【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# F! q% C2 d, H# {The moonlight is shining brightly,
  z1 `8 d: k+ DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 P. A/ `+ ~8 b( @$ i; a) V* IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) n) o; A, \$ _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# p! b8 q% A& x3 A, OThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 B% m: R' [9 o, m: z( V& ~9 dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ y. ?2 |5 I: Z' n  VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 G. j+ @4 v$ g6 [' t) uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: o4 ^# w* d1 g$ n$ t; HI really want to know just how much you love me
% C) ^1 j* X. |7 j" A0 r5 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 N* {$ m; ?: h: z" tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 a( ~% m9 h/ ~8 hI want so much to see inside your heart
" x& T1 ]5 z, Z* u5 k. a( e4 ~0 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ]% t0 N( w# r! {I’m still filled with fear
& {2 z' S2 J: p/ f, Z0 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, h, w) x( Q& ^/ `# f! rI regret not dying
1 ?6 O5 Q  b" x. _$ mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 ?  I8 }0 Q4 d, ~* s4 rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, g& c$ y$ @! n. a  U: r% wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* a/ O1 r; F. u2 n9 F% ?" N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* m; h8 @5 [+ W6 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' D! p' C  }) g, m4 _& `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  Y& G( H+ Y" a* ^5 z% o$ F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 I" L$ i& _7 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 g8 e4 f1 }8 O8 D. p( w5 V7 \9 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- j  k' G, P4 s' M3 d# B; F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 k) |6 f" w7 s  _2 _: F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 X. \7 f* T+ P) j! f: K/ Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" r6 z" U- H) j8 U6 [8 i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% N. i4 v6 X) Y3 m0 j. M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ z" u# U$ E, |& C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, Z* w( \# K0 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# S7 H/ V1 N# \' |( f) p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# J, k: @+ [) D& w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 V9 R9 D1 a  {+ n, @3 E8 `! g' H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ N* B/ m( @5 T( n0 L$ A- g3 g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- C) E3 x- P; p1 ?0 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( [; l! l$ @, A) a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! j& g8 W, G) F, b" f9 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 K" s* A- y* N8 m( `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( p+ G$ @+ N, d- r8 }; u6 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. @6 c% H/ }) _% z& a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; i/ B' Q0 K0 z8 p9 O3 ^. S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 S) z2 x; K# d; m; V( @+ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ R: C3 ^4 I' c8 \  e( e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ ^, d. m5 [* E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ O' j# a& y  z8 W* W5 r- u( C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 i& ~) [- `! c& B- A, R9 g" f  h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* b: _( @6 j( H: L! @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>