【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 }' D7 W+ `7 M  I" I) yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* U$ Q5 J+ G8 ?0 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 o, Z% m9 ^3 E: S) W/ w0 r0 m1 U7 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  p4 d$ |$ a9 j3 B& \) S; T) B, z6 G* RYou needn’t fear anything
# R9 s# Y& L* I  `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# J' [( c  q- U  g& o. `- i' }" iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ c' C: ?1 a+ ]7 E% dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 U9 _' c; P% |7 d6 V- ]& _& q( vI want so much to see inside your heart
( d. Q2 j! z( k9 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 p6 x7 |2 U( VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. P+ X! F8 f  w9 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 Y# d6 ]6 x( U+ d  Y, y, iWith such a tongue as yours,
* o$ C' c$ g: ?9 `; T) Z+ VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: d8 H' [8 n8 [! f8 ?6 \' U% J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ o- I" l7 c  U3 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* s7 D0 ?# Y6 N, s1 r- D9 H! x' I' Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" d& p" E# I- @; Q' s$ |( ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. e- d  ~3 l8 r8 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 g* H; I4 g8 |2 P# n$ Y& C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: p  }  O: ^' l. M0 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ |$ @7 p: {  ~4 B) [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( Y4 m8 o2 L7 r! t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" J& {8 }. G' x! ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) w: W& d" ?& `& Z9 K/ @. y" G9 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, v- K- B: I+ P* G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 O/ U+ X! I4 p; n: V3 V) J5 c# f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ E7 e+ ?0 D# d6 X0 D% |+ W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& k3 |; I5 [% m) j, O1 ?& ^# c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 z% S' t1 d8 l  |" E+ }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! i) F" K2 ?% Y; g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* O' W- v- ~: l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ d7 q" ~' E$ k9 K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, J' P4 @2 v- v4 |2 w6 v" \' M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! _0 x2 q/ p0 l# O4 C; q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 G0 t, [4 f) Z, N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ q1 l6 b* {9 Z" k# G' o: c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( g9 W( F- {/ [/ \& a3 U$ _, V9 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ v3 _. ~0 q/ {6 I" L+ @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) R9 v8 m( K/ d* O! |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 s, v! \5 S# P8 g4 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
) m, R5 M5 n9 ^% Z9 q9 h9 H
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>