【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: o! }& {# v) ]+ U3 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 H: i. B* S% Q4 X5 u, M' cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ Y# _. V. j4 k# A& m0 h6 Q& d2 j* QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 _$ y5 Q9 K) }8 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; i( q7 O; b8 J% S1 kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 K+ Q7 K* I# k5 d4 ZEvery other word you utter is love
( m+ M, [6 Z: q6 F, MI really want to know just how much you love me
& X) G- C# O  RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# V  g& ?: Z8 k9 f* r8 {( P. uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" J! I% Y2 O" |# s* _, k+ BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) u( J4 G; ?+ q8 {3 X  B# aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% t4 `5 E3 B6 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 V3 i7 v1 ?7 t, ^+ mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; N0 T1 ]. r$ z: X- zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 ]6 K# X- ^* K9 t! ?3 H( U' q4 D. U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- S. `2 o4 E2 f3 V1 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* _* R, r5 P! A% b; o' R7 L5 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; l7 A- l* V7 g% C; Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  v! v0 o! J' l* q( k! ~, g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( S! N4 F8 K& e" t: B6 Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- `' d4 ?8 p8 M6 n# w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ [2 m2 u4 z# @* i( C  z  o( t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 O' d" W* }/ k1 t; M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! @: w9 ]" n7 t) J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! j" {! u% M. L; V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' X) C: O" U) F) @+ }' n3 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 H8 J( F. S- A+ K) b8 d4 d. r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 k. K- [. X2 j, G  ?2 P" g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 R2 m5 P" k. e% A: `" }, h+ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 n( G/ ]4 C3 @5 e! E9 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: L  ?+ S0 h! A) U9 m6 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; Q& k8 m3 Z/ A+ a& @) b- J* s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 b6 d$ I+ w' |$ I' x* d/ N$ r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 O, N( }8 H( X% J; R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 L% t' O" E/ K$ c/ b5 k( V: `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 C1 a+ P' c" l7 r; x; Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 b2 m  c# g! @: v8 P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) e/ b( h" U; _0 y( @* i5 L0 \我请你剖开它

9 v; ]0 s/ e$ G+ C+ d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, ?* Z2 X. A/ m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>