【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 E0 |, ~4 t" J1 _: G8 X歌词我附在后面。
5 Z$ l# }# B7 a) {7 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 g; S3 G! A+ R3 A# I# o% oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 [$ ~5 {% l7 O: s1 E; bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 ^& I1 v6 @: _* p* f; P2 F' c9 `Seeing the sky content with its love
+ C% x- D; t" G, ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 }5 X* D: h4 B) p! q3 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* m2 @- k: g. ]7 A7 KEvery other word you utter is love
, \1 U, T0 w; l- k, VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, d; ~/ y) D+ W3 j0 c$ d1 X8 s3 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( c# M4 d' {, w' x2 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ j9 z! ?  j! G$ `; Z+ s+ KI’m still filled with fear
  J; U9 F: U. l' h- dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- n# p1 z; P  G6 m; oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 |7 a# E8 m! t$ _# @  m: ~# PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' r" V2 [) v# {$ w: v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) @* z( d$ w1 k% x3 n" Q1 u7 J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 ~1 S' W5 W+ K- Y# U& e/ T8 g$ q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 r: k: h( s% j8 p3 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  T7 l% D' ~4 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; E* e/ Z$ j# W4 P" [/ @# r; Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 d: o3 ^" H) k. F4 E  s- ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# T7 ^: t( |7 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' Z) f  z4 T* x8 E; P/ X3 t  S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% Z9 G" [1 B4 U( Y- t# s: U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 i% c* O0 w8 ?7 B) X9 K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ ~- J8 \: t/ W% Y. a1 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 w3 ~$ R7 r! R/ b0 o* N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. F' h5 Z8 z8 y) h; b/ B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, y% r& ^, I/ T3 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" e" F2 G  U4 g- X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 x# Q. U# F) P, P1 t  l! I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( |6 j) t* T7 e- k6 j9 K7 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) o7 K1 U, u7 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. |0 ?' |$ G( n( f$ `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 k  L) L+ P& `/ I. S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% r3 z% T, h0 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. w, D; E  ~& _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# [" q2 }- i4 h5 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* R3 M9 N& l# A  X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- {/ ?) n! L; d6 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ }1 @$ J  n( V" `% t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
: K5 t+ |' U7 E* _
; W: f$ r3 S3 d% n& T% n) z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ~( w# O; O4 y$ U1 z3 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>