【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: B' f2 t" J6 Q0 y0 ]. G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) ?; b% U# K" r1 u% f- X: eThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 t- _# v0 N7 V4 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) U" t3 `, P6 b- w$ z9 U/ WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 o! {  i0 D( _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: a% {1 ?* P* n; `) zEvery other word you utter is love
( t" _- d3 k4 t9 Z9 \3 M7 @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) _- i/ f5 ]7 S' W6 L* nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& i& r- }; t7 i; ^3 H* x, cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" m9 y1 p; K9 G5 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 K+ l$ i+ u4 @6 x% T/ \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: l: B2 S9 j2 V- S8 FWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; [+ F9 _5 m7 B& P3 h1 E1 R* LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ P8 Y( D+ s  ^) D  b3 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* r$ B, I0 u; r  P( z- t1 n+ l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' ^$ S# D: O( g7 e1 z! s& C; W  Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  T) J: Z( t$ l- {5 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( H  H" s8 _7 t  ?4 c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' E) {$ l4 Y7 F7 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, h& P' n$ C& P. D: R& P; \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" D6 K1 Q9 @& [& Z+ F, K3 j9 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) O/ H" K: Q! f$ v* b% k2 w6 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ V, W( X! H0 n9 R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! p/ Y$ K. S8 P. Z* o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) P) R/ J5 K8 B" [6 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 E" f: h) l; h8 D) {8 q" Y. H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ \' l* X6 T% H! G4 \% T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; F8 S9 r7 ~3 `& |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. P9 {6 }4 k, J: w6 \' v0 o. e; O3 R' M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 E; m% I3 l) I2 V7 E- t2 c. q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) s5 F' P% T" W7 }5 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' ]  }5 Z! G0 i5 \# T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 [& ?  O0 p0 P# r7 m6 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 s3 _1 c* ^9 F  \: U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ `0 H% x* }, \( }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ c3 b! A" L' p4 |6 l. f9 G& o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 i) R1 ~, Z8 \) f" l6 G1 U- ?- a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; T3 i6 Z8 z- d3 b( Q3 I, A$ U& }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 K% h/ d* c$ s9 s3 F& b% D: v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 B. `' @& W2 e7 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) c; P- O3 i% x- |) ?) I% \0 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 g1 X1 m* S/ [0 P& E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 ?3 }8 [2 w+ f. v6 D9 y3 m% A" q+ b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 B% y& g' u+ B0 H2 t) C& M我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ r, v6 `- C. |4 U0 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>