【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 m6 t9 x& ~6 n" j/ y: M" R" VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ v& f$ q+ L" p) |7 k- Z7 n. nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 C+ a0 s# {% R2 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" `$ u6 k& q( v# q4 ~0 }9 \! ~8 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  n" s0 q: `- u8 C, yWith the moon kissing it every night
) L2 c. ^& [1 T' U/ R1 aSeeing the sky content with its love
( a: _& F! N( c- X: t! ?; rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 H8 ^6 H0 o+ FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* C+ f% S9 Y# e0 ~Every other word you utter is love
- n& H! P3 @. ~5 W2 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* s5 a# J0 s5 w% R9 C. z- UNothing can compare to my love
; l3 C  _: ~" d. I) Z; UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 ]3 p/ Y+ a/ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! _0 ?$ a# K1 j) ?& {/ W, |% Q' D0 z' e# MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( q2 _9 w! B. l4 V7 V1 H! F9 y) r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' s# W% A, }$ y4 }8 P0 L' E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- g5 ]1 Y% O# u7 o/ |8 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; q  W! {7 p/ s6 t4 Z1 l/ f& r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 v* p* T- m9 t/ c$ D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# j3 c) O$ ?4 M  T* X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ G3 U3 G# r% G& N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 k9 N& X$ |+ S1 ?6 o1 \$ W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 g0 v$ G5 K" |5 a; o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) n5 x6 N0 O9 u  V+ h9 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; P& N/ ?' k' l1 [5 h) i1 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ @  Q( ^1 x7 `) D2 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: ]: U$ @6 n+ @/ Z8 F; w, F2 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) Z1 o  L; s: Z" U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 _3 A* Y3 k& x" C; a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ y6 Z3 t1 m: \; f2 H! f) w6 z# ~( y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 s" M. f7 z- x" [5 E" q: |5 e6 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. ]3 O. N6 a/ j0 _* G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ E$ Z" U* r8 T. p* c$ M7 E+ Q; Q- \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  H- C: }: ^  @2 L% ?; `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 x( I1 Z. q; X4 `5 \* i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 p/ s2 a# _& o  a9 L/ _) e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ |/ W5 v$ Z; k. |3 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 L5 p1 n: R3 n' p0 o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; n& u' C2 u, o, J3 f/ P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* N4 X% L- J/ ~: {) e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# b# c3 [$ J. R% Q) J/ M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ J9 U- d- K3 b- }! f% a* _( M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 f( x/ j+ x5 J( W  Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 \8 h3 V6 s' A, c' H4 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 e! m; B3 t! j) Q7 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>