【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ N3 h/ H. _, g2 [: Q3 s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" G4 M3 G7 K; `" s2 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# M4 d  F  I# vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* A2 R5 K! C# a- `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 \! H5 S# k1 C& D# o. m6 J+ y4 jYou needn’t fear anything
( L7 X- |1 P# ?4 D) h4 N2 A7 H+ qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 Q# `1 G0 u' R( e# H* F# LI really want to know just how much you love me
1 y( h- ]  W/ o5 Q3 F3 e4 KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 n9 R' P! Q6 n8 r9 A, wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 K& R" _+ c) B; T3 F" t. r: }$ p0 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 U" s& |5 g, C' K1 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- q2 X# z5 c1 `* X8 Z1 r  lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ w+ f7 _! @$ nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 M6 h; |7 Y' @4 z* lWith such a tongue as yours,
% @0 G( D) N4 P! r  Y& FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 n% L9 ~" l* \; ]' J4 h4 T! A# I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( {) P4 K6 n" @! B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 x4 W) x$ E3 B% x+ C$ z$ F: a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! m) J/ p! m9 s% k3 J9 q# R7 {, g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 _' M% Y4 V$ N- Y/ L3 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 C8 t3 x6 ]6 n8 H2 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* l; Y: |$ U: p( {5 f. L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 L) v3 B# ]& w( `) m6 L- p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. d5 b2 r5 ]/ j8 q" ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- a4 e3 N! G3 m" O* \2 w2 u. B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 b, k( a3 f! }2 E/ _<P>你无需担心</P>
% L, O- d) V( Q4 K' o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: Q2 }3 m1 x* F6 q! Z% I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" X" o9 P% Y7 d: P; o" [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) a6 @5 T% X5 J+ d  x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ f7 Y  J# x2 x- X: s) v5 U: o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ O# W9 Q' c; [/ d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 H" f$ H8 T! I' `) H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 y' O3 h8 c& V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: m) A; j. @5 y/ n9 X; W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! e8 l8 Z* v! F7 s+ A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 @* r1 k4 `/ a. `7 u% {7 N$ i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 w# w8 w8 r7 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ z( i9 H8 t3 Y& ?; Z4 V8 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! G+ ?2 _# b! y; M2 ?0 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! C% |6 z  m% F5 B( D0 Y8 \) q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- r4 w5 n% \( ~) }+ f- L6 v) X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! [: k2 U$ ?4 P7 ^3 }) W* E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 k9 |1 O3 b  n5 w: Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ H; ]) P+ q1 r+ s# G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ z2 q% L$ T8 b( f: ^1 z0 M1 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ L( ]; l9 z; Z2 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& B) J! i. [8 T" D! h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>