【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, B/ u* v4 w+ q( O歌词我附在后面。
# |5 P) p0 J4 s0 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) n& p* Y" N# y; q3 y6 `2 j: V8 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 f: C/ Z. A0 e  s+ J& S/ s( FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& M& B( `1 l, \& v& xYou needn’t fear anything
  R; e' e2 C2 v; O* B$ r6 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% B# U+ o7 Q' U; C  n# `! \+ E3 J% J) xI really want to know just how much you love me
+ r% C- h/ Y0 |( k6 |I love you I love you with all my heart
) J6 h5 H# j0 T) @8 ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ l* V3 p* S$ G+ uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( _* S, L! _% m* {5 D  B  B* EI want so much to see inside your heart
- ]3 Q9 R$ |; QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 F, a2 d9 ~; ]! r& ^/ KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 O  j3 f7 C0 @- S! a5 |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- a) S* R# s+ i* fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  T/ Z' W) g: w) C  q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' K4 O5 u$ k/ |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  p# B  ?0 S/ l( p4 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' I8 y% h1 ^+ |/ z! z( b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- ?: @8 w' C% I5 P' ]- ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 V  c1 I8 \6 W3 O& ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 l0 d) `( t" O) Y9 s8 ^2 ?, d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 D3 Y; s  R" [% A. v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 M; e9 x9 h% d8 H9 D7 _: j% H9 R. c<P>你无需担心</P>
3 C* q1 O  A7 J  a- r' e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 u, E8 z5 o& M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- i. j( p4 k3 ^2 t: |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 i& m3 u$ V6 h3 q, ?( O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 D! h: z& C9 d7 h+ d- r5 i# D% }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 w8 o9 a$ e8 B# K1 O/ ^  W+ ?8 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! ]) l4 u( ~/ c3 D* E8 T( T$ g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 m# v, _$ h' ^8 X" S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: F- x9 V5 Y% c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 e4 |6 J3 v9 g0 w3 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 a4 v0 J  R) e6 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ u6 q3 W, T0 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 \, C$ J* b' G$ k# J7 L& [" K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ^! l+ s3 {, Y5 z, a+ G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. ]- x7 E5 q" j( ?8 H) s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' k1 S4 e# z4 z% ~* N0 F$ ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 {  K" h( I; k$ c8 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ]2 K* ^% B: }  D/ K. z& o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 e% W! o: `0 g4 ~/ h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, f$ m0 E7 {7 J! G& _, F' j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 g. \4 q( s6 e* F6 v0 X8 P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  Y; U7 d9 `2 |) f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. x" W- A5 c, `# J+ v8 r, u  y% i" T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 X. ?3 F! l" Q: X8 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>