【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ x' ]2 w1 n8 q/ y. M* }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 R8 ?3 ~5 A, H' J) t0 }8 W; }/ y$ XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- s: S$ U% y3 R4 f9 v0 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ O! T* R4 ^" ~+ Y2 qSeeing the sky content with its love
/ f  p9 r# n& `. oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 K" q8 v" Z/ {% RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' ?0 g8 x' _2 M! w0 f7 l3 wI really want to know just how much you love me
' e! v0 m2 U" h7 _. SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% U: l" R! J, c* [0 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ]; ]0 V$ F- p; C! vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" {% n* W" e6 W  C( B0 PI want so much to see inside your heart
* ?! Q  s% r& O3 P7 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" P8 Z% F! Q0 t0 Y* B. SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: E: G* X# t+ d, S7 `& C0 c0 CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% ~* L9 A1 C# b4 U0 Y5 ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- e9 ^( z+ I' z; ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) f2 J* B4 Q3 f# w3 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. m/ c6 ^) N/ D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ U- N7 p) V! H$ C' m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" H9 X( Q- ^) W: ~1 D8 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% Y3 ^/ O7 G( ?$ |# r2 |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 y; n6 j. R1 D, p% e$ ~. z+ {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- [9 d$ a, B% f& |% j$ p! e' J) ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% r, O% N2 R  ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ^7 U  m! [; K; I# H1 B4 p0 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, g! ?( ?  b& y' }' O: c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- k, c8 k; N- z# U# D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- [' b1 a0 n6 _1 |# m  `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 X6 A5 D0 k: a5 R: ], J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* L7 Z' r2 t$ k7 I! U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 o9 Z/ I2 a4 d( U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' F' t$ Z! P" U0 j( A3 g- u. ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, h. v% e9 [7 n, h- v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 W: d, G& q5 t  Y* @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; D7 S2 E7 o1 L; Q* T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# E7 |; ~1 r' N* i( e6 @. l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. N5 i- @: F7 f# a& A, p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 ~# p+ T2 e9 ~* l$ ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  f$ c* L9 v4 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 |, G% x8 \0 {6 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ [( J8 f5 s  l<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 k. m: u7 q0 G) R  m3 b4 c& L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 X4 O/ n2 u1 s+ Y* z/ b3 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 j% z- O- z* W. j0 t) N2 k$ p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ ~+ c. u1 C  ?( t. H5 n, x/ V3 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- Y8 N1 j! w: {. v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. }7 w, Q% v# m9 `) g* P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 n! m, j, i4 a7 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- ]0 B4 s6 O& O8 J  V$ y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ l; Y1 ]  `9 \  A+ a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 v/ T% I% c' c& e' w9 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* h2 @" A- p/ K- G! \8 i2 ]" H我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  q! {. r) g0 E8 {! P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>