【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% L" R3 s1 G$ r% v0 Q* J3 D/ v歌词我附在后面。
% R. x1 N1 l2 ^' E9 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& B6 @1 X1 S3 M8 \8 v" u$ c' w0 A/ iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# x9 @' P4 t  a* K: tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. K9 U5 N+ X9 Q+ E# J' xSeeing the sky content with its love
! F- Y5 C7 m* ?4 V: XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. b1 R+ Q8 @$ }# G: X# eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 S: l  H2 d% ]" R  N" q% y, r  ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& A% i% r' E  F) NI want so much to see inside your heart
4 U  N+ ~* q# o3 @5 @, @/ k6 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' {2 g/ \1 m& {/ u" L9 SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" P  j1 `$ N5 b( |; L6 f' YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 A0 B. I7 P5 w! R+ Z4 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 u+ Y9 F1 K! w- W+ O3 j& ~9 H3 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% T% |- C$ N, x" V8 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' Y4 |  {: Q: k$ C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 V6 j6 e5 P# y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% A5 o' l2 f% n* M$ s' P% L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 E) u2 C9 l& {- q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 K, O' H1 w" b( G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# ?4 K& w/ H) Z! z7 @& Y+ z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* e2 V+ ^  l2 A3 y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) a. ?/ `+ l9 q. U! M+ X3 x( J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 m. E/ p# d& M( D5 Q( @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 X: b2 s2 B5 r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% u3 X, L& R. w- I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, @5 }/ V$ o: A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 E( N5 N: f6 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, ?) A' n- T; c  Y1 X9 W: U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" W! \6 @+ J* _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 d! q$ b$ M/ ]) V- p! X9 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- x- @; v2 [2 D0 T2 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" t4 W7 q* l5 \% \/ W1 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* H7 C+ F! J& u" M  J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. }. B  f8 v6 _( C. ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 K5 X& g+ ?) O6 A) z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 S( g$ l. [: W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- j7 d1 S! h5 E6 }9 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ T# Z, h$ f$ g; J  i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! x% ~$ U/ k; P: H  n. z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* \" ~# {* p# g我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( G3 f& y& G9 F, Y4 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>