【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, B4 q" h* T0 p3 Y! o5 h( W* ~1 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" r+ x/ N4 ^" r+ wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& r, X  j# n0 `6 R5 M/ \; C0 ^" ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* {1 s- h0 X; r; u- [! k1 s6 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* F9 s  {0 u5 ~; l) _2 ]) S% sYou needn’t fear anything
* B0 \/ n4 Z, I3 v4 {# c5 Y) SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- T% W+ N, u4 x' PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ o5 C/ z4 D; o! a3 j: u# q% DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* q4 g3 b8 M* R0 M+ F) O; Z' q# j+ OI’m still filled with fear
( |' E8 L9 _2 s8 o5 |% O2 wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, M' {1 H) S( X& o' i/ o8 X1 r) mI regret not dying
5 ~$ A. B2 E( V& n/ G+ M3 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 z. g8 E1 y: ^  p% |! y1 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 C( d' F) D1 p, I9 V, _% wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 V3 e) {/ n1 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* h1 k6 T) }# d  k5 C) y' L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  L' [2 W$ G, K3 F' n2 q+ u& T- ~" ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 N( E7 N/ W, P, O: }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. }! y9 ~* Z' T; s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 _, O. Q0 L' Q  N+ q" ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* u8 o8 u3 {- g: x- l6 {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 w! v- n2 m9 S+ J# j- t& j; R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; H- Y2 @2 ?! W2 O4 X, h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ Q/ l- m' A- m% L, n5 l+ C! r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ s: g6 V, W& F8 {* g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 ]) u3 N% |/ ]5 \6 u$ ?$ N" R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! x* R; F# G: s9 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 H  @/ r! B2 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! J' E) j. n* B- S% C! M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 W5 p$ o1 S9 ]" |6 k9 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# ?/ x$ _# k; k. y$ `" Y: k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 i5 v( Y# A3 R5 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; Z- R0 E' C, ~$ n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ t8 w+ |4 V+ r. F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 P! D- J! u. p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& b  i$ b5 W& U' V) A  x4 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 P1 q: X+ j7 d) @; ^+ z3 J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 k1 d, j2 M' n" @$ M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. F5 q3 c$ I, t. N" D/ x- k) a, q: z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! Z7 K" e$ L( r" V4 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 r1 J+ `, J9 Y; t$ D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# N* i0 `# L) l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 t6 U4 i+ n. N) T6 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% t; j7 [( `8 J# {0 p) v: Y我请你剖开它

' p& K6 i% a9 q4 f' |7 |7 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>