【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ P  ]) r" j8 |* _3 T歌词我附在后面。
  e' C/ s& b- e# [2 S) v( @3 m6 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, q% I. H! O8 B! vWith the moon kissing it every night
6 r: g: p: i; e" Q1 _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 Q( t2 h) r2 |% l) I5 f- U( R3 DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- v- F3 j4 F$ E# E: ^: Y1 MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& x( {7 a/ g& m: ^$ XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* z" X( R+ a3 s( b8 F& c2 D( qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 }: H2 k2 p" H7 r# `) iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 F# d8 ^+ x6 z; kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" Y$ P1 \% U4 K0 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( O# o3 B1 m4 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& W- L3 l# X1 v( {0 N1 i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, w/ [4 w4 G- ]* V! u' H* y1 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! k! y. ^" S) T+ b6 f! h5 }& M/ s  @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 M; ~( `- k- g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 Y, S( e4 n. X1 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- o0 j. l- ~; i8 t' s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 F* j- U1 F+ k7 Z: \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ L5 g0 ^6 v& q1 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 p- J3 m" s2 q4 w- v7 L% q4 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; {  @8 y- C# I4 W% w6 w' Q: a4 e" v4 F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ R; B5 s* v1 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 f  Y" f0 e) t/ n! b' V, I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# ]0 P& h* p; R3 r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 _! c0 t( a/ x2 m! M* a1 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 V* A' U. {, d2 p1 K) D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 ~* H" n4 z- J: O7 B8 {9 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. W# }0 S; f" k8 T) b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 O4 _  m7 J+ u# Q7 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# \) Z% n2 p' U- C2 m9 t' B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 A! r2 B! U6 m* L5 _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 h0 {; f/ ?/ T2 d$ @# d( }: n! h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 I, i; U2 [! x$ ?7 V! K! p  m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! F. O0 @( u. }5 S# O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; _1 A3 z6 u, c5 Z! [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, {. c/ r4 d0 h0 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 @5 m) N6 T# y9 u6 M$ s7 [4 Z5 P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ b2 y. s6 Z; D! L( R8 y2 q# P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: l) N: o" }* n" c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>