【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 r: G* c) J  a' T! M# QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 h! d7 [9 X$ L$ e5 x3 o1 \+ cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& O# x0 {+ a. B4 o, SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% i4 g1 Z  v% n: U" e. z( BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 C2 o2 V7 @0 b5 m& m! ?$ nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% D) `8 T8 s% W- TI love you I love you with all my heart
; b. \  R( `; u+ M5 @Nothing can compare to my love
; E+ _/ J: n; |3 Q3 S6 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" |* X" {( W1 c# z3 m$ Y' CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# x' F& f) v5 i  X1 w; v% l/ ?) bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 U5 @4 o: k8 EI’m still filled with fear
& {9 Z4 s+ |& D6 f- SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) f2 E9 F% [8 ]( {4 mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 q  u. U* |4 i: VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. x* h) m: z* jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 O5 ]0 m% P/ m" @; e0 }0 ?) u' Q- GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; s- U, N4 d1 U: n1 p; E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) R2 u2 h! y% G8 b) }$ p- J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" ?2 R+ d8 M, v7 b) c1 t3 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) [5 {5 B6 I  z7 M. M6 L" J/ M$ |( l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; B4 O8 I. `: Z& P, C! j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 Z  u* j/ r6 q5 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# L. T$ W1 H" V4 I5 B5 C. s% p8 w6 z! c  Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 {8 B3 J2 u- K1 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 b! R7 T$ P% u/ q+ @4 G+ j1 R6 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 `# e+ |8 a: r+ a. D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( z! K& g3 }" _9 Q* }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, h  {' c0 Q# Y; I. k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ C1 C2 P* o: f4 M0 s7 y! O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, [7 T4 x; u2 E* |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' z! g2 M, r6 J" _' w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 J7 J1 d5 j. h/ d# a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 L/ I  L1 a# G3 Q8 g# w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ O; A4 I! t) B3 q! k: ^9 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 m' v) `/ d2 Y% ^% L* P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 W1 G- A/ |( V2 X* x& t% O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' g& Q) Y; x3 t$ W  H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>