【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 T5 I7 x+ I% H' N' K  X+ z$ i3 v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 ~$ R5 s, C# F: \0 V% P* sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 F$ ]; w) P8 V& A" ^: r4 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 F) F1 D4 O8 L' ~0 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 M$ z3 ?6 d9 U: Q1 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* x9 H4 d1 l/ b, A$ w* |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 }& y6 {& u! ^3 Z0 l8 ANothing can compare to my love
, T1 u0 u0 H( aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& P1 q/ N% n9 u0 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ b) R/ [& T6 Q8 {9 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. y9 z: ?5 E. x1 l8 x5 l* zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- y% P2 [( a# ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 @/ d: T! N8 }/ K: Y% A9 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 r2 W, v, P4 @6 d7 m  a, b/ q& l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) w2 Q( e. i+ E- b7 T+ W8 x! u5 j1 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% a8 y  B0 C$ {2 M  q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, Y% z! o% B7 J, U* L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ P* h& h  U4 \9 E+ _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 H( ^8 `% s$ q  r: l, A3 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ u% ?: D) Z! G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 @* w% [2 V# |# z9 d$ p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 y' |) m0 J8 n. _" w, C4 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) p; J4 f! ]+ m( `, K! J8 e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. {6 e! r4 C  J" n3 S) n# U8 v2 K& v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) m3 c3 @5 H5 ?$ t  w3 h<P>你无需担心</P>
- k. n: y, G* c2 w8 j. w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  X! Y8 s) d, G; a. [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" T+ H% b0 X; n# s. V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 h" u, Q( q2 P8 c7 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% ~% I% H, n0 B9 o0 T! R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' b# k2 {' @& H% k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( _, U, ^* |2 a4 V5 a1 G$ H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* t5 L% n: w/ C6 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ E- I; [( E6 X1 `4 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& j) |( M$ s% `# a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% u# N2 \8 _: s  e# ~7 }0 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- ?( \0 S( S3 M0 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  ^  Z; r0 b! z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, x# R& s* j+ T# l( R- b& C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ w& u6 O+ {& Q/ A. Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, d( p: K: P* H* E9 _' V2 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 T! `- Q! [6 c- {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 u) G; t0 n; j7 `# x; O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 y3 h$ A- b$ J2 v! x8 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: n$ _( T7 V$ w/ H6 {3 t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 m) F1 v1 T, p* X. _5 i- |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 U! J7 Y- Y3 l( j  A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 b. n* v: |8 m6 I+ g7 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 l0 L; p, l' i3 Y) C6 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  H+ n- b' v" m# c" g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ r  d: }8 e* k/ c# s我请你剖开它

3 f& [  `7 s1 v# q' z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 r5 x$ z2 C& g# r5 {+ \' M) c: U( l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>