【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  Y9 D# r9 X3 b% F% r. u2 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( o9 @# N- V! J$ D8 |' D( NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 _5 L$ @7 d1 K: B$ HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# F* B' Z7 c3 ]* wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 d. ]5 u: E  @' `0 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 q- ]! Q3 F9 l# G; RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% }/ E; V4 O; S! a3 O" I& f5 YEvery other word you utter is love
# w2 N( [5 M2 O: ]* G) }; |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. r: }% ?4 f( T1 `4 v3 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! M  V0 E9 @! j+ m9 Y9 FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( ]( z( W1 y( P! S( @! MI want so much to see inside your heart
0 `. G  ]' w, z# cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 U! g, M8 P3 O# D; L! P5 HI’m still filled with fear
0 K3 F! H- D7 c  S' SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) }% X  B1 C2 v. x7 W8 iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" V- ~/ j# ?; ~! s7 t. k: TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 G. D% x6 J; f( k5 x1 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 |1 A+ J4 t: b# l! c" n& k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 W: ^- Q1 c0 k0 Z/ s/ ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: B" Q' b0 q. D" D0 t! k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, E* d1 \0 @0 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& y! H& R3 s! P$ s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 c8 K% D/ p6 r* i2 F3 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 @+ P6 b! v0 J8 R! o: B& r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 N2 {& p0 O' c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- F& {& f4 K; \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 U  B  m$ m) z9 E- h2 p* P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( J/ W  q# L. W3 j$ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 _- U+ H1 y! l! t- Y; J/ v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 h" g6 a# S( H2 w% o- X$ ^8 `" A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# J/ {4 h& F; [/ ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; J# w: O6 z8 r6 F9 h5 u9 `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ P7 @0 j6 d3 F2 ]; A* y. Z! P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, R& i2 Q$ k$ H* N5 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 Q$ y" U5 z6 E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ R2 S* [( Y( c3 z3 o% Y9 c1 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ F* z" C8 f7 ]( r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) y" K. H4 W: s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! Z! [0 g, N2 l" M0 s- j- [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. s3 Y, r6 q, ]1 U" B! g<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 t' t' }2 N+ b& X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! K8 ?- ]3 V- V8 ^  E( ^' G0 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 V1 C) g! ?, q2 e0 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 W) q2 m0 h8 I0 p; E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ }/ k+ j$ K5 \7 {% {0 }, ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 M+ q, M% F, P1 C4 l5 H我请你剖开它

+ o9 ^4 c# f# T8 y. l0 C6 \7 M! x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>