【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 p: A  F1 F+ h  ^2 r* i9 p# I% gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# _# f3 y+ u& ~$ t; g' XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" N1 {! R3 J) ]1 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- y2 c; g' c5 y  P2 D5 n  q3 H( ~Every other word you utter is love
0 _: q# J! }1 r! O' m. o. a+ iI really want to know just how much you love me
% \9 g. \2 u. d) V' q4 nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 H4 A' V9 ~6 N4 Q1 X; P8 J$ MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ ?+ `3 r, F$ G. H+ ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% R$ Y0 r# s( `1 v; u/ I% GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 X+ h, s1 k9 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 k- v3 g7 m* AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 }' V" M3 A/ i/ P+ W( W( ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 q9 ~! x+ g1 z$ S: z6 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ @8 A/ [! h3 H- m7 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ y+ |/ P2 D& z9 V. |( Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  Q3 M# H0 T* c& B* h$ {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 s$ U2 d4 X& n6 |/ {4 c6 H5 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* k7 O) J& i- j9 X/ B% a4 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% f5 u: m& T9 h1 `# }5 S# i9 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, o' {6 t8 u4 c. a* `; G+ [' V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 ^2 @! T: \' P, ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* ?, u; V2 s% I9 z3 Y) ?3 b4 I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& `5 M0 S! y. K3 g9 k; \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 V" C" u2 B0 o% w7 ?1 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: ^2 G/ g# _5 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. Z/ e* Z+ k) r: L' J, N2 d8 ]: W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 c/ T9 {' [( Y3 w& C' m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ k: d: e! M4 Y) r! q: B# j- k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ X% E% b* A+ R6 o0 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- Z( I# c# A: \7 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' P, E4 [9 F' U& }# V' L( c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& h. i9 A! d( c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- N% J1 g- u1 q/ y( ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: c- \4 S( c' l; J+ V+ \+ c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 g6 i- N# E' ~2 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' q3 D+ Q# |2 H6 U; o& _3 _/ V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% S2 k' A8 _9 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 W; N$ [+ n8 v: `; ?( J6 H- P  M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, c( x; c. X, f  i. n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 G& x& F0 U# l2 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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* w2 f3 B- g' U& y; k. s+ D" W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, y. A; J; L! a& n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>