【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, ]2 C4 t$ Z5 {7 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 @: ]) ]' C: ^! b+ W3 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 e) X2 X) X0 Y$ z: Z4 s: k# V8 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 F) N9 ?2 v' ~  z% l: {" Z. ZSeeing the sky content with its love
3 A1 @. t% \. X. V3 J7 n; j* j" ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ x0 R. B2 |% m  n$ z  `  K% V: KI really want to know just how much you love me
% ~5 K- D! U6 v& |& @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" ~, }4 ]; B1 t: j, c& YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ G! i3 e8 k  I3 g) H1 D/ C( y1 bI want so much to see inside your heart
/ P) u& L$ n) f) C# WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. q: h& P& x: j2 b* s# sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) X8 Y: h/ b) D5 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; E; V8 l5 K7 _/ G, u% g3 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% D3 r' Y6 {' @- p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& }1 w; E$ b9 G! R# ?3 V. J- B9 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) ?$ r3 }5 b7 S3 n2 N- r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" h: I3 q# p. b6 j  f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; e5 V7 t) T3 k& x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 t% j. U+ g% }9 K: e# N, ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. c5 i& o( G' `8 v' {6 P<P>你无需担心</P>
; K. V; s% e4 v) b& `4 k0 l1 E: ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 e" a  A! _. M: v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ K! x3 j! \+ V, F4 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, y# @  x' o/ S/ A8 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 A6 K# O7 e: ]! t; C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 K) W; S  q2 q" g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# N) f9 a7 d# ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 y6 V* _1 i0 ]  p  j/ v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) t4 s, |6 W* S4 p5 a1 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& d- u& p3 z: S; ?# z+ w; g" p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" ^' L+ q& R2 b- W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- E# C6 r4 G( @1 f( B* R1 m1 t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 I+ e/ g! G$ u4 p  v  N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* z" X# D5 E& Z' T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 r* m% N$ _" @% A0 T& J/ {- c5 b7 u6 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
  I: j' m9 y3 X6 D) \* s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# `' b+ y& f  f7 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 F3 `8 a* j% l& F# q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& R( F9 v5 G) P( `+ m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, O7 n7 J, P" G+ J1 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 L+ f, ?7 J1 P4 f+ ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& p  L, j* C* ]; o. m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ V# s) H- B% x  Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  s  b  ?* m% s- E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>