【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! Q( n! ~) P( }& Z. IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' e! |' j9 s5 j4 n( RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- S$ }6 c$ Q% U% ~% |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, G2 i) W3 Q# ?' C1 a4 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! T7 u2 S& r4 C! ]: [$ E, f: B- II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! Q. @" X$ \( Q) ]. k* FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 `" b# d* i, ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ C3 n3 J% L/ f6 y- n  Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% M0 [0 c8 J' }; F# [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# h- J4 \1 k' n5 ~( W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. z5 V) M6 F' _' W! s; `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; T0 U) e  e$ ~- \; N, t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 f$ c; V, f+ j/ _- U% p( Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# ~, G# {% m/ X6 @* @1 O+ E' }  E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! W- o2 H( t. p2 z$ |+ f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 ?! X" U9 {! M9 W6 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 T2 T% L, _, p7 c: S$ X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* A3 b- e( @9 k7 P* j2 o8 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  F& X) o; Q# O; m2 W" g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 P2 K& q0 D7 v5 h5 x0 T7 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 B/ u  T& Z/ T# G# O; i( T' V  w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: h  ?3 d. b$ o) a8 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 a+ P* L/ @) G0 w! x2 ~9 }- R1 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 ?% h& Z8 y4 i7 k4 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 a9 r3 B( \. k$ n0 U. R  \2 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: s6 q6 f' o3 K1 ~5 P4 ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' L: Z" \2 }8 w$ ~- {1 w" n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ F1 ?8 _9 d1 v6 _$ N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( j- v0 F3 k# N% R& k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% M  l; G  T4 W$ ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ q% {4 s8 C+ U' g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 {2 g; Z' Z' s: H5 m; k1 g7 ^0 H0 w1 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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' o0 j, U. `. l9 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>