【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 Q4 P6 e0 n! P1 e8 A( \The sky is happy down to its soul
. V$ P5 `- I$ q& uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 G$ w2 H9 K0 c; p9 c# BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 a( K, q6 i8 z) w* u* B4 `Every other word you utter is love
* N: q0 T- j* b  }8 hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; Y. w& b+ N# x7 J* f- qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  Z! j3 T$ x$ FI want so much to see inside your heart
, c9 r/ e0 d" h$ P! Y* ]# jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 N* Z9 L: T1 J/ _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, Y7 o3 S1 j- C1 ~- e3 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, C8 i9 h# i8 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% g+ H$ g1 F: \" _# H% i) W6 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( T4 ?$ j5 R; B9 q. `7 c8 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ v" m9 q5 l3 S; A& T' o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 u+ w1 f* t9 \  ?3 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 P3 a( l, \3 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 a8 T+ z* E" ^% U+ k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; f; @8 c6 S2 y+ Z  D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 R+ y. P/ \" C: W9 \! D, Q<P>你无需担心</P>
6 ?/ p. k8 D9 @+ L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 V* J% r" F* e  Q$ z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 X5 P7 f7 ~! S. L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& g8 H* k9 U  c2 C4 _. _5 B2 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 z/ p9 k6 T* v3 o5 c! Q: ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& t6 M7 O2 d& c6 r) @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! H% k0 i* s  W; n8 [  ^% o- W* p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 P" ?5 F  Q- d! r5 A- m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* b. \) d4 s2 H( {8 z; r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) H5 A7 F, c  m6 {4 F3 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 b0 \& v: }- P7 ^1 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  e* ]! b8 U% ~) A0 D" Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, f# o/ u# I( B* Z3 D8 y3 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 F* l/ h; C# I0 p4 G8 o+ }# Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 h4 z" e' a; @1 J8 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  p! c$ q8 J) Q6 T- ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( B# A. w% C3 N; @' S3 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 |* |$ [% x, c( q$ ?0 U0 L4 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 ^) U7 }1 X$ P. I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 e% U0 c; a1 N& I' W; B. M5 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ r2 ?0 R7 A8 h# v1 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ b  y$ r2 u3 [( l- r: H, \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' ~, M4 H# J& `/ K1 _+ x8 i* b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; e6 l+ {" i3 Y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 y9 p2 e; K2 l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>