【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( Z- n. Y! f, j  ]0 _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  L% i. K7 T+ y( jThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 }% B2 A) j- y3 k+ l5 u) q) qWith the moon kissing it every night
7 d0 e5 O% K) D' aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ F* X, N7 |  r: j( ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# G  S& f- |' r* OEvery other word you utter is love
4 R: m! H' h; q5 E7 N1 oI really want to know just how much you love me
8 e% r: o5 x$ C& Q& D# qI love you I love you with all my heart
8 ~& O/ V" j6 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# {, o5 N# c6 W1 B0 `; ^I want so much to see inside your heart
$ U' O* P# E9 N$ k* t: [9 K0 p- mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, ]! [: ~6 H, u) WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 J6 u( V% y- n: GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 p; q9 U1 f9 w% F. b0 E& YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 R9 w+ `& b4 i# N: D, A% N5 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 @7 g8 S6 s' `9 v; U3 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 }" P* {% U7 Y6 n# Z2 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. p5 o2 e( G# q& I5 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  \  J6 j" A1 n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 \. \- l! Q: O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  a2 G5 [) s6 k0 n, ?0 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 }. v' H& A8 L$ Q& I  c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 D/ D* |; w! Q( s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" S4 z1 P; w  G/ Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 F" p/ ^1 F, {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  N# |) l6 I& d) S" `4 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, l7 f- y# v2 Y/ }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 I; `6 l0 d: F  s+ q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! }. z0 a# ^4 h1 r/ G" k' p0 E" H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 V8 [, }2 D7 G1 j# I" u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! Z) K) f6 \) s, z' ?' X$ y4 u; T0 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 I8 V/ X# o( k0 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 V3 v7 Q  r4 ]  }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ~4 q& \, u* q! |4 Y6 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ V' M* O+ k. I9 e( L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 f  \9 |7 A6 {( b2 c6 `! l. ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* C; I. k* ^: h$ D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) `, w0 e8 I9 r0 B- k  z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 W/ I0 N% ]; `0 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 G# r! e" m. y8 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ z8 T( A- W  ^, U6 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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3 ^  L5 E: y* Z4 q/ q' [( F- Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; J* y( F$ r* y) }) j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>