【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( B- [4 ]. b# t) ?3 M* P' b歌词我附在后面。
( h/ O- r, C) ]5 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& O& ^2 t! J5 _+ ?4 g8 r* P; nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. ]) t  q' }2 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% d8 K& ~( k7 o+ g9 U% ~  }With the moon kissing it every night
+ p& ?/ q: ^3 C5 Q7 j( qSeeing the sky content with its love
. r, }, N/ K& @- u3 x" e; YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ B( Y5 ~" Z/ w0 H* z6 z8 b+ y# R1 Z5 zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 ~' `1 j* q- I8 KI really want to know just how much you love me
. x* F6 L8 D" W5 F. I+ mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ i! H6 V* G) b0 |8 T+ TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 I! R) U* G  [& F  VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 X7 p) R2 B6 k3 P. cI’m still filled with fear
  V6 V8 R' f, A# \) @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 W/ z$ C5 o/ l, h! ]) G# GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ [9 k! j, y, W0 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' |2 h4 Z2 h3 f8 b( L* x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( a5 I! t4 M( h0 s8 G/ ~/ O6 z* L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 d" W( B: {5 U, Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  E6 t; K6 l" n% u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 A/ h) C) W- e7 ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' `; n# m# i4 k5 N! y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 ]4 r6 z- X1 A* \  r$ g% M# ?' i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: I2 ?  |4 E4 r, b% Q6 }. I# L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 e1 z1 [& B, b- s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 X& g" H* c2 q/ b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( i3 A, V# h# Q0 R! ^. e4 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; d2 T6 s5 w5 f( ?' Q: ]+ o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  E. s2 K4 V! [: Z; H3 m: V2 ^8 S% l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- |" M1 F& o0 P8 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 D7 c( Y# _$ o' h; v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 v2 m# f$ J, R" h$ G+ W+ j8 o! k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: k  K  ?3 X# p! J! f* P1 S# x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 O% X  c2 U) m- R. b0 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 D. F: C+ }9 Q' p( x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 Z4 `, i1 t1 L8 F. `+ @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 Q( C( ^$ d  D4 c) ^% s9 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ S5 X+ h$ W! I5 t  f3 P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 i0 Q5 I# Q* K3 W" e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& [/ n+ Q1 \& _5 ]5 L7 q8 F3 h9 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 [7 Z" @% c& I2 \2 n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ t7 m2 ?1 P) [* E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 Q, y* _6 A- _9 U- f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 k. \7 b0 p; u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 `8 P2 r7 E0 z/ I$ X; H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>