【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 I9 [4 E" l& y4 {" v3 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: S3 a5 V% }! K$ _! GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# e* |2 ~4 R- `  nThe sky is happy down to its soul
; N. B* `( ~7 J; ^1 W; q: t  |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, z; {  ]# |7 C9 J  r" fYou needn’t fear anything
& x4 f% y0 r/ n% }  |' KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% ~6 y, Q2 s8 o5 B! |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: Y  P: d7 {+ B& S- t5 b4 fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* L8 C/ S  G  j! P( lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( E$ o$ z. m8 b  W$ wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  q2 J3 E' V  R7 ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) s- ^% o# L# `3 d" }% Z* [6 Q/ H$ |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 s0 l/ s% r6 d  g+ n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, l) N, s9 z, m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) Y( H4 j: K9 t: b4 r' }6 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  k) Q  l1 d8 A" U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 g7 e5 _( ~$ J8 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, ^% U* {' {8 [6 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 s# |( @/ \5 x' q+ t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- A# s8 B6 }1 a4 {<P>你无需担心</P>
' p6 u8 {3 ^" s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 d% J3 R& n% z% l  h* }' f( t- b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. g( ]' A- b+ w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% s& S: A% O1 y- b) y4 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; C. Q# d9 w$ S: \* V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) t' K' m- J7 G. ^) ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' a$ |, F2 |' I, P" Q3 p# G3 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 M) w* o1 l. ]8 T% m: m0 K1 q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 ?3 Y. I+ V) j9 h5 q  D! N  }3 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: t0 Q. W' s* K7 m* Q0 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 ^9 w1 V( T  E& p) u5 S, u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 H7 h" `/ j. p: r/ B. C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: I) f. C' m0 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 x) G8 N7 w$ ~; V! v: k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 e, B, k" |& ]3 B- O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ u( A+ P+ j% I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) e0 f" C1 F0 B我请你剖开它
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( m3 o. c5 @2 H7 S1 U  q) g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>