【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, |: S* w# @0 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& g$ v; a$ v4 U* I( o( B8 P8 jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; q7 ]& q0 b" e, I% |With the moon kissing it every night
# K+ V1 S; b& Y8 N- d1 o! r. DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 s% V- c. P  u$ dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: E( X2 |- L4 x( QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 M- A( N+ z. N1 R; c3 P& M0 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' S; t8 l  j5 x$ g  f+ K, KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 S3 J" d1 e# Z7 OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ `5 S1 g# K! B. fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! u+ w3 F, C: R, ^5 W7 i, N* uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; e4 p0 |4 T* m( ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 Y/ K3 l% `8 c9 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  @& Z" C0 r6 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- T& f0 j' ~: W( ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, H( \" |7 L; j* j& d- s( K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 L( P* k1 h6 z/ ]* y$ Y. w2 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' c" q2 Z- j7 z+ p5 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' H0 F  X( j7 h/ c! U+ ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  L) R" `* S8 Q6 ^. C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ I  m% X5 }9 x, ^% ]8 w4 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% n$ l: N# I7 Y  ?" @3 c+ N% i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  D! N7 ]6 ^% a/ K0 r- E<P>你无需担心</P>
2 a* W6 Q& w$ d" ^3 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 T: A; R8 N, O/ L! s; z* P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* E5 q2 B" ]6 E( X% U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* F- u8 z* }2 g, r  e' z/ s9 j. R5 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 T  @+ z1 s3 B& y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 [# V! c7 |$ `8 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& q1 }( d6 }, {' {, {# Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 n9 C+ c) |9 `/ x8 F) s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- V+ [" V. C! p* n* {5 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  \( {: S5 f- e- m9 n) p2 a* Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( y/ l% R6 ?' r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) O+ q$ k& w9 D. d" n, u; [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>