【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( [6 P. i$ c9 k. i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' ^$ o# E0 e, d. S9 W! B' u. PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, V" m) G/ M/ Q) C. o6 d$ \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 _0 F2 ]5 W  L3 m. ?The sky is happy down to its soul
1 C7 I/ d" S- |9 r2 h8 W- bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 F# Q. `3 f0 S  `6 b2 F! gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 l  [- t' p  f2 v% O; C3 ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ t3 p0 J2 ~8 p9 I8 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 d" _1 y' G2 i2 H' E+ j$ `/ CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- i5 i$ ]# \( C4 s2 n4 JI regret not dying
3 b3 ?6 {7 N9 s9 P) G% h( A. WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, q5 F3 o* A) t; lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& N! x, x4 ?( [# {( d; nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- Q: J' W( j* P" @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# y# G! Y4 s8 o; ^9 _( ~, k( {# L5 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 V: {6 Q7 V5 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 V1 V6 e" a) I- f/ m0 C$ ]' ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" c! R! ?+ c# ?5 Z6 k' T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# j0 z0 [7 _' Y8 @/ q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  P" ?% E+ ~7 }; y' }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 h/ }' d: x( w9 ]" ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" P9 p, T: d5 F* s) R2 L7 K" f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 J" w2 e. j% B/ y+ @1 @: _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& q( N! i6 |1 h6 m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# t: V3 {* ?4 j9 c" K<P>你无需担心</P>
; b( r% N# [' H: @7 v% y# C$ s' G, O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 k% X' u0 T2 v  r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 |! l% J! i) t# F) j7 y% ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 I  w% C4 K' |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 Y5 N# d- T2 ^* e' V' H5 g: y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; P+ E2 Y& K: A6 H2 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; _; t7 W: y+ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 E; L3 b1 M  Q9 E( D, |  a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# z; y2 j# T4 C! N/ Q( s0 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 S* V/ h1 C2 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" w* x% O) K' m% o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 u) @8 \) z/ j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* x# V: a& ]( x3 F  }2 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ z. ], Y. ~; C$ Q% G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. o3 z7 `3 A' _2 [) ~: U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ x7 O$ V! n6 Y) E$ c. Y) b5 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 b0 L0 R% c5 _  b" n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- `+ W7 n& R4 t4 Q7 O; Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ c* b- F; J; d$ @' y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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1 B+ D3 F7 h# z2 k0 ^1 J- t' c3 i- [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>