【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' H( k" G, R0 T( BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  U6 W! k+ x0 Z* b" rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 z4 l% _/ x( u/ N2 |0 BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  p1 ]( ]4 C  P0 A9 |+ [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 ]1 R+ R' \1 _$ i2 a; g+ sEvery other word you utter is love
) h4 a. X0 S8 v8 {1 H! _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; f4 u7 \6 E6 H5 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 a$ O* Y# k7 D9 O( e% uI want so much to see inside your heart
$ o2 E0 E, _. f4 M* R$ J* GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% F* q  ~2 h+ K  d8 l# eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 Y- k+ f; H9 y* ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 p" S* R" P7 Y1 w# A" L- q0 Q& dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! H# [9 C( U: Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& `9 {0 X' h; R3 ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( V+ ^( e$ s) q  z. n0 H9 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ H3 X, h& @" D: u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( p# u9 [4 D$ P' p: M) f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 t, G& _" D8 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. {. k; }( ?7 w3 B; F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 J% z' S6 y) I$ g) I- F. b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 X% m7 Q% j* `  V+ V" i3 `, Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, C' Z/ y8 ~$ D3 i0 G9 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( Q$ M+ Q# `& z7 m0 R) _$ ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 e: a' Z1 S2 v$ U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, T* Z3 L) z! y# G/ ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  U  m4 p8 [. D1 }/ V: c4 r9 o* Z6 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' L7 ]8 r* p; a% E0 g. t( o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 m  ^" @/ g1 U$ f7 x- g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 Z$ A& |! m" q  v  j0 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' o0 S1 J/ F; j" ]) |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) g% \" l' h6 O2 \' ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 R3 I9 a' J8 i$ |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( t. F. S# S% p5 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ T2 m! H/ x+ o0 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 \2 o# n' f* g我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>