【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. z2 B/ a: w+ i/ }& l7 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 w. V( Z/ ^$ f2 u3 e$ |) B5 T5 L$ IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' B# @- H" R- ?2 pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 E% K( g8 m) N8 x" Q" EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# P# ^- d. S) c9 @2 w' aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 |3 G& W  U6 @! h; LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* m1 h! N6 ]! E  Z! H) oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: g) K8 k. C2 h- T+ Y$ Y  H; o* L) EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) ]5 I+ b# m7 Q$ vI regret not dying
% o! ~2 \2 k  t1 K- @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 |( F* R, [8 M2 bWith such a tongue as yours,
4 p, b5 T4 n& k+ B; D8 M$ u" bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: f- M: a' K4 w/ v7 x% SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 x& d3 Z. j8 s& }3 ]; \; b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, K/ t5 ^) k* V7 r% j/ i. v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" U& {% n$ |# o% {+ T" \& o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  i9 u" z1 n; ?7 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& y$ P( O+ y# m2 y. d5 K- U6 D, s- f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ W4 H( v# t3 A2 E9 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 ?7 S" Y2 |* `! L( c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 }/ e: D5 m/ c* |. J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# s+ ~, k. x# b8 b# l4 a3 a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& b, C% {# q! j. @& ^2 \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 R- x1 P* i8 F& f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 m' T* [5 h* U3 R. v' w6 `$ O5 `% R. o$ ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 T$ r( e6 _4 R) Q! K6 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ X1 R+ _% o, v* R  ]: h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  x7 Y( P) f1 p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 C# w& Z) E" Y3 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) x; P8 @2 ]- j" o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 u' G4 y& E9 t6 \: \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 M0 k: D7 g( C* f! k/ `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ W: R0 }- g$ g4 E1 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( @2 ]- t& `( _( @/ d; P/ L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 X$ H% l7 h9 S0 k0 Z  m/ |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( H- @; q' Y3 Z6 E8 }( }* S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& X" n+ x7 @  E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 X9 w# E" c9 t+ h/ z$ R! f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; \/ g; V  s0 B3 ?/ s& V8 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ f/ b! [7 w' c' {+ E7 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* ]( D9 p# N% [4 L" j) z3 |; Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ A/ E0 ?; v* t# O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 H9 F% A! w: Q+ M6 m5 ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; F1 i( V# e& s: Z* |我请你剖开它
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, N  t; o5 V( ?3 d! { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>