【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, i% x" U  F$ z- l3 o2 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& G' K9 d& w( ^  E( T% Q* \. G" KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. X8 {2 j& _$ V, B9 f  f! PWith the moon kissing it every night
" p% h9 w9 ^: f, C% x: USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 J, U$ F, c9 A4 Z; E" IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% B( x. C: Z# ^2 tEvery other word you utter is love
) T9 e" b3 K* KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- l9 _) w9 S2 e5 O9 I! lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% Q9 b' f0 |1 qI want so much to see inside your heart
- \) o' E/ ?& n, D9 J: c$ S! PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* Q1 ]( z$ N8 B9 T) K% i- sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 ^0 |/ ]7 y/ @) w1 Y/ X: GI regret not dying
% t, ^9 u2 j, }4 @9 [9 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 [, e$ B1 r! R3 g/ b# _/ P: ?With such a tongue as yours,
& \, r( h0 d& W+ vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) O  k4 K2 |. H. U& X, }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* J3 M6 Q) G4 V0 e  S* GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 x! v" N8 h. H* i( M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, _& D; a1 p5 ^. u( Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 ]5 v( W& D0 u) ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) M3 p5 l: @, {7 y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: @. r8 W/ V9 M$ a& H4 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* d, U$ |/ j$ ^2 o+ |# q; X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& H0 d, P% C( I% j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 M) m1 Q+ i7 `. l  ?' q: x4 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, e* I: H+ O! i/ a7 f# x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ y: z/ \% T- }1 X" ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: p8 Q: s4 H+ V1 O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: G; [% F4 V' q+ x3 Y$ H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# ]3 T7 n& ]& _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# {, T2 l9 \0 w& Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ \4 z+ y$ ^' |3 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 l, P4 Q! q7 O7 j$ r* }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ h1 v( M9 Q* }$ @" O, t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  b1 i% w/ D" ]$ |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 @  L0 B) z1 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( D2 L- Z$ N, I: C" {0 T* ~# U+ Z$ }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ B0 c; h+ D2 ]  b9 {8 j& H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: L5 v+ @  [; f$ r$ Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ V, f/ s/ E% }& Y2 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& G. G' B2 B* q0 Q5 Y9 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 Z4 I. ?) }# F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: G7 F$ z7 c- a+ K2 d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& K! A% }% u  M/ v, G' w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( O5 [% y) |5 K( h% d: q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 x3 ?3 W, H1 d" t- f) J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ~4 U- L* q2 t% q3 ?% i1 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% Y$ m5 [3 f/ M/ x/ @- a  q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 X/ q* O4 j* w. B% }' v+ s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( Q% d" l0 e6 p5 |1 M7 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( e3 l9 ^# T) B; s6 C" P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) `/ {+ t. T0 b! E5 @我请你剖开它
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8 J+ h" X% c, e$ G6 @& k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 N+ T  Y# u' ~# v. S4 H) y9 h0 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>