【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" L: c9 e" v2 C! _5 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 r; ~/ y* X9 p8 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 z! E$ o! X! a6 v/ R% g+ V  jThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 V4 W3 I& {7 h/ z$ r: MWith the moon kissing it every night
/ v$ Z: U6 I( E* O  f/ KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 A* R! v1 u, [7 V9 g$ @& a8 |& [7 FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, B* p: R$ q* H! A+ o+ T8 C$ uNothing can compare to my love
% _7 ?$ @4 x( a' `8 @# LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! h# {$ k! }0 ]/ P9 FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* o2 f7 X, D2 MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% M+ E- @( z3 Y8 F; a) w) L4 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 E% u- K! E) K! p6 y2 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" E2 [! A* H4 V; I5 i0 f1 b7 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  b) Y. T( v0 o- Z, a8 S* F9 `" N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# B: Y! X# P% J; w8 \6 L4 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 Z5 m3 i" }  I! B5 i- X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 ^+ V4 q; G: ~: r0 }3 r1 L/ n7 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, i# \& k4 p$ b0 H9 T1 B. A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, J5 U9 m$ h1 i/ J+ a# O! C. ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 r* ]) H  d. Z& O: N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% J# I2 r3 W$ R" f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 ]- o; G: C/ L1 P" U! L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) w2 r' r% v: f+ @/ q+ e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 ^, g0 a$ l& C8 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. b( m. F- G4 G% M' P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. N) Y8 F9 O$ E4 [* M9 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! y( T+ O! N: Z) k% e: m) {, f8 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* a1 {2 U' e  \" ^# l- U/ v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( p* a" L% }4 s: O' R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ^- p2 x8 L4 [/ A6 k" z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 _- q9 Z8 s) R; x  {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' n# i4 ]# R7 ~1 r) G, Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! d5 ^2 N/ g4 U" Y0 Q' v$ k- p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% i' q$ I" P! W+ s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 R3 A% h# k5 j: }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 `" Y9 F2 X, |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, Y* v3 t9 n6 H7 O  ^# l- ?3 S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 q9 {4 ~0 N. N5 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 ?4 t9 y5 I  H/ u% X% M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 `7 |: x1 `6 J4 j8 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 w/ z6 f( M2 {+ M& A% ?+ {. n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ A( h" Y$ }, b: C2 x/ U$ v2 f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& G3 ~5 v# z- Z; f" v* c3 l我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 B# }& I/ R. \- r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>