【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ g2 E9 W) H, y3 d+ z1 U4 e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ S' n! o+ r) E+ b+ ^7 D3 v( D2 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, X. I" n7 \) C; ?( Y' @! jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. i1 @5 z: l& }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! ^9 r1 x$ P& K5 ]You needn’t fear anything
6 J4 W5 f. u: t$ F" }5 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 b, k; X5 F" mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ G# s+ C9 N+ H& G3 N5 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ c8 k/ i1 q8 A- r) qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 k8 D' v$ z8 }' t4 U0 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- j) B0 m: w* X$ B8 D* D' QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% m- C& I, E( k  |% B7 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* o( P6 p% ]1 q7 b: [0 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, @) _* G1 Z) E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 w! z, J! h  E* F$ y' f: X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ Y$ p- a( ^( C% q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* l5 A1 ]5 C0 o. L; D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: k- ~# B; F1 c' Q! ^7 a" c/ m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! `, c. Q2 N4 }- U4 F2 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- ^/ t( C7 M: o4 k8 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 G: I4 C. S  H9 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ Y. w3 c/ e- j0 `. O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: `9 b" y+ J; y# H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# U/ W& V9 @+ ~% @# R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" D$ e4 j! s( G4 h" @9 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 F/ |; k9 w! D, P- c* T9 Z6 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ l' y0 ~2 }' J0 ]; W. [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  g" k& {0 P0 `# t& u* ~" ~% n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 T5 K, r% T9 L- T. H7 {) s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 @+ M, z$ A% k4 u, M/ o( i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' h$ a7 K" @' K: i4 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" B  y0 M% }% Y0 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" ^, `4 _. b" H. |7 ]5 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) w5 Q& E1 S* e' v% q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% U9 w5 J3 W- q+ B8 c4 _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 V. S+ a% U" g3 G0 F1 m- [# N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 L! i! B& R7 m) k- B1 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 _3 T( W+ v, c) R1 }3 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* m+ ?8 U$ s2 M* ?; r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, I: ]; G" C1 z* b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 ]9 F% W. P( f: |' s7 _( K- p4 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 [  b; I' ^: S4 e6 r# ?0 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 z1 U: R2 H- Z% J/ C1 R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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' K' x  }( u" M; l8 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ j3 {3 z: D8 g, Q% T- X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>