【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 h' m) B. A( G9 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
, C# s9 g$ D+ oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 I* M0 L) G- i: ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! k( s9 v9 C" EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ ]; c, i( N; l/ K2 H7 a1 t  _3 N, HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: @5 \; M6 H/ [, M: ]* ~5 JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ e$ m) ]4 u% b1 o$ Q$ @6 o+ C: K9 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) {9 w6 |9 V% a- e; wEvery other word you utter is love
  _! n8 x, x% S" fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# M# g: m+ w) R9 g: HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 t+ g  [1 h  t- l* I. ]  d- m2 @# ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, e' B  ^8 c2 e. \I want so much to see inside your heart
% `1 I" u4 _, I4 o, \0 r6 j5 Z  v' T* `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 ^2 |3 Y! r* `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* i; T/ G  ~: x$ I% Y$ i. J' l* ]# zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# K3 `! p9 k7 J9 s! eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( a3 m- S$ A3 h2 _! s4 U4 s/ fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 y# w5 A+ V$ o: `: Y% C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( T- a& d3 t# h  ]2 z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 }& O4 m( l2 S' }; M! p9 S% Q/ i7 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ {! n1 x( C( b' b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' ~$ B! h  c5 N6 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 J/ Q% i1 S  b7 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( v5 L) I$ c1 i4 p! m' |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: ]) }& X/ T: Z( [! ?  u6 V: U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: i2 a# u6 W( k5 O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 e. R! A! ]" l2 g2 `2 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" P$ J; @4 J$ b$ R; B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' |) O- i$ t/ n) S3 a% q1 R- M% X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- f2 `6 G6 g# d' c! U$ b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& w  G; z5 t6 e3 G/ d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! w; f- r( _9 b& O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 Y' D; W( Q; A; ~: }. k+ h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  L% \) Q& {$ x  ?% P1 |. `& i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 x, M# k6 k' H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 Y' [0 k( g+ {, ^( J7 Y" h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 O: V; t. m6 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( v: i$ [3 u* ]# N4 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 Y; r5 t( [! h5 v9 `9 z$ f) f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>