【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 i0 g5 q3 _7 e5 G歌词我附在后面。
. w$ H1 `! }5 h1 s! ~3 q3 a* ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
' D8 k. u9 O' z: _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' P4 R1 A6 ]$ z/ c. Z2 J& u/ oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 a. b1 D2 t2 D" k0 O6 x& tThe sky is happy down to its soul
" P7 ]7 P- n* A1 r: d: s8 g/ nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: C$ t! ]4 m% r# {You needn’t fear anything
9 r7 [  o+ t5 W% x- JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& d; a1 h' Y" S: c+ Y, N* m, J2 |4 @4 ]Every other word you utter is love
, p9 ^; l; ^" k7 O3 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% d: d- ?4 b4 r' x+ rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( d7 c: V5 o' J( eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 i) T& M0 @! G3 T; g2 DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 \+ O1 B8 _5 R. TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 D9 q5 C8 \2 U: g* II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' m2 V( i% d' r$ N% S8 C1 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 |- K. Z2 a2 S% S4 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ y% _/ M7 Z8 a( D; @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( j/ G1 H7 X4 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ n: I' K0 t+ i. R. T! U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; Y+ D5 n  @, {9 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* H! r$ j) O  w5 H0 x* p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 y7 G! `* i! k- G2 `4 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  G8 e& T# D, H4 y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" q8 y: y4 g; D+ S8 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
% Y" N) a- \( m& T* |5 D! _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; I' z7 ^; ]0 v# F7 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Q+ G8 [) S* J5 |/ w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; x1 z& @/ Y" h% T+ u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 E/ E, j0 [- G1 v2 I. I9 e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# V# k4 s# C: l, U: H1 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 g  c% n/ A2 x/ }  _" r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ I" T3 T& J% @9 z% Q$ ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" q# y6 e. G( X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- ]  i, k# g: F! C+ y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) r9 F9 H) b5 h% G' S8 V3 j& t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" W6 M) S0 ^' p( b  t3 H2 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. {7 |3 ]% J' m; A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) ]4 n) o3 L/ {$ m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 l) k# }  s& |) F% b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; h" F! t, z6 N- x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 J+ b; m% v0 L2 ^7 x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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) T% Z4 x3 |3 C1 _! W* @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 _' `8 K5 H1 d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 R0 _- ]% X( t% G9 S+ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' N6 U& s1 b& r3 N% a; V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; L- M/ j. e8 W/ E8 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 G6 q( w2 r8 q9 G" L1 N' t我请你剖开它
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" `8 R8 E" M7 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>