【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, ^( ]4 R, \3 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# z7 R+ x1 G  XThe sky is happy down to its soul
* ], B) T# D) x9 Z+ t/ CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- C* ]/ O$ n$ |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& I+ c. e# O* zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( J9 Y+ \& ?9 l& M  R. e+ lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  E0 K, I9 |: i2 N/ GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" w1 ^7 h0 X6 ]  z1 [& BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( f  U: g$ a, l0 n# |0 ~; QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. y* k8 x% a$ u  b0 `! m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. s) x0 `/ c. d0 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 L5 ^, R# R: I, t1 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! D9 A: k0 u* {# c$ K: n4 f2 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) Q+ X4 Y2 `# y0 p* E2 I) ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ C. E, {+ \! @4 J: ]: }6 f% f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 w& p- p1 U5 x4 E' \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% j! W. y$ E; x! \# K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, Z) o7 M- T4 R" G  O7 A% v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! H3 x- H: u- C: \; n% K0 C4 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 C8 B; a8 r! z3 n7 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ w0 t7 B7 O  U$ ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ R; `0 w/ u) s' L" ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) v) Z% F& `. S. \- X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' T; Y4 e4 ]; w2 Y9 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( a: h9 a9 r: f! z% D' w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ^" [6 k6 Z  m+ f0 |& O6 X( _! h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% m9 o9 ]+ J: m1 x8 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- l; q$ [! x9 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 B! e& C" v0 U& U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 Y3 S9 e5 e( _% A8 T3 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& r. s; ^' _( y; e9 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# y: W! `7 E; M* w2 Q& T* H, k<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 }) ^- F, i: b9 Y+ ^3 F% V& ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) T/ b0 q; E7 T# d1 n5 X" b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 F7 R* y4 f4 h( j% o  n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, Z, r; ]& t1 y0 p4 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ K, R+ o" b9 U# b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" p0 o. u3 E1 `' T) F, Y7 m# j5 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>