【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 [: \% U" ^2 r& q* O! y' @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( \  m- ~' H: zWith the moon kissing it every night
: x- p' ?! A) PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 @, n! ^8 u1 JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 B8 y- t0 r2 W6 nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ |! d1 ]' O9 Q5 Y; p3 m) s7 MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& e! P; O0 m- h5 R9 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' I$ g: W- M* b' N" cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! m! ^. X) ^! `, y+ W# r) W) F7 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; A$ J9 @" b0 |' gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; o0 ~8 L/ i% N( q* f4 X' |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 t& W, Z, r( }& x( E6 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! K! g+ v. t8 |% a* [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 X$ N, A6 ?4 H" i; v+ X) J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 l2 |0 h# t! Q) n9 f6 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- g' Q3 a9 R( A# `' K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 S5 w" z! Z0 }. c, l* F$ E1 d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( i, l; i0 T* ?& V; t5 q( f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! n5 @8 V4 |& n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; H- R+ G' c/ v! b  J) R+ D* Z  N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ A) I- e* m& p: Y$ ]/ P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 @* W% m* x, E* _  R8 c9 D* f6 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: U2 P4 d- ~$ _% k1 @+ B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 ~! n0 @- A7 e3 s. I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 M+ P" V# G( Z4 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) m- ~  W6 T9 w% m' ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! r- q6 Z  O! q  n2 ]6 i: f, K$ d9 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 N( L2 o* [# J. n2 k$ W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 x, m' K+ P4 L" E7 s( B! L$ c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% A. C" k$ g! J: h' b( W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. W2 y) ]: Q9 b6 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>