【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 s  M! L$ M- D歌词我附在后面。
2 r8 r  C* r# m  r7 }: m# @The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ m7 X6 }0 N4 v6 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 k+ ^$ U& o; T& `& }* ]$ @; uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( K8 B1 v9 a/ |- qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( f! |; ]7 t+ ?4 b% F9 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 i* d1 j; c, f5 d) o$ PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. e! v1 h, V- G% NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* H9 E4 L$ _8 `& s: kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- _- {3 }, Y  @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! r2 F8 e4 q  C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 n& J! E6 t" h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" z9 D# S$ W) f3 T6 Q: c3 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; g+ R" {, f$ g( D$ }. H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) \2 b. V+ o- L3 T$ c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) [: l% ^8 \$ m0 N) F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" f) O$ ^% I( O, e) }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ j, x4 N3 f5 h5 {9 V4 g' t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) a$ N2 b$ r: F& q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' [* T7 ]  p* t$ D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' |" {9 W; v1 L<P>你无需担心</P>
# f% o) h0 l+ ]: {& K' F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( L% y" i' a& }5 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' ~' A/ I3 ?+ R" S% S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ Q+ X3 I* y5 |0 Q' c. w) L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) W  z0 [0 b/ w9 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* n3 P2 U4 J" `0 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, o, J+ \% ]' Z# g; I8 G$ X) y6 L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 Q- N$ s# F3 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 I$ M" t" P, ]# h( H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- W8 ^5 d! ?5 G: m0 ]3 U7 E. f; `+ B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* g1 T* Q3 i1 u" I% T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 W# m: d& ]$ x/ X0 Q0 e# f7 H& b* \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 ~7 ^" X3 ?" D" A) S$ i5 q0 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. X  K6 i0 d. d8 t& b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# _0 j6 r, u$ m& M6 u. Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 j( _0 a1 Z/ K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  d+ |8 T% E! S3 z. E<P>I regret not dying</P>
. h& G0 o. I6 P4 J3 C; A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( y; j0 l. f  K5 n" \8 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& h/ W/ V& F: J: ~7 k5 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! q- k; q4 b; Y4 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) A4 Z8 W! L( B( I/ y7 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 w$ V% p4 Y) u6 A5 s7 w" w3 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' {8 |! z. e& r# S' N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 l/ y, P" D, A) A% N2 \! m0 g+ G' ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 v' ?4 ], A8 p' W0 s+ y/ V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, F1 U( n7 Z. r' `4 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>