【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 o$ l* d( l" s, n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: C" `8 ^- r, l% \* P6 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, U$ g7 H  R) G+ J) FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ Y8 @# w+ h1 ]% i4 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- q9 A0 I% v" q8 d  i0 P; OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ \  i, k8 h8 u- pSeeing the sky content with its love
8 G2 i2 \  r# r! M0 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& a  j! r. q; B& z' ]' hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ w  R% A) M6 K9 x; ~! v2 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) F. s( u, W) F' m5 z1 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 D5 i; r; k6 a  q3 GI want so much to see inside your heart
2 A/ n$ I0 I4 x' B2 `& O3 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& g$ ]2 q" X7 n4 r. QI’m still filled with fear
; k* f) @  j9 nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 Y0 i$ \/ N( N2 C/ {" A( BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ q+ H$ X$ X8 K1 H! a; P  UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 Z( T" w9 i! Y' C/ b  I3 K1 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! I) P& Z! M! k; q4 M8 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; I# L5 d- C6 }3 k  @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; ~3 o4 k: a- p4 ~2 Q9 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 }8 k6 U) V3 _' [) Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ i$ H/ m  x+ \6 H8 z% Z6 _& o) @! Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 {0 u6 v) f* k: [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, m& t9 G; I7 l! ^1 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 C6 b+ d/ i2 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ k" N7 J" E, Z* t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- Q* X! B7 C( v9 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 W% y% R: m  g7 |) ?8 |5 i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 @% t: E/ }) @1 s* R: a" s' m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 ~; E( F, ^1 y: w$ V9 }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ N" p: j8 K* I+ R' h3 `3 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& l9 @0 B5 [+ E8 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 [! o2 ^6 I  I& N$ @0 c; @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 t7 a* N6 i+ C: G9 i- r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' E) T& n0 j, Y. k1 e1 N+ ]0 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 W& z  i( J4 b  x4 \  Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ~6 p8 h& R) `" x3 w1 d( D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' j/ q9 D' s* E: ?5 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 i* P3 ^0 G. r) [6 f* M5 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! c/ m: M7 P( a! \8 j$ u+ Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 _: A3 M6 k% H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>