【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, `/ H: y+ x# z) P歌词我附在后面。
  `7 c- h5 O/ jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! v) U# n- T0 J6 x; vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! l6 Q3 e6 M) M( a) |6 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# W$ i8 S/ p" _/ KWith the moon kissing it every night
  T. W$ K/ X* k; _Seeing the sky content with its love
' [% g6 G: X- }. v. JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! N+ K! E* C, T/ r4 Y* nYou needn’t fear anything
8 [' U$ d/ W8 ]5 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' N# K5 P6 v3 D9 K$ q6 Y# m4 j% gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' t% z6 o& U) C; h+ \, bNothing can compare to my love
6 F9 w& m& D7 G" cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" y$ X& F8 X& _I want so much to see inside your heart
- Q; @/ {3 O+ C( q( t* Z4 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 a3 w" s& [: K& r/ A' m9 PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' R2 A* X+ p, b# r/ }; TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 r  Z1 ]3 P( z1 Z! B0 @% mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" B% M, X; D+ v9 `2 J( r' M# \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 s5 F6 W% p) J9 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! ^: v8 ~2 V3 Z5 n2 Q- N  I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 C' N; V/ A" T/ Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) J  k8 X( O4 b6 o" B, _1 ]! [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ B; J5 `9 B4 B$ S2 @* s3 B. k5 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( f& m. A1 B; g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. x" ]1 Q5 x: `0 E6 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 |7 f% {) ]* o/ k  w* I) u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" g: F, A* V' Q; K6 p# }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: D9 j6 L" M2 I9 V7 a5 u9 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ?2 J7 d+ i8 R; T  G2 s, Q, T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. V! Y  c) c9 V% k1 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 y) d  x$ U  o+ u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  k! a$ t, g3 y1 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* E8 P: n, X' B$ n: r# N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ y8 l. F& Q1 R( n. `! e' D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, J' H) b( I9 ?2 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# D7 J/ }) F: H9 q, Y5 ~$ o/ ~& C' p7 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% Z  p2 z( d4 ?3 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>