【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ R1 t# E! c4 _3 b" x# O7 x1 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' E+ L9 b3 D* |4 W/ FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) I6 Y  T3 ?, l! A7 r/ R7 M- F* nThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 M: D+ z) ]" E2 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" }! Y  y7 `  S1 T5 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ r; z- ~) x' t! f! zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' J' N9 N, k. r5 Q% l9 a# ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* r6 _4 |' v1 D) f% yI want so much to see inside your heart
0 ~; b0 y+ @( hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( @; r7 l9 R0 G; y  R3 I" `$ BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; H6 p( g: O3 ?3 X; u! YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# U  B5 d( I; j( f# g; [8 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- {! t: X! H# W6 A6 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 C4 y; E7 u; o6 }5 B3 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 n7 p: U  _$ q. D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! U: {) G6 H  K1 D0 Q/ ~5 ?! i' B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ u3 b! ^" s1 ?7 r3 f) }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 d7 G% d0 R! Y! ~. C6 f! X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* r2 y4 o5 k- J. P+ B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. o- t& D  ?+ {; _9 ^- o) S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 y- b8 p  a; t" Z: F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ d- o+ h3 Q0 J  E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 F  f' L- I3 b+ _( G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 L8 \6 f6 O. O2 q2 M) n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 b0 k3 V! i* `. @7 h) k4 k$ l! [4 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 d) M. d/ X: F" @. x8 }7 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- J' F4 B, H. N3 x/ V9 R4 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 j% k; e$ ~. X  T* M+ M) m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 i7 h7 d- B% H$ L; f1 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 g; A- w$ d5 Y- Y2 [. j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ e( U! Y! ~( {, I+ b+ @; I6 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 J! D; ^4 T- H0 g) I<P>I regret not dying</P>
" a- y2 Z1 {2 P) T$ U0 G/ ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( A+ }) S" |6 }8 }. k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 a7 ~, y* |0 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) m* l. h( u/ P7 g& a5 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 M( L* p: n2 {0 P9 i! e7 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: {1 A2 G' W3 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 r! `6 _! |9 I+ d! {! K6 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ x1 o$ k4 }' n* x3 |+ K& D% v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: `5 A' b; l9 ^" R0 F我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# i% N$ f5 L* u2 b5 s* X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>