【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 c' _! ?( t# m) MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 G+ o6 E" N% g" Q# p4 y7 S* T' MThe sky is happy down to its soul
& x6 O5 [& H+ M9 b: t& hWith the moon kissing it every night
. t% |' Q9 v" ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; l% V. I, I' \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 |2 d' w+ o3 ^1 H6 `I really want to know just how much you love me
; n5 f3 r. j3 t) I" dI love you I love you with all my heart
5 t6 s7 C: m( A9 nNothing can compare to my love
% F  B0 ^) c# ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ [8 D+ ^' _7 C: EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  h' g, b; S5 l: d6 j* o& \I want so much to see inside your heart
4 r4 b, A" m) b3 x; M% ], k$ d+ tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 O3 U. }& v  i0 n8 \& G2 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 Y* n# ^  p4 ]) c: `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ M: o9 R0 H' q) j1 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 x$ Q  i, U+ G' W3 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 h# p, B; T, d, b. n0 R- o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 ~  n5 Z: S0 r/ `& {) c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ v2 C$ p- o6 k1 v% J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 {' F  F7 q1 x% r0 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 |5 ^/ f6 |+ z3 t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 s* I- ]# C( T& A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 \* W& l# b5 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' q( t" A. q& o* Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' V1 y; m- Y7 s( R+ n6 ^) B) D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  g; n/ \" T0 A5 U9 P: m' V2 `- o9 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, `1 G# f4 X6 e& ~" ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. [0 k0 N+ r, n- A1 O0 }1 U% C- B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 z, \4 m8 \( Z, x) G5 n- H, d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 z. O9 C2 J! {! V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, S9 D: a7 X. U- D. ]" {+ k. i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- D1 V% U( N' f% l5 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' Y: Z; E. c/ G* ?+ Y- e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ P+ B6 {% E* V4 k$ r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ B7 V4 @9 ?( _, u# A& W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" m3 H$ o- P# R/ z$ e, B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 d& z1 z. Q- V& p) C# `5 D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 c! h( @8 d0 }6 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 G4 X/ i8 Z- k' l: U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  o$ T% E+ Z8 `! G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- n, \# B) F; w7 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  A1 }/ v5 J2 y; j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 \# j: c8 W3 j4 E5 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 o. A- q- Y( e! ~0 w+ G- z' @1 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, D- _8 x4 |0 o+ d$ q/ b2 \9 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ \8 W. W. J* z' F- N" P+ Z# I0 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>