【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 L; J8 u9 ]4 N4 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; I; B1 B8 n8 A# kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 Z  s0 ~  i6 S7 r) S, EYou needn’t fear anything
# w6 U2 @) ]/ g' Q5 k" h+ R2 h9 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; V9 Z7 d* Y8 j8 K/ FEvery other word you utter is love
  z! s; G& j% X8 o" UI really want to know just how much you love me
( t: v( k: `+ @5 p) ~. Y! mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  I* U' R8 t; eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# U" G$ O6 I0 a2 n4 DI’m still filled with fear
' `" e. x1 G( \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  U5 [- p2 h/ ?( II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 V% W% a  i' i3 d) J+ L: `3 M. GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 d2 n( n7 a4 X4 p. E9 Q: q9 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: h, a+ D- u- g* f# O$ Q* }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" @  ]4 T. ~# H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" N% [$ _1 |$ j- d, g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 T" H4 ?  `) B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' A4 J! R  s: e: D8 i- T! n' T& J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# G9 p3 L8 [# i6 Y+ ]9 U/ U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& v0 K2 y0 b9 r  Z% P  L( {8 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 W) D" a" z9 ~% _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ d) R4 t( T; ?. D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, `4 |8 z; c, Y8 J3 d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 ]7 a: }* i) O% x% M" u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ O6 L1 S$ g+ m  T1 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 d$ Y1 J: B7 Y: h7 c% h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 S+ ]6 p+ w0 ]$ g) m  q/ ?4 M7 ^) C" q: ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# I, O# y, H1 H5 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 C* G3 u$ Y8 g8 e$ E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ q7 t; k& U4 R& @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, d0 V9 j, S. f! U0 @! s, r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 \& c4 `; E0 C9 f8 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% n; ^* Y9 V0 S4 ?0 Y! }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 M( |2 t( m+ m3 P# I  b2 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' X; C* P' i' ~6 H/ Q6 T7 J# P4 _5 \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  R- n8 y$ C$ `7 J2 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 R' n2 [' v0 Y# w/ f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: L; C& L5 j& f+ }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# Z7 U6 P1 R7 A8 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" u: f( @2 P2 E- C( X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ R- ^( i# r$ V9 L: B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( q- V2 I  X' L& B; P  C4 M4 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* J# E) g! b) G3 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>