【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 r! V) z/ Z7 {5 z, j' |The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 a: b1 a% b4 b: B2 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  o' [! |( M8 B* d: J$ [% b% yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: X  _) x  ]3 p5 k* K  Z1 u) ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" \, q% J+ Q! b3 Y& HSeeing the sky content with its love
# z5 E2 D; b) m$ G' @6 a4 D7 }; [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 m# V1 C4 a2 W2 D: t" O4 \$ SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: `' l, ], b$ L# w7 v: sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 k6 g8 M; S% N* s- ^: eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 K; X! M  h' Z" pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) ~5 m) t3 M+ |! D1 R, O4 ?8 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 R8 j1 b& D; q; o6 F( m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 Y% u. X5 J" N" R( U3 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) n# g6 J. {7 N6 q1 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; H. q0 c& ^  T+ U% P" V, O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% N0 R  B: y3 H# s* D7 S0 f. }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; Q) m" R5 l3 ~5 p8 c  X3 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 B0 h. F+ {# f+ @6 z: d" A* F( F. n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 @' E/ B% W# C5 ^- {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" Y, ]# G$ N0 J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 @3 s: ?# W: |7 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 |3 v, I/ c) h" K; j" c) e6 i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ O8 v# y. M; A) A$ ?5 S" z1 F2 O* ^/ P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. c) N1 N% T7 [6 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 n- M* ?' S7 F5 f* m; B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& \- q$ G1 A7 _% c! [* y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- a6 g) B. @' C& I  A; s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 D9 {: {  O( ~4 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: Y( v5 K, O; N/ K) N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 K2 U4 o8 a8 w# |6 r( i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. C4 n% h1 u! z& w! u/ s" h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) S) A+ K! \, w' T  G. T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, F& Z$ x& a7 J6 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: f* ^2 T; q& T* }# y& _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; l6 M+ W- S9 u7 Y1 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ d3 L( b. R( B( ]- h' |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ g' b. \) `! E7 o2 H6 `+ L6 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 E( y1 {" d* o' I! u6 _, L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 j+ Y0 l) R3 d) X: u5 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# U- x5 c' d3 F4 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 F% w( w2 G( A/ M. M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>