【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 m; z! H" \2 @" @& iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 ]4 X* J2 W; MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 V5 n6 ^6 G" J% B/ z% ]& Y4 \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 m" f: ~) I: T. n6 BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 }+ N  R4 s7 Q, G" V9 ^4 \4 yI really want to know just how much you love me
) ?0 S0 G8 v. vI love you I love you with all my heart
! A& x8 f7 w5 T' u3 d( ]Nothing can compare to my love
/ F: Z) ^, ]" L! oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, j# X4 k3 m( ^- N8 QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 J  r7 Z0 ]' P- aWith such a tongue as yours,
6 K  t* n2 x, }$ F9 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 a( t, M1 c) C3 k6 p4 F0 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- s/ F* I4 _. a. r; Y$ ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 A8 D) y! u, ~! t8 k3 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! X( k6 w, J( E, P: U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: L# x* t5 {  }6 ?0 ?3 N$ k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) Z1 N" e7 E# j+ i& X, b( p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# T: }  n( N7 c7 C  D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% W2 c  z) N: v3 j/ G8 [5 ]0 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- n( t8 ]! u4 r7 U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- _8 _- J! H# G) y$ d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 v7 q( V* M& Y( h7 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! A$ C" h5 B% _7 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 i6 C9 B5 ]( ^& B5 G( Q- U6 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! ?# }' u$ t! Q0 @; K' {+ f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 [1 Z) S6 `9 Y' J; K. \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: `# |6 M4 E' |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 i, q+ Y9 j* ^2 F7 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* b2 g2 w% T+ N5 `$ L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 a7 D3 M* c+ A4 q8 g6 {$ z& ^/ V0 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ r. b+ T+ t2 S5 w6 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: z. \7 z& ~2 Q; W  Y; B. X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 v% p/ a! i% f  o9 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* h' p* S5 S- F1 N+ D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 a" R% G( m1 q% {; P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 o- S' \8 e4 P& r* z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. y1 Z+ ^5 R  P' f& p1 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ u! W" k0 g/ l9 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& Q0 x/ a' c% Y% I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( w7 i* K5 q0 _2 U/ g; Z我请你剖开它
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0 f# e" D; S! [$ o4 K8 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>