【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, K0 Y  J$ N/ KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 ]9 k4 g& R) h* xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% F& F1 a# X8 J  X! p* PEvery other word you utter is love
& T, _6 D- l2 g1 a* Y1 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 `" f7 ~2 A* m, t4 l5 `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* w, S. V5 n1 M6 j0 @  H  QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& ]2 ?+ N! A& @9 j1 s* e) tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: e# ~5 H1 I9 J. c. G% NWith such a tongue as yours,
7 T2 O9 y" M. c1 U8 x9 {% ~( vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 K- t  i% I$ f2 _1 E: `( Q& G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. q& Z) W+ B9 P$ Y* B% Y& y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* `; q- {, r9 K8 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 w* s3 Y, A% ^5 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) l' z; E% X8 D1 s1 b$ L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ f( F8 P5 c, y: m0 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 S9 P$ a) q4 |# h9 k) T$ C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ Q7 [1 u/ b' @3 G( a- T5 N) u) e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 ]  O( z# P! n0 [5 k: i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" C) m( x3 k* f# x- e<P>你无需担心</P>
6 G: o' {2 y# [/ w9 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 L+ B5 z( `* |) b" ~) p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! f5 Q  j" v2 {) P# V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ t9 M- p1 @* D/ b8 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 T$ [: g8 p4 ?' g9 Z' F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% {. W4 D! O+ M' S( N; E) p; b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 t$ D1 y, Y( ?0 Z) g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, d* u4 ]; \, s( j6 s) `4 N/ d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- Z- T) s0 e, S6 s! F0 `% m( ]; R  d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' \0 [& s; b9 Z# |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ S/ R7 V; \  M) t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 k. ^3 ?" {; A3 B1 w& m* D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) L& c1 a' i2 `  @+ v$ Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 l; Z3 ?& N: j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ d+ l; o& d) p2 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  E  R# K# f3 N% s' O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( t8 g; v9 F& `5 j9 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* |% {4 u+ m- K5 p8 _; J我请你剖开它
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0 R" E+ P1 A. b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: r+ [# J# Z: i: X+ R1 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>