【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# m: w3 [5 b  i( ]) d, G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% n2 w% s: q' M* GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! I2 q6 W9 u, K* ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 T' {. e: o; s& v3 [With the moon kissing it every night
, v( n* Q, G# |& z# j/ J* u. nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 q5 q5 O5 o5 W4 {5 MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  _" Z, ~$ Z( m8 gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; y. g$ ?* i7 B6 y2 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( U7 Y5 |8 W% |1 GI want so much to see inside your heart
% [$ }, a' P2 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( C7 w( Y7 R5 U/ I1 {! d9 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  |6 ^: d' \% yI regret not dying
# F8 d# e" T" w* N. n) TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# g* x$ ^% }8 f, FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' U" U# d% z& c; c! D* B) X8 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 y) X" U9 }' T( u$ Z1 z% u9 i) n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ d0 e2 ~0 ?) w7 `) g0 t6 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, r  X. s, P; M2 h4 B: H& l8 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" A; P9 _/ @6 S0 m8 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 z) |$ b7 Y& s# A9 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 a2 X9 D3 u! a- G$ m7 E8 C* U, [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ X7 h& \# Q  `( {, Z; a, _) Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 N1 f% o/ q% d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  @) _7 u( B. b5 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* ]4 y8 x. _8 K$ L- j' ~( A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 N- q9 V$ Y2 C4 k8 _4 ^$ z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 [- u0 K* Z0 W' e% f# q: s6 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 ]" c5 @2 o1 i2 y3 h7 e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! V7 n, ~* u/ L6 t1 h2 b$ v/ Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 Q! G. A1 n& x% ~3 R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 Z) o) R- o4 _/ F6 D, }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  n1 Y5 l* I2 q8 K+ h# A8 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
" r: M. ~' w  q3 M) Z& ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& `  G& @- a0 v  O/ r6 s4 Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ s5 }3 ~/ c+ h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ?8 S4 o) j* S' Q0 v' L+ a; U% k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' F$ G9 |& c) [9 |7 n8 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; I/ O0 W; q) @+ E! F# m; {我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ n! D8 S3 R0 h  g6 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>