【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% h8 C+ b4 C3 x; G2 N- mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ E% H4 C' Q' }8 mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- O# D1 B* N5 A4 K( iI love you I love you with all my heart
+ h, G/ C4 e; N5 T9 uNothing can compare to my love
8 K1 k6 A+ H1 t, i& ]: N6 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 s! N/ C1 l* ~5 zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 Y+ ~6 X0 v. A$ \! vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( ^7 w% }3 ~9 |. S6 ^0 m% o* y) [I regret not dying
. w7 }. h, x4 V: aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 B" U% P, E; E4 u0 V1 _) W3 i9 RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 A: m$ C/ b6 Y/ P" O& f& Y& _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) |0 Y% }! ^5 F. E7 ?: N. d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% u  O7 A" d/ ]0 C, b" L' W8 J! ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ A# }. z% U, W& j: E- y! d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. ]3 U' q, V- B  A* O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" j' x. V* k! i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 n/ q% V% P. g9 \0 ^# `% }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 B& }3 |; s3 @6 ?: I9 n6 W$ t, b/ f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" a* e& ?& d7 r$ S. K! R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ |+ T; @+ ]3 f8 O2 Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. Z* h4 q3 a9 J7 X7 R! {2 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 L# G2 v& E4 p$ K1 r, x7 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
5 }$ c& N; G# C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: T# c2 \7 y9 D  o5 H7 V; f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 a$ d) m4 m9 D; {; x) W$ c; L3 z- N- Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; w! i1 i7 x; `( T. U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# F5 b+ I4 N4 R# P2 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" Q) \5 }: I4 @& X9 F# ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. `: F: j( s8 W. G/ `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 C# v- y& g+ F* {- x/ o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 ]% g# Z! U8 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ ^) q# K7 p2 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) z# n+ K8 C2 O% H" |2 {5 v6 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ @+ C% ?) S# P6 u" v2 z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& e8 J) o& A* H& C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 V7 r+ N% Q* x- y3 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% ?+ U* h9 ?6 W4 t8 t* X5 e2 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ E- C" J/ ^- i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 s4 H% n( c. f$ d* Y( w( o" C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 {( G& y) N; i5 Z2 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! w9 ?9 ?$ H$ g: \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( A! ]" }+ g# {0 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( w% I  F# `9 m# t( c" p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>