【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 U( `  {( n) l! H) U* R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* [( F( e5 H( J0 U5 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 L, @4 G7 u. w/ X, N6 X% K, [6 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 Y; ]4 h) j6 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
: W* a" [4 G3 J. C. [6 ?With the moon kissing it every night
3 Q# |$ B9 n, d! }Seeing the sky content with its love
  e. x  L  T4 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  d) \* `( Q$ T* a2 O3 Y2 {; o" VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 f8 P; D7 Y$ V2 I; ^4 y" zI love you I love you with all my heart
9 `1 a% k$ u+ @; l5 E( S9 B# LNothing can compare to my love
# c' V. D. w) a# Z1 s/ J2 c) FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' X/ U4 p; z& o6 _# f% T1 m' X2 y% uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  W" a0 e/ [& o4 CWith such a tongue as yours,
: Q# N( \* P4 P  g7 Z  [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ c3 t7 S" e# r/ ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 p; \( c" P3 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ v. j" l4 f4 t: J/ x- M( n3 P% P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 O# Q: n3 Y; N8 M  h9 J/ G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ s+ {0 i# x, {' [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ T! H) e0 g! x' x! ?0 p+ d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* ~+ ~7 G- s7 y. m/ w5 x7 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 r8 I7 t# U# A0 l' g; a. U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ D4 v" `- K+ e* }4 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& K0 J! K% v$ X0 w* z, t* [! j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ w7 ]( K5 x" b8 U- ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 I9 w! c& k' E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) N1 e! l9 Z( C& W6 k" }" M, {: f<P>你无需担心</P>
9 c. m8 D( ~* H; p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 C$ v$ ^# L0 w9 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 ]) s% M9 P  M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! I1 H2 K1 L+ I7 ~8 D* T2 l7 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- @, ?3 ]  q0 Q, S  W9 o* n6 U0 C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 Y: i, L: J2 |' ?& G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: h* _2 Y# M% N: u. @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" h- D) ~$ J* L2 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: Y7 z+ l' P) m! I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ ?+ A6 G% h  x% y0 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ?8 l& _8 D; u4 Q: h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, v& V7 ]( Q7 z0 P0 q1 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 D) l. c3 _% [- `6 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. z) c# K% s2 S2 y4 Y8 l; N+ D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 ]0 x, \: y9 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( z) _1 N  F9 T$ S8 z6 A1 v$ }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. K. P2 _, W8 b; c0 H* G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 e8 t3 f3 \8 h( U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# I9 V+ V2 t& |# ]' L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ D; T& \. A# p, [* M; P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* J+ S7 q  v8 p5 M' n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 Y! U# T2 Z& ]7 p2 y$ l- e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: t, f. F0 G; K8 u& Y( ^7 U- A& z5 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# y- Y4 B2 b9 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 w% I5 c7 d3 W" s  ]/ D; U0 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>