【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  }5 ^* a' j) X6 F; r3 B" d* ]歌词我附在后面。
3 `, L9 ]1 S+ {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 H: l+ p' g' l  i# g9 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ O  l- v2 _* y; g1 M* b8 G' bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ Q8 ]1 H; j4 y$ y, U& n# IThe sky is happy down to its soul
, I4 \8 I) U2 K7 \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% O7 x% s! @: _: b& e% lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# n1 ]/ G' F) G4 J7 }! E  M  oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ \4 F) a1 w$ f( x' ^: t8 M: hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& v. d  j8 r; C1 R3 e3 F7 pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* P8 v9 j2 n2 v( z! G: ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 d) l, j" K( W$ q3 Q! oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  G, i% N. g% b. k! d! PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 Y9 a1 \4 Q' V# ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( O6 O3 |- `7 f$ w9 Z7 F( L2 RWith such a tongue as yours,
8 m8 g. ], w5 U  P4 ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 C. u8 D% ~" kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* G' r8 q1 f% B$ \' w8 N' Q; \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: @5 K/ p1 H7 ]! b8 \6 H% d. i2 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( U, M7 h$ Q. B0 P4 q' ^! N/ e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# f6 O8 N% H, I) z0 ~( V! b. k! |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ F; J( f6 }- \. u* N5 D7 y$ c4 O8 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. V+ b  m: i# h7 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! ?* U$ L0 n$ D* t3 n3 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ v3 V: D  T) M% ~' [- @( M, r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' s2 r8 }: a' y6 q7 m& V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; A! r+ ^. s- B+ t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, ]) M1 t- `& [; P- P' n- _% I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 ?/ O: }. j" N% Z! y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ J1 E( |5 J/ i" [; |  E  J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# x1 U/ I3 U% Z# z4 c0 t: X* M9 y6 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 `  T# o2 W4 @& T: Y7 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 b! K) D* M' ]) e3 S- m! l0 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 E# \) m8 q- |) r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' |# w/ w. g8 ^- j: b" V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 \+ O+ B. A5 C6 p7 Y" c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 X5 K4 T3 h3 E0 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" c1 `$ d  [# K0 `* X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 b% w0 V' P" i$ r4 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ ]7 f3 P) f/ u- i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( M, K1 b+ c. Q5 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& D: _0 e2 s4 ~# @$ _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 n5 q& R: x$ l+ S! m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>