【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 ?7 y8 e( P) n$ ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
, e! l( h; v8 e9 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 A2 G/ D( r1 v/ fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ b& @( ]" z. ^8 Z: t: @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 }/ [& N/ e; p2 R+ dSeeing the sky content with its love
8 E  b; O. B6 T7 N$ f" |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& l5 k0 x( F% G1 W5 |Every other word you utter is love
" a$ D& ~/ ?. ^  mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 d2 x' Z4 ~. E% l. e4 V0 JNothing can compare to my love
# U4 J7 [# ?& [5 M- n$ \2 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! g) J: ?' e3 Q" }8 N6 lI want so much to see inside your heart
1 B7 Z. E6 S& u7 a7 }8 z" qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 D+ Z, A  U8 SI’m still filled with fear
* Y; `; }! x+ h- k' N6 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* H0 `4 w$ U  I8 L8 g1 K; _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 P$ t1 C: o0 L9 K8 O0 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' d& G5 L( G, ^( z4 K2 D2 n& |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ G( z8 z8 ~; b  }, W; n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 w2 d) T1 \7 \( k2 [, O0 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 h) G* r; ]4 [) e: e/ K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 ^* F0 m( z) y3 Z4 a& ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, `7 {9 d  o. }/ h  n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 J3 W) x9 S8 s  V( O! A- R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, {1 F7 B* `  F  V) ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ V! j5 Z- W2 E' [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 V8 O. P) v2 g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: n* @5 `% [! j3 h9 R: ?) N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 g; w+ F3 |- k- n$ R1 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  U8 A* `& R' a# v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. y- k8 G2 D* t+ \3 S, y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 a) g$ e9 J5 \; v' f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) x& j6 T. ~& _; h/ }6 @( k) X; [7 \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! \! F- q& }! o5 `2 q8 n, a* y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ x8 A- J/ O3 y0 P" O' O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) j# _3 t* J2 Y8 O" \  j0 z% t& a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% Y$ J0 c9 G3 i& `7 I* l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 G5 [8 A5 Q  p" \2 ~$ j6 _! \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: G0 q# z& z$ T5 o! |1 l! U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 B# H+ w  _$ G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

! r* \/ H. [* u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: [* Y% j8 S0 v( W8 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>