【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. Z& f6 }. U& i* D; |The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 y# O# b! T* j3 o. ?1 m0 G; }% OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 }3 J2 Z) x7 w" |$ A5 Y% {* O  ~( EThe sky is happy down to its soul
( ~5 H: k" X" X+ rWith the moon kissing it every night
: ?; q: g$ g; I) O+ d3 vSeeing the sky content with its love
1 r$ K" g! }7 }' c8 \& _: @& ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. c* l" {8 c5 B6 s! |$ b+ KEvery other word you utter is love
- o( J/ j! @, W. F/ K. DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 y, E$ ^3 T6 Q5 u* g) y9 V4 ?: CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 G3 S/ O) j$ K; t5 w* UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 s7 z0 H* X! i' E" @% PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ n" H6 D2 r' i7 Y6 z4 n5 N# EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! t: F! ~' d0 A- ?; ?. xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! x; ?% X  a2 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' l1 d) C, ]2 g5 H$ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" [! }0 q! X% E% N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ s7 ~/ S4 q* f, I" o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: m* t7 P' u/ U; {+ @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 q5 O* d* B$ S% w4 Q" g  b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 L" C# L7 ]+ M$ O* D  E5 `& w2 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' s; W* m  E3 x" ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ h( G# R- k# m; Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 m$ f, t! w$ ~) M3 T  Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 }% F% e- n" z$ C5 D2 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 {( H  K/ H$ ~+ U( F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. c% p, {/ W- n$ n+ \  j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- e( F3 r9 o2 \3 T8 r0 a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ l" D8 e( E1 v& ?1 `6 k7 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 Z) C9 j; b4 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 T( e0 o( u% W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 x! i9 R* [! r9 e! z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ A' U* k  r- P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ O) A6 E: Y* @( F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! K4 O- K+ S. F9 [7 X6 ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) \; o/ j7 J: b3 i; m% x7 X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 ?, e3 P5 A5 g- U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  m: `7 _% W9 `' S1 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. G% G( g  ~( O  i# I# e9 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 A8 r7 f% q+ |: y我请你剖开它

1 y5 U/ A( }. `* @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>