【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 ^& e( f# f9 R4 ~  m1 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" e: u/ r9 U$ K& ~; w3 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 u! J2 u9 U/ g$ q+ j5 Z* J! SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& D( A3 _( K  X! z# eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ u. p' H& W  N& GI love you I love you with all my heart
% Y  D4 J% e# [, n# RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- u$ y; a( [# ]* }- JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 _& v; B2 I. oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# A8 S* }2 A6 E: ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ m5 V9 b8 k, ?! k' m% j$ FWith such a tongue as yours,
) F5 u' W( l  y" l) O4 R$ E( H& [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 |  s+ o- d$ x( X2 @" t" {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' h3 F: k/ {% @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 G- B6 I2 r! R9 g+ T& r  i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ v2 [, T/ t8 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( t8 B8 O! Z" y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# C: T7 ?! y. ^8 a$ y# k( H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* e" S: n  B0 e% L8 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 @  S5 D% ^' v! E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ [4 c) l/ H$ ]; H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 A( Y7 }/ ]: o$ y# R- L* T5 f<P>你无需担心</P>
+ G$ g2 o8 y  A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( E: K" z2 i% @6 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; q0 H. ?) M! W/ _' H4 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 P, a- l4 h3 Y; A: ?# }/ h7 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ X' F3 L; U1 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& W- x4 c6 D3 L, \9 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 c' c/ i) T2 a& x# ^, o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; @# |: s9 o% o# z; L5 K8 R" Y7 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- R; y- A2 G# O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- Q8 q  p* M; T( K1 C: w3 `* G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" ^! `; b1 I3 O# g' e( b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, _( m5 t8 D! ]6 h$ m% l+ k* q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 K( h( a  N- Y3 Q$ B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 G/ }4 F3 p" O3 U, r# H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. P$ z- D& W! J# U% ?7 k7 |6 y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( r  d# ]) U, @( S7 }. J  G9 z  a1 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 i1 T# z# P- j3 L8 m8 x' p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 O4 `4 M+ b0 [% b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 T( C% |2 i# q7 V+ D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; x1 F$ C7 s# w/ }! s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( G: C# L" t9 `8 o& B! E' L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: c( d  \) u9 U) J( o1 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 Y( E% o4 h' L5 Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>