【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 {0 Y! i: f/ E2 q  ?歌词我附在后面。
- E' y; m7 z# }  i3 y4 H# g) iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 s' |9 ~$ _% _$ @$ \; PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ \+ s6 R6 m0 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ |. K! b1 d8 i2 M3 b& UWith the moon kissing it every night
/ H, ?8 R8 |0 SSeeing the sky content with its love
6 {, K  q" T1 \8 \% HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- Q/ q, g; f. S& x  b7 q+ R1 pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 x& _$ I$ r# aEvery other word you utter is love
; B/ ^0 H* u5 A/ s3 TI really want to know just how much you love me
6 h' a/ B& R1 a; f* D. W0 zI love you I love you with all my heart
, ?! O, ~2 `: l  D9 l/ PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ c# q! A1 v. Y4 J0 n2 j% rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ u. g* q9 m( s$ }9 ]  i  GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 Z, Z. \/ h& f: yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% h- r; ^8 i4 H9 [I regret not dying
  o2 P: e. S, ]2 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- T$ \- g( d+ C2 l, g6 q: ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# n0 q/ C" I: r2 E' [+ e  aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) J4 r# N3 S: d. g1 Z( Z# GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; E$ x$ z8 C8 r7 @# p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 V8 ^7 \7 M+ ]8 o9 N, j: h' W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. V1 R* m9 ^$ e& L$ Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# l* l% S& r3 R* {% T' K/ j9 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, R. w" `; Y0 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 F& o8 ?5 }6 w1 G- c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; ~4 K! s" z2 V# M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. ]( V' ^" u. N( `1 p4 Q* ^: H, X9 q6 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" h/ a, k" Z; |2 V0 Q) Z% a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 t1 O1 B+ t3 e0 F9 Q7 X6 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# G( @1 H0 v$ E/ v8 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 h' l/ d; e$ @( W: h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* ]$ P: \9 n3 D. ^0 g- k  I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" ^) H% C/ R* Y# H4 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ j+ @6 `  F* ]1 L& p  j4 S( e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% A+ F+ P' A' p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' N4 ]1 J% A0 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 m5 v# }  \' @( n: Y% s5 ], j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 b0 i- c  L1 B2 b! t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! W  ^0 |2 p; ?$ |  p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) ]% Q/ }3 @3 s% l% [( Q! W1 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  ]/ A. o/ g" Q% @5 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) _) Y: {4 N1 ^7 c* E  L, O/ Z" h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; Z( C0 N" I8 v9 h1 @0 G6 N2 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 F) e" n8 S, j3 @# K( A1 e我请你剖开它
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9 |( {8 P3 w3 ^9 ?' m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>