【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 q# K% m1 F! \& q* eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% C8 F: x: D- G1 P3 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ G0 `" \: o+ J9 G0 E3 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% M5 Q) o0 H1 l$ d7 q- t: T2 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 Z, ], A6 W9 q  l* XSeeing the sky content with its love
4 X% k& {, h  C7 K: u+ l& _1 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 Y: r8 D' V- o4 k  S6 I1 IYou needn’t fear anything
, u3 E, ~2 {. R3 b) dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ I; n9 Q6 [6 A% fEvery other word you utter is love
- W& r& y6 T( K( e0 GI really want to know just how much you love me
# r+ \0 v6 @/ [3 p; r/ kI love you I love you with all my heart
$ J6 A; F4 C# k- X% b' |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 e; F$ a, L; J6 a! zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# T, y; X" k: J/ J7 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 Z( t2 x- F" t. W5 kI’m still filled with fear
. R) w$ {5 v* ^2 \% A2 {/ O# wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; Q/ V/ Y: C  F% V! n: bI regret not dying
) ]9 e4 U; n  b2 o; _3 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 z' S3 U3 |0 y1 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 F& p. v6 M7 ?' g) K% |3 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  r! U/ w& u: a; ?4 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: _/ P- N6 w9 A% @# o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 W8 v7 i! S$ D& e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ W2 \7 b3 t) \' |# I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ e0 G1 t8 P1 r. H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) L, M* s# p6 N3 Q1 P$ ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 ?2 E) O9 m7 i8 W8 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) y; R2 s5 [0 i# D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 }: Y; e: F* v8 b/ c" K8 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ v: v: R9 F% Y( F# W% o  ^) o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 n# e" p/ Q, P9 F# V3 [- g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; }6 D' z# D( H: _+ T: o; C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 @; N! A* d3 J8 W! [# L" P6 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ r) i+ J! ?% R- k: K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% \( h; V# I& u$ a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 F8 D& f; F" H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 h7 ^! A: E; b- h* ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& L  p, c: |8 E+ R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 R# v4 z5 j1 ~4 M( r) y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 S! Z" A) L+ F4 d! G; G/ t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- w" w. f) ^2 X# `  L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 s5 ?) _  ?+ V/ V% R8 i2 N% s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! c& U) [' p9 D& k/ j. e+ ^9 N# m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* Q/ i2 X( v% A  b, t2 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# p5 y5 G( U: W! {0 |9 K+ f) Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: A- `; M/ N/ _6 F) c' }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ F4 T" b0 }, b3 u- S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ x9 b% t8 g4 T: P) g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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