【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 {' r! U+ o! q3 q& f9 |4 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 S$ w& A6 s+ K# z5 P+ `1 j7 ], d- h% YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 j( `$ n  I3 U  M5 f/ c, {1 h- jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 }$ k- i* H( n' v+ N% x: e/ w! qThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 J' C# J8 u7 p9 V2 eWith the moon kissing it every night
4 ?( D' [) [5 t: z( K/ j1 tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& ~7 g2 W4 _0 X/ B# P8 v# }! h8 ANothing can compare to my love
# c7 ~$ T  p! t8 J5 G( h8 o3 F" ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 G  U4 i' x5 S5 M/ v" f* W2 l; RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ i, D4 ^# o! e. @& \2 oI want so much to see inside your heart
8 p' }6 `3 ?4 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 L# v- D- Y5 C% _. [2 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 Z6 I( r# B) j# o2 {$ uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" z, }( D. E3 y- Y+ `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* R3 {* j$ N, F: g8 O! e; l( QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  E! q+ f% K) M/ n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( C, G) t7 n. R( @2 j  |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' \/ I& h- a4 w3 h9 ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 c! C2 H7 k1 |4 Q( d4 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' R2 h( m8 y! a/ H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  E5 W) |- S8 z8 k8 [/ E+ q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 |- [0 g7 Z* E* J8 Y/ h# C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ c. }& o6 {% ~* E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ [' w+ H9 {9 Z* j5 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 q- Q$ c$ c3 z% b/ o; ?2 I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  W4 M; b, S  x( ~2 c) I6 m" Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 p9 R6 p) d5 u% c1 {. `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 Q$ L3 Z9 W; ~, o+ \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 p$ ^1 C9 s' S8 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 i" v  t( P: ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" l/ {+ N* n/ C# |/ A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 U' N5 a; N/ V3 w" }- L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 r7 O' {0 m' {5 A, I0 f' R" e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* T" a) q; n) |5 e. M7 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 m, @/ \! F$ I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) X# N! r5 S# o# t0 u: T5 `6 Z. U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 W6 ^4 Z7 j! [& h5 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: D& x' P# `6 J' H5 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: b8 W+ j! b4 g1 o) G0 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 _! d( R; t& Z" ~; K! r" \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 L- C& }. \( S4 a, w2 i我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>