【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 A2 T; F- o1 l, c1 }: J0 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% o+ Z6 U& I1 T( L  N' s8 w, @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 s9 b; |8 j- v9 B$ _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. s* O7 U  N4 d1 R; X7 C+ xYou needn’t fear anything
( I* m  F, I: KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( F/ i6 H, t6 s3 _- a  d  \: d7 SNothing can compare to my love
! n) \4 G. V9 n7 G- `% ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- K- n5 M8 I' y, H( E! Y  UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. q1 I9 w' g; ]1 ]+ e7 B( LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 w. r3 J- u2 L, F3 L( }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  V# Y( U  Y! v, n) T: |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* B; H" B, O4 @) l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 `5 j' _" G# G$ X! L/ ~  M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 [+ P  f7 n0 f, ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 d/ j7 W5 t" @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ U/ V* {( y7 s, E" ]1 t' e% f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 y6 \/ O% [) v9 b8 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, g( o3 Z: m: {9 |7 \* [7 o/ _  ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# {) G7 R; M( _4 a  q: S% O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& _5 M& h9 b# z* o; n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; E( w% w+ z2 K- c6 j, [' _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ k; s, p8 B0 u* y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' j5 ^4 y; e- V& Z$ ?! h# s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ @7 Z# W0 I& Y0 u9 D  w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, m- Z, o: B3 Y+ C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! a. M6 l3 y  {/ f* a' J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* s) b" O9 m* {) T! x6 N) s" l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' Q2 Q0 F/ w; _! p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 e* m6 z; W% R. {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, O% T/ d3 d7 w1 V# l  C, ?: V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 e' z1 v7 {. T( N: r* I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 s: l7 y# [9 b8 W  b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 q9 c! q% }3 R' C7 Z1 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ M1 j' u: ^- k2 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. F* C/ }" f3 v  O" p! u6 L$ b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" y5 n' i% s5 n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' G$ R8 P: J6 i+ `# X: P) K2 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( a( e; W/ w7 ^5 f' ]% c+ m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' V" C6 P/ E) ^2 U) A  h  o8 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# @$ H& m1 X5 M' |% b0 l我请你剖开它
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* a2 F. k" i# ~$ { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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