【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, @8 H% J( o0 _) @/ nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 v% ]1 v/ l' B) d) sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 ]* B7 K7 q9 o+ L  ?5 w' m$ O% ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ b- b/ x% m% o& C$ E" J3 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
. P- Z; J* L- J$ L; z# _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 }' a+ X1 q2 M/ R; j# fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 B) j8 p) e6 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 Y7 F5 c) ^1 t7 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 z+ y9 O+ N' q! m  G" |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 D8 g1 w, ?- h# m+ VI’m still filled with fear
  C3 L9 v( h9 e8 M3 U9 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 ?) \. p% h' v* a$ hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 R$ |2 y2 l+ l% P; o. ?: sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* s) m! R0 v6 Y0 D" iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. H4 X) l* k! f0 I) P+ ~! MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* W% Y+ \, ?  ~" t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! i" \  F) l* P! p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 f8 h" k" y# P4 o$ ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# P6 V9 }( b' j: m4 E, ~7 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* u. C; J  z+ u' D9 M' y; H* [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" Y1 L1 i& L: Q) K- L5 z: l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" C6 Z0 a4 S, |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 ]. f% l5 t) M" M; R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& i% p' B+ {) V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# f4 _2 `* M8 k- _* l) M# \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ]& J0 q/ B1 c% C' E/ V0 ^, @, `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% d  ~$ d$ [) R1 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 I. X4 N" d: p. E8 L8 i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 H3 d6 y9 e( C& Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- E" U3 M: [& _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. D+ ]( d1 B. o1 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 [$ t* y6 O" R. W& @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: l2 a* g% K3 w7 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# d* J  B' e6 T- m/ i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) m/ A  X, E; B! D$ L: F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 ~" c2 P" L- R7 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# L5 g, H' Y2 N! B( X" @  _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- Y. x. E% ^9 j& X7 k; K% Z+ _# p, ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 D$ x0 ^8 p) F7 }0 W) n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 u5 C; ^8 {3 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 J3 Y$ P: o! @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ~4 B6 Q7 A2 M& @, m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  s0 k9 F- r3 t& q3 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 @! i  u* y# C* K9 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. l& `( L( v; f0 {3 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. q# }! N3 f; j7 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>