【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) x" g: G& N' K. V! y1 O2 u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! L2 t9 `' _( T8 F- k( sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( y; Z# v; K1 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- a- l% A) \6 jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! t. M- N7 @3 v8 t. DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) w& l2 P% b+ J8 oI want so much to see inside your heart
1 n; d( i4 [  p) n, Q! BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) D' @# g4 M  [& KI regret not dying
+ \' B. `0 z8 b; u1 Y. b1 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( @1 \* g% x" }5 O. J2 a0 Z+ W; C0 S; xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 ]% @' x0 e3 n+ W0 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" k  P$ I% l/ @% a6 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 u3 S  D7 y' h; s5 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# A& J& X) x+ B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- @7 ~* }' R1 i- K5 p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 g9 d3 y; k- l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- V% y4 c% [' Z! V3 g& |8 y6 y) l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ }4 i9 B1 n8 ?- v. a1 ?( I. ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 T2 S$ t# n9 I, D9 q) ?, C  r# B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 X" f2 p9 S& l+ u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! ~5 Z' m0 H6 o5 Y# A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ F% P7 t: F, j/ Z0 [: U. q7 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 V: N% Q0 O: k* b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 Z6 Y6 V% `# c2 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 a4 y) d, |5 Y! p7 F0 n/ ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( m/ H/ G$ I* ]% s; ^" m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 s" e; ?) ^' b; B# z( x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 h3 q( y+ @+ q, T+ N) |( S7 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 T) ^& K. F; |6 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. u' r8 A6 j- _& A+ {+ H5 p% o4 t3 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 e; l, l1 Q0 M% Q" {, w4 j% L+ A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ G' D: b1 |. @# ^! ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 n& Y7 U1 s4 G7 e; B! W  s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>