【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. B' Z& d6 I3 |  F/ G: u$ f6 W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) u9 N6 b9 x$ a) p+ @" L' f& ~* NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( D7 e. v4 V: z/ AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 U, L! l% p; m5 @6 B# D' q$ o4 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 ~3 N' n3 O' b; L, UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 f5 P, w9 q  d$ o: VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. @" g6 k& J& `& d% GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. K+ x; T# Q" ?: K  b+ kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: R9 g! d7 q) d3 J7 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: p9 a. t" {' w1 V" qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  N9 e9 {; S" jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; ~8 b$ ?4 _, F, _% CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& W' r2 p; k( v, C6 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 f% V$ H; ]' g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& u6 B9 d  I% }7 ~- j9 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 I$ ]- x9 |: ^% V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 C2 D0 h$ |3 D) a/ M& |( Y/ Y* ^. L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 j8 t% k9 P; d3 L+ q# P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- W9 v4 Q, q9 m% O7 t. p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 z1 O+ |+ w' Z# ?9 {& O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 S( r: ~1 F7 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 m0 }6 N" J8 z: h/ z) E) r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- q/ ]- `1 ]# I" {) R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 |( c; Z3 |! U' U8 c+ K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 `  }4 ^1 X0 X6 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# l% d/ `4 \% Y5 B3 |+ d3 t* R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 q9 b  E1 x7 k9 o0 l0 ~) ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& v- L' {$ ~% l/ v! \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: r) g. p5 B1 a9 v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" T! ~+ i- o/ p& d$ }6 s# h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" U; ~1 ^& T6 w3 K6 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( ]) e; q* o% W. T7 k, ]& B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  O4 u+ _5 ^! Z  u7 o- b+ ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 y9 E7 V- K9 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, c0 ?/ Z' t) W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# M( V- n! T- W; Q, a6 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ c0 f% I) T  c' w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# o$ d- }5 A# S, x5 a  [& _3 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! q% x% t" N: k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 p, ?2 S& ^, L- }: y, n: ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; i2 ^3 Y8 @3 M+ a3 M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 \* t/ U2 j# c我请你剖开它
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3 ^  G6 Z1 @2 o- {: e2 T6 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# ?/ o" j4 l7 a  q. \( d, [' @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>