【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 k! K, s% T. |! s  A0 o歌词我附在后面。
: X! E# F2 ]/ V; B% [8 r! ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
  w3 ^" [; b# X5 d! X0 Y4 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 z$ ~" D5 w  l9 y; H+ BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 `! j$ m, t( X3 ^% s1 ^# UWith the moon kissing it every night
( S. z3 k* c  Y! j5 i/ pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# |% Q& _+ Y4 n! A0 p7 K* h- Z' fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  `% c0 U2 U+ ]) [% lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) [/ F' p% r1 d* M5 r. _/ V1 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* K- o- m- K( e1 q7 q* b4 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, b  H. u: M* wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- |# n- O% w$ r/ k1 R( dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% }8 x6 T7 m3 S& V8 O- r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' ~! Q3 V1 U' m; ?, @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- l( z) @; @& ~  `* K! P, T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% y* K3 `4 p6 |" u% G0 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; t2 r' h) E2 n( ^/ v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! w+ }1 [3 G# d4 p: T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ J" d6 S% x: u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) n& G. {/ L: l& E' W8 L/ m) u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- i$ c% L& C. ?: N6 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ U. Q7 B8 |: m! C4 N5 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* ]. Q8 }0 w0 o7 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; }& w0 e. }/ O1 O5 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 N- p- I  O, E8 b' W4 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% O! S. x( U* i8 T4 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. M2 P2 C: g3 j+ \% [' f* @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ F$ ~0 Y1 L6 Z, a  m& i: T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 G& y" q1 X; B; P% f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# x0 G$ x9 A8 o# ?) Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ `1 Y! u, E# W- i1 n" j2 R! ^& G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( @$ c& U7 A0 P: n4 f" K/ u. ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 C! X  O% n$ U7 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ I- b5 ?0 [) R, T. c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* }7 }) b9 Y/ x- z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! l, F1 S6 M3 l' P% G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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( \8 |0 C( u/ q& f! j! J- l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 E/ v+ N) A# {4 f  h- f$ t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>