【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* d$ P0 C/ t. c# G" ~' rThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 }# V8 y& P+ w! l) S, K4 LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) ~) @$ p" r7 OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" m+ d. E: d0 c# r# VI really want to know just how much you love me
( X5 U- }: y; m- Q- S3 q* \I love you I love you with all my heart
0 w0 T/ o$ j8 p5 TNothing can compare to my love
$ G1 s( z/ M( H  hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 b: D' X4 E. o" ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! E7 e5 z+ W2 s4 P2 n1 D8 hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( \: z. b% H9 b1 e& e. II regret not dying
# b% Z, j0 c3 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: `* ?1 B' J  V5 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( E- f/ ?! r4 @; P* p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, a% k+ u" R; x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  n8 [  O' ]3 {) d' T9 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& s. r6 V/ w: A9 y3 X* w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 l8 P' u9 s& K) y$ G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; q) p. ?# j# N, {! E2 a0 E<P>你无需担心</P>
; m: F# m/ V! S1 T' u/ ?+ a1 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 f$ M; a; q6 w$ `: R+ [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 U% Y; x; @& K% t) R& u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* y# `- K; G! `% {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 [+ ~  ~2 K  A; a4 ~6 q; X3 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. E# W1 A8 A& c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  `" U5 t4 O% ]& y% E! x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 P& @. M3 C2 }9 m, \/ U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ d2 e- c, q* o7 l1 @' D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 z, c# ]; }; {% X. E( T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 z# v6 o7 }# O; r; N/ w5 \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& K4 f9 J  c0 J/ y  T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 s3 d- l$ R/ d: g; w  |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( a$ h  r! E" X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& V) K. V0 B2 ?# W1 @  V, G1 _; a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* r4 ^' T7 R7 `, p' ^+ Y3 Z6 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 R2 {% d# T# Z# A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& S: v8 q+ D  t6 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 r- X2 R5 l2 a2 T- `# K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 U  v$ `  l8 T, B9 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, n: R0 ?9 ?$ U, h! ~6 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 d! E% R. D0 J, w; I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) c& l; }; f: J2 Y6 v8 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>