【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 M- W3 E/ ~1 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. Q! q+ y# R4 B, o0 n, O! [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 Q3 F" {0 H- ^The sky is happy down to its soul
3 J- z6 a  i( iWith the moon kissing it every night
; Z! m3 J  O, X) c( NSeeing the sky content with its love
) F& }6 x, p# ]& C4 NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 k6 B8 O5 ^8 \; g7 zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 L8 h) W4 N; n/ t' ?: t( U2 pEvery other word you utter is love
0 o  O, a9 g) r8 H# X0 qI really want to know just how much you love me
7 y" l% z; `( Y9 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 t. s0 I( j5 w4 K& \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: C% n: K. \# U% t) XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* _* g1 r# ]) I2 r, g# FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 I1 Z: e* @# B: |. n9 n. {With such a tongue as yours,
4 k1 [1 Q- f; D+ o* p5 c: Y9 U3 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. d* x( K% P/ |; [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& x  C& F( O1 B1 D: I, J: c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 C$ ]9 l5 i  }% ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 ]" O+ o5 q1 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 l  K- W# K  Q# L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ c- Z# _8 e# a6 O0 f7 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 I3 a, C* S+ c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* Q' P' }  Z% C) E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( ]% W4 x; D. i6 x2 P2 G% W2 `5 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 O: q+ h6 O) c4 h) \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& o9 ^4 a& x9 W5 G4 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- I* S- k  H; T, w/ o$ j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; }1 l! f4 H' V- {  M' Z6 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& v' ]" f( b8 o+ R4 U3 V/ T$ T# [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ [% H  s7 b7 s! e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ Z% q4 f' ]' F2 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& l) S1 X3 r+ k9 ?. {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 v: o2 o: T& e% N3 O9 |3 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 p( V4 z  B% x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 F1 g% n6 Y/ f3 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 ~5 m3 z! T  \- K2 j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 H4 J8 K: y% _, @& F& k% R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( S7 P5 l+ i& v6 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 f3 F  l, R+ T7 G9 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ _+ u/ J5 R' L2 O9 D! ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 p( H4 G2 t- q5 } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 @- d  H( _0 x% i0 H  }' g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>