【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( k6 d9 w' h; h- B. c! y. bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) ^, i# {3 F: t- S! d  nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: j" L" F4 h. R. e- U# xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 p4 P* `  {' q! S- tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ B3 @" q, L6 |+ sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) ]1 j+ h6 q) ]3 J& s% JYou needn’t fear anything
5 V- a8 Q- y$ g+ DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 `2 O; H) G* u- y; iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 X+ a) U4 c( QI love you I love you with all my heart
2 l: X" w$ y" c0 ~; i- U, [' INothing can compare to my love
( b- k9 E  `4 ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% k- U3 J& {. U7 g) C! R' jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  f/ W' ^1 K! Z. j. lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 U( B" B8 e: S* z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 V& c$ e' H; p- R- C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& X8 F) R+ O  R( u5 v3 U' d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- v& d- T( k8 f: @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 S. l! C! ?7 O5 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" q7 O6 T  H0 T; q- z1 H6 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) I1 o9 v* j2 ?( e$ W. o/ w& y' W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) i  N* a. A) x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 T+ z1 C6 @, x" Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 T0 m4 ~) m7 K6 [& ?% S1 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 c" k1 i( C! ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 ]- x- T5 O2 q) i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 b, u! L: _* y, K( W3 n& U+ I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  S& F) l* o3 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 P) \4 U9 l8 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ r4 Z, c; A  r! o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- g( {) J" S* d6 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 J/ h1 y/ O* H) X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) `- m) ~5 o8 P' C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 g6 G. l; [# N. M6 D- ~; L2 a% W" b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; S5 N5 {3 a9 n* W! g" l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( ^0 h3 v6 n! G7 H4 L% a; i7 U/ H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ E' j$ N+ N3 H  u; c4 O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( u! j- m$ ^7 B# b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 k. q6 k- s/ X" I# a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 o) [0 Z6 E% b8 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 y! F( _4 Z* h6 E6 f# i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' `" O" [8 x- s; j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% N! r: M0 a( x1 m我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>