【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# J& Z* {0 ]0 [) g) J4 G( AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# |+ ]8 ?9 {3 f: I7 {' T; RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 t# _7 L2 T! ]4 z1 t. E% i$ eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; D- m- X9 k: `) ]0 b/ \" RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" e+ q- S6 l$ \+ v7 M, W% eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( H: |" }% x, {' J3 ~! Y, b5 kNothing can compare to my love
- y2 e  z6 R) o/ \& j3 ]2 ?2 A! ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: ^# v9 _' M6 r) O, \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) m4 W( C/ G7 u& D$ [7 a' b) eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& M) P6 F4 g  N6 e3 ^With such a tongue as yours,
9 ]# W' T4 C$ ?6 m& WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 E1 m/ u& y% u2 b- iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; v1 ~1 Z3 K* ~! b# L/ Y  X: u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; N- [% ^# w$ w3 o0 M! M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" Q7 O6 ?/ i! N! d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: I# B# {) A2 f8 S' h4 o! _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, n; E4 [# u+ t9 {' S- b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! X$ H, h3 g$ m3 F, Z4 {  |, }, x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; W% ?5 V0 c3 p* g; w0 C0 ~3 {) w6 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ S7 {' R  v8 r+ G- f. ^* G% M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 W+ ?, A  [4 }! I) C9 v8 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; i1 X9 K, u# d  s+ K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; D( X2 g' Q! x8 p; R) Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  ^/ n! h3 q, [% G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& R, f1 ?; g7 j4 f* t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ j" E( |( S3 J2 K3 q; A/ y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: q$ J: W' \# v" g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* B# y: ^* a2 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 D. T/ x2 w8 @# Y. D: d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 f- m: g! H: M* R" b2 K$ C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! j& ?: e, d% b( k: D9 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) ^4 Q- `# b% U  l4 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 x0 r" r' n( p& ~. q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 K& M7 ~2 e) v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. |( z1 q3 E4 H8 r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 g2 A1 B7 T* Y2 q# w7 [4 @; ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& \$ R' z5 x" E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>