【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* W& n" K$ [9 K歌词我附在后面。
9 Y0 K0 j+ `0 [( K# oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 X& ]7 L9 H0 h% {( ^5 ?8 P( zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; }9 W% C$ M7 i  e$ ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 M6 F. `& T' h# d6 [- jSeeing the sky content with its love
, y- {' h$ Z7 q3 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 I: D9 a8 `! RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( P4 I3 }+ f& P2 R1 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 T- Z8 i1 X5 W  q7 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 ]% x+ m: o; j+ v+ iI want so much to see inside your heart
3 [4 L) z, h1 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 H& @% n( h9 g5 h" N2 j( gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) P) K: j' w' q8 Z5 d& m( jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; h# a6 r! {! L* W0 K0 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 \# y* f  @+ e/ P% ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! z* l: ~  K+ _$ }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  R* W' p: I4 t7 o/ q9 h- }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; @: k' c3 O7 K1 g; `9 K6 Q8 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. x  t5 n6 K. F2 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ X# ]2 O+ D2 ]2 `/ B  A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ C4 p! ~4 H( e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- G$ ?1 I. |/ k' K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; g! B, e9 N3 i& f) w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 f+ \3 g. d- b3 U9 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 R1 d* ]" [5 X* m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" w# _. P+ I9 q0 e7 l8 R: ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 W- ?8 e! \' f$ u+ x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 B# [4 v! d2 U( n/ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 f/ p' n& Z# C- n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! ]+ Y* w* L! M; x3 K& Z+ u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ f% M; T+ W' v7 y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: r% W1 X6 B2 ]# b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! B/ M* J9 o! m2 \1 l# f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( j, T: n& U+ W; ^8 m' B4 [/ }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- m& D) C" O9 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) [+ o5 w% ^$ U6 x; {& }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 F! Q, `2 e' k, v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 @8 ?3 ]/ e3 ^& Q; m0 V/ s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' ~9 |" E2 n& m' W( N5 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ P3 G3 D9 m; N! f( h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; b/ u% t5 I" w( N+ ~6 \3 S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* D4 x! |. c" } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) f2 k! p) M- D7 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>