【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ a# `; g% u0 ~, kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ p5 E$ r8 @5 gWith the moon kissing it every night
& Y' g7 r1 E0 ], K# f4 @  |& W" Q3 cSeeing the sky content with its love
1 R: g# Q! _) K5 [) @6 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- w5 ^3 a2 C& }4 w/ uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- q$ A' `2 {8 q2 y0 \3 O" }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 y: a& \$ V4 ~5 o4 C( CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 h) w; r% [# tI want so much to see inside your heart
+ u  I  p- P% k- e) VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ i% z) J. @. D. c' lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 S# F3 W# j* c6 A$ G' p( p! DWith such a tongue as yours,
3 w$ }6 T1 D3 `  l4 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' L) P0 c: z7 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) c: e% L& u( Y' Z2 d' L9 O. `2 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 i1 [3 `/ U9 M6 q; G* Q: |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( @, u$ x& H) v% A# X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; ^0 n  ^5 h2 g' Q  q# `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ D9 q" i3 v* q6 r+ Q! x/ N# Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; G1 b4 e/ b- L8 L9 C( V; g, i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  q. w% Q9 O. ^+ C& j4 L# B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, ]+ F  G: i* Q4 I' Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- B  ^+ y+ X! z; l. n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 S" c: {2 }  g$ f/ e1 s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 H7 g) H; _4 X: h2 A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ~$ z" w3 c8 g/ l& Y: T4 u  V1 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& ~) q0 {) \4 `; F0 a0 U  {& a" S- n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ o3 s" A! ~$ ]" g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) X. N" I) ^: [3 |. g0 q$ [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. E0 R: K3 t! Q  z' ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. Y+ p, p. A- \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! v5 s0 ?7 Y+ `$ ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 p: h& Q+ c/ _8 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 b4 Q1 b3 E7 E# H$ O7 O# p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 k. }/ }: d$ s9 _, f% \" j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 F0 I0 x0 H3 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ `' X  P- X; V* l2 l- v3 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! W5 Z; d/ i& t$ x( D% }/ E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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8 \1 e- D) ^0 Y2 `3 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* t6 f3 ^. s* R2 S( u: R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>