【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 h. V6 ^) e: B) A& SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, q+ g# D4 ]& C; \0 R0 r; XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 x5 \5 v4 I( s3 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; ?, I$ I3 E! HSeeing the sky content with its love
' o& S4 n- W, \5 z3 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" u1 S6 ^6 a1 b" DYou needn’t fear anything
! {+ Y9 V  ~" x8 r0 b" w8 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* i- S, ~, n. O1 ~: b6 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* T" I; I- }9 [: ]/ uNothing can compare to my love
1 u: ?4 z/ y8 i) h3 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) c. f/ G. U# h* _6 V# |4 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 n. X  {6 x8 ~, n* ^; W$ h# NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ u3 @0 c$ S# Y' m, P1 I3 eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! f. o' G6 ~5 }$ ?7 M' IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. S' T% J" g" Z+ A$ d% Q9 k4 N6 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( E' u0 C" Q+ ?. D0 x) z3 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; I7 Q; P/ G1 K+ d7 y# V0 q) n, o; O! c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, ]0 X. w# D1 Q4 M. x5 [% ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; M$ {+ V& ^( ~9 q7 {- }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 c" p$ \6 j" l% m3 O+ o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; E! @, [( x+ D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  {. |( y6 V& {& v; t8 s6 s9 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ {- i, C: [8 T" h% _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, i- J9 }' [$ v% Y6 L+ o( e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 N9 {" u( {* i' B# X5 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  J: m0 d# f; ^3 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 t- P. K# G: i4 c. F% |5 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' b9 }. I/ e& A9 q! Z' t. d& t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 {3 W( D* Y! D6 J- T, e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; r1 h* i( X3 K& P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' g* o1 f# m( V: y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 z8 a1 R9 G, D: {; `$ j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: n' v' o# ~1 g+ l0 U9 p5 C) |  S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, O7 D& S* `8 P0 Q6 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 u8 U7 Z  f/ E+ D1 I: O9 f4 y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) [! p8 t+ m2 \- f. Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 |2 @: @3 g. d; G6 c! j: [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# [0 L6 y: |0 C, L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 j3 Y7 n+ t  m; J6 R1 K7 v, O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% m, a1 z3 M! f! F; n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; Q) L, P, E( L# \* i. ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 z$ D) S. B% M9 p  z- B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. \. M% E0 `# ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 S! m/ [3 r7 a) o& L1 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  {+ f. B9 N; a5 r+ U1 @8 f; K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: j8 E* s# P! S$ F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 Z9 h* ]( o7 o+ t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>