【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; H+ E9 Z3 @# k+ ?" j5 {# HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  D0 x2 ]" A8 }3 ~! t: m+ G- ]& O0 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* o$ p( n% G& V0 n3 R, p7 OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 @4 w9 x6 b- I) q  I" uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  `: i8 u6 T% i4 i" ?, Z! z' xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 v* T2 u5 T5 X1 `! H0 t4 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# a$ }( K/ N5 _( {Nothing can compare to my love
0 L7 G# q) }: m  _0 ?. NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: Q* f, y( V4 }0 [2 W0 `, {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' Z' a3 z. I, J/ PI want so much to see inside your heart
4 @/ b% ]6 T$ d5 K4 ~1 G( n- QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 R8 g4 C) t2 J9 N* D/ r; v3 OI regret not dying
; P2 N5 @2 t$ _  l: sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  r$ D  [+ B2 O! `  oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' W# t* P4 z' a2 r9 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ D6 E9 ^2 \0 }4 x1 K  i+ F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ d6 y. L7 A( a7 W9 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 X3 ?) A# E3 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ ]% E& s) K" @2 S# c4 |3 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) U! h5 q/ D8 x+ O& K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. K' O* O0 U2 q# z1 |. O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) P! R5 m. y3 R" {5 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 \3 e  c4 Q1 k" E# i7 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; b6 W* R0 F+ j% \# \- Z7 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" E  {8 M" I; B% o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" N! ~& E/ `8 A! j) C: n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 c/ H& s' j2 R+ ^1 I( T8 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 f0 `' N! h+ A4 B! @$ r+ Z$ o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  s, E! z# Z. s7 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* i& L9 a, @) Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% R' e) z. u. l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 p7 d' {2 H( y! O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- B3 T4 B$ @; q# B. y3 r* n$ m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 e3 X2 ?) U5 j1 P0 }1 t6 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# V) V" B+ D5 l* h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 \- ^# D0 k+ B& {- W" }) M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ G+ p# \0 _" R& X  \) L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' K2 V7 F# O4 ~3 ?0 i5 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 j0 a* V9 \8 s  k( q, k0 ]1 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 ~9 f/ ~" }5 T. g$ ^& O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 x7 a3 e3 x! W9 @. X) s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# f1 E$ d0 l% @  T) [& D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( L( C$ a5 J" |9 O5 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- q7 R8 U/ w# \& B1 F$ D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 Y0 g% i: o! k3 B- F7 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, L' D/ q; y# ^/ |$ a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% Z- t- c# _+ j" P) D; q  U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>