【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ X5 O! t: a$ r2 I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 D  r7 H' h, i; T) t  oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 C& t- D7 u& I* T0 ~- UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% W: p- C9 c6 n/ ^! k- A  O3 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  F8 ]+ Z8 Y/ T- }$ i: D# p- l$ hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! U, y1 ]- I; q3 c% @) {- lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  b* O7 F6 p! c$ G. vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 L1 f% L$ [& G- ?- }& M, D) Q. KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 F" E1 V' t. wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' B9 Q& q( g* FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 g5 x+ ]: U. V' YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 d) w5 p* N; E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) t1 X4 U. Z2 }; ^, V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  l: k8 }& Q) x/ v6 [1 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" e- t* x, l: a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 b+ j. e( s% q# ^- P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ b/ t0 |; `- y4 F' S2 g1 ]5 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- h( V: |2 c0 Y) i5 s/ }+ o+ B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ |" \+ H6 `; n1 i2 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; O6 Y" A$ {2 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( j2 ?1 ^/ ~  H( d" L2 A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: N9 U( F* e% R  j) d2 l* n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  b" s/ Y$ G8 `2 o( d% K- J7 I3 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 W0 k! c- c" u. q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, U7 Z" ?  R6 ?0 `. z& z" Z( S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, f/ b; s  U: G' O" R* e" ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! I$ d4 I  e% ~0 v5 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 q9 l8 [1 Z6 z1 P6 V) ^  D1 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; O9 |2 Y+ S! m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ c9 F2 e2 G% p/ L6 |. ]; W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 N  Q) ^1 }& T' M/ u  Y3 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ A3 c5 `% L& g" ~4 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( A5 A3 Q, Z. J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 e5 a, }* f. i. [7 Z! T' S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 a4 N5 n( V1 {# E( h0 x/ E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ _% a( B" h3 C- ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 y" D; Q% a) v2 Y+ q: |9 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: ^9 i9 U: e7 {3 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: h2 d4 p( V! R: R; t, L9 r. s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>