【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 v* K- S& D6 k7 {歌词我附在后面。
: I" ~. ?0 d' `! ^/ ~+ TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, D$ u- C; @& E# s$ s1 t" fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) z0 Z0 t1 d3 z+ _2 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! J. ?% R# m0 p/ TThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ B3 q9 n* t  K6 l2 Q! TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ l9 l8 N" F* C! Y: t$ f8 a) ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; n$ a6 I, X# n- z6 l* U5 d$ }+ w+ zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! Q: p6 l+ I, mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ N& q, s4 O9 \0 j' AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 W  o) m" i8 x5 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 ^3 A1 ]) C# `' B' HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 W6 m3 w. i& [" ?/ m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( E) _% A# G& P! c/ a- U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) G$ x$ v; {' @) [# e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 L* f- h6 n! W2 o- v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 U; `. t/ r  A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- T1 i6 z! U' Y% I4 l3 p" z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; u% M& F( F! W* P) Z# V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ G2 N! u/ m& u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 h0 @8 H$ C9 i0 l1 k* A8 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  O+ O4 F% u  H$ t8 ~4 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" j+ L0 Z/ f# B$ E. V' ^5 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! _2 V2 H" {; T2 ]0 y, o' l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 {) I2 p- m0 ?, J; q! M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* U( D8 |. T+ J  J: c6 C6 T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 M8 w5 G; g6 |: \$ ?, O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ?! {& r8 s" q0 T6 |7 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 h0 X. n, n4 d# o2 H. n; s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 ~! u: f" N7 a) S& L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 k! w- F4 p4 B8 p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' {/ Y  C) v6 n5 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; T/ W& ]4 V9 l' T3 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ J2 z! b/ Y+ i2 b. ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' H& @' }# {5 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ ?: w' Y$ Y( @' F  m) F4 V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ r  W9 Q2 t- F- F$ t/ S; V5 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 E0 u: z+ A) b3 f2 h8 [! P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>