【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 A* n* k8 r- s/ @歌词我附在后面。
8 O4 Y" t) g2 P) A2 \+ O- t. HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' b2 h8 l, a. I5 [* I* AThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 c* ^: L8 R/ J% Z7 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ o" e$ ?* ]' ?1 k5 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 B, _- t2 g: {: f( BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' b& p; p$ r, ~3 sEvery other word you utter is love
* Y7 I* b0 A$ x  v$ qI really want to know just how much you love me
5 i7 ^2 E2 e0 W, xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" A+ y8 {' l  m6 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 N: N0 b/ H0 V4 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* O, l' E# w# m+ W3 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- ]6 ]% p' t# w1 j. EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 Z+ w: S* ?, G1 j$ i: q/ j' D% TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  ]: W& K3 w0 I. {! y  uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- l, {5 q( Q" X1 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! T1 a5 U7 N+ D# r- a3 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# p5 M4 t0 d$ I( U0 w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' b" ]$ \5 O2 x( @& `/ _0 P8 s/ L; c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' _5 g" N, X. a3 T  M0 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 Z# a) k, A; L0 ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' C% s( u" l$ Q1 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 ]; u5 [9 g7 {( C. o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: f: E; Z7 P5 r7 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ H& @  i* s  v1 T1 g# a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, J0 \8 z. H" v8 j* A4 z1 U8 p8 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. c0 u! J. W" J2 ^+ x) `3 m* `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) b: W- t; {# |  e7 `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- p8 ^( r3 s& d; I2 p' |$ Y7 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! t% `$ b( F: ?, q+ Z" Q2 C9 B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& U7 d6 |  ?6 z& D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 s& V/ V4 {0 R+ Y. f( V5 B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) @, Z( I6 t7 g7 n& z. c8 }+ ~6 O& G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# @. d8 |/ G5 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! w& E  `: S! Y" L* v; G8 E* S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 y- V9 c1 W% ~- T  B# g& {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' X* Q5 k- `$ A/ b5 D2 J# N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 U  {  L# X. n( T/ S  u2 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 ?: x2 P% d6 m/ A9 L1 T6 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
( b& ^2 J+ ~% D" \' l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 i+ R- _4 W" B7 v+ z* z  h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 c1 X8 V, U9 B: _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  T2 y- i& G5 _6 f( l: R) }0 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; g: N& i! l. A. E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 N9 h! Q; G# u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& _6 C, C( j7 H" `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* V- b0 u0 F; L4 W- t; I) J5 Z: K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- A5 O  ^: s! ?  o  e' @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>