【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; P1 L$ ~. c8 e9 d  l) S: y0 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 z% ]/ k0 g4 Z& V! d0 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ d$ U4 n: l. q# @6 hWith the moon kissing it every night
. x; e" J3 W9 `8 l; g7 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 B$ y; a* ]: U& P' j* LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! C! |+ C6 r& U* bI really want to know just how much you love me
# U# ]8 ~0 ^% f# a; R& wI love you I love you with all my heart
! p. U0 F$ I! n' h( x6 R0 xNothing can compare to my love
" V( G) J0 w0 M2 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 h% J5 ^1 H( ?' ~7 _. FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- P1 p" h: e% b7 r. x" ?# r# OI want so much to see inside your heart
! O8 H: E8 }5 j4 v+ T% ~9 P( p. DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# y# l0 l: ~+ V8 ?' x5 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ A& v! ]5 s' |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 N* O3 _/ D& q4 S7 p" \, ~With such a tongue as yours,
# v, y8 I" {. r  e; \6 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. m' r# o% O5 Z: U8 a4 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" i5 `& g$ j# R+ n$ w( k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' R; k; Q. p" V6 J( `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# h. ~: ?* W7 s! L# W5 {5 x" G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  N% R, Y/ p( Y* c8 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 T2 q  M2 |9 }; @  E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 d: t: c$ i+ x% }7 N5 n<P>你无需担心</P>
* H0 p4 V' ]$ b& G2 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" f8 Y1 N% J: X' M, H4 y- {! E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ H5 s2 [5 Z% U/ E" H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( ^/ a2 f2 o- o0 v6 C2 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 c6 v1 ]1 f9 n- ~& n$ u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( t3 c' Q- r/ L! `' W2 g$ p5 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- {8 k5 j9 _" s' k* J# s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* s( A' e0 ]3 M2 w5 s  X+ O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; I& e. _5 L% D5 J$ d# v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) K: H' o( `* u( M  `, @( p) I+ ~3 G# s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' {! M- n# ?6 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 O5 L; T- K6 }1 |# D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 N' Y6 D0 u, V3 W5 p! f6 J- P- {: }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! ~+ n" ?" Y& l' Y8 y( _+ J% K7 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 m) N* ?& S% F4 G$ Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 |- [" J, W6 W+ G$ s0 y- V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. T$ D: i8 n) q( V0 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  H2 y! t& [, l$ r! u* r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 N& \+ D8 U' {9 p3 n我请你剖开它

/ H2 r- N' v2 Q5 S* p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 @& S! w. H* S- s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>