【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! C* U& q  ]3 l* o0 V( j: Q6 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ r  }* s9 P, i* k* a- d6 r# lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* c3 q  Q' w! e8 N3 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 c' K7 I8 A& f1 y/ ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) Z, ]" h1 R7 q; [- w4 HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ w; f/ v  B3 [% dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; y0 x1 C7 {9 N2 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! D9 I* A' V2 e7 B1 g# p$ g3 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 q7 |$ ]2 ?3 B3 Z& k# m# mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 |! Z& T2 u# L* g0 t) G8 F% _' TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% h1 g1 l: }. R+ LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) N0 h6 F9 q6 V$ ~" i, f5 v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: E' {5 q) Q9 Z& s& u/ {1 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ k# f; d) R7 }- n3 `, B, a' F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& K8 [, g$ E1 w- o2 H' F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 b0 Y" ^+ K% s: S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; q3 d5 J9 Y8 m. Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 u. V5 _6 S3 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 K7 X, P8 `3 x+ U, z* G; r<P>你无需担心</P>
# x. }8 J+ g( B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% ?6 @, f: h: k0 }" L6 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 D- K1 W* `/ s5 z6 X/ n: l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- v8 C7 [/ l) D9 ]5 `$ P& D* ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! p2 [6 W( z8 w/ r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 N3 Z/ L6 g) L, J  z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- e* }7 S+ d$ v% w. |  f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 o% k( X+ R% h" g+ ?6 @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 T" d' T( O: p- d! G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 W3 m9 Z% o5 n5 w& i. y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& B7 Z$ ?# E/ D7 Y# }8 c7 \* t, L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 |5 x8 t2 x4 j4 f* q! U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( D3 x6 A  P, c: |0 S; b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 B6 g3 l8 P/ T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& q4 l' E9 d) R- V% O. Z% ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' l& u% O- Z" r( H5 O& A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ P% ^: G& t: m" y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 u) y4 Q/ g, k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 j8 e# M5 f/ }% V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 u! O' F7 v0 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% O, ^: H/ o3 I, g. o' L3 C9 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; a# I6 J- L  q' j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 l1 W. O; ^, R; B6 t7 o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 W7 J% X9 X  b1 y5 }* d4 a我请你剖开它
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* I0 i9 [, I! W! H1 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ B3 Y. p2 Q% l6 O" ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>