【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 N0 c7 a# p! `" q, A; bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ |" ]- q2 D! @Making the sky glitter like gold,
* l# b( F. O3 _5 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ?5 i0 ?+ F: RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  k* c: s* T% k8 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( w% n8 v6 _1 HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( S& D0 g8 G9 k7 zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& D2 w& [; J# y1 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 E4 m! ?$ K4 Y/ x- r% g' eI want so much to see inside your heart
3 @) n! m% d# S  [: s2 n% h2 N" ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) o6 K' C. S7 ^, PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 |! Z9 L3 F8 T  k' _( hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 z/ R; h  A/ B; y
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 i1 X, |9 }: F% Y+ ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ W! A8 w! x( \3 M* L* l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ a; L: Y  K8 @, N6 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ C/ v; H, j/ ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* N0 s( f3 S9 i$ D( `5 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 N" C8 M6 Y, q& V. C: F8 o0 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  q( q, X# m8 w8 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- W; j& D$ w& P, U3 `; u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 C# W+ b  {) O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& i- A5 J) N5 x  Z0 O, k" r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! x) |( P* R9 L; d/ G7 k3 h( y<P>你无需担心</P>
" g. N+ J& o4 K  W) I6 y0 q. u8 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" x. i3 G$ A1 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 y* K% _2 d6 N' k4 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, {6 x) V  A+ I5 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! b0 k* a8 h; ]4 \9 r8 h4 b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ m  c' O' {5 K. w! L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; g, z% O  Q& c& _* a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; l2 \# L% ^5 [+ f6 G" G9 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: t* x* U+ x2 X' O- n9 \, E2 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" ^$ j( B$ @* }# A* h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( h2 v, \" |2 e, I' ~: m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 v  }8 [; `" z" r& e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( E+ Z* U2 Z0 e- d3 C' ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
$ J  k6 V5 S, n8 F
+ t  @) Q' P4 i# p我请你剖开它
2 G9 F& b9 J4 C$ p) ?3 y
) @2 [- |, O+ k* _  [& o& s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>