【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 _. B+ a& r4 i$ SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* o5 C( e- {: D" `& |6 \: Y* ~1 [3 l, WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 h, N" q* f5 z3 k! FThe sky is happy down to its soul
  l) N) u- S. F5 i- A* WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  C, O0 N. d) M$ L4 g4 r' HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" w2 F6 J  T& b6 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 O( T& U% h9 r1 B" C" PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& }/ w5 j& W$ RI want so much to see inside your heart
! M$ q! b% m% W1 Q- ]6 }- J! WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 B# r9 L. y% YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 U  a% w. `8 C/ D) {* ]# H* u9 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# z2 t- A! q' `: K4 r' `; m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, B1 a; z& g1 _3 l/ P2 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; h8 L+ f7 {* l$ h% T/ B4 \# }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 Z3 G$ U( ]& b. M# B) j7 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 k& A2 d; `! h7 s' F. Q. Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" e- {/ p( x" ~$ B! L1 R5 W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% W5 R. m4 l3 F8 k4 ~4 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( ]- y$ J% t2 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. o& h* _( L& y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" @) [& M. Q' s; K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! o. |) o/ g; @; ]* j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. P9 V% Y4 S6 r' z4 m$ M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- \9 o9 s, h* B& U" ]  _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ H/ e, y; D& o" t3 c' @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) c: f- B. B  b! O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' m- J$ n  j- b, `- H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# o( c6 |9 K) R5 v' H" S3 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 X$ \3 h( ]' R, |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ C: _9 t% Z. E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) _! Q/ v7 s0 O3 f8 E8 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" A5 C0 i. O1 J7 g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; |5 Y) T$ F$ E& Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" Q0 n" G4 n' B7 y& x$ D' u! b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 W1 h: J, T! p( m% d3 G" ^6 }* u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ E0 v5 ]4 Q, `+ _* i2 y$ T$ [" a: ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- e' l( x( Q! a0 d8 x' J- y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 N# }) p. B4 I2 \  g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 b# k4 P' U( h& l6 U! Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 i& W; E, H. L6 P' Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  n. m& }8 }! r7 C0 ^) |, H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) @" v0 p7 W7 i, _% l我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>