【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 @6 W2 t4 u3 @- ~+ y4 W5 Y- W& [歌词我附在后面。
7 u' k# p. E) P# d* d9 ]" c' sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 l+ c8 X. d* k' a* A  ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 `7 |& \9 n8 S' {  B1 k  SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* X1 E+ z0 N" ?& ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& E3 _6 k2 [4 P1 m2 cYou needn’t fear anything
2 ~4 i2 ~$ n# U1 i& P! E6 M: {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 M* O/ f+ ~, e' pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 B: a5 f' ^# j% ~+ K3 xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- G' h6 M; s4 a( d' x- ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) y* K, G6 \+ o' j1 T1 [1 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 j2 Q$ {: U, o7 ~* e1 t8 ?' EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" Y7 B" b0 a; @9 P; }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 s1 m! K8 K3 @" [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 I% V9 d6 N0 s; f. ]/ \4 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 H; s4 W" @, t+ X- L$ A% F1 s( k" R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! g. v3 \# S' g# T) V" u' x: c9 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 G/ X9 s$ ]: {, f- M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 g0 L) P  W! H6 b' t( O1 d- z/ g% \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* q& P# Y4 m0 M! R4 t/ ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  R. U& y5 z# u, \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 g: }6 T# v- k" M6 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ {2 y4 L5 ^/ F) v! u* H; J<P>你无需担心</P>
! w9 o2 \* p! V- i4 ]$ g8 `  g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ t. Z& R: f* v3 j' |/ {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- E! J0 R( W+ J1 T3 E# h3 e5 i4 ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ d# @: s4 X8 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: O/ ?8 n2 s" }% Y& H  z* q* L2 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ Z  Z9 _& [8 v( a3 r$ r% K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 [/ x1 ^7 Z/ f# o; @4 W- v: t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) V6 B  O( D- U' [+ y; J7 A4 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 b1 A! F; j$ G. `. E- W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 t+ \7 A; {  w: w4 _1 j( u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: P$ I3 z; B- V. {5 g& ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  h6 f  \0 u+ W8 x, w/ O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; B0 K1 v7 f% v  u5 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 ^& C1 y0 @' U+ Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 y- B/ k  _9 n6 ~1 ~+ N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: `+ E3 C% ?) f+ J" }9 ]我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 _! {% v) M. ~2 P  U9 l( B0 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>