【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# @! J& T7 F1 w: H/ \- E' N7 T. {: R歌词我附在后面。
5 S/ L/ [, F% bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: [9 t9 f  ]1 E- ~" s* x; uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ X: A7 C0 s* [# L6 S& v+ cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: s6 M- {% }" ^# g1 W/ l: LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, A! z  G! N3 E3 {; k, ^5 S: }- o4 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ s7 V5 ^/ G* i0 T4 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' d& q- y, U$ `1 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 m5 N/ q6 G6 O/ l, a6 q) GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! w% u; z+ m2 m& A3 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 B( X* S/ x- I2 g2 @, V( FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 W8 l9 T: q1 G+ ^5 r, N: m; m1 ^6 p! lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. m/ X* b& J" ]5 A7 P0 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" [$ ^' k$ ~; y5 N! K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# F! o1 \0 \, b0 d" V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! L0 b) C& j! M$ s+ J: \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. _% A+ {$ T: G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' p/ f3 J) F5 M" h- {: v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; }1 e& y: I! l" A, w6 n" l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 X  A* {/ S7 m: p! [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* p- k9 f+ _' y& k/ x1 i7 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 l* Q9 M) w8 J/ M$ q! r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 @+ b% v9 u5 [4 {( G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 B" X6 m4 {9 H9 v" M0 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 M: \5 V4 Q) d/ A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' h2 }' [# q4 U0 \( w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( a5 c7 I4 `" {! l0 T8 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- w* C# x' ]' L# J5 v! E( w( {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& H  j& }( v* E$ @6 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% f7 i& i+ k% w! h: O; v* s% Y8 a' L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; \3 b7 U9 Z3 r. h6 e- v$ |! ?9 R2 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  v' @5 P0 T1 E: P9 S, R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: O2 i$ E* a+ [4 O% M) E7 J1 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 _/ n* c4 V5 J) j8 I7 H3 K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: H) f- U% b0 b; Q0 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' T$ W- L, {% b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( R% F6 T) L  U+ V5 ^3 ]5 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% T3 L8 L$ N& N1 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 K$ |+ Y9 k. u- q  o  y: ?- y- H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 w$ t! u2 N/ I5 E' U1 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ Y' e" r) ~5 W! ]& G% A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>