【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 X: p5 w0 Q% g3 T' S/ J' h' d9 t8 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% Y, C+ {! n% ^( e1 E1 U, i' NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 @6 x. [! }0 Z" z6 A- g. M8 Q7 Z: VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; t+ t) B; ^; V4 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ C! C3 G% ?9 f( ]: o& A5 YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) S; r8 k, m4 m/ g/ T9 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& |8 o0 Q+ ^, Q+ n) O0 \+ H1 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 f' B9 N3 \; s" N2 iI regret not dying
) E: f# Q, f% L/ |% t/ I! U" E! wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  F6 d% o" o+ `" m7 D" ]% ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* P& J+ @0 R3 n0 ?- R; p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) Q  c7 Z( d. L! r, R& _+ @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 k; y/ s+ ?; c8 n1 a' p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" R) t% u: [3 v7 B6 t2 R; G& a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 T" V; v* ^/ G/ f" V" s9 J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 V& s6 L% q( m/ h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* A$ u; F  N( g  c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 o( @$ @) K( R( p* u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; |* V3 q; M, N$ E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. D9 o2 V4 K/ D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ p8 ~: e" v) T1 V  v( X9 `+ J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 _) z9 N) D/ {) [' M1 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% |2 z! R: W$ t( g  t* P2 o' @* Z. _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 ^' h5 l8 k& `1 p4 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" N  ~+ k0 d8 l. B" ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 l5 d5 Z# r/ U: t: T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) r+ E, c3 f4 j4 z! c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 W. \* f2 j6 U  q+ `# ?& W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 ^! o4 t* F* ~: A' S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( X5 ^! A' [6 p; W' ~; s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, `$ W6 f6 s4 G0 q- g. u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" v6 O7 r; j2 c' R% Z% q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 {$ z( ]6 h, T; ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, L6 c; K' ~* s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; u+ h. j, H8 I; I. T$ b' F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 y! P* A& |* h4 r6 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# l6 c) {9 r7 ~0 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>