【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ {- V) {1 Y9 k2 E- O# I. fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& ^" |! c+ B4 \6 y+ i7 XSeeing the sky content with its love
6 h  |! w) I! v5 q2 E0 d" eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 |+ Q# @% D  c7 G; p8 U: DYou needn’t fear anything
, T0 A0 h- k2 @$ t; w  Y9 A+ J+ lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ v' ~5 z+ _. Y6 d" m! r" BI really want to know just how much you love me
  r- k5 d5 _1 G9 t' pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# E2 V, X2 V# r  C1 w8 J, DI want so much to see inside your heart
: I5 _) p% Y" {: s* [1 f8 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 P$ P* j6 E& z+ ?1 R7 n  a5 I1 @* kI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 V7 |, ~" y* i* b' @+ bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, Q% h2 b! Z3 @- _5 p  }9 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 _5 E0 o/ _5 s1 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 |- M/ }3 T) h) X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! F; Q+ V6 W+ F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) l3 _' d  i* c7 L( x; X; a! u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: a: ~: H. }& k0 p8 ]! _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ^7 m) @6 Z- F+ U) L/ x! s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 z. x1 t# Y+ @5 t<P>你无需担心</P>
/ J5 n5 x6 g/ I; L$ W) Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 v. x% L% n+ h/ s* g8 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ?- j. A+ M# [: e' C+ M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' T) z' x2 M% x  R# Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 R( z8 [. Y* q' K9 C. r  O, j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  l% l* C2 w+ I* f+ Y0 G  M0 }# m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- M4 s$ D5 D- V& i8 R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 k! m: P  M( R; ^3 f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 S2 F; Z! @8 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: [  z) P1 n' t" U( F8 n) I: z7 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 C  |" x7 A* B: E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; t& M8 f1 b7 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- r" H; d5 m; q6 c6 B" ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) w7 z! |$ g& m) B  d7 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 ]' ~: T" W- V6 U: M; j6 h9 A- O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 u4 U" n. Z! S6 y* j. ?/ A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" B/ C. M; ?6 c. O8 M' K, u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 n0 `! U; B" a( y  z' Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& ?. ]7 a( w6 Z  N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 o% U/ G# P% _6 q  E9 S8 f% u) d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( l# h& J1 y  K0 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>