【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 K) p8 g! _0 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( Y6 H  ~) f- {  ?1 C6 ?3 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. C5 L7 o: a9 L2 h5 z3 R. D. fWith the moon kissing it every night
( \% }5 U8 H2 b  v  E# N9 k2 B+ \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* j) i/ |4 U$ oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% f( I& _- B- Y; sEvery other word you utter is love
' {3 D' |: h5 dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; @7 y& ]) p% U/ q: {" rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# `: k0 K# ^( q) K6 g; kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 h5 q6 O% }: ^* W$ ?I’m still filled with fear
  P+ g* o( P7 P, O- o* dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 ~- ^- @2 _, C+ R5 Z8 H  w% GI regret not dying
: Q; v/ f6 t6 ^6 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& E1 @: E- N- D* `/ n8 fWith such a tongue as yours,
* T1 a0 d/ j6 j( Z* _! y6 y! d3 q( lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* n. r+ y  ]% s6 C# K/ _% L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' G* R- R( \5 }' H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 p# A7 t" {2 K- ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! h( ^7 K( w# I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* g5 ^5 W0 S, N! N) s7 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. b( m2 I  g: ^+ I- |8 U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ W2 y. \  b2 z9 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 t% t' K5 F3 n% ~  L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  [; W$ b) I) ~( O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ N1 ]2 i+ x* O! o4 U0 @* `1 n* p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 ]7 J9 g! m1 L: E& ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ b# }" j' K0 r2 j! S# F4 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( E$ P2 \  z2 O. |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 ?; B+ b8 W, t2 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 K0 i9 \  _4 N, p$ }% ^5 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 q! D8 f. t& C2 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* i7 ?  V, N) b$ `& q5 l( F9 M- y* w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ [! T" _9 ^0 P' n5 ~! t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& ^/ ?/ {1 I5 u( t$ C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 [5 d1 r+ D0 ^" F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! l5 r5 |  \3 Z6 ?' _0 f+ \* v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 b" C* N8 `+ Q2 f5 @. ], S! u7 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  k. j1 i- F8 x+ F8 g; b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: u. \* b+ }* r/ V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# C) O8 l! b8 w8 N( t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. R( C# H6 I" t) M- n& \' g' M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- ^& N5 C, C! n% ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ v# _2 x7 p$ T: n8 A) y* @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 Q0 w, P! b% C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 j! \$ c! W; |. V0 `0 K+ r8 T# P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 @% }5 ^! z6 I) q+ J3 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ c& z' x6 @5 `/ @! y7 B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% e" E, k6 y) n! T  l+ C+ K我请你剖开它
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$ b, L! E) j% Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>