【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* R8 a+ f" e  |) T: J. C* ~7 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ a" v/ q! \" YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 c/ @  P' U/ ^1 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' P7 ^& R4 G3 ]You needn’t fear anything
0 v; h2 t4 ^5 Z7 x  YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  J4 v$ k6 L1 @% aEvery other word you utter is love
' ]! P) R7 i. M5 AI really want to know just how much you love me
5 K6 A3 n1 R( W" UI love you I love you with all my heart
! Z- ~: m- I! `( b) a1 hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ^( b9 T/ U4 }+ y. l* GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* T' w5 ^3 l" q7 S" @& mI want so much to see inside your heart
& U- K5 h* o& J, FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' y% Y! u8 _+ x. f! ?I’m still filled with fear
& H0 p* O' m: r( FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 r: J, U5 f, k+ C4 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! L0 N/ z8 a) f; u9 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% U2 E# h* k) `- }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' u! \& F; m' Z8 [% x! u0 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 n% z& \! ]7 O: e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 q6 b2 Q/ i$ `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 n# u7 k4 n' @' S$ ~- P0 D) i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 x0 P1 E6 H9 P+ H6 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 `. I# X# {' E* S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 f: S2 h. }6 K: c- i<P>你无需担心</P>
6 b7 g; K; m, g( c* O0 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. U8 K8 F* o- F2 r- D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ?! S* R# T  c5 o9 w8 d- Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  k5 ]$ ~3 X8 n; R% w$ @  W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; Z* H: D. G& S! x0 i5 z$ V5 b' b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ u: M3 C* x' `% B# s7 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ E$ k, H# T3 U* ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 ^, {) p# ?+ `4 w1 F- Q9 B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# Q3 V( A9 l( x7 ?. c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ m" B) q& l2 Q$ L2 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* m) j8 R- J5 L: f& t  g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. K" |: h! {. \' Z- Q3 P- G0 m$ s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 s% r; @/ l$ G$ W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- x5 Y0 H! H& A7 e! j2 I2 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, h- X; N; ~7 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: g; k/ F0 k4 `2 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 V+ S. ]# q( Z9 C" ~9 [+ l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. D  E/ _7 p4 Q- d7 g* J% e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# j' b' w& B) n, I2 E) s9 p% t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>