【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 Z( z/ e& ]3 P6 X+ b; U4 T( u( n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  A* i0 `) J( ^3 U2 I5 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& b+ Q: n2 N/ p" QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ G! a& J% A! X& t/ D7 y# f, O- kThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ t$ U$ @& ?1 K* J. e3 P, cWith the moon kissing it every night
' A2 w. e1 `( D' _: t( ^Seeing the sky content with its love
. Y5 ?" X  R* UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ L* N! G+ l0 r& wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" _, o# J  e+ l4 Z' rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 s+ Y+ M" u) q# e6 f; s! |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 F8 w1 |. r5 f. W! C: }4 R& ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' |. c9 w( m# L  y! kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) d( E/ h; A+ CWith such a tongue as yours,
8 B+ ]  J7 X, PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. a4 R0 t; o; G; U/ u- p5 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, s/ `6 C6 \4 J3 T* q* K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! K. M) ]# T" q" F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( i+ D: i7 E% d+ z# z$ t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 ~* m! B3 ?2 h( s0 o3 {$ d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) |% b# q: D. R6 z! K# |, \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' e7 z- P; E4 e3 c' m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) ^0 K* ~+ h+ i% ~7 k/ U% m" S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, A/ K3 S9 B, C: Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  I8 p; P8 q  s2 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% J' S" s0 t+ `7 }& V) A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' Z% x, z! P6 P& a* l8 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) S; a, D" e6 T( y9 O" ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 O2 _6 }( X/ Z0 X  L+ ]& }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! U* i( ?! b. Y! d  L9 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 D( `: R. A& ^1 u' F7 N2 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ \3 g# b5 W  u. ~. d9 P( g5 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ i) U) j* ^4 \( z$ m- b0 S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) |6 `4 Y) J$ ~! I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! U1 u3 J( t* v( |3 {& r+ z$ Y! z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, v  j: @: R! {- Q! K1 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. f( e, o% b$ m7 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 ^8 e+ u1 H" I& m5 e+ _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 ?& `, Q; G2 z! A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 l; M3 c( U( }: @0 K2 q<P>I regret not dying</P>
. \% H6 i) M5 Z+ W& d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 A# s- l: Q- a0 }5 e- Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, X7 N& i1 u- W( F. A0 U4 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 J! ?0 H4 G8 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ m( T9 N0 G5 r( z0 q" z7 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% m( ]9 ~9 H1 J0 @- U我请你剖开它

4 ^" ?$ D& V5 |& ]8 K" Q/ c9 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>