【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ b1 \3 ~( E! |* j6 L, RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 |1 Y- K" s* s9 M+ [/ V. V" D. qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- Q" T7 Q# ^$ Z. \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% y! X9 K" i8 @: J& e% ]( YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; T. {2 L8 ~: v/ t9 aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 z, U4 d! y1 |+ ZYou needn’t fear anything
$ i7 H) E# x8 H/ g& D# F: KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 Y# L+ W9 k" I& [1 Z; H  jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 f' L: H0 c: g; y$ U- O6 L& eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 k' d) N' m2 ^, f- f2 kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  m! t8 k8 ~* {; ]* xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( O; M5 W  E/ V3 I" j; cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# {1 l4 I. ^' |With such a tongue as yours,
$ y" W" B% `1 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' n# m% z; W0 Z! t8 H" JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" J2 P% n+ _/ P. @. \. K' q& E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 i+ S; L' V/ I& J" U) d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' G& ]5 }, J8 v) M3 E/ n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% i# o2 T0 W; y7 Y' O( b# |8 ^) H- S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( ]8 d: T$ O# u7 [0 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ a5 ~! t& J% @; I( ^' r: W3 k/ q, H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 T( }, V) E  T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ F7 e) f/ {4 l. Z! P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 V, b6 z4 D- J" D& ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 C( x! g% M' ?% o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ r& y4 M! J; O, D0 E4 Z1 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, y5 x9 v7 T. `' e# g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( F# c0 v6 H5 D% d6 f. q* ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 v6 g4 w7 m7 K) }" C, E* Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 s0 Y) X% A" R% V2 ~: {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* W- H7 {1 e" t( r( M# k2 O% f- R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 Y7 N' u; `/ u& Z$ @& Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; G* b. i% ^$ h: o9 ^9 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 ?" @5 J) Z& C; d! G5 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* N: t3 w0 u) ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- l* _$ o; l3 e5 r3 v; d. w# n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# U5 y& g2 F, O- g' c# G我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>