【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) h( E# v, [% d! SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" S# c5 l. E' @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# s! f! ^/ P3 l$ t$ f) l' mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) T! `$ T% C7 L1 t1 N" \- x- I( P" OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' [% J0 O1 T5 I6 a' `0 `: ~Every other word you utter is love
$ u! c3 Z7 W7 {' u: cI really want to know just how much you love me
: {+ y' D( A* G4 V! o; c/ QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. J- u. k: [$ N  Y7 |I regret not dying
$ b0 R/ _8 g; @1 t; K# CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( Q# r  @. B, ^3 Z- n7 CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" _8 X5 ]4 n. L" E6 }0 @7 a! @- u$ t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 k$ C6 D; Q* k' u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: L. [% ]4 E. @7 O, z4 h/ ~5 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ a+ I, j" ]* |! f9 M% R5 v  w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- `# A7 z* Q  Z- t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 m  ]& g( F$ Z2 X9 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% @" {3 _5 \# X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 j3 S! @1 e  p( j, [4 M! |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 y; R0 c( c' K* b. @% Z( _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 a+ d$ h0 B" [) m, A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* p$ o1 a8 Z" S5 {. v) \9 o9 \/ P3 `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ]* N6 I2 {6 G4 P- e/ U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 e6 h7 B: C, J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, V2 A4 H# I( n% j% C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ y, O+ |" s- b7 f1 a& s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 ~) _" |0 \8 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 j4 {/ z6 M; r; |6 l2 T( \( d+ I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; |  f& V* \) X) @( t9 w' a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 q9 I; n) \% q2 C; r+ S2 M7 P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 c7 D2 p8 D* _7 b! U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 j- P$ Z( _% N0 i4 F5 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; n0 h3 z8 [4 l% c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
8 l" s- a) n6 g) Z/ q4 M  G
2 t; G3 b0 f9 Q1 s% s我请你剖开它

/ k8 x6 z8 q, E. w# t8 v2 } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>