【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, ]8 C: w6 S5 a/ x, ^+ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
- H9 _% D. o5 ?2 J! e# r6 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) P! O) A! z. u! gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( z& s1 `- J3 H8 x4 f+ t2 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* u7 y+ @1 g5 p8 M- x" iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& C- U0 [$ L8 Q2 s4 x; E3 mI really want to know just how much you love me
- e7 e! L& ?/ l, U$ m6 A. Y; W1 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
# t( e" M* Y' h( W. bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" `& {" m. s6 c) ]- A- e) G% W( @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# L  I$ z3 ?' W# q* l7 W$ g- HI regret not dying
- T0 W: c# W% J7 P- @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 l6 N+ e1 X) E% S0 ~1 f, v/ lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 f5 N" ?% F3 u" q! s4 Q$ Q* X5 b& ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# p! ]7 T" c2 _* J7 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 y5 p8 K( _, n$ Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) L& Q  b9 `2 D! [6 b, |& r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 z2 G& H3 R* {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ W3 |. h# c6 p% o7 Y6 _6 d$ ~9 y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 s/ u/ Q/ \$ \: t) W/ x( G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% Z/ O1 F! u2 H+ I# W) N' v9 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 Q: O( {4 o8 a2 ~+ Y2 `6 K) w6 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ \5 E8 B; }/ S! O! Q/ h% ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% u0 k  ~* G8 u% L5 y; [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ P" i, x1 j! t4 i# X& a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* Y& r' V2 o9 K" T. q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" ]4 |4 c0 _2 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( d" G3 G* a% G+ h, l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 v: U: `' f  g: s# G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 K) p4 j, m" ]+ A* y/ G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  V0 P. W. e$ l; _: ?" ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. F) E8 b& L2 Q7 i3 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# p2 ~7 g9 g$ J% i5 q* l: V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" e' }* C/ {) `) R, K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) o: Z9 |1 b: c* g" u0 c$ E" ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; m8 d) P( s$ L- z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 @. [1 Q, k" B. \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>