【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& N- l, x( i9 Z" f" O4 g! Z1 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 h* i- T5 o+ z8 N* K7 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ X& \9 _& P7 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 W. e1 o6 h4 |  ]; VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ t% Y" V# N: f; B: ]The sky is happy down to its soul
; n* ], ]" i; m2 N# `4 cWith the moon kissing it every night
" l  d% ~# C" Z9 z: _Seeing the sky content with its love
0 y3 K. v9 ~) y) w& V0 w5 A$ F2 O9 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 }8 S& _% t$ L  P# ^  wYou needn’t fear anything
5 U$ X5 I7 }2 E: O/ S- f( @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 ^: X& G: b9 b( @, ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 a2 X: T4 B% a) o, p! v2 kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 w1 P* |# S8 i' H) L, j) @  ~9 tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: m. I0 x% m" A4 j' K, C" D, s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. b$ f- E6 F( Q, N. ^- a# C) g; P/ S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 i! O$ K; e  [+ R* d* }* N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: L: B! W% W" j: U# \, m0 {( Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( p! O& p$ h, {2 H- G1 ]2 U0 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' X! ^! e' B9 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& Q" [& B" s  ^3 T) e) M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* S" i1 ]/ Y8 d4 r" P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 U- R$ M6 a1 K* L4 R1 g4 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 z  v1 C* U" K! c3 h3 L4 A: h( V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ h9 n- L4 ^: W/ C6 [! K  j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; \0 d' w7 Y! f4 ?7 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ w2 t! L" E2 s/ U9 D& X% |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( x. K2 B1 M9 ?" y& C2 J& x3 Z+ N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  _1 p7 m1 ]( {' j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 V, t5 A9 f7 }8 G& e6 ?- Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% u+ Y& _& P: ]' C( a- q0 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. E7 ]* u  g# v; w% g5 U) [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 M3 v, @+ |6 F' n! Y2 ^- z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. |0 d: Q+ g& s& W1 e8 Q: L  l& z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 e2 A7 D# {  E$ |9 I: N- ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. _: f8 E; t/ q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ K3 \! Y" C5 ^& c/ f: U2 ]( f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 `3 t, _/ b! @. e: a. g8 m) s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 j7 i  S- ]0 }$ N( ~( i8 H/ h/ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; n# `) h  K1 A0 ?4 o- \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 P! x( ^# G! ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  A( T* c& H4 g我请你剖开它
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- M, r! z$ L. `* P: m: G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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