【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ B( [7 R4 |) S: T歌词我附在后面。
/ }: ~4 |; q, Z0 v3 n) t* aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: U1 o% R4 g! P1 G$ @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# v3 P- L0 X5 e8 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ `2 @* d$ m- m0 k9 LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, E; Q! p. h; y( X/ iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, e, i* F+ ~- HYou needn’t fear anything
7 j0 }% e5 ]% m4 m, G. kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: _  E8 T5 S7 g# J' z6 {I love you I love you with all my heart
% Z8 r; `/ d- b, O- d$ H. H. rNothing can compare to my love
: H" z9 v& J7 a& G! r2 z- BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 q- @  S; ^2 r6 N+ y' J! tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( a+ F4 F  x* k; lI want so much to see inside your heart
7 U4 D( V- ^/ oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 }* ~) [6 Q* {6 I. p$ T( ]2 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. Y2 H! l' s  D7 P1 J2 G7 U( H- \! Y7 JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 h- n7 a8 J: v1 [  x! |# _- kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 k4 d$ t2 I" U$ Q# fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) l6 N# G% Z) Z3 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 A. x$ k) z, a! a8 E3 [  n, ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& D0 S- q9 R, p! |2 E$ W. e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ a2 }  E8 S4 S9 f5 J  V. t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 Q& f  h6 s( w2 l) ?! z' z, b+ O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* q1 {# c+ a/ s+ l7 C0 [* U. g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. g% n! e0 v( q8 B5 g2 o% N: o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& i: E+ X7 B& n9 f: N* z8 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# e. o1 u- t! ?7 ?9 M6 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 p' v) v7 h; f$ P1 v<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( G  s: k* S- B' C& D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 R: M' R& o9 b! F  |0 J  @0 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 j- S8 a. r$ q% y2 j' l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 B# [7 u6 W+ h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ L* A3 B8 Q1 a3 N2 F* A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# Q/ Q3 e( Z( Y8 ?# L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 d" ^. @3 f  L! ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! o. E) Z- c: C. f* B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. d5 C/ w& G  m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ b) n! n# N7 G% M) `: N# H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 X  s- Y9 Q! l0 C7 \! H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 r: N2 F  W+ ?, n) O" e) w& X7 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) P) b5 Y' w$ }3 X- `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 Y) s% N. K( `) l; P# e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" J; B# s& U0 K5 L- q0 W' {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  ?; A7 ^7 t' C5 X! W1 P, q7 L+ K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! D# F4 T" @- H/ N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: \8 U) `) W; a2 Y6 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ h; e9 Y" n' r* b# h8 C) S* W' b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

5 @+ d$ {; Q2 l/ t( g, n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>