【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! s* x9 R* ?1 i( f1 f歌词我附在后面。
+ }2 H* U+ o+ m/ p3 {  l* yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, j$ r( c! D5 a0 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  ~6 w+ ~; t/ G: VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* N& d+ |# u. j5 h) L/ b% }7 {The sky is happy down to its soul
& V. |% z3 [( t* K- pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, h& a6 i2 {4 ]) @4 e6 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 U' z$ ^- C1 n7 T: P2 aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, X* i! W  u/ f) @Nothing can compare to my love
. O) W5 L! C# t  J( gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 r, [. x/ l. V3 yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* [" i- M, m. U% NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) v- T0 ~7 I$ x# J  ~; ^I regret not dying
- I% D( z$ r3 V+ G/ KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ b: J% z7 k% n$ c$ @3 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: S& h  A- W2 ?; c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 k7 z  w( _6 `. Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" x, W( w) N' b' ]! V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 x/ o( u0 i' y" Y' q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& e/ Z0 o0 `* }" |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- S' @6 n2 |. E. Y& `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 y% S" O' c; x  t( r0 F" J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  r0 y) f: h# e6 T, W2 u<P>你无需担心</P>
9 U$ r7 h1 V; U' y# L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. J2 r3 d+ q1 L/ V( H5 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ v, Y% r( \) B. W+ b* i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* F) e$ W. Q+ o( `: A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 [9 y; h' t6 _- Q: _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: X9 l- @) b& l$ Q$ ~* O5 S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' @7 |. l/ A0 P5 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. O7 g6 r; J4 H: N/ l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 K  q1 Y& G/ o8 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: t/ n, y% a5 g8 L& d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 K7 f: L: u; T' U0 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 [; d% ^* I' ]+ Y& j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: p! S& o; K1 n0 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 e* M) A  r3 r' w# q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 R" W0 v, n" D: A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, S: V+ Z6 A3 P7 h7 n* P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; d! p: q' ]. x9 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ F' G' K( |, k) l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& ?" a5 [2 n3 `/ q3 B我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>