【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& Q% F* q# b! W/ l# B歌词我附在后面。
. ?$ N/ d# ^7 J8 D- {The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 r) w! y; z! ~/ ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 e. i- |' Q6 n/ p8 \0 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" m- d' g. a6 b" z3 LWith the moon kissing it every night
" T; d( |( ]2 X& ?! E' USeeing the sky content with its love
/ k: t4 E, i# K. q! z4 \" ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: ~/ y3 L0 x6 p4 M/ i5 j0 q% ~I really want to know just how much you love me
! v+ v7 }1 r% u6 T4 TI love you I love you with all my heart
, I- _5 X5 Z  R+ ~& x, MNothing can compare to my love
) ^& G# y* K: h9 o1 u4 ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 w+ l% s, [6 s8 e0 QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 E% Q' A( P" V$ H' b2 WI regret not dying
# H( }" H: I: f: B: OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- K9 x" X8 {5 W! }, GWith such a tongue as yours,
9 a3 c# H6 M! oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' x: R8 k7 e) I: I* T3 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% H- E! s" ?; y! t% e! E2 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 C, H, b, @( I3 _. O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ b& N7 T* B4 r; b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( n+ e+ v4 F6 q4 Q5 P/ A6 C8 ^: t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ o& @5 c7 w$ K" I; T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* R: [# K+ p( p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* R9 B5 `9 b% S' o4 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 l5 ]6 Q/ B, G) y" A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( |  L2 x  d3 I) ~& Y  J" p' i# s% h2 u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 B+ Z: E' p2 J$ d8 x5 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 Z& u% E* }. I! \+ C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) @8 P9 \: @  g+ h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! M6 }3 |& E, v& k2 R) f& g& N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( l. H$ R8 v9 H7 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; X6 }- R& }  W0 t! V0 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& r2 ^# M0 ]' O+ F* M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! F8 P% g/ Q- M; g" R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 b. M* ?! ^) i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  d' C5 Q, D! w$ I$ O2 m  {6 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 O0 ]; ^/ ^; q5 l+ Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, ^, s0 k5 Z) f9 n6 O  o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  V  C6 H+ @7 a9 |: \9 n# ^  e$ H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' W& V( L" G& \6 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# ~: T# s1 n/ P+ v& D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 {' {1 F6 Y+ [0 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 X9 Y. z+ r% f9 i# |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) G5 t! K8 N- `& j( e' f: [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- f. B5 {8 N" M/ J0 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ \! V* F$ I& \, Q( a: |! k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 |5 w) K% w5 P, t2 C) I. N7 Q我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ D) x+ G$ ?* S9 c8 G7 U; K8 W/ N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>