【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 [4 {% [& X  G歌词我附在后面。
, ?- z4 o7 o+ W! `$ A2 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 Z1 ]5 u4 s& ?+ \5 B" u+ qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 ?" N7 a6 Y, o5 I# V/ LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" t- {; Z' H" H" f5 C" d( GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! ^$ d3 U/ G* V! r& |, o- QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 p# O; |( G5 F1 w6 F0 H7 t8 Z& kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: B- T; ^2 Z, q) h& REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. G0 O% K% U: W0 @  uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 E6 P% J' N' K2 ~3 o8 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 q" q% f7 D- h  Z2 I% l! EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ e2 C' K5 k2 a2 }# cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. l' \5 X. Q7 I4 S8 z8 ?" N" cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. F' Z( l9 X- K0 E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) F8 h# n. d- U7 O, ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 `% h- a3 e2 g6 ~. f0 v4 V: j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 a% p4 @4 V  M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; }; D- f) v+ s/ A: U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: L3 i7 s1 w' O8 y  }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 i" T" u8 U6 T1 Z6 ~) x+ C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 f/ K% q0 W) G# P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: ~' n$ l+ A/ v) X, j& j) [, g  `<P>你无需担心</P>
% z+ c. |4 f* A' A3 D" m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' j, d; w, m. E9 M! [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 n& Q# u. K8 v( _; \9 e- @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" ^/ c7 |! a: [  {8 _1 J/ g- ~8 {/ R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! J9 y) |9 P0 T2 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 ~. `+ e4 N2 x+ K* B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( z9 E  a. Z: v* R8 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 ]+ u/ t! s- b  X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! d) C+ i7 O& ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 L1 o) E. s% D% i, c9 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ w8 k" C& U( N- y, Z) q0 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! F! H. X, ~0 u" P3 t. ~4 R% k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 ?" g, ~0 _2 C4 I" d# e5 @1 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' Z3 n8 w( k) |7 K9 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 }: D' r& `9 t9 A- r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>