【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 m" p! U$ }0 F/ g- r& o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- B4 @$ V* R, j$ NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 p) @! p0 D2 C: X& }. Z: rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- S' T6 Q2 z7 U1 x; `& ~9 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ d! {; d/ h  T6 C2 g6 CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 B. c- v& `9 f% QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ W7 j: p5 `: M( a4 S8 r6 D! ^0 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 r" Z6 s) [) e* PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. o4 d8 o# [( \5 B2 HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, M2 g+ u* r; X* ?$ B6 s7 {& NI regret not dying
% {  _4 n) z  P' b/ {) GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 s2 L7 ^) `+ h5 G0 W+ I# M" i! sWith such a tongue as yours,
7 W0 h& O; d* WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, I# H& z; `2 y3 a1 V2 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: v+ S+ B$ O4 e0 A) m1 b" Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; [1 b$ @' F" Q  x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; x1 x' A% K, A& g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# F0 J( O4 p/ z, M/ Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- {: b- ~( T& W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 t( e! A' w* i6 H* S0 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) }  F! X  f: ~/ h& _; O5 c9 F: c. ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ q3 ~. j! p, B; ?$ F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 G* T, n5 A0 U1 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# U* z( ~1 b0 D) u5 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 @4 \$ p! m. n. z# n<P>你无需担心</P>
8 Y& R8 O" S1 m: {8 }; a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' n8 I; ]3 q" _! C( S& i. P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# f5 X' h; l' p; a  q) S/ q( \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. S, I# e' ?* S9 ^( R- {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ h- y1 n) P6 |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" h2 `1 ], ?, J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' h, B$ _) E, D9 i$ ]- A+ P, X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 T% |& r7 B0 m) G' ~$ g6 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 P1 d) H+ D. }: Z( c* V5 M1 o9 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% u9 N# \$ O' D9 x# a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ |+ T! h  E; j# c$ \$ p3 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" m1 N/ J8 B9 z  W+ l: u1 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" I3 Y" r' H& a7 P+ h% d  G' V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* s. K4 g) d, M7 u, p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* K. p1 X. h6 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 S! ]" s; M7 O$ a6 z  j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: K5 ?' s9 \8 M: ^. N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 ^, X0 l. }0 l3 q/ |& O5 J! E1 Y0 d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* U" L: J4 u( Z; Q7 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 y! A! r2 Z$ I) z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- v1 D3 @8 d  o4 S; A7 J% _8 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ T, p1 Y& j5 K2 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) D3 {, ]+ [6 s" X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ J' B6 D( {$ W, ^4 A" K: m8 T9 D* O5 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) u+ ~' L3 j; `$ t& z$ J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 l3 I% v& S" p% w! [9 l4 A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ v, u6 M* Y- k9 b, n" O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>