【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. o! c7 s, T' l( X歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! E( s) `" U, _& J% }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! y# C4 s: x* R3 m' M: zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 M. M" U/ w. \! v$ G) h' S; mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 t# u( T- [9 u; |1 b9 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( k* Y7 x' O$ R$ P  QEvery other word you utter is love
- R# u! H7 U' sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; q6 ]6 l; y) [9 n, M; MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ ^9 Q* b  A6 d6 ~. G) o- Z! U. yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 q( b- k. w) a9 F# P2 wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 v2 l1 s$ E/ ?6 UI regret not dying
$ x0 b. Z$ P. b; pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 e1 _5 M' [, ~# `, C0 }4 rWith such a tongue as yours,
- M$ ?/ }0 Y, IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& e# ]8 L$ e- k3 k! i, u5 ]1 P3 F/ Z0 hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, C; A; a( i5 L# [; r" p* {2 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' @* {4 ~  Q' f0 T8 f, M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( R+ Y( ?$ l. y5 o& k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 `+ h( Q2 s( D, X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 t$ |# Y  G+ \7 O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! E9 G  A0 ^: q0 n$ b4 x4 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. _& a- \' W5 f8 i1 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 J' c; {# E: |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 x; E0 u( x6 K, g) Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 h3 s) T1 [. P7 h% ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 K+ j5 L! [+ ^; }$ f* o! w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 J" |9 d8 G6 K. ]+ D2 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% \$ M% C. _0 f3 W9 k( f2 q- }9 R! u" U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ k. U7 A% l+ ]3 C, ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- B/ k/ O4 d) n8 k, L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 Q2 o* G, d2 `/ F- ^7 h7 G0 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 z, g2 A6 t% @$ e  G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ]0 C% L$ z' Y) O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& N+ X4 g9 S1 \) P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. f4 f7 P' Y8 _: A' Z4 x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 \- s2 G$ m3 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* |  o3 R, b& J& H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: y3 [7 T0 V! `- V0 X- m5 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- }  \* g# _9 N' Q$ W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. o  {" i: @( R5 W% V6 M- n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% t2 R9 ?5 g0 d* ~# L2 q* [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: o, B2 _- ]: B9 j% Z( F: Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" Z+ |* l( ?0 n& K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ a+ O" V2 E) q* z' K- j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>