【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 j) ^% _# _0 x+ l6 |* w5 x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. d8 n3 W; q; J) E- g. bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! w  \$ z* K+ q. p( bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) _1 }, K2 Z# `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 @( @/ \& @; X: K3 q9 bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" x+ X2 c9 D' w* e4 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 w8 v0 [: I2 F/ D2 ~0 Y( O$ T) G9 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 u" ?5 I) |( z$ q% E, Q. o- b& `8 m3 hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 `8 u. }8 }, R' {) b- f$ J- wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 ?4 a- p9 h1 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 }; D+ f) H% ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 v! M- D2 Z, L) xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 J, a4 P& b6 X$ E6 w1 y1 x0 I$ gWith such a tongue as yours,
2 k3 k! a8 ?2 S& ?/ B& x# |- j8 KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 _# F3 w- N& \; E6 l; s: EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% U* ]( l0 E8 X8 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! _2 {2 U4 U- j. v2 v3 ]3 s- E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 d" r  m* ^: X0 y+ F9 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* ~, W0 }- w. j9 G0 g9 v- ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 e: E( ]$ b0 Y$ w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) B5 W8 ?% y; S# D$ d1 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% t) e; j7 n; _2 w; ~, d$ E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) V1 y% `$ h3 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 ~% S! ?- ?+ d2 p8 h7 f<P>你无需担心</P>
, ?- a: b$ z% K( l( R% s3 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 S/ N3 N. W# C7 R& c, N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! A' h8 B% [  M: E' V5 C- _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& h/ n2 t7 @' ?7 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) @- f" q) O1 W* w# K- ^! y3 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" j7 H3 v/ x$ n- o) s8 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ Y: ?  _* o. P. ^0 F( J' y/ y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 I2 h! h$ N2 x& H- d! S6 ?. a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& [6 U, S- R1 t0 _2 S) V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 e; ]2 V( z/ e; p6 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& p) |# S, W* E* c& m/ E3 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 b& o( h4 W1 R& e% \4 R: y) M4 n; H4 n+ k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 Y4 \# T% _  l8 G) F<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 g8 b9 [8 Z; }9 c/ m5 [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 @5 i  g, [4 u" S# i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# f% L2 ?6 `) \2 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' Q- D1 O& f7 H* J) D# W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, G, f9 L; g  W1 K9 d( Z/ g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* K" I# G* b" G# c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 G9 q$ S9 K# Z' Y- Y! N) A$ |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# O) A9 Y+ h' V4 K( H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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