【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ Q; b) A9 m% J1 g& i9 k% @: ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 f) c! P4 w8 N4 ~( t7 A3 T5 @- LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" U/ K+ Y! H* AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& c1 p: s( J" c0 G! Y  I# eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 P  H% X) I# {* aWith the moon kissing it every night
6 w2 H- X9 w% R' C# JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ `/ F% c) T4 M7 }- |3 H0 j+ w, ~Every other word you utter is love
/ \: x3 b3 I  R3 p9 ^% v$ MI really want to know just how much you love me
! v( S6 m& e  L! g) YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" y. ^7 b+ w( x( Q" DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 [9 z) z- l" a( `2 d4 B1 mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" R% a# X6 v: X7 A5 s% @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, y2 Q& z. v2 h( iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 h- t1 S) X8 s  i  B  e8 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  ?$ Y: S, P/ @1 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* ~* Z% n) H+ J+ K9 h" Z# \5 ]' c- B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& Z( S, F! e" C$ c6 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) j2 R% ~( V! A% t. r( l. m9 {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ T( o) {' i- z2 @, o/ w: N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" R4 G" E+ Q: w  ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 X7 V0 M; k* T8 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ r  ^" X. M- }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 r) O; G* Y+ ]' @% p2 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 Y# B* A- I3 F+ U) x3 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: _# r/ q9 u/ v' b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% g. F2 Z; G2 I) X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. O; @& n7 M$ @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 l# ^2 N6 y5 [$ M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ T3 \* q: w7 V1 y* |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 n5 _2 u, L% K3 }$ W& @' J# Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 m4 c4 C- f" p5 m9 z, S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* h! }& t: ?* C7 a" B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! G5 X  ]. |2 s4 h7 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( U) V1 r& {0 h6 U1 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, h% ]6 a; ^9 z" O; z/ u/ X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 K+ }& Z5 R3 k7 _8 u' P我请你剖开它
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0 s$ U* y! c$ h5 l- \0 m9 i) V9 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>