【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 I' l1 s% J. R) J$ H/ UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ G2 r2 F6 D* T8 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 i) N* A) k, o  e  _' z$ x; oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# M9 B: o8 a' {7 d7 h  RWith the moon kissing it every night
& o! W) j4 e* A; ?: `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 @  H. w& b. W5 R% z! S7 _6 J, YYou needn’t fear anything
: K( n. C0 u! B& v3 ~% g/ j& {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ b! n2 }1 Y  C9 A/ n2 @: r/ m3 qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 D: z) b9 \! `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) _$ a1 [: c4 J1 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, {& D& I# s' ?! A9 U0 k( @" LI want so much to see inside your heart
  D0 T" _' i/ vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& ~6 ~" {5 [* OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 o% T" `2 ~0 X) C( vI regret not dying
3 m% a6 C3 M" e+ e$ C5 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 \, g  j/ N! \, gWith such a tongue as yours,
8 d) {  Z) |' o) }: \: DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ @- J( Q. p7 f; j7 E3 @4 j  i9 K; w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, z) e4 ^+ }( |& L$ Y4 ^% V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* {2 R) K4 }7 E: J3 [+ d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  y+ _) Q, ^8 Z" A; q: u7 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& D; _  w. V2 e- W' T5 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' E, }. Q8 s, f: ?# ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 D* y/ F7 i' q# T2 g! m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 F4 C  A8 y! P+ X5 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- r% |+ Z; o( _. c7 k( [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. i3 k: ^* f' j+ |1 s" z2 |$ k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; l# b. T+ @" d3 }8 @. a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* \. K4 R+ k/ n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# H7 t( E& ]( W- e! m: d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  m# R& e" N# p; B/ V2 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ y8 N/ x) b1 f( p! e6 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 c8 C; x; J4 |/ M4 a7 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 t% _" m/ }. e$ @0 q0 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& i4 o) K2 n) h7 w! P% z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 c1 F" d* z, `7 {4 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! l9 c, W' U5 K( U& a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* v2 y- V/ }& m( q( C6 y" J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 X) v8 g7 N- i; Q. {* _9 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& z, z6 y/ u/ ?8 t1 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& [, X7 D- H% u* ]0 t/ U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- ]7 O( W$ }+ q2 y8 ~! f2 G  j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: r0 I* ^# A; S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 @( {% v: L- g/ }, H. R  R$ @! o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 f% L, h( M* \( P' Y3 x8 M我请你剖开它

  x: p. O# y) d6 J5 p+ H& A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 L0 G6 S& ?) N& Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>