【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% n2 X( Y& I5 r) uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  _: p2 Y7 N2 M- kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& m; X' d. T$ A0 u3 @. @The sky is happy down to its soul
) l9 P! k6 m  {* J9 lWith the moon kissing it every night
" P3 S* J+ T: @. a2 Q) G! nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 w$ |: c! g, _5 r+ Z, k  v8 ]  r- g6 J: s! YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ M) i1 }3 m( o. Q) OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. p) G) p- D# @% |; o8 K  ?+ LI want so much to see inside your heart
; i" N* r2 z, b: ]7 Q9 |1 R* cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( a3 j6 R& m4 }2 J- t9 ^' cI regret not dying
3 C& t% t) g9 }' K* u! T2 i& ^0 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 i! l+ g# V, z  LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 @0 t) C9 a$ \, M3 s7 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 y$ k6 o* O: N/ s" xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ {. `$ ?# A% \% Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* w: S) |: y! I7 I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& H. M, ?6 X& D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( S: R+ f0 V' w# Q! A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# N( `2 u+ `( a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 C" ?$ u, o+ `: I9 X# e4 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 P/ R1 b8 [7 k8 M( p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ h1 C8 P  L( \  \) k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- U9 r& D' s3 a6 @, l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. Z; X3 F$ I5 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% M- [# ^9 }) {! f0 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" `' I6 \+ d# W( X, Y1 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" ]  p0 K3 j$ Y# Q& t  W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 \6 c/ B% R% n3 `. M; s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' r: Z! [$ h+ D- s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 k2 f0 d2 h' ~5 R- e$ D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# G6 r* g8 _. V2 ?, Z0 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) ?# x0 c5 k3 Q+ U7 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. }6 X  Z& g& b2 D9 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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+ z0 M* P3 ^. f: D* R5 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 L! Z( V5 n) x8 I8 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  ~/ c1 o8 R% G9 q" K0 N0 Z, g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. D3 ?3 `' Z9 }8 J4 E* v  v  J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( L0 m0 B% r# b" U+ c3 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 d$ u8 ]' Y4 T) r2 W8 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 `) t; u, B* D  M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>