【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: l( A6 x4 A' d' m$ p8 y- lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 S" v. X1 p$ T% g( d& n5 ASeeing the sky content with its love
- a0 y% S% `7 G# E  HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% J1 f& ]$ J+ p( \% {8 J* C$ GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. L4 W( H! ]6 m, s0 }I really want to know just how much you love me
; W2 Z3 P  H( W+ uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& |7 n% z" i8 e( gI want so much to see inside your heart
4 U, ]; H$ H) P" S- nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# o  y3 n5 \8 \4 I/ VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& D( l1 S" u- K" `$ ?7 r5 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ [$ E4 s% h; |' G. LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 U" J/ n5 w+ z: _. c4 I( F! X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& T0 Q5 ]) N3 ?/ p, T+ t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 f* ]$ h2 T, U) \; H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& F1 b7 Z, H" U$ z" a0 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 K1 J! G' G" w% ^! z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: K1 E/ Q: y3 q5 `- x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" b6 d' I3 k( T; C/ u5 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' O( o  v1 {# Y! k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 `0 U7 X6 V4 O+ ^) e/ x5 Y3 \; T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 N, s- a5 p) ~  u2 J( H% _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 ]: @! p! H7 E! ~6 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 V: R- g3 F+ C) a$ x/ h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" J. O0 z( q& l+ @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, o7 X9 |* n( [- L0 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: ]) t  i/ Z3 _" N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! Z- }8 k3 }' h$ W) y4 k( |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 U$ W; ~# S. a3 O- L: K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" E3 F3 Q6 w& e/ Y+ N- t1 n0 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% w2 b- Z' Z  H# ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 A6 H8 q& X3 ?- d. p* F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 l4 h8 w7 {7 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ F; J/ Y$ Z4 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 x; Q! o# f* ?) K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ j+ t) S7 |. f+ {& a7 ^% u( W* z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* x; F. p' t$ p$ v- Z8 C8 B0 m6 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 V0 y" r$ H6 h% R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) a4 I0 o2 i; ^$ Y$ x7 m0 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! P+ K& E( H* \. F9 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- x8 n; K6 C3 V# S# \- q+ v1 V  K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  r+ S5 E$ l( F' R5 G% C; `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& Z' G+ f1 C8 C8 T0 a! S8 Q' ~% r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ H3 m5 j1 k( t/ l" Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! z1 v& S# ^% {; @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( X; z- J0 B4 A2 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>