【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 Z9 \- r# y) hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( E4 E2 j3 J# s, S. kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 i" {. |+ f8 g& b; {1 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
. Y: H# t% f/ WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! t/ M- o3 v% g: r2 t( U$ h# bEvery other word you utter is love
( ?8 d2 i- g- v/ mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 q* P. p, p& a" T! PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ ]) A& G' I; w9 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 v5 p3 o! T  X; u! II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 x3 L: N; R$ y$ `  fWith such a tongue as yours,
) l  w$ ~# Q2 u- S8 c; {2 \$ O1 X7 a( PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% A4 t+ N$ V# A# FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) y6 v- ]3 z) W) gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ `. x: @+ D- q" J+ j' U, q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: x/ t: ~9 b# W8 ^7 ]# `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% i1 G. c3 W; R9 }$ J% F6 \- t( C8 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 r3 h8 h% L! y: z, V: r/ v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 I& p8 @4 W' o9 c% w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 G2 \$ I! }) ]; h: I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 N- B" J4 n, a& \) p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* ~+ ]2 }# E+ g' ?! \* d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 U% y$ o$ V/ W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ N2 G8 {# Q2 G1 E5 ^3 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ t5 Q# ]$ I" p$ ?6 e, h) \' F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& c9 ^3 I0 k; B) Z( C7 D8 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 f9 a" B: P; R6 j3 M0 v; F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) R& \9 i; \! g8 M, X  p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 f+ g! U) V0 y4 _% `# ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& x% j$ }' O4 F% i. V) r3 g9 V$ X; u* r( T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ }- @/ L" g) [; G5 _# t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( P5 K1 \% o$ C3 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! \: x5 x/ p) y, L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, ^& \9 }6 l! {. W" C1 o9 n& e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. a# u& c3 i  d" M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 n3 Z1 b/ {: e! I! q# T! P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- P! P. B9 h5 a, c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 B! ^0 E- C! e. V& s! z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 s, {' W! u% s" N( i3 S2 [, x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  S* o& ~- u6 x8 z5 M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ @  v3 [7 k: E7 T0 {+ C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" R7 F# i( ?' j' c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 [2 K! t  [/ T; G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. J1 d6 j+ |- \7 k我请你剖开它
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  y' d0 p& B0 F8 B4 l: }) { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' s' h1 G' z) ^8 f( Q/ K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>