【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  w/ f9 L& |; t, U; ]9 i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) F' S/ ]( |9 \3 u! w8 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ x% U# z6 h- E$ Z: _* P# ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 ]9 U# Z. p$ o' L/ DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) @: f) _+ I: kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; c: K# L$ Q' H+ YI really want to know just how much you love me
3 L& P7 ?6 E% w2 ^2 RI love you I love you with all my heart
5 F4 N- {: P5 H) W* h2 SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. p) ]  j& S0 W8 f- p7 F" K4 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  _, ^$ ]1 T' C- X4 _' G5 aI’m still filled with fear
) J) z$ i/ L  b$ b( m, z+ zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. C; N8 O" u3 e$ w6 ~1 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- P5 t! v: m* Z( f% x( F( b) ]With such a tongue as yours,
1 z+ I% W$ L% O; \# J1 e) JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) [/ a# g5 b4 f9 b/ N2 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( F' U$ ?: y1 L- n( w( r6 P; c3 N6 y0 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" J1 B) H4 ~  T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- m  @5 w) C" J- l- p2 t- K8 @1 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  E, M& t+ }6 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 z* j) P0 r7 V1 c, I, g, c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) }  u4 m" n; [& s8 T- T! q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, s2 n9 `: `9 E. V% C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 g0 Z8 I; w  X, e7 s* H1 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. q3 @& _4 F* n' \5 n+ I7 G8 {, ?6 L6 H% X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 z4 u# E' [6 s2 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 v8 T/ j* U$ b7 T- g: V; i/ |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 U" X  }8 }0 ~/ z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; i3 A: _# ~% i- f8 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 K2 ~/ f1 C7 [: e  V1 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ ^9 Z# E: U% G4 `* a2 Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 H1 F( v& d3 S% u- H7 A; _. s7 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# B$ J4 E" w6 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! f: _" B* E$ X0 ?" p' |& V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ F2 w+ v$ o6 j/ f, P' c! b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 j/ a1 Y# _' M& `$ ~1 {8 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 z4 n3 |& ]# ~3 G) }8 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 F% y0 d. x" K' r& v$ c& {- ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 q0 s5 Z9 @, A- M- m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: i8 |7 i) C( n6 Q( f/ }7 {+ k2 a3 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 F; Q, z+ x: h5 Z4 R9 {- X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>