【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' y, b. T! z8 {  A1 C* [* s歌词我附在后面。
6 v1 `  F  N& ?: ?1 J# kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ M  y$ p  Y/ Q4 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 ^- U* m  N! A4 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# n( s1 L: w1 `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 Z/ ^. k# g0 C( e6 U: ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ \, Q( f5 G- I7 {+ BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% I( J: P/ i. _$ rEvery other word you utter is love
; o; Z+ z6 ?* j2 {* `0 h; L8 LI really want to know just how much you love me
- _* L! t  ~/ X2 j! h7 BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 Z7 P- m7 j. ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ a8 O7 `! K6 C4 dI’m still filled with fear
) \) z  B3 o0 |, q! ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* e# o$ ~5 O% w+ G, \, j# U, `( GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# X$ [! F/ f6 [0 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- G4 y, g& l' s. C' U1 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 N/ s6 f+ J. m0 M. Q* d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 b3 j- [. U, X6 x. L' t. Z- n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 W  o. J( x8 V$ k+ d$ U9 b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* ^! J& n4 @+ p9 P  r& g4 F2 k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, }* V$ Z) w' @% w2 o3 U. D/ @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' I) L6 U6 I& E5 Z1 a# {  s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- R$ [) A: h% a8 J- ?: J& o( e" f0 L) K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 M. u3 l2 t8 h9 g; v- K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! X& m1 G- f1 J$ d; N2 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 s( x+ g: u% _. c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 T! ^' T& x% n( W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ p+ ]7 a, W: V9 i( M' r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 v3 Z$ V% ?3 L$ n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ N$ c/ b. ~' N1 U2 M/ z+ ~0 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 t) |3 e4 m: V6 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ x$ O* x7 c/ M; b. G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 P& \2 E: I* X0 T9 U4 Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 [6 |2 Y$ _7 x0 Z/ T1 r* q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& H$ x& H7 t, E- u% C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& G& I1 ]* Z) L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 n, o0 b" M3 ]4 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 B6 c4 |+ m" E* ~& Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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6 Z9 w' a# W7 L  X" l+ _' {9 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>