【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ C5 V# V6 X" RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 `5 p" H% Y+ }% \' SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 q# h& [' k% VThe sky is happy down to its soul
, d1 P/ ^1 F: R6 U/ P1 [. WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ R4 b; q/ _9 O2 A7 J7 aYou needn’t fear anything
5 m' j0 J7 O% \$ P6 q/ C! H- RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ G7 Z# C" d% t4 M) BI really want to know just how much you love me
( u( ]+ e, H7 r9 z0 |I love you I love you with all my heart
! y+ A5 r2 u4 [0 M0 b0 z, F5 b: `; MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 P8 u' ^/ V/ Q6 k/ Y9 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# G7 A7 B! r& |( W0 l. ~- y0 ?" PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& l% ^7 U4 L. R& P% e1 QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! ^0 \, X0 a" {: a9 M+ kI regret not dying
* |. w8 D1 T, q! O, i% J0 o: B$ k: OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ d: u7 j4 _, n+ a! B  E3 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 Z: n) ^/ c; S( s9 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 A. [4 {! R$ L  @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 W6 n8 I! G+ n+ `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 p1 S$ f( w2 ~& ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) U  {% j) }$ u! x5 R) j, k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 a' u( }% j+ J: A/ A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: e* t/ V! C( K; M( p5 v4 w8 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" ~! g8 t3 U+ \2 Y( a( e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 o6 N& {( W' w& R! D4 F& w8 K<P>你无需担心</P>
# i8 u3 H+ C2 I% z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 ^4 K1 _3 a: @  \: N9 f% g' p) m& w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 H% t' h) `6 J' \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: J, g% o1 X3 C$ e8 O! ^+ f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 a( q( a) z, f! B* r( q( }% N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& W1 D4 T$ i0 F2 \( ~" u! E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, \- D. H6 y) r' e4 z/ @  R, b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% n! n( P# j2 x- `. U: D: R( e4 }( @% X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( P4 M2 s& b: \0 }/ F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 ?7 F5 v6 T) W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 [. k6 W, _9 H" k0 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 R; F( u2 B! }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. C* @' W3 e% y* m" }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ P8 Z; K* k8 [7 B$ J0 g+ c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# S  C9 N- H2 g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% n% s2 n: q& p/ Y+ b( \( K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. k" y' S- A5 J. U$ D" F/ l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: Q. d# T3 c& ?! o* c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 [' S9 {4 N# m/ d) i+ d/ A- e7 c. H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. X  {3 a1 z; L2 O/ M1 b/ h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& [( L& s$ Q& K- x+ Z8 L+ ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  H' A! N3 ]  `0 ^3 n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>