【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 f1 Q! R9 x, |, {5 \' aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 Y/ q5 g, }5 ?7 d: ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ g: ?$ C5 C5 z- r, C. EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ C" U. V  H$ T- HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 E  O& q$ G* J/ e4 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 L# w- M8 C1 a0 aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 X/ z$ ?# ~- J; ~5 b1 \9 O. cNothing can compare to my love
: M& P. Q* d. |; y/ C9 q; KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) v3 j  ~8 H( NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 t4 l2 I$ d9 s$ kI want so much to see inside your heart
9 u5 K+ H8 F2 f3 j. p: _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 {4 m2 ~* N: `: p. s1 R' AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' f! j9 V, y  R" GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 U7 I, `* N& |2 D' W: d) u6 aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( ~+ E- ^/ m3 X1 o) Q( {3 [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: S5 j) k1 @% z, o) d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( p- L0 c! r! ]6 l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ P% D( d* V8 U* m0 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. r# L( ~( l: S1 e& f6 O/ T1 i) a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( X9 S/ U8 A. y- {% s# e/ [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* }, T2 ]# U9 w1 J" s" y' X, i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 X+ q2 l4 |' d! d( f<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Q& B2 j. q4 W1 A$ J, s: F$ l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( C# J; d% P7 m: }: r& h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 j& R+ o6 Q4 _0 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 j3 R- P% o2 X: k" m) M3 q9 `8 X* t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: Z4 A* U6 w' b4 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  E0 ?( v- a; I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 n% e& f# D5 p4 p9 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  Q) j* z% ^# @  S' o0 q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- {( j' p2 d' T* G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( ~7 ~# F/ o+ T4 P& g! A/ r8 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 [3 y/ c# X- t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" u1 C) A! U: T) k" ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ L& }% p" Q4 E& g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 I3 h5 e$ J) i8 C4 K! N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& u/ K% d# @( `8 D. x; `3 X6 s$ K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* }, y! e7 {6 P. w; b& X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 w! Y4 s8 Y% g6 d. T2 M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  h) \( M% b0 G! p" M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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