【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. s& j* l+ F/ x# u2 k+ @The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 l: O! `/ \( p& a8 o. zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% }4 ?7 [8 X+ \& I2 g8 e$ E/ RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 Z$ Q5 J4 ?# R$ {- L& RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 Y" Z* Z8 q: W9 \$ KEvery other word you utter is love
3 ^9 X6 u) X" q8 i& BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 P1 ?' C6 h, T$ _8 hI want so much to see inside your heart
* \6 D) H6 s3 R7 @1 r/ D4 rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  E# N3 {1 @3 Q% b) WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ g# O, u. v6 o5 z: L) sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 a0 Q$ o: s) N/ s$ m) h2 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 t+ \9 x3 V1 p% G  n# ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" Y$ D, }" D* Z- s3 T" M8 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 Y$ x. d& i4 I. r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( e" l, ~7 ^# b: @* W5 l5 i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. a" ~+ L, W% V. X2 L( [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' H8 Q8 Q7 D& D* x6 Q) j( \$ D/ S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 `0 O7 r+ k' w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 y" G( X2 O( V0 n<P>你无需担心</P>
* d) Y5 Z7 u  S) `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 ]. e/ Y2 ^* V8 K: N0 T! }" J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& z* `" V6 f8 E0 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ `0 B9 X: _8 l( X+ ]; |' A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 D0 H0 c- o) {/ G$ v$ u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 z+ y3 q5 q& f% @$ ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% a* ~2 X% {( J7 ~; ]9 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 }5 @2 x* W: a" V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 [! P& s4 A% W6 `7 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 J+ }2 v/ `/ T" r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 c) ]5 y& }2 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; w, B# v7 j* K& X6 P; P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* I& v* p/ L5 {$ |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* n' x; {7 }" _! q7 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>