【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 l8 ~0 s  M6 E& t' m; f6 I( C$ {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 }  W  e. o# PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 v9 S7 s* ]# L2 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! [) c( @+ j& u  PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" k5 S6 F( k: W" {9 |& l' KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 P7 L3 C; C/ u4 m+ N: lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. E4 f. C' U" U$ WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& M: W1 v1 u( |, qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 o9 z1 ]/ x0 b: D( eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 _+ e% W) u# P6 WI’m still filled with fear
4 b/ N6 z' S7 D& z) EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 _0 {- o' P  l* S! q5 d% q) a1 ]- sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' l& M& K; b: m/ [  qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 R# |  G6 P2 K& v0 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  D$ g9 X4 ?; ?0 w0 S4 k1 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- g4 T. W! ]0 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 N: x# e2 p1 b+ ]7 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. J- `* K7 |- q" w: l2 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: t. z5 J2 v  `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; u; C8 t" W4 A5 h: r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 z2 a2 O. I6 Z$ c$ G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( |' A  n% A0 o8 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- b% h: |- b3 b/ @. F4 g' A9 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 I" t3 q; Z6 \6 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  u! Y' s8 o$ C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 ~. N: `# I- `$ t$ Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 V  s3 X. `% Y0 J% {3 Y- S. W6 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& J/ g/ [( ~3 i4 J0 X) @/ f: @. ]/ f. n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  [/ m6 t8 W" H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: V5 O; w, j' `" q, R. F, k<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 H( l8 C( D2 `1 B, ~# D1 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' Z, ~( J/ O& }4 x, M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 c0 O. R: x3 O$ {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 _$ V1 ?3 P* D& \( J+ R9 {& V. ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ T  f) V5 p' f7 z  ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  [9 l* d3 _( B1 ?) \* m8 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  q3 e3 L; a( U! Z6 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 w8 r  T! \  B! L4 C( F# d/ Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% k2 ]) F8 r1 \& L( N我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, b( O) d  J1 o  P- d. T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>