【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# J/ w# C( A9 Q; s, e2 X9 N) O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 M* f/ w* h6 l, K$ s* kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 S5 S/ @4 w: k! a# P  E' EWith the moon kissing it every night
$ M. V$ D/ B3 j% SSeeing the sky content with its love
1 N2 r! N5 Z" i) w" O3 `) PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; \* s4 I* a* [, N; Q8 }Every other word you utter is love
. g0 t$ k( E1 n, h+ o9 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 z; F$ L$ x0 x) x4 [: n6 T8 _5 B) rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' P& _* x& q2 @# ^9 n/ |9 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, f" x! L4 N; zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ d% [! D' ^/ b7 SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& x) W- U& f( c2 Y/ o, F+ y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 c4 u7 h' f  R: L7 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 `$ Z$ w) K* _1 l6 `5 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 f3 r" ^" O$ ^( I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 t& |. X* d4 p6 u6 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ Z0 i7 y+ c5 W% e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. ]' @- r+ I& T* ~* v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 C$ ?' F' ~( {5 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( q. S2 g( I& G0 `/ w( U. Q/ u* @" w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 Q' Y1 f- Y( C+ a" Q, @/ [+ |& E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: L7 Z6 ]6 w+ j7 C: V<P>你无需担心</P>
- z9 [/ Y9 l3 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, x: c9 _! ]0 T0 r1 C; P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) T. K$ X- F/ _1 G5 i8 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; B! C' a& r- P) d' M! o( O, l& m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 n: }! z' E# z' P8 ?1 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ [8 Z; T0 X- e) A& _. T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% k; C4 z: V+ w: d$ O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% t* Z. W) C& m% N! g( b$ {* m; \" N7 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 x  N- n* P. m7 _, K7 w0 n7 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) Q/ Q" v& E6 y+ ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 K( H* p  A+ I8 v, Q6 I* V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 x. j4 g8 Z7 p4 Z, {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& ^: ~& ^4 o2 k$ Q3 |' T- x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' Z# M/ ^0 E4 u2 S/ K* p<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 u# l! v( P9 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. g: L. c4 j2 n$ N, p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 A7 o; Z$ o. S* Q) E- w1 {) R8 V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) e/ f2 q  Y0 q$ n3 d% Q& [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' i. a2 f3 @% K4 b5 h* P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, Y+ ^' U3 @  H! {% j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. t) O, A0 V2 m$ W" O3 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: b+ C# Q7 q8 M% u7 N/ l4 }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; v' ]0 Z- Z$ w, H9 l3 M& V% c7 q& o! W3 x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: C, E! Z+ ?) n& C0 c我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>