【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( m2 B  r# @7 m* M& @# GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  L( i$ X* w6 r+ t. x* oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 K" k7 r) e- P* L; E. j7 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ B4 L) u) k' p$ C/ uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, M5 }' B/ Z: }+ y4 a8 z5 I" ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 o/ v! S# J0 O9 Z- L3 ]( e0 |9 eEvery other word you utter is love
6 m4 f8 ^; u5 p/ {4 NI really want to know just how much you love me
; p0 m: p# X  B- t) A( D3 `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& n( Z3 M# Z2 f- V7 h  w3 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 w! M8 s1 B1 X; x3 ~! \: {" pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ q4 [" a( T0 }  H+ Z5 L0 A) N. i/ w9 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ p2 V" ]% A( e' lI’m still filled with fear
8 d9 N. ~% I) H$ JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- `! B# V/ o" H1 B) B- L# k& uWith such a tongue as yours,
  \7 y$ H3 b8 Q+ iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, ?, X8 ^6 f3 z+ b, s) R' a$ k7 Y1 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& Z$ A3 t5 O7 R/ Y3 r8 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& u6 w: D& A( D  {: n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- [' `# s. f- ~/ r3 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; E# N: c+ d& V- P+ x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 A2 c" s# a9 w5 t+ u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 f. @' g7 i" e. N, }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! |. [( |7 n% m/ x9 j8 I# j  F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- S* T' f7 I) y( y/ o+ i/ T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' T+ g" J. q3 ~0 `2 ~8 T0 p2 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& d) g* k# S) Z& g6 D# L6 m# Z1 w# T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ x: n! ]: Z% a8 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 Y4 s( b" D0 p9 k7 X3 e# C1 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 B0 r$ o4 T+ D9 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) ~6 P8 H+ u+ y1 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 s" M' ]- f& f; z7 B) [& H" _2 Z! r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 Q4 h3 S2 F2 }& }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  A4 S! n9 f& j- Y/ N' F% {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 U; i. N% l$ k) P  C* }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 E0 C  d! p& k. k4 g8 t' ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& H7 a0 B, x& u. w* Z. y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 i  X6 L; I* F* i$ @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 M9 v/ G2 o$ ]) @. b, i" K" e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% m) ?6 x0 ]. i3 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( ^/ M, D) G6 @3 I  L; C) _$ {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# C% o' G7 ]3 \/ M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 l7 @6 }. V& t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 ?% X& Q# O9 a6 c& F) }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# k) u5 S7 j/ N" d' K; k) i/ X我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>