【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% r, \& @2 y  m2 N4 u7 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. I& B. S* @' I+ WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 R( r3 s* ~& c' {  W+ {The sky is happy down to its soul
! c# A+ R4 K7 M. E/ z5 bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% m# p) g) q+ |' e; m$ F3 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 i5 o1 d# O9 k; R  NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- v) |6 H: u; a4 m% wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: p. M* C) E. u& r3 t& [* E! M- QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 k0 o6 H( e: q, b6 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 ]2 E* L0 y$ D8 D9 E" pWith such a tongue as yours,
4 r! C5 m5 `: m8 M# W4 k0 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# G/ E2 B5 I* g; q6 A* dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 `" b( b+ _# V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) y. v3 ~. k/ Q5 i2 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; m% s) I! V3 `$ Q# X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( d  T9 |/ T2 T% w" K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ V7 N1 z# u$ E  `) o2 A0 o" Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  f/ r$ H, d3 ~4 l  E9 H6 a; u+ }6 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ s9 Z% {" c5 M' G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 s2 M; f) Q4 @; z2 F0 s3 Q) V$ U0 }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; E: [: n/ F& `  I" Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; Z( n6 v8 _" C. U; [% C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 E# \+ ], j. W. m4 @2 B4 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ {) ?, V" @* a# S2 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 I6 O  U0 m+ V! z; b, m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ b) J4 ~, g3 _1 l! Q9 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. }+ K( p1 N" L; [/ x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! V7 W: l6 X) m, n# G5 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; y/ v' ]% S. x5 m2 X& s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 `1 Q* e% u- A* o, Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, E' E# v9 W; v/ g<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ W0 Y; V# D7 @3 ]" Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 a8 C0 g1 L# l0 ]2 \6 W7 c7 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& U* ~' n5 ]& q2 j  B( g; D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 l, J7 w' D2 F# s# D. t8 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: X* e/ y2 Y+ D# b7 i. G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: g$ w7 v6 l' R/ x( K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* U  a' o" f& I0 l5 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, Z/ T! u) P6 ^8 K+ Z* a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) P' ]: W9 {1 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
) }; U9 G% Q  W2 z; Y/ V# Z
& J' R4 w* H8 e我请你剖开它

) y! I  b1 D5 p. G! q8 d8 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* S# p! t8 ^5 h* F9 }# y- i% D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>