【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 s5 n7 e* ?& b& W: ?: iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 }3 L# x0 z6 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" ]) @- a5 L5 B7 ~, _& [6 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% b% K" c+ {: g* _4 c8 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 I5 V2 H  t! o; ]- zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) b: k/ J, S5 w  y. `  _$ z% N7 T1 W) IYou needn’t fear anything
0 Z0 v# t4 b, h* DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 R+ t( X7 d7 NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, F- m/ e3 m4 O$ ]. V3 `( |- |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  V5 [  ?2 H* t! hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 z+ X  Y8 o- S* }" fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, z9 C1 o7 c9 L" h, E9 WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# f) `  ~- ]( [; X% n' E$ iWith such a tongue as yours,
) x" C, K+ G9 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, u; Q9 x; z: D6 ?) z+ g8 M" \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 b# o/ `! Q: Y, }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 A: Y5 f7 u% E3 ^! Y* H/ |& T% J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 ^  R7 ?+ r* n, r+ `& `" n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; D# ?$ c  R$ K' A8 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 }# H0 d) e- B7 X2 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 _  |; C) Z  `" \. j; N+ W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ u- a/ I6 s3 `  r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 ~7 Q! d+ ?7 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 P: S2 n9 D" {: S+ ?# }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 v( p, X/ h+ W- u+ u$ X& U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 m4 u& w- N' M1 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 w. L7 ]  @+ Y5 t& k/ [6 r" f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, F2 |' y& ]( V/ h, m4 q/ @( {' t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& R  D0 b/ h+ k% r2 w* p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; T6 X; S$ E( ~  G. Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 @& y' Q3 C0 {$ j$ k* U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ t+ z4 I6 p  ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- M' w& J" {; n" ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. d, y! r8 U+ H+ u8 _9 N, G; v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 t9 Z( N+ U* {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) B1 i2 S- {& \% z7 N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  h  O3 `% X, `- i9 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 Z  M8 ~; L7 ?1 h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 l1 K9 ^) N6 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- ?+ p" Z# U2 u# [$ b1 L+ Q: {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ ^: D+ p/ F- L4 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 b$ H: n7 u4 ^; {) L/ P; w' h( E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* x1 @% m& K  e. G% ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: B" ]4 S3 B8 y" \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>