【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& f% o8 m; I" l# d3 ^& J* ]4 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* B  c& P' L/ cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& K- V  p* u* I) \) rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 U' c# H: `2 q4 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# A8 V5 t+ R0 ^With the moon kissing it every night
  w/ J$ ?% _4 g5 s7 J- N1 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
1 _+ q; V. z2 _8 K  F% OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 l% A' W( v0 E, X5 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; V' B5 X! W( L* xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 f& J* _6 @" p/ j2 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ T  k$ `0 X4 G% \2 X1 k6 DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  g  e+ j  g& X; p: K2 F" MI regret not dying
8 ]* h- h# ~8 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& [: h' }! t9 T# AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  u$ e; f7 e4 l9 V% f8 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% q0 O2 \! K) d" n- C% r: j9 b7 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ X4 f% h8 k2 ?' `  J1 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 Z; O$ W) V0 C* G8 n8 D/ L6 P/ X6 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  X1 F4 P" }: R! [+ T, v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& R% @) o( ^8 N* x. F3 B4 t4 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 y1 y+ y: y2 x5 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' |" U- c2 K  {- k% t5 M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" ]" y/ a# r" z2 ~+ ~6 ?6 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: o/ `; H# X  u' K- N  U+ k6 X5 Q- K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ T- ]8 c8 _# \! i5 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 Q. v! J1 f8 Y6 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 Z% F6 m7 q, y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) R0 o3 w7 i3 D( h' T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! z# U3 ~6 {3 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# s- v# }6 p' E" ~+ C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( x' F( d5 Z$ _9 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 r  E$ Y- o) J4 G4 j; [  y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" L- S9 R" @* X5 w7 y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 `! D( L( X3 C' W; R5 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" r2 i0 v' ?! K9 t- j* _4 k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 e0 {5 `# A7 l9 P; [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; `8 V, h/ t: a( Q% s- r! L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, G2 w2 a2 ?9 v8 U* ~) w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; F! q% M7 M$ [1 E! S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 j) Y% L1 P0 S; d( c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ S4 r1 |1 H; N) K! h& @6 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>