【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% v2 A2 r6 I2 G/ J: pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 Z4 Y6 ]. p" W7 r1 y$ Q3 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 S0 J6 m" y* U, R$ v" O9 D' ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 q4 K3 {+ ]: JWith the moon kissing it every night
1 c& \2 t0 M4 _9 n7 {8 CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 A4 [9 }: A  r3 S7 {2 yYou needn’t fear anything
: e, p" j* k; Z9 B3 R8 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ t% S& s  j% V+ ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 j5 D  z" X$ j: Z* JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, C. y) J5 {) o+ y# |' X* }) UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- A/ M) ^% i- I! b. ~1 }) yI want so much to see inside your heart
! u- T" N8 T8 ^, v/ i6 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 Y# l( ~. _+ n3 t6 P  C6 U& bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 W1 P+ g* g; w: hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' O! ~  s" A# W3 u4 p! S; lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 `+ M+ A( s  g( _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" U- ]! j4 S( b/ J( f( n- v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 A! `4 s& R% M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# ]* p& H* g; D. E4 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ j7 [  D+ L2 x; j3 ?" |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! Y* C% Z/ K7 z2 p7 v4 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- \( v/ d9 Y; }* ]/ t4 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) Q/ o* r% w7 s. U# j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 _$ {3 A  Y/ ?% ]. q3 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" c7 @1 p3 J- {6 I: M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: u4 Y1 R" Q3 f/ `, b+ s9 D) l' J/ a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' {+ {7 Q* K  S: S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- o' x3 P  q- Q  j1 M+ D6 `( T2 Y1 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) A2 u# m% E. F- G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 s  p* ?$ F( K7 d2 u) k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& m/ E$ j/ K3 q& u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ Z1 y& A$ n, T/ ?+ R9 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 I. T+ {: G( |3 ]6 a( p4 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 g# a2 q3 r- @& H2 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" W0 U# J4 j. F9 u. S* I. F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 ^; z  X- z2 i% v; D: w; ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% @# Y5 X0 ~3 x# h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 L  Y2 ^2 M! P0 p! h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# @/ m  W7 Y' v2 p& I- S# k+ Q  x0 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' R& R9 Y" b  {  c* C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  M- s# l  q! C% g" P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" W6 M+ ?& x& M0 d. t5 V' s$ R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' g5 Q6 u& E3 _: t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 {9 E$ H# X2 w( g  U& x/ v- o我请你剖开它
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3 v; `& `. B/ e' p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% F: P8 s% C& ]- m; P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>