【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 E4 T8 \2 h; B9 @7 A4 f( h' tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 V9 G* P' M( j% S6 ?7 X. {) hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& k) S0 d4 t1 u0 }: y+ b. Q% l2 eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 i2 X& `  B  ^# O7 k2 HYou needn’t fear anything
( d: `- u9 T& {6 Z. W3 C/ }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# v$ e. J2 [3 U  {7 ENothing can compare to my love
7 c$ N, l+ Q* K+ _" HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. H) E, d( U0 HI regret not dying
0 c. W# O5 H5 [$ s& ^9 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) }; Z) R- N7 M$ D3 ?# rWith such a tongue as yours,
1 x6 T! j1 a% Q) ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 Z) X; v& N" f1 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 m: Y  }( j- W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' Q! v; N$ J$ o$ g! y, ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: D# R6 o: S- Z1 P' H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( O3 M- D' g; K+ {- E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' U% f, Z  A. }# b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 |4 J% S, E) X$ U& z0 H  E. p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' G% b7 h( M- E! u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  g7 y8 c/ U& @2 C. E, d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: O3 t0 M; ~, B- G$ @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 E4 G2 ?  G% G; k0 V0 K: O) A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 k4 ?: t  ]1 B# t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 n) m+ Y" U# t3 F4 H$ j0 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, g, Y( i7 E  G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 p4 ^) Z. j6 O1 w# I3 }6 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, R4 M1 j* T+ j/ ^, ?: l# ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- h/ K" K$ [8 {9 q0 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  S. t! Y3 c" Q5 ?. }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: Q$ i: t+ F8 q6 H0 o9 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 o- ^7 y" R) Y2 `. b+ ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 e" K! O$ W! y: T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  D0 A7 J" l; e  b1 Z$ ?' C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  T- C6 O1 N8 m0 |% |! F) l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 E$ t1 x3 N1 ]4 \/ o3 j# N3 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 K) W( Y( r% k! z# h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 r8 Q; z9 C# g' E0 f4 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- M1 H+ }5 l6 Y$ P# k3 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* ]" C. ]9 @6 L* j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 |( R0 L5 G0 P' v% B# {4 z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 m" y8 \3 `# R8 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>