【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 F: F8 N/ @2 r1 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# o/ a7 ?9 w2 `& l9 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 F0 d5 |( q% a: V8 G2 N  d1 XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 _0 M+ J( b, d  BEvery other word you utter is love
) d2 Q2 E" \! h' K* `5 q. y0 zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ y; j( y8 O. v4 M4 `$ P! }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( z$ C5 a) \6 ~) S( TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 s6 D2 j2 f% u, @, W$ lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ N3 S0 L1 m  r' W( ^. }1 HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 n; O' [& o+ oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" G  w- _* v! P8 U, x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 g: V  K. U# z  F) E! p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" A% r% D8 q" o' b  J6 Y' x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 X8 u% Y7 k% ^+ i. q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ l2 t$ t( q  |$ p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ }/ Y4 ?! l- G0 H4 g/ ^9 d& R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 u) i( [- t/ m$ I5 B+ }1 a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# K8 ?6 J* e( K7 Q: P, X8 L. I* \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' W* B8 u6 V3 T- i0 [' d3 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* B3 r  K; |' C# [: v; w, P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' |/ P; g, B0 A+ }' p; |1 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, f6 `. u' q( d9 k2 v" K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 K: _6 R. W$ I9 e# J; t& v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* o2 R) G8 L' z- v9 W* ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; b- e% z- _7 M/ W1 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) q4 _6 p6 q+ z: }$ a: H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  _* Z% Q  d8 X9 B3 `& A- T& N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' q- L1 p3 K, d% E4 `! x6 ]2 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 I- X+ m0 D+ F9 c, u& o<P>I regret not dying</P>
) L' Q: W/ O8 m2 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" g- X& g2 w$ q6 C) ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 V' t) e$ n1 y. N+ r8 F# @# K# J6 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; C) b7 s' H4 j# R# u9 C5 {- f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 i, J) ]2 ^4 J+ \% Q* R, f1 h3 c! _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, I# }0 w4 \) ]# o4 Z) D9 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; y0 x5 t1 N+ n. L( G7 L( x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ P4 M' C3 Q2 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) l0 H* [, ?) U0 v% h. f我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 m- [5 E' p% d, B3 q$ J+ T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>