【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- V* k# c* J" N: u. v& s! ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ k3 [* a1 a5 j6 q; z  nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" k. s) j. D* I+ _2 vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 x+ n* E! A  C; P9 p8 q1 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" S1 m+ Z$ G" c* G. P3 _$ m! I$ eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 d+ G! x: U5 k$ A, YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- f+ o0 q8 O* S/ m: `Nothing can compare to my love
) m+ o$ f. b( e* i: K/ FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( I8 E5 r) b( p4 }( o% \/ SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ b7 i, J! }% F8 C" qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; d( T' ^8 W& `5 K) q, m0 Y: DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, C6 t9 G8 {0 E5 ]$ S4 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: {: `# h" N$ g* J& V' g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: n8 u' [5 U+ t; l7 v- V3 {! [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* n; n) N# ]: [6 y' u/ P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- ^; K7 F& @$ d" C3 r5 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. p" ?" [& Z- B" |. `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& p2 D- G+ o" H3 H. x3 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ ^7 P" w+ q- L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 e0 e' x. w+ {) s' k+ p<P>你无需担心</P>
* E7 ]; H/ w+ x4 D7 a5 p; D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  Y) i1 N2 T4 Y% u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) I6 e7 I+ `5 V5 J2 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 Q& E: l' E* M9 ?7 y" p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' c7 H8 i0 R* ^4 @, x: g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 o* v, ^) C7 {  Z" w" E' m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# W% l3 j3 G1 L. a6 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: G) f) J5 z: R2 Q' X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" i/ y8 n, [. d6 R4 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ Y# S% L, S) G7 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' Y- K+ l& u5 X4 X; \# y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! e2 j9 U5 ^- L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ ?8 r4 m3 P9 F  H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 j! U; D9 F/ U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' A4 J6 G  }- u3 o* t, `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( X" ]& t' |4 @9 z' s% E, O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! V9 t' J+ I4 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ E; g. y5 @, ?' G$ j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 E2 |+ h) c  [& B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>