【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( W7 h! T0 O, a& Y, N% ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! @( k8 Y: }5 n2 B% J) M5 I9 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
; ^8 r: e0 p) H6 r$ \( _- B8 pWith the moon kissing it every night
# D/ f  H& H8 t5 v4 S$ NSeeing the sky content with its love
+ H  ~* `# t0 P: y) wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( C& S' c% M* k6 AYou needn’t fear anything
2 a9 v% o8 [3 C0 g7 q8 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ R9 h0 a5 c3 K1 V' @& k( k7 A# E( QEvery other word you utter is love
8 |3 v: G* G. u3 o; f7 KI really want to know just how much you love me
$ t$ l3 v0 j$ |. x! T# s) J9 G. k* \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; F( {2 i* G7 X  X9 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ B' y" q- `/ S! ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. U& O3 A6 q. R) t/ YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 d/ [* G% M2 p) l% ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" m( @' s, X2 G3 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* `0 O: Q  Z/ Y" Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 z0 C2 I& `$ h2 {0 E7 G( v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- R! R' H1 y% ]* a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ |; t3 N9 ^2 y  \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" T3 \. t2 ~! p/ t% Z) D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ R. f! w" Y/ x5 H" P9 q' u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' L1 {, k( e3 c( }% u3 ?) L% Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" A) D$ C7 Q& o$ Q8 X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! M, i2 d& m2 q- [+ A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: v+ i; s) O. g) w4 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; A; W6 X- u5 y/ c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; }$ \7 U% K* P- {7 H5 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! ]' o% e$ l0 ?% {: A: H9 @0 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 G1 d1 ]6 v- `, X' Y- x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. L7 W+ u! R3 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. _7 N' s4 w1 i: d# R5 `5 m' a5 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" G0 B# ^' s' D) ]9 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 r' q3 n& e8 U& c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! j4 ~( e: _$ B% ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 X& b, m0 z0 V. k. @; y  ^" X<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 T( Y) @1 N, A; u% @5 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' m, O9 B# Y/ _1 B  _& ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 A$ ]& y6 ?* i6 w$ l4 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 X; _& p- v0 q6 p  j- R0 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 j" y% f1 ^  Y* W! K6 E; E9 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ t$ `- k- G' Q' A  [* ]! O7 h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 X  G) w+ K/ z" J8 L+ {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' \) M0 j+ ]+ g: @. v& n  [+ E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 C0 v6 y% j$ W) h9 y6 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 l& |8 }7 q) V0 T+ x  A我请你剖开它

# C9 {  S2 O+ S, t# o3 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>