【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 k# ~  _/ b  b* x' a- A- e4 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ Q2 l- S& ?* }7 D7 _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' U3 m# t+ a) O4 L, n/ ^1 TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 l5 p& L  }7 V  `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 I8 Q! P  i: @6 M3 CI really want to know just how much you love me
2 ]' x4 |* Y6 h) N- ~+ a6 N" Y3 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' S, X' H/ p" G  e6 f1 n# g  ~/ PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 Y: O( l! y: q1 `# z) \I want so much to see inside your heart
! [4 }* a2 L; I4 D) R' FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" K$ T/ L5 d  {$ ]/ `I regret not dying
! N- }) ^9 d& K8 P% L% I" fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! O8 g3 `( @8 [2 VWith such a tongue as yours,
3 x1 B9 @. ]# u# hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 W3 G) r* G/ l1 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# o- v; A. E9 O% s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 L+ I: @; q! ~! q9 V' H& v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. w  d! l% o# Z! A. T; }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 p. X2 a8 M9 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 O$ S' g7 i9 P( I5 k5 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 L/ J" Z$ S. S1 @5 [5 _/ K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! [4 @) ?- X9 ?& x! F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" `* z+ ^7 L7 @% q6 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 S7 l( _' ~6 u. b  I) {& g0 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: \9 f, ]- `+ K% F1 W5 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 ^0 j9 a1 H) q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& y" i- v( S" |* R+ W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ o' o& T) |& v6 z4 [6 B4 F# t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 c2 G% E6 U$ j2 E9 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( q- v2 f4 g0 o% X0 T9 t9 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# M5 c% B( o7 a' H6 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% W8 y! X  S, e" t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 O8 @, g$ w! m6 W, C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- w  f( K7 d1 ^: M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ _& p! a' b3 @! X0 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( y# F1 O. ]+ t5 O# |3 t3 ?7 E, a0 t& p! ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! }5 @: f" E. _$ B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ L% F% M6 l# `% a$ x; J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& R* c/ M# r9 u0 j) W3 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ ?. O2 L9 ~+ p( R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>