【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 o% V+ m/ s6 T1 H/ A+ H' U1 f4 B5 CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 P/ c! T: S, q( M0 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 C! @: d5 W* ~1 j- PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, Y) o1 |/ x6 OWith the moon kissing it every night
" `* `$ s: n0 s: CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 P( R; z% j% u2 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; \- u! g- Y% L6 N0 ]Every other word you utter is love
3 Z  Q3 [9 |0 t% o. zI really want to know just how much you love me
* |: a. O7 Y9 y; _+ s  d8 A, aI love you I love you with all my heart
8 k" {5 _8 Y/ s9 J, SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 n* Z# S4 t. kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 }6 M0 D  X2 M% u% eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, W9 d8 T: B# a+ V3 o2 ~! ^# hWith such a tongue as yours,
4 L3 o7 F9 f9 W' R4 o/ wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 n1 e' W6 |6 x9 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 A, V. m, O4 g/ u# M- ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% i7 A/ }7 Z* a  U; {+ q& W# ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) S+ T2 G: v0 E+ o' o$ M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& s4 L! N+ b2 P9 T. [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 {& c. }& ?! {. W3 e5 B/ K1 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 x6 p! D7 G5 Z! {8 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# E- W0 r8 N/ k6 D6 ^8 [; w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' o$ I7 s  Q$ A% G# B6 x1 v! d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) I& J- t4 C7 w: b0 T8 ~; n7 s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( Q( P5 A% s$ I% j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 X- X2 F: [# v3 e! a1 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& m; {% R( w+ N; P! F/ r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 J+ G' k- V# ]5 @/ a9 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 j" F' }% n' z( w5 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 g+ D( J2 a# F6 p0 W' \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 b( @+ x8 o& f  V3 O  W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, D3 j5 w( s2 ^" @4 X% G; ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 v' l' o& T5 E( ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 z! R8 _' Z+ x7 i5 ]0 }% u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 r; ?; Y7 n# U7 o  c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, {; e6 l3 Z  t; d7 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( S) `+ T: C  C# n3 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 @2 }: S" E* G) u, j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" t0 o- ]/ S) D5 N+ f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 \+ ?. W7 V, g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  ~4 a) V- e, q: `, `3 \( i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 _/ v6 K5 \4 [) f, b  Z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 f( B9 K( Y2 d1 K3 n' \' {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>