【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 b5 |: `9 K2 n% QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" F. B7 z- Y4 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: m% y5 F) U6 r2 _. W- U0 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 Q) z$ R) D: s  uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  M* J! l0 K! N) p  i. |- y: iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ g7 b" Z$ n# E2 Y! Y1 E! o+ nSeeing the sky content with its love
  \; @! r& t' F5 T: d# `  B; ]/ HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: e# c# j$ ~  x6 x  ]  D, U( pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: V# k: V" I& Z9 mI really want to know just how much you love me
* v( z$ s, `2 s) G2 G9 P% nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) F2 x- z- z8 W  m$ F- }+ l0 d! |% EI want so much to see inside your heart
) \9 Y# G3 K' w- i- |' x1 D1 @- ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) e' P6 A7 \$ u2 g, r% h7 iI’m still filled with fear
7 C/ V) }- r5 p4 h' ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 W: t* v7 V+ F  TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, Z0 e' c3 u( [/ F! Q1 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 o6 B4 g( Q+ [6 m; R3 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 x: h, V. y/ _) X* D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# y% F, e, ~2 S! Q  E6 Y1 j1 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 `" k0 P6 s' _, {! ~2 M+ _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; _) n% }/ W8 p( p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* ?3 y/ ]7 V- C; ]* {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 |2 A& F& d) v) j2 _0 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ `. W6 o' o8 P! L3 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! F" u3 P" e. I) u  U/ S, p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ j  w" o, c- O+ F0 k( k2 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ N6 Z" L1 O1 u+ d/ u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. N0 n! w# W+ g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& B4 ]: d0 ?/ p0 _- Q, @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 e1 K; l$ y( u$ D7 T# t$ G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  v3 _- Z( a6 w9 A& X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* i! }& `' u" \8 y7 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 V6 E2 v# r0 K: c  u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- I& j2 u6 }$ w5 L: C# z  j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' z+ S. c/ v- c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ r) s3 T  ~3 `; R: z7 p  @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# p2 j5 @1 K/ y! T- I: i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 {$ K1 m* Q8 v! ^% O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ u7 S1 q2 p9 Y$ D1 C3 }" ^3 g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* ]3 {1 k, A6 J& W( ]. W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( {9 E2 g9 r% ~0 U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>