a歌词我附在后面。
1 K8 g$ Z! n/ P4 Z0 n" hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ F# i3 Q& V8 Z. v* n/ q: U8 OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% V* A1 l& m' n, l6 j( Z6 n) \: cYou needn’t fear anything
" X/ `1 B) M' B* Q, u7 q/ }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: ^4 I( x, G" i: t' E) N; ZI really want to know just how much you love me
/ \# J7 B- h( U* JI love you I love you with all my heart
9 N; ^" f% ~( Y  D) h/ O8 B1 `Nothing can compare to my love
5 p: |3 P5 ?% v3 D$ v; JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% r$ n& x. n9 ^( |& P7 vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 ^: \. W3 {, s3 ?% GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; f; d- d' |. b$ e* E% JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 y; l: s! p" t- @, ~6 R6 g+ VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& @5 V# O7 x) _! T: a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ ]5 U. c7 i, c$ ~1 b1 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& p0 V1 \. F5 {4 @" y9 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 d# N9 t# r' y0 l  e" p% V( x/ Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  c" ^7 U9 u) f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' s: [3 Q0 t* Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) J- g; p3 N+ l, I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 R% N, X# B; i; A9 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ z- p5 q' L4 l7 Z! E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 }: Z4 H6 ]$ T' c$ d% u' M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' s5 Z$ ~$ [& k+ N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" T! v1 P2 M. n% s& j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 I8 I% h$ i( W  E5 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' C: |4 V+ O+ s6 c5 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 T+ w8 c7 h, S* A+ M1 `! S! Q0 V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 A0 N. q7 t1 {: `( c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 s; A7 Y: n1 p1 I/ ?! G; P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 W8 k9 l9 l' R) V% c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ N- p" [) }* ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) Z1 c  X1 o8 c, y8 D, c" c. L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 Q, }- y$ P! }3 r. O% L7 {  z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* G% V6 h5 r* J3 y( g+ a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, b, Q; v7 T$ \! e0 A2 L$ _" G$ p$ L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% F3 E; T: B7 g; z3 ^# b% e<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ t! q( y* z, Y. B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# Q" y& C! c6 l3 R+ }3 e, `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: |& J: i  u- j* C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) W2 s, I/ t& T, `# t" ^2 o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! y5 j# x& _' ]' t* O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 i, p/ b- f* [9 h2 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 t7 U9 f4 w0 q9 i% P3 N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ O" \. Z+ k7 J: c0 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>