【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* ^% `/ d* g9 z7 l/ ?, gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; j8 ~* i2 d+ q& p$ \- EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' N' A2 O$ y+ [3 @  X# ^( CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 i* b( B: J" r/ J: j6 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! l) v9 ~- b+ `: FSeeing the sky content with its love
; |* w9 U  ^" l3 B8 W! YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 f; k8 x1 P9 j- F* z2 p! kYou needn’t fear anything
2 a; A2 [5 B4 ^1 }9 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 Z$ x; O+ J& cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& w9 j- F- |& @5 j. BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 `0 P! ]; |& D! n& tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* S) @9 x% \5 R: f& }+ G1 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% _! d  S& c) n6 B. S8 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 {' ~2 K; O9 m' u* k4 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 A; Q: I6 `0 n: e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# A2 l. M3 p0 ~5 @1 a& o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 `! `* a3 M2 N! A0 m3 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. B2 U9 z4 P/ t: [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% k% G( ^( C- I$ [) R* J<P>你无需担心</P>
8 H/ d9 N3 g+ @; x3 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 V% y: w. m# T  o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 X5 b* ?/ X; h8 J4 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ \, e0 L+ @1 U! w, I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 q5 |6 ^& m$ t# k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! a; ?) e9 z- o+ U- B( Q& \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. D  i( R* E) j. J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 [4 J0 v1 t7 x& Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. ]" s$ p' P  b1 W$ Y0 h6 `  N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; }4 U* R) z; ~+ j# t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' x6 |3 |; T- P$ B- ~: o& k( e3 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" D5 L/ Z. I7 I2 y  G# F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 E# p: O4 d, i1 s+ c* v. [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 c* b( |: [: q1 `1 {$ h9 C& C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# \& h# M: A" F* ~0 k# v1 I, N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) R4 H" e" V$ G  G  }1 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 F5 ~% C( e8 U/ o/ Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ N  \# b; g" r6 u6 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ r; ^. R. G; j/ H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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' @( @: a$ {. l, }% a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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