【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 {0 l8 X" `7 ~4 p' G' t歌词我附在后面。
. l+ j  ?& p- BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# [5 [8 @! l4 D# ~- t  X8 XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 S6 W3 u, i/ k/ v- E% g/ M( wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ U8 b5 y  ]' |2 V3 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( t) D  z  i. N& ?( v  B+ e9 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 J* i& }( [! Q' h; JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 Q# C9 n! F1 R) bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. n# z2 ~0 k! l* tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ r% s: u; z; x6 r+ o  uI want so much to see inside your heart
/ N4 c- x- i5 F. d: r3 H( C! v& RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ R0 k# h8 d3 ^+ g4 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 s: H; \$ y- i$ y! m6 k0 f5 v' NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: x! t0 _/ D* W1 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! q% C3 R: y" [+ U% c6 X) Z; QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 b: ^4 e# Q0 c1 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 G9 \) y! _5 c# Z2 C  }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 W$ d! l$ _1 n( n9 ?  l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 z) r" }1 [  H! Z1 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( N# O$ U9 a5 ]+ L/ P, t& Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ B. u  f( t& v% r% Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# y6 A2 C  k  v) N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- w8 z/ \$ j' q( |, l7 F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) Z2 Q$ A) k$ Y2 H: q# g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" L" e$ X, y' l) l7 D" ~$ \: r<P>你无需担心</P>
7 d" ]- b$ w8 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 M8 z# N. G" `- ^: D" K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: d& M' E. a2 n4 S  _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, W7 ]! B- ^9 s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( H( _. t/ K1 [, ^, V, q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* E- M& l3 H" z' K0 ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* y+ x% N+ T$ J+ F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- ~% Z2 @9 h& V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- a: }5 j7 [. J1 H  }3 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, E3 {  Z# O% T# w* F: B9 h* H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. `5 G! C: I( T. M- `, D  G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) n$ y/ m) O8 H2 q/ h( \2 ^/ M9 y! F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 c! s, n- j# Q; U' ~8 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 m7 e9 @& `! q4 }+ h5 f$ n! v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. v+ P: t$ J1 Y% U3 V4 s* |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ Z/ D# B, g' f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 ^; [' A( R! e5 [, f* ~2 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; ]. p, U8 @) m! K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) q# I4 b* E0 u7 n. V# i8 w; O我请你剖开它
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7 F7 J/ R# K/ q& `3 Q. O5 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ _+ ?9 l+ |/ e' t9 V3 n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>