【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 L; H& A, _# m! {7 B- G. rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ t* m0 O4 M/ g3 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 w6 g$ v  z0 k1 m/ eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) B# ^9 V# _; A0 T; B% a2 A/ YThe sky is happy down to its soul
  B* I. t" q  R8 G' P* H, UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% g1 g- V2 q* V5 W  V; cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% X  i" v: w( S/ b) sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ a+ M$ q' I: l4 B9 w1 E4 i7 LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 i& `( T5 M: I, R) {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# R$ R: P* r# y6 E8 {0 C2 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 S! p5 B+ N4 ?  N* nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 c3 l; f! [/ r' r/ N7 k$ jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 {& W7 ?5 ?# n1 E1 X& UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* Q3 q% I7 m0 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ \0 _- U8 a% N* b! p9 @, a$ q" r6 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 h8 d1 L/ q4 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 m* o+ r4 L) T; ~7 W! w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' Z! s9 d, k/ ~* c' ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ p7 r: Y2 t) `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. Q0 m0 j1 W' A+ N* J' V# m- o! N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  B6 R$ G) |" h2 V2 r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 K! U' X$ o1 B6 i- O/ x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 [' Y5 t$ h# P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* f# g' \2 W! c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! I: M# y! ^+ g8 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ y; F0 K( n! l# ~; W<P>你无需担心</P>
9 a8 I  u! t5 @1 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) w: @& [7 R# e. b: l" h+ n+ h+ R$ J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' L2 E4 f: N0 g7 K, v$ _5 ^0 ?; u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 T1 Y. a5 Q9 c3 u  e) y& Y. J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 K: x' V7 @9 j' W7 ?$ t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. [" V* Y) V( j  M6 Z; K4 l- w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: E8 J. }, V" u) G& w2 G) R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! m' w  G4 y3 ?, M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 T6 d: K- L4 e0 x$ [, y& o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ T' b5 z+ Y* l' |, j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& t; c' N/ J$ x+ G6 r# D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 i- n2 _/ H# M- X' e; z$ [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 }9 H# C6 C5 E' X<P>I regret not dying</P>
. X3 M" M) E' c/ k3 q) R2 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 A' t# v* o1 L) _" ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- j" M1 r( o/ h9 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 n3 u: H! E7 M! Y9 e' z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 Z+ q, F: B; z& W6 v# ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- [3 m$ A9 A5 f4 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  _$ A4 [, N! I8 b- t% j. L0 }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>