【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 Z% [7 Q4 Z- _  SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 Q# R( G& I9 i" l# v- tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# C& I4 f/ N2 l6 K' v3 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- o: U; R, d$ U4 O( qThe sky is happy down to its soul
( D  @& R3 W' b; N7 }; DWith the moon kissing it every night
; h' C) Q$ I0 v# A) zSeeing the sky content with its love
+ d$ F4 s9 }8 x  RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 b, I# W1 j0 b0 O& X. P- X. \9 T. V2 r7 }Every other word you utter is love
$ K$ d8 E8 {2 CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 e2 Y1 `+ @5 A" }, V1 a/ CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. I) m- w8 N8 a! e  W7 ?* RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: l  F  N& o! [  Q' Y6 K& [+ x* z: OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 L0 N4 e( ^/ M2 Q8 x4 X# LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" ^6 @6 d: P. a, i" _" b: q: ?8 ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- C* o- B3 M1 M5 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  A+ \% P4 `3 A2 \1 |8 j" K4 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  b3 V% B  K5 U- M" ~0 z6 Z% h" u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) {1 Z+ u$ w0 C8 [. j1 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 R8 H+ M  A1 C/ F& J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 `4 W  N# R2 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 i+ D- G, L! V+ T& {) R. n+ [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ o/ y0 C& U; Z, T4 ^5 N" o- z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 g! E& ~# N! L$ _' r5 }9 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 H  \# v  m# p$ C. w) w  E2 s4 j<P>你无需担心</P>
- g0 s0 l) M% `/ t3 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, o5 O1 }5 e2 g7 V) y1 {, V$ d) h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# i; ^3 d3 M0 g* f* ?; u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. r' u7 C4 J* y: _; c' h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 Q4 D! Y" `/ s+ z" ?' x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' i: b# y. e) h. L5 \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. ~, [) h: i( U3 L; b5 _6 r( F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: ^5 Z# q0 J4 m; P: h( x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* T- A/ X. c7 o0 M9 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 n) ?5 Y) x( }' k; V$ `' C; t$ V* y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, ^% k% P* y) t$ u3 R7 c% |" P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 u$ \! r2 N9 G# ?/ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 D$ ^8 A" F1 f) B8 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 y+ ]$ T: A& r+ m' t. @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 l! q2 j+ B( K/ y9 a# `4 e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  ]$ P; Q7 Q- g3 p/ i我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& E  `$ i( M; s4 i" [* c1 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>