【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! J( f" `9 `2 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% ]( l; @; K; [, v) ^6 p$ AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" |: X0 C# T6 l9 \9 A+ q/ Y- xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" P$ B7 ^9 V; \# kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; |5 v' b& c; ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 h) w" C6 w. Q: t# IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  M+ x" h5 M+ o' J) J$ @5 ZNothing can compare to my love
0 r6 D# ^3 S( vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; v; [& M4 d3 e" D" V2 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; t7 K8 C6 i" ^0 [6 p; A( Z# g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- L3 K* o& U2 j* z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 V( B1 j& a3 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* N- E" Q. @8 v5 d) V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' A7 U& u& T/ M- h# B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 q% `; r8 f" [) \+ r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& l3 `& ?- K) E* E% n# F2 s/ {* f' [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& v# ]# y* M% |9 P: K- W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% `4 ?" V' @$ B# E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! `1 O* x, X+ ?' Q7 @  [! y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 g2 o7 x# E6 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 z% J8 r& G- ]; h2 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' P: P# X+ [) t, {! l; k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 }: C6 {0 Z$ q4 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 N1 ^$ k$ e6 k, v- U& ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# Q. c: ?# ^( o# J8 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 q. I9 ~, h' C+ F/ @' `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- o! V3 n* t$ F% ~6 s3 [+ L& A7 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 o9 J3 h) _! [6 h- _/ d8 J/ g3 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 l+ r% P4 r( }8 ?6 v3 [7 ~0 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# v6 Q' O# S2 \7 A; A. B, I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>