【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! s6 _+ j4 R6 j. t8 ]) M/ qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ U% X$ d( r- n% y( W/ N, QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, J2 u- Q3 `. G/ ]$ m: C4 IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 W6 Z4 C- q, `! W# [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# u7 v9 g" w- L3 J5 rNothing can compare to my love
7 q7 K" \, I5 f2 v7 n6 w0 M7 p  u& xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 z5 B! F0 K& Y( v# eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 ?: d1 ?  l0 D9 z: S+ VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 b" L5 v/ {: |: z2 s: D1 fI regret not dying
6 w: y9 f* @: |* _) s; OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ c& }  P$ g; L( W, j1 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" Y( W- E, W& F$ h2 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; a0 `  ?8 F& w/ V$ Z( ~8 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 _1 ~2 ^+ s2 j9 g; g, o$ w9 w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& b# T6 s) F6 Q: ~8 M; R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  _+ h3 }5 i, h5 @3 d1 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 ^* G6 a3 T2 D9 A, B# k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& v' O# w" J- G8 E. ~; H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: D0 ^) |( H4 Z' L3 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ z+ W+ y! r) P: B4 E$ `, w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ g# ?: _* u; m% J7 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 j+ G) B+ l" J( w9 R$ f# u2 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: b! @8 I4 @9 Y  ?: J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& T1 h" o" V1 J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 p" I; P* r1 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( H+ W  y8 f7 i, l$ x5 C7 ^3 f5 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 L4 M* G& @- @6 c# C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; x7 a( C5 j8 D  d8 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- r$ f' A) i+ H& O' c9 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 I- ?% s( M9 a, g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* d( V( e$ X" P8 Y& g; N% k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% I2 J3 k9 c* l0 S- V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ Q& R' A+ d+ j2 ~7 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# G8 g! T& b% ]( K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# u/ [" R/ I7 g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 k8 h# S, X" O% Y" }" T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! q2 U+ d9 Y2 Z% o, W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; P4 V! S3 U; e; w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  `  U% b5 R' e- X9 u# h2 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ m& q4 X1 X1 P2 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ ^& ?9 `8 K' B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 d. _2 v- H7 C9 q! S; t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>