【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ L1 w5 B) G' x7 ?9 S4 [$ F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: T: {1 \6 }: k( g; q5 X6 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 {# K3 u) u" d0 ~* M: FWith the moon kissing it every night
, c/ f( B' e8 {* P5 Q  G8 qSeeing the sky content with its love
# ^. }1 g  g4 I/ B3 s- A3 I4 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- w! x' }8 G/ s, e! GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- }2 W# H+ H/ p9 t: t- lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 P/ b3 r# w; Y2 _) eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ O0 t/ i) m: O4 ^* s# fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; O$ ]- ?8 _6 v0 I  jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) G1 c* C" @' i+ @" W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 u  S4 K9 M% F( i# `* s3 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# X: A7 J& Q; ~4 O5 Y  R2 ^8 _! q# q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" a3 E9 a# W3 ~  P- _' D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: I; E5 H7 t' ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: \; D: M  o  J+ h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, m5 h3 p5 S& n  p. U+ O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 A8 N8 q- n2 g- R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 M6 q9 G( ~) t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& ?  G: x. K6 M2 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: O" ]$ x. c4 a/ h5 }; ], Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- k8 ?5 w( [' J/ O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 ?4 T" O: u% J+ O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# V2 X/ L* y1 v) k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. q4 u) ~  W- b9 x- x4 C- w" o8 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ g4 z' W1 n/ `: C; d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 r0 W$ s$ H0 H( p+ n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* f2 a2 A9 N% D& R0 I4 b! c  P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 p8 \. d% o! l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! r8 s$ M/ i( M; E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 d3 [' l4 D8 n! t, l2 N- h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% r* O2 g! R. m/ t6 r8 P: @9 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' ?$ G7 M+ d" f5 n9 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 q+ L' y4 O3 Q2 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& j% ?8 D+ `& c+ A5 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. [* O3 e1 l2 z' d3 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. K! e" j3 w* a0 [8 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 r; s. V$ [- M3 j# {3 j( ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! x; s- S* b& w  T; r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ `) w+ z5 b! i; s2 Q. J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ }- M" l' _, {1 |' Y: |% f  z. |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>