【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, l0 e  @( k- X7 Q# _3 m. LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  r/ b5 q  j9 e8 g, T1 J3 O% jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 m' i8 R0 u# ISeeing the sky content with its love
. u$ x  v, \4 Q! Q% z  c2 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ `1 V. k, I6 C; g' m/ _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 q7 T7 k: ^+ ^4 J9 j( n6 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, o/ b; @8 d# a) N' W: f) VI want so much to see inside your heart
, K& k. N( C  Q2 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* D/ f9 f- `+ C% I4 W6 QI regret not dying
# e# Y& t& _* i4 s2 J3 a4 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! B' Z* d" Y6 E6 i$ P3 tWith such a tongue as yours,
- M' h$ `) B/ _0 n* U2 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# u4 m% I9 g$ [4 s- f/ i8 OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: V5 X+ H' b! |2 p/ B5 u$ G4 S* o7 G/ a7 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; O# @" y* M& Q# t. L- h3 Y8 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 t5 Z+ E) P6 b. }- n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) H& F6 y5 }5 `5 I2 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ S0 W2 ]' U6 [& j. o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* x9 \8 g) g. ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ z6 F# i$ O$ K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. {$ @) n% m4 S5 ^, y& r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 o/ f" A  h1 a1 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' U' W& d: c+ @" G5 C! Y: k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 Y+ ]6 H% v" M. i8 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( x7 A8 G. p2 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 q$ o6 w2 l. e- t' N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 C6 J* x& q$ \8 x% ]3 v# e( a, @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 d7 U# h- ^! f# a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* P( C4 ?8 A& k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 y$ l$ s1 f9 M- x! Z7 M& ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# p4 k4 v! a5 k9 E9 u5 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 w$ v: A6 N. B; A, m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" T3 k! z4 J' V* s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ P0 p4 O8 M* [; X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: ^- b" |# l, p( s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* f* q9 @$ y# C" ]! A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 |2 O9 ?# X9 `5 l% k8 [) ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>