【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ c- W+ c# ^. ~! x* l8 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 L& [& O5 A9 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: G. `) W! q7 SYou needn’t fear anything
0 q& I4 c" A* \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& M( o3 R: c# E& C" t* D' V* II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 Z+ O, m$ S: c: Z4 Q, RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! h4 s8 T# @- ]3 n+ I  h; @I’m still filled with fear
) Q; i/ A, [5 e) BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# p/ I0 R) ^8 \; J% N" GI regret not dying
  d' t, Q/ f& o6 k; d' CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- S7 u0 F! x9 g( n7 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 ?9 X) ^9 n4 n- L$ XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* l& k; {& s( ~9 Z, p" x; k& d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, T. d; _  o' w2 ]. D; I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 Z* [4 C- u/ u8 d" c; `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 f5 ?& k' Y- e3 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: F' c# J) s# A: u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ @9 q# v! \; @: w$ j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% Y* g; p& L, e2 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  A8 l7 X/ _; A; S4 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 P0 y" |5 ]  {& ?6 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. M5 r, ?( j8 l; U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. ?% d& r  r6 q+ j6 M$ W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% Q2 Z4 _: E3 }6 n+ ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( L) Y* T$ S: V8 [" w3 Y# c2 b2 M) d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ m' Z1 Z2 q: L$ N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' y* g" z: O1 d/ l2 p- B! [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; A5 H/ m& J9 D! M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! L. l: W- h- Y6 y* l+ H. R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# `) w# Y+ j$ N; H: A' c- ]& U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 V& f* C$ i& y0 b& ~( h/ Y, H. `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 d  d: I- f5 O8 v, n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) K: X$ ?( K: R3 }2 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 M  c+ S7 L- d2 U4 `  Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( F; N8 A5 y6 n7 |' R' Z8 A7 s+ L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) `( }$ J  x& F0 @( P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 d' o: U9 X' d% [/ s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 ]8 |9 R2 ~6 h* Y# j; ^5 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>