【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- f3 G7 T1 o  r# xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 f# b7 U9 s7 p0 _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) j' `5 {% \& ~% DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" U2 b4 ]4 l% J% x' EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 ~. u7 n$ c/ S7 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 L2 a+ l+ f) H  AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 \+ `" y, c  u) RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( Q' a- z0 u  A- \" K& f% g1 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 e. C' H- O( \, E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* l+ @. N5 H0 e% E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 {2 u5 D8 l' u" S$ f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) o9 L  z: G) r; Z' i* Q, H( g9 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. G& Q8 k+ F  A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" K# Z2 b& o) w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 i2 n1 w8 n& c: p, I# j" w/ t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 x+ R4 {( K5 C; C: e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 r6 i, g: e3 N3 `- w+ M& |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. W* B  X9 b0 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 j- J" E3 ~, _) |$ t3 E" v4 |% }2 p+ j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ \" R8 }8 ^. k+ f0 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- l3 K# s' f1 T9 |3 h) F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ T# R3 Y$ L' q" n! ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 Y, b& M7 `. I+ {8 y7 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 D2 q; V$ O. Z4 a2 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 x4 \: G. j. r( r; r# Q- o/ g% H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 f! S: s+ K3 Y' z  @* ?, ?; a( c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  V6 z# B! P3 X: F1 L" z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 R1 W* Q% t0 r$ O+ |! F* l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ X! c! G! s, q+ P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. s3 R: ^7 N; @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& P& O3 y* `! f" `+ W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; P! X' W* [0 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. g2 n, t& ^' O+ I0 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. b0 J% R7 b3 j5 p( c5 g, K; _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, }/ ?6 w0 T" ?7 w* e" `7 F我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- B  [: z4 A; i% x$ P) c# @! b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>