【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 D; V# L$ J: `# S) {! R8 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' u- c4 {) ~" I! ~* IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 {! Q1 O% D! O4 s+ m+ DThe sky is happy down to its soul
# C8 y1 }. ~3 b+ l+ AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 P+ z, M; T- p$ V, y) jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& U7 V- e" q, N" I% x- @6 X* @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% T7 b+ H/ L6 B/ F% L4 W+ X4 e& REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# a, p2 O& t/ b1 w$ ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ Y# k. f! ~6 I" J, {$ ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 {$ s) i( P% k4 J6 J, d8 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 n4 b% o  S7 `: PI want so much to see inside your heart
3 D" p4 ^) i' yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, y6 {9 L* \/ u9 M. [I regret not dying
& n3 ~+ K* g4 A+ _: |: hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 R, S7 ~$ `4 m4 V- u& @" ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 X% ?5 _* I: j3 V) y- g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% v* r( R) |% E  Y, X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: p+ G) E9 y/ @6 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& R' N  L! I8 l7 m( _) H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 n* E5 H; |. C5 e% F1 Q- G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 e$ g' `& [5 @5 F# C8 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! U, B. p9 y/ n+ `$ J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' e1 K8 D5 E& c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; s# Z! ?% }9 C/ B  b. e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; g; ~9 i, }+ z! @0 O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* c9 s& z" I9 J" I/ H6 }1 g% Z8 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! ?5 p; D; x; B# M% ~+ x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' Z8 p4 R# _2 N! `% s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% W- J5 O6 M+ N$ B4 M4 j" s% M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ^( }* Q) i6 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! n5 g) L9 E" y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 e' A4 |8 d+ Y) ]8 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, E9 m# Z6 _5 l$ T4 u5 l6 y4 l- r1 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 L0 Y; p' p  y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' l$ N5 `! {% d7 r8 W# Z' P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 c) D% G( H$ y; D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 \/ |. F3 \  B& A6 R! a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 M) n& D" b: }: x+ g; d$ `# u% a/ w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ Z: ~! m1 R' {0 `( J, O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ ~" L  k2 T! t: X" N) h$ p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>