【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 o- O+ W5 f8 W8 S0 ?6 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 L* K4 s/ d5 w. }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( k7 R& {, n9 f/ i" E$ HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) h6 _! x  m9 {- bSeeing the sky content with its love
) V# i- u5 o: M( Y- FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ k. v" x2 ?' n" w( s7 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* s$ u: F% E/ y' Y& U' PI love you I love you with all my heart
( S8 n: g" S: P. m& B% j# l7 eNothing can compare to my love
: e+ R1 D" E: i  A. M) m, o2 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. s% [8 W& R/ f/ q, jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 c! \, R$ c- B6 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: \9 {$ h: O; l8 v# ^9 ^" b3 p2 ~1 ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  E5 ~5 A5 `: S( q8 x, m5 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 d2 t+ M7 o% c+ c5 M# O5 |3 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 Z- S5 H) R$ c2 ~! m1 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 U- ]! V  s; O8 @9 \& n/ m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- I& R6 ?) c: I# [- m8 `# l8 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- g5 |- g+ z* F5 _" x; S# I, O  ?% T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' A8 ~" F; X" z2 ]2 P5 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; M2 J7 u0 c: l6 h- p% H0 P; y" N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. y! _) o# }/ f<P>你无需担心</P>
( C4 y; Y1 v- I( v" S2 d! E$ Z6 h1 A5 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 D' }" |6 m5 \; f) M- U/ z7 ?# k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 I  ]$ q8 ?+ k3 U/ u) p- s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( n. I9 \+ F) O' y+ [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# L7 ~/ |4 C+ J% n) l' Z! V5 i$ s6 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( [! ^) {" \- J8 }$ L' Y$ ?: G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- f' {8 T+ T9 a9 d" ]5 {2 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# i; J; X5 R! U7 d8 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' i  F) r+ B/ d& l5 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 e. q2 [4 X0 J* [3 H$ ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 z- h4 G6 F1 C# E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! [1 G' Y1 G/ {8 K7 @4 U0 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 V! o6 [, g1 F0 Q( q% |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 {5 N/ d+ T" e# S6 z( q) M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 i7 [" B9 f: O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: J3 w" D* C+ V6 \  ?  {( g8 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% C2 S1 Q& {3 G: ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ q+ T4 n4 E* C2 r. G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& H# ^1 X- _; ^3 J4 F& J' H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: K. ]2 @  k. a' C/ Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>