【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" [4 |4 L' _+ r4 I+ F歌词我附在后面。
7 @2 c9 o3 }1 u" M1 l# aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 Z1 o! {' L  {* }9 Q% I) @( HThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 y7 x3 w: ~7 F2 |$ z" w# MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 o; f- f& |; L: ~- Z1 k' yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 M* Y' L9 u: _" ~* {I really want to know just how much you love me
% O2 e- V# a" K- R0 s" [I love you I love you with all my heart
* p  X$ w, k, T1 XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' T3 |5 \# T/ A& O) TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  P! A3 j/ N# j9 \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! I% P6 B+ o- H4 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 {! {4 y7 v7 n+ K& WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 j0 e, K: W' j, u8 w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, Q* i& A+ W8 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 d2 A) r* h5 K; {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( `, X- h9 ~  m: ^( U+ ^& e4 C2 H2 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ C$ w' L6 y* b. q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- \& ]4 r. C# a; V, |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' b1 n9 x. A4 Z9 Y& M  D, Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ F/ ?$ N' ^: O" ], Q8 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- O. ^5 ^9 p) z4 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 V0 t. M; R4 I4 L1 o$ l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 I5 h! y; b. q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* ^2 |7 N% h# ^8 |2 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# [& G! `- }/ G% K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 }. o. o) F& @# L5 m* e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 N% f* `7 n6 r; k6 A# t, _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% q& C4 O: ^: h+ e* F( ]5 F! ]% Y! W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ F2 t! Q. G1 t  K; [( H. D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 Z' W5 a- k1 \1 n) E) q$ p3 ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 p! r$ c7 d1 E4 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 `- C8 y/ J9 Y1 s; G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 K8 P' d- c& S, V$ c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 q' Y* H9 P" ]3 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! ]% Q& P8 s, b<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 Y1 z3 n9 {0 a' X9 W: i  w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 I- e/ I% i! z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ^! x2 Z& F/ f$ K2 h  F# d2 q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ G0 W, o( y. A; y; i. I: q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 W2 B" b( c9 Z8 |- U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) O- c# Q; ~3 i) E3 O/ M# |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

0 i5 z; X8 L7 u! f2 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>