【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" F' S7 X5 C7 v8 x' w& z歌词我附在后面。
+ w  ]/ L1 Q! H  bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) O/ j8 `2 b* w2 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- P5 ^, e5 K) q1 m% yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- I- Q$ d9 ~. h2 y) u! XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% u, T! `9 I4 \/ wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( T. T5 {( f$ `/ k* f; \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# |' F; y/ f9 fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ i) s6 k/ v7 `6 l% s! A! c* Y3 x7 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 |) Z; ~3 T/ O6 `8 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 ?: `" G# u9 p# R/ c* dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) k( m4 a* G/ M4 SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; j0 g1 t3 T1 c1 ], ^, j: D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 H1 I& M0 R" `* ]# g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! s) m/ L- [$ u6 q. x. ^" L$ B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& f* B$ a$ T3 p; Z9 `. H% X  V2 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# _% U0 H  d: o3 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# T4 \+ ^! W3 N- X5 D( k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ w8 Q2 Q1 w' g1 P5 Z$ l  e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* y8 e" G! B, m+ e1 O) F) W$ J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! Q% I1 K* r- u6 D& u1 f9 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: R6 H0 \* ~. E0 u' Z1 K1 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 O/ Z; _# I0 m6 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 t: A$ V7 v$ h3 D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& f. i/ c% B$ [/ _: |* a# r1 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- m( B, ^% L& p4 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 a* W' g+ A/ ~  I6 Q: t0 t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 V( {% F! \: m: Q% H0 J. o$ ?- p6 A7 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ `5 b$ y/ T, w$ l* ?, h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# ]4 X+ ^# X+ z3 c. o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 K  S. ?! ~/ S3 L) {8 _4 z9 g+ J' g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 H& I* w- c& [( _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 c- J) j& j9 w2 M2 m/ {1 I( y<P>I regret not dying</P>
- `6 E( K8 e! E2 y, Y, ]9 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; X1 |2 i# K% ^) T' t; k  U/ n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: K  }) a( o1 W, L2 G7 O: P1 R* ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  J+ W7 W9 M+ f" \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 e) W; }4 p  d6 \9 G) _7 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. j+ `; ~( Z, A" T* f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  l9 U: ^3 H6 z+ a& {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 X7 m* n. ?  K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>