【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 \8 p% Y- M8 k- U6 m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 m3 I/ D1 j  u/ `) s- pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' k2 m% M5 |) D2 I+ M; AThe sky is happy down to its soul
  o8 J0 \9 I& m; j' c8 j( \. {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' F) }$ @# d4 F! QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* m' N7 P3 a- ?% NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 s1 a; B9 ]' ~Nothing can compare to my love
+ t* p) \8 f7 `5 g3 E7 z9 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# i7 e8 ^* q, VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 p4 P& B& g. j  n9 _2 F# E. P5 C3 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: j2 u8 a* F$ A2 e# s: O, S8 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. ^7 {, z9 Q& {/ W% ?) V! iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ `4 O4 F1 w- e* k$ A7 }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ Q6 ^2 ?7 A* j) ^9 F! MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ p: G( P/ ~6 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 K& E9 D" L# n) }) O& E; l9 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( y1 ]% M' p% R& A8 r( u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 N; l2 C' E# _5 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  u. H; h- q# q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  a) @+ ]- s: h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- n: J  _- |7 W  z. A) w, A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' s6 v( |. O5 v$ s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 o. t4 R$ O# I3 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 S! l/ }8 T% m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 A' I9 @  Y! A: c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- o/ {2 h: g' d$ C$ B+ Z6 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! l0 e4 b0 \; c- W6 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ L; T6 K6 ]% I6 p* f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: j9 C8 E% \, _& W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' h! b  L& ]! w! F<P>I regret not dying</P>
" p7 |6 K0 _- h: a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 @5 P1 M6 F6 w2 s8 s$ g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# C, F! d3 q; e8 J' I" A/ p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- a7 j/ m- b) i4 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 Q: w3 S2 \1 F( v: h  {" n- ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- {4 y$ m. A# n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ A: R) k! U4 v1 S7 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 Q9 B& u4 c9 m& Y9 Z, Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. }) H  R, j* C- m7 ?' d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>