【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 `( o  N( ]9 M1 d( WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) ~; I6 M+ p( L' nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* l5 o. L$ t1 {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" U8 G2 Y! r$ K  N7 W/ kSeeing the sky content with its love
* b7 M5 s5 M' i: `# `1 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) Q6 Y+ E# ~$ T3 u! w2 k) RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# ^9 @$ {  l2 ^- s' E7 O* `Every other word you utter is love
) v& o3 [+ M6 O$ X) x0 zI really want to know just how much you love me
( K* p' N& z  y7 tI love you I love you with all my heart
3 @9 U7 c' [$ T- m' t- N6 o- d/ ZNothing can compare to my love
9 b/ [/ ?- \- w* h- n6 a. `( bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 s0 O; b1 ^  J6 Z* K7 `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 g7 |, p9 K  X4 n. iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) ]% B. Z1 X- |; O- JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 {4 t; q: f; ]5 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: M0 T7 K0 @9 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 x7 [( y  c. e) B  h3 m1 V  T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 L/ V: ]2 a7 \0 e( W$ u' Y9 y6 Q% J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 _* \* C" ~- l( M% C, L* a8 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! y# u$ _3 k" y# S, L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 K4 Y7 n+ k+ \! q, I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ E8 Y" e# k5 m( q# F$ I5 n- w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! A2 R- r; e2 H4 {, I: S# w: s& R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( k5 P  Y% n0 U& q! X5 W! ?0 p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ P9 `& P( a& o7 w; @6 f- ~+ x# C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, I6 C4 m" B* f8 m8 v# X) W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  u2 g0 v$ g7 l! a: n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( x2 e. g/ U9 y" H) p; W  V! V" R0 N  N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. }* ]" F6 f3 b  t) ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* C! ^7 U9 z6 Q+ v* p1 U: O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- n; [3 \7 k6 v* O0 f" y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% G0 C% B9 u" Z1 _6 ]  u; q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 n/ Y! H+ r: n/ F7 [+ o7 `$ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 Y8 @( `% N% l& k& ?- i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ A7 J9 V, i9 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 D8 k5 v/ o+ [2 U" }  Y) l9 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( U8 e# k6 z- m9 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" ]. n3 v, x5 [6 [5 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 {/ k! Y1 L/ \& ^9 u& n( ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) K5 r, D. W# X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 ?. W1 t# G) y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  ?2 `& |  c' v; Q  @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" N0 ?3 \5 w3 n" e. `. R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 c! [: N: Z( s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( R6 m0 j5 I7 h1 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ g5 U/ f% q. c, ^: V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! ^% ]  P/ n6 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 R) W% c/ Q8 J( g' ]' m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ X& ^* \/ N7 t. r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>