【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 w3 F; ^' W" I% P' p, ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
. J3 C: |8 W# G! w& T* NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 ?  N  l4 j! t& a1 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
% T3 p0 e& A4 R9 F  F# q# bWith the moon kissing it every night
1 }1 \$ y' z8 O/ eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 A8 U/ p& h+ G. P8 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 F+ j/ }- G5 b. b$ Q7 e* k/ h7 |Every other word you utter is love
. @8 n1 ?; w; N, }* _' T: M4 \4 dI really want to know just how much you love me
/ r: d; r) ~6 r* ^' M4 LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ V- F) [4 |3 F: O6 ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 I" d/ Q$ w- `8 c9 ~3 T4 e4 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 ^  i, O3 r: Y9 EWith such a tongue as yours,
5 c; ^% W  ^6 F, [# _( c! m: [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ B" e( J3 j2 K, k! }1 Z. h8 t' t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ }" ]3 s, T- ?) z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: \# c1 {' j4 [% K: q/ ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- o% C; o' i) l% {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 \# h; d5 Z' M# p0 L* U% E; E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 m! n8 t% h( k0 ~5 M$ \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- X* d: E  y* L! x0 Y6 P2 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ |2 Z! }7 M9 X; G  Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 n; u& u1 z2 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 U  g* K4 m9 F  o, y7 o5 O9 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 r5 t6 }( N- w+ ~. s; Q: _( K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  K: `3 Q- m% I2 r+ ^3 B5 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ]5 S7 W; z$ U4 r0 K, h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" q) W$ j% O! j" b3 t; G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% Q* F* v  ^5 |7 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  [8 P+ B* G3 ~. D1 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( g' g+ ?4 T: O9 i0 x. z# K' Q8 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, G& t! n4 B# s/ I0 j  e) D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) a- c- K6 p% U! N1 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* w3 M. O( a* w5 E: ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 |- A5 g5 {1 P0 B( _# j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) y! j2 @9 T$ g9 g# L2 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 A1 V; X) D" }) Z2 b我请你剖开它
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8 w& \6 @! n" c5 m$ U3 y, K; M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# m" R! Z! ~1 }5 s4 w+ X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>