【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 _! \: s5 _/ m. T. v% i$ DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 v  F  X% G: g1 W) U3 ^With the moon kissing it every night
( G4 P0 X! k+ U6 d$ w. j/ DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 m6 p& E; q" I& VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* C6 a2 U, Q2 [6 T' G0 X) f! ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) c& o, S1 g+ q5 y( fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! |8 ^: D$ m9 z. ^0 r+ jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ?3 E& q  P" XWith such a tongue as yours,
* g* `6 `1 ~8 X9 v7 [! X- n4 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" \3 w0 s# F, S7 G: dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- d! t8 ^) J7 K1 u# D- nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 M) ^' r/ J9 o5 L' e# X4 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, [/ }# C- c! [; M; w& l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: A9 F1 `, H! e% E6 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( n1 y4 U5 A/ Z% n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 i1 D& k8 @  K4 s/ y7 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 Y( {( D# M5 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, [9 z: @2 c' \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# A, I* o4 k/ p8 f, e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" B$ x- u. H1 }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  U- }- D, K/ j2 |# ^* H6 D, L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) G( i3 \3 S6 t8 ^4 k6 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 b9 {5 J: M) s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 q4 u9 ?# D- T! f5 s! N$ ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* s4 o6 x4 w$ L+ i8 e4 G! f7 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: W- m! D' n1 Q2 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. a' V6 X8 ~4 F$ T* X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( X8 ]: x% V+ _' u: H. ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 ]0 {5 y! }9 P2 t( j6 ]5 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' v& q5 i+ k, Z( a! F2 z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 `0 V' @0 \: R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" c7 h4 \% y9 M5 m4 q$ k4 ]% K- H9 R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% a: m1 Q. [  {" j# ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 V" Z! ?: j: e- b, a/ D/ c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ h$ H/ T' C4 Y) z; s1 W6 K, r+ {4 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, `* k% r( S( o$ d' ?7 {) H- w7 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 {2 G' b) z! x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" `! l0 L% }; \% I# I8 p4 C( \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. [- a, Z# I7 F) a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* ]2 p  e' u/ ?8 l" e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>