【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: [/ `+ P3 ~7 S4 k3 VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; j7 _% K7 |- m; N! z( |0 j& {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- }( b) Q9 g! gWith the moon kissing it every night
% C) E. i7 t0 G! j8 ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) e4 w" ~, V. }5 Y, }1 u" p( XI really want to know just how much you love me
! B1 n( |( @1 R! K( N% ~I love you I love you with all my heart
5 w4 o6 W0 @# o& [4 X( y+ a2 y* N/ MNothing can compare to my love
5 ]; T# b) l, Z7 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! {7 T4 x6 J) z# tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) _+ w) ^/ P7 Q) c% b* UI want so much to see inside your heart
& f$ g4 L1 f. U$ n. sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! v; g$ s4 Q! p1 h$ S) v3 AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* {: @( z6 c6 ~6 Z0 nWith such a tongue as yours,
& R) ?3 Z4 u+ rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, l" o) ]! L6 s& {# N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 u; z8 ]5 v1 E* x$ S# v- s& S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ {" C/ y% I2 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  q$ O9 n7 X* I+ X. k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' ~5 N/ V# X2 L( ?' Q/ k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 m3 j* R# T* Z8 N" s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- H2 V! z/ _; i; S% s' k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& C) K' i  m+ z! J1 U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 _1 _7 q6 J% Y: O* x5 D% l" u. a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 E. Q: g* S- m( K2 H8 l0 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& h; K9 o2 L; ^, z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  }' T. w( a" i8 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ ~8 e3 s$ Y7 |0 S5 x. R! \( G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 N5 n( ~2 n- l: b6 Q+ k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, O) C; B7 _1 s+ w$ F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ ]# O& V  H% O) j0 W$ u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% t1 z) t  |0 q) J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( ~4 e( Z! N) Y/ {7 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: t+ f: f' M2 n7 I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- e; i  J) L  l# o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& Z! h% k2 {0 m4 o  v<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 \7 e/ v4 Z/ W& `- b! S, a+ D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 O: ]/ \# T( b4 b( K/ O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& _' w! ]6 @2 S! r4 T: h. H6 |! d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& R" q, P+ a7 n; ~; C! t. b, W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 s  c9 \* [; d( w6 l: N/ j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 @  i  a& H7 r3 Z! _; y( ^8 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>