【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ f2 {1 `/ |( Z8 ~9 ~' ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
- ^& l/ m' M0 J6 z( M8 i$ fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 Q  y7 ~  h2 r2 i- m, @2 ~, ^3 u% XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( X, l7 T2 p6 t- E9 d, nThe sky is happy down to its soul
( ]( X$ l2 I7 P6 P) v3 ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. K# S) K# M/ o; }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) i+ e4 B' \4 y  @0 `You needn’t fear anything
2 y% q7 L/ H* PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' S! V+ s! z4 A+ d/ p# hEvery other word you utter is love
. I8 ~) \! w  n1 E  X5 jI really want to know just how much you love me
% k& X- J, c& B! II love you I love you with all my heart
1 H1 R, p# }9 z& H: }+ S% i. RNothing can compare to my love
/ o9 N4 `/ j# ~7 D# Y6 Z& d6 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 H! R$ i. u8 g3 o: yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 K: G3 q% V  X0 w/ x3 W+ yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 S: ^$ ^6 F4 M! PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ E  b# q( ~* [3 u- v7 U: O- vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& N* n0 |2 a+ J; J  z+ DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! }, S( g4 K# x1 p7 ~* vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 w: h& \1 }* I  D, l0 S5 f( i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% h( q! c! J, q7 [$ e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! A# A/ \' G2 I: e% M& _7 f2 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 x& ^0 ^2 ?% }* P* G9 p; L2 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 g: z6 Q. r/ p$ N: Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 d' O, y- K  e% L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& ^) H# k, R" Q+ Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 s$ @: [$ ^8 H, m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- X6 N: z9 V2 y- g+ E* z<P>你无需担心</P>
  N5 Y' W. X" P! n( _( S4 C% \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 D! g  g( \/ S! P7 F% Z- }( o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 a; w6 r0 z) K. ^% a  j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ i" J) o, {7 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 m# a  G% E5 d9 s1 `2 p) _7 Q: O- R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- y* d: \- D& I# }0 [4 w/ D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  ^/ }( f* |  N4 M3 ^* A$ w5 a. V- M: w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 D2 o' }: Q  P( [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; O. F. U' B" p8 }% U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 J4 I% K- m7 h4 n5 S" F1 K$ k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! w! x3 P9 z1 S; u9 E) G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 {3 U% K  f0 d4 X' t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 l+ _& b: x; T, ^: ~0 u3 _. Z( x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* S; _  M' G, n$ u1 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 r7 N* x& V8 R' U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 ~5 ~* ~' q' z$ w0 w# {% [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 R& }* c: e" U& v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 E! v- |3 y$ C. ~! t3 B* x: f" P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 V# E' D0 F, V3 e$ C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# m$ ~. M8 ?  X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! ^. M2 R1 d' W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>