【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- V7 H1 [% f+ E: XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: }7 T9 x7 c: k0 \2 X' U6 WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! T$ a5 t6 y1 g; mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% g/ v( i+ h$ @- o2 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, |4 `8 \( X" e" |Every other word you utter is love
5 c: ~' D( N5 b1 t0 OI really want to know just how much you love me
5 j4 ^% x/ P! H" `3 t. {( g) cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 _* i( E! q) aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ ?1 t' N1 @6 \! `: eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. a' E. d, N2 d$ J0 g* D; pI’m still filled with fear
) e: T% r- w) N# G& N1 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 `6 v4 f: @) T% U- ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 |' n* d: M' J( z- T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( t/ s, {. X, j* ~# |' ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 S- N* v0 r! P( b' c; E' Q6 q3 O* Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 _, C" t6 }: j4 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ a8 h1 q5 t( x# e# Y+ l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) A  p. _: d) ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* o1 a  E8 g1 q! W. d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. m# U6 d( e4 c4 s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ s& d! H, z" t- P0 o  \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 }4 L( @8 N' v+ y+ N  [1 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 ^- S2 O: v2 H' S, c5 H# Q. w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 J+ W( o. T7 J6 Z4 Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: \; B' T( k: c: c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; A/ z/ q: s5 |4 m; L6 U; ~- A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ ]: O' ^& v* k<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 c: T: K6 Y: Z4 B- U4 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 x1 W# }$ m6 V4 ^: D# c; h7 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 M- z  b7 m# X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! [: X' a, Y$ ]; t8 P# l* e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 l* D: ^# E% d; E# [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 d) ]8 s  \6 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>