【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( x9 A# O7 h) ?1 X' YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  b0 L$ |/ |" [0 j0 @& NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ c! _/ m' F, F) {, F8 x8 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( C8 E7 {8 m0 p3 hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" x: L, F; P- R! hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 P" l9 ?" Y, Q' P( }" GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 T5 n4 \' z0 d5 P. Y$ I' U/ gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; k  @" T8 e2 r0 G8 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 Q8 ]) l+ s/ J( F% {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- s" n9 {" u4 p& C) e$ J9 Q8 Q. ?8 p# |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 ?" {% U6 B+ U5 u" @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* w4 u6 `$ [9 D9 M* q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; a% K. t+ M) j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" _: g( w) U5 n; |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 S6 w  e9 T8 X$ H+ Z# r8 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" E  k% B* Q" V$ C" ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! @  d4 z; E8 `% l5 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% O$ ^. ?! s1 |% P1 P/ W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! Z" w% C- V) `$ H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' Z: Q; y7 y( [' [8 c3 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ k) r4 }! h. [: c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 c; y  v5 N; L" ~3 k$ W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, B& \! d! ]4 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( |- E( O" p4 E' V9 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( {) Y) h. V& w# U0 f6 b  k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& i+ p7 ^& z$ ]8 o/ F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ _# j- q1 h5 ?$ j% }) r* F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* }% a* y) o9 L6 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) U6 e  v  M9 |' b  e+ y1 f' `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 }$ ^& q" P1 ~0 G2 G' H<P>I regret not dying</P>
, X2 r) [" H( G2 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 L/ V$ N  [3 M) @0 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% p: Z. z/ l! p5 `+ ?' I2 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" P) J: \! o# V1 u2 l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- J7 U7 ]. [! h& G- {  ^- W6 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 }" w5 b* c" N1 C; u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) U7 v* Q) h! N( G% H3 b5 V# P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

" u# e3 l* E7 B! F+ \: Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" O7 {$ y( l. B1 m4 `' V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>