【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 V+ D4 O6 E! W/ s! ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* N- [0 G! @; f& `Making the sky glitter like gold,
( d; Y" x8 h0 x' G+ \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 |! v6 e% S7 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ k, g4 A8 t: J( g, {* W5 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& H( ]! @/ t+ x% NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- c! A' ^+ B/ x- G1 R8 k' }3 B+ J2 }I really want to know just how much you love me
* W" s9 L& }  m6 B1 ~0 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
2 G$ |, v/ E4 w% \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- h. ]7 O" ?0 i6 P5 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 F* F7 @6 i2 y* {, ~0 lI’m still filled with fear
/ {. h/ c4 k' H% xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' D' ?+ ~+ `9 P3 v( p9 w1 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# B& @  K0 v, ~6 i, [/ RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* o7 @) T+ r+ d9 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, M. s  ~3 W8 `* ]! O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% E5 L* j5 A" j: q4 Y3 q1 g  E7 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 ^, h7 j; `+ k5 p9 G9 N7 V# p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  _$ r* a5 |3 S5 g; E, P! @$ e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 |7 F( \# Y* H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 H4 x- _9 [6 ?' ^8 n. e* |5 s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" T9 u& I2 o( z  g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; v' n( Z: M1 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! \$ B9 X9 B0 J0 s# ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& @) V( o/ X, K' d4 O/ o; u! W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& p! `! `/ Z% |9 e. M/ P/ C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 E) U: Q0 s" Z1 i8 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. i7 d  Z% d3 @5 q; e3 }- l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ w% a3 D. {7 K6 U7 a9 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 n% U/ U- h( g$ F1 m# \1 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. }0 O7 h8 Q9 n3 j* R3 J7 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 V  s% d6 u9 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 a+ R: s" F8 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& B5 Y4 u8 [' ]# f: n6 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) x  j  Y* }- X8 p# U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 U& G: B1 Q% n2 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 e( L  n) W: Y/ B9 {& \. P' _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' V9 w$ p8 n& P/ d% @+ a" N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ F5 Z$ X3 Y+ p% M7 P1 H+ j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* E8 \: Z7 q3 {; J5 e& {) _* Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; O& [3 b, A! ^2 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>