【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) _( S$ n! Q- w- K% UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% B! o0 {) F* f# j+ r# |5 lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! r1 z2 t  L/ uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 n0 {2 f; h- T5 q8 _0 Q! S4 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" T" Q5 Z9 P7 ^1 Z+ MEvery other word you utter is love
% i: N: _4 r7 Z' C5 CI really want to know just how much you love me
. m: O) z( G! S( p0 g7 oI love you I love you with all my heart
. k' t9 j* Y/ INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; e9 r6 \: E- T- V$ {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 {8 L# j  }* C9 X; W4 {  UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ i- p3 k) B: h+ F* t$ b& @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. T/ Y% b+ t) t% B, r# Z4 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( f. @" r& y+ k, M7 W: @2 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ H, ~. W# {0 \' K0 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! `  m- k( |) U  i/ c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# |' N& b0 N  s- q7 T! y6 q) L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ r# d% a. t9 l7 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 S& B/ E  I$ F4 {: G# z, P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ B! J; E4 R& K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  m+ W! g1 a! e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 W: {' n+ g3 \: p; Q9 R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 U+ @. q, v0 Y) w' D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: F2 J) w' j4 g' ~( N" C" P6 j9 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' c/ I" H9 H' i; e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! [* I9 P2 h& `4 I3 q+ }6 l) ?; H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 p& n* U1 o% s/ B2 _- m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! i" W& G- d2 _& T. N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 {$ v( C( M5 |0 Z. M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 F  \# h* T4 r. H  j8 C6 g" D) F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, O' q# s% k6 ]; y1 v, q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 \& j7 D6 `6 {) u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  E1 [  m% N) p4 z1 I: A$ ~' a% k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 v/ v/ ]) m' ]; s  |" C' w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 o$ M  v1 k  Q. v$ r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 ?& Y" A# \  G9 U  K4 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: x5 p3 A, t% ]3 ~* }! m1 p6 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- k& W3 J# ?, v$ e6 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 z6 t, c$ i4 v& b& ?: }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ j. T9 l  m: ~$ P8 D6 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. J8 Q6 e8 G6 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  u# F3 I3 b6 ^0 i# ^# f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
0 t/ C) \7 `" }$ q7 A+ G( j4 `
我请你剖开它
% z+ A- R% N1 f0 U% d! ?0 h5 J
' ~. q/ w- q0 z3 b3 q" K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ q# k! p& E, [# b0 i) _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>