【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 l# A3 A* B7 H+ C4 W- m4 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 W- \: B6 b# N  f5 y1 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ o7 [& E5 ]  ~8 J' |0 YWith the moon kissing it every night
$ u& r4 \0 f. l, bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 R6 c, m; Y( p3 T9 u- tYou needn’t fear anything
( H* S" I, o, M) V9 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  T1 _% M' P* \' S3 D! R' B. l4 tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. O" n" b" ?' z/ s0 gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 m" z; H( P+ v4 A5 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* g" ]! f8 Q. I( }0 w* w+ i0 qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% J# W% v' k* l) OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  m' ?$ d; G6 D2 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; b  k4 a$ u2 g9 @2 o. M$ H$ rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( k( }  J+ N$ |2 D8 S/ eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 l8 B( A% [; W  V9 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, L0 T* p; f$ u/ ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 v* l+ V" B8 o. K8 P1 g) J4 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 q! J" ~$ S# j8 O0 m0 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* [' V2 F! W2 \& L2 s+ V0 ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 T) M* ?+ F( ^: d* k( t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% ^& t* k2 c1 ]6 {6 ~/ Q1 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' A  d( ^6 @! l& I7 z$ n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% T: n1 S% i0 r. \' {1 a, S# M8 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. U# _  s% f- M* t- o4 c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) @  S1 F8 d: k# f4 B& ^! \& j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; s5 V6 i$ U* O+ Z1 L- V! G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- k1 B  ]7 K) [  r6 A8 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% J# D6 {8 b9 ^4 M1 b" V7 B/ e5 _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- q5 F4 _- r& n9 `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 O2 t" G% N6 ^& ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  l/ o  i! S9 I) U" n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 U1 B: |. O  z1 V9 r" g6 n5 f3 j3 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 v0 h$ t' N5 u+ \, |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ g- P' t6 m" ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ?- d: j3 N( s* |" E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 n( H; @1 x( @) z9 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% R0 b  y+ }4 v; H- O  W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& ]8 b0 \7 w- A  L( R; V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. O( Q- f5 u1 m! x; b1 r" s0 Z; P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, x5 s0 `8 T4 S7 i& q* L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>