【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 Q3 q1 B8 W2 {7 {7 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& e5 {) V( C  EThe sky is happy down to its soul
' W0 c# T, |8 J5 LWith the moon kissing it every night
( G1 a) N8 w2 U$ g- n. @  `8 ]5 dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) l. J* T1 M6 S# e+ U- GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* C, O* @  C0 x2 z$ x' _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 P0 Y! V( K# f5 d: j: R& rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) r. F; R, e1 B' h5 o$ rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 x* S, L6 ]9 v4 n) h8 P9 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# p1 b% n# i. Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& I; z- x* `0 \$ e4 ^7 D/ P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) p/ H& e3 R* _( v5 F" v( y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 Q. a# W+ q  S9 @7 a& n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 H; v  P. |2 o4 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# P1 z) l, n! P+ }4 o. D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 }4 c6 {) h. k! @1 ], s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% J5 e' f0 W+ |. i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ~' G# W4 ^& x4 d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 u% C2 n9 M. k- [0 V7 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 \, T5 R1 H+ T, f! Q9 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) R6 q2 W' a+ M1 k: ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- Q& {! x1 [- W. I# t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( [' M1 ~5 }' l/ G1 E9 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 b/ Y1 k& d0 \" Q1 ?: m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. d/ ]6 T  S4 ~0 B* P& C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  q1 \! m' U5 o1 G- x$ Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 u' p5 b0 m6 k  m2 c; D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: k- I' l$ I9 O' `1 o3 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, M* f1 C" o9 m4 _# Z& X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. h$ O- P  ^, l5 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# _6 ?& i0 h& @# A. f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ X+ z* {3 i: p( A4 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- N+ k1 c1 E; z6 k6 [1 g: h3 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& ]  U6 ]# i* c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: N! f3 e: ~0 B8 d8 w# A8 F6 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( M5 U: ~1 |0 H  d, X+ I3 d: w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. w0 [, l0 k( j2 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 x0 \0 j. \0 i- \1 ~6 W) ]我请你剖开它

* F/ |. z# C( A* L+ z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>