【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 L" ?  V: G& c7 W5 L歌词我附在后面。
/ `9 t, F1 M6 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! w9 X6 j7 r& Q6 t" fThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ C+ H( u: l) z4 FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- R. g$ ?( q4 GI really want to know just how much you love me
% E8 `& y0 K/ h( B% s8 w" i! [% ^I love you I love you with all my heart
9 [* e) d* y7 G9 R) {# A% I* a' cNothing can compare to my love
/ i  l% P; n: g. E! _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' R, v9 G3 t% V2 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( K- r" c2 t: m" G0 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 ]* r9 R9 g5 _+ }) G4 f! eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 F* w* u9 ^; n; mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 s+ R4 W2 u! W6 k! a* U: RWith such a tongue as yours,
+ i8 h0 ]. j" _7 a4 W) {" _: BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& S" V" c% l+ _2 ]6 P* a  h" R4 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# ^* }) I2 \1 J) v" JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' V5 M1 N, r1 T- T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" q- o/ G$ A* C* S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( t% P1 N* }$ ]; w! Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. o! x$ J+ L# E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 b3 _3 C1 C9 x' T0 C6 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 ?; ?+ P! d5 H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' Z% w$ Y- w; O7 @$ a% Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ x' {7 V0 {  v5 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( z& s/ ^( o4 t9 b% C7 m5 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ z& b( V8 Y; Q; I, ^1 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) Z. l) ?  W6 n7 Q. o+ Z! R9 n4 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 s$ U$ o0 A$ m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 s6 I" M0 K8 b* v: {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 _' T4 X6 e- D# L: `" }( Y3 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 p9 |( ?* I, a% t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 Q  q  e9 D% `, J+ L. Z! f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ @$ x; V9 S6 \" G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 I$ [8 x* h/ Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 T8 t: w- Y/ z, X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: Z2 ^) @% X# V$ A$ D. ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 R+ d9 Z( U$ z. p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& |4 y# }; {8 J3 q<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ J2 m/ J2 p6 H: d( K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& p- l( n# B) h4 d2 J# e  F# y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: |& ^+ x1 z( l4 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% b, b1 A! O/ a6 ^5 e+ q( m9 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 p6 y3 E5 @& `. o2 [" K9 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  a! ^- {  k+ b' T& i  K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% N9 a" G! f/ e) ]5 P+ A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 H# z# D: x, D" ]" r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* W  _1 o3 m2 c8 a- X2 U9 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; ]2 l4 {7 D! H3 f5 @, U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 H# Y- ~% m4 f. X3 N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>