【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 a- D5 f: p' v& B# `; r/ c2 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 q5 p  w% s) N4 j1 i2 m6 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 z5 l7 Y1 |1 B- PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 j+ _' J8 f( @8 ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- N/ h1 R$ s+ A( B, W# p0 bI love you I love you with all my heart
+ k* a( F5 d; v8 q8 XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. v5 q, f/ v4 F9 }I’m still filled with fear
/ [& a, |, ^8 Y( CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ Q9 I7 ~" Y" y  eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 z  ~" I1 I7 p- q7 L( VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ j2 T4 W' k. a3 G! N3 ?! I2 @7 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* m" ?- T5 t! u' u, ]6 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; `4 K# _; k- M! P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* D0 G7 ]0 C4 P+ |" H8 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 }' o' z* b8 Z6 g0 \4 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( B) Z: A) K5 K' R7 Y6 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; `8 Z5 Q. i" R9 N& J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' }1 W( b1 B- N% X3 q. [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 Q0 ~4 n4 `+ V8 W1 |" C+ ]3 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" a, `# g: q$ L- ?2 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 I1 k# D3 u0 ~; M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: M% ^3 a5 o% I9 m, C7 R2 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! M, A% \- d  ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 V/ H8 L  L* v7 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! S. o+ P) @. S/ W- i9 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 A! C* k4 l) q" b- P' e4 v0 u+ S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  ]( I4 M# I9 X: A8 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% [& m" `: w- ?- Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* _/ \4 e; T2 j2 s7 Z$ k9 i5 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- D) y; R/ l2 J3 N" t1 L, S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" \( V4 R% h& f( F1 W" e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, G1 n7 H* \0 S5 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* a' _. E8 a  w) k0 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" i4 N) I+ f9 V+ i3 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 X0 P6 S, _, i3 J1 y( z" m! L4 o& K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 s9 T* }: C4 T7 ]1 j8 T0 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 Q# o$ K. @3 f2 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- [5 G9 S# U9 S, d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 z# e4 p) _6 }3 w$ p* ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# G; C; o+ j$ j7 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 j! R  a2 s5 H) C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 g& i! {2 {7 w. J7 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 q9 [1 d8 M/ v. ~* t0 _: i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ Q7 Y5 E- w2 d  s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. p1 l1 N7 w0 y& ]我请你剖开它

/ q9 v+ o" U6 ~! h, V. j0 Q8 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>