【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ t# ~! A. y5 V. l$ mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; H9 N5 ?4 x" EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& A6 G$ T8 u2 i( `- IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* Y% q' G( \( D/ e. D( R. ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. u, |' T; v6 Y) j6 tI really want to know just how much you love me
$ s) a4 L4 j  N1 r2 W+ F7 sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' ?5 l- O' w4 z/ N% N+ O! x( bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ p, D6 g0 W6 v, w  L2 JI’m still filled with fear
; W& |2 E1 _5 |" {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! ~# R7 [, p- e, oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 J# z, g  e/ v" t2 o; x, m! [With such a tongue as yours,
% ]* b8 G* @( _/ k# F2 |! P/ uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" P) w& ^; W7 u) j) VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- z( L' u# b2 Z# C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# ?+ R9 N- Y' j1 k, c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' f5 M2 `  N7 q1 P/ W  @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& e2 u6 c% }1 M6 m$ ~% k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. l5 l9 L+ |1 r4 U* Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. n5 `; x3 |8 B8 b( S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ X1 {; c( `" g. n  S' I" l/ X+ @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ]3 Y# p- s( B) a' D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 A4 m7 m0 W0 `6 q/ U; \1 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ a7 O' [+ N* }+ n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! S# Q* m/ b# H# A# J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' N4 I; [! c( ]2 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ E  E" r9 u" k3 w, W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 S1 k& l1 d; N- w' j$ K- Y- D4 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 M$ B! v/ [& J% s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ ]3 {; ~# W+ z6 A" m: a3 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) b# b( H+ `/ G2 u' q# i* ]+ i% x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 j3 l" s. Z- B# }8 O, k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- l7 @2 w. ?1 z5 V7 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! w* D) {5 z/ Z1 \2 y9 n" }" S* i0 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( d* p0 }5 I' T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Q) R& v( S- Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 C. @) q/ W3 n$ C4 |8 b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 ^. i# F" }4 @6 o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, n4 J% ~8 `' d5 |' y1 w, q  {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* j+ ?* d: j! Y3 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>