【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 T- Z( Q( d9 z7 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 B" I8 O) f1 o, `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- K; l% I# ?2 a" Z( B  m: NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" x, r, @  w) V' U2 W' ^The sky is happy down to its soul
7 D' A6 O, U- Q! j- ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  C( d2 c& ~# _) x, R( q- wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 K  {/ b3 z8 A9 e3 mYou needn’t fear anything
8 Q4 I" o& s) P1 R5 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; S2 y6 ~9 n3 WEvery other word you utter is love
/ F$ ?3 x" G/ t9 aI really want to know just how much you love me
2 H8 f  J* c" Q* OI love you I love you with all my heart
; K8 Q; i! j3 ]9 C" E1 ONothing can compare to my love
- x5 x# @  Q4 C: `! p9 t% gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ m* R( ]/ e1 ~+ X: a$ i- e1 d7 bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- D8 o7 R+ v4 U- gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" U6 M8 K/ I3 O( N' wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  s- x% m% K$ \2 ^$ M6 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. B6 U) ?5 Q7 @& eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 T$ X& t3 {. w. y8 F9 z! N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- q; e0 R! I' m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 q6 K. [: k$ d1 }3 Y* U7 O& [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' y! F  G' e+ d! r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; W8 [/ ~( [' F4 b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" @: h: n& [) `- Q) ], C/ B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& k1 J+ B" C' f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 q$ c0 V) |5 `: M( ]7 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# v) @7 b/ G6 f! a& `7 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
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<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) q5 Y1 H  X1 W0 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: V0 W4 O" s9 d( {5 ~! k5 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ ]- `1 S4 n9 L; g6 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ l, s, W+ G# s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" `0 ^" {! j0 R3 O! c0 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& K! F9 Z2 [9 B: l7 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 v' N2 b7 u$ N' f  E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 v7 {  f! M2 s9 R! o9 d# U* A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& m4 n0 p! O0 h( v% I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. t* J/ z5 T( |# u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 H9 g  |# C4 t7 Z) I: G, j3 _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>