【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 w: _/ p+ m+ d! x/ j+ I# @; j* JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 _- E  s% r0 k9 ?+ n" I0 P9 _7 n- xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 `; ?+ A6 d; h; BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: u2 Z- J! j1 w/ G) O4 d# A9 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! e5 [. X) p+ a5 K- x% PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( t9 k7 u; L8 Y9 |1 R6 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 c2 ~& [$ m+ Y* v& e" _6 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" U4 T# D2 }; ~6 L! D: rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" a2 W9 P. ~6 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 z: F6 o, [4 Q! x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, N% M; X' K# z& m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* O/ y, ]) B; z* U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 B1 [/ M0 Q: k" r& b0 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; b. B1 t% _9 |+ N) P, m; c+ m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" o0 H* [8 m( q" n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& ?! S' @9 H  k4 y. a; B3 `5 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' G0 Y9 f. `# N& K& W- x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) S, k0 M: y( Q2 o" ]3 L  d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 ~0 w. W2 D3 ^/ o& r# m, k. ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% ?1 m4 K9 d. J8 c<P>你无需担心</P>
* O5 o# Y( f1 |3 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, Z) V% m. G- f3 p. ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 u/ y* b8 ^$ Y+ c  W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. _' l8 R! j7 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 i' T/ Q6 m5 j( a2 \6 d8 A. k; A6 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( N  E3 x* Q( q2 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, o( B$ ]& m2 {- o5 p# M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 h4 ?3 b2 q0 P: l8 G$ j: ]3 L4 x/ a! {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( q1 Q8 w: }; H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 X* T. B" ~: u, ~9 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% \+ \" E+ k4 s7 T& g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! @$ @) g1 a- O0 P; g' @% y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ S$ ^7 j0 }; L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ \, O0 V6 z( x1 M2 t% l' F. I<P>I regret not dying</P>
* s* ~/ T, W1 Y2 x* m; W& ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  {. ~) x9 u  d  H! |5 @: d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* d7 w1 q# r5 a% v- I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 M: n4 g8 N+ a9 ^( z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 `9 Z0 h8 h" y3 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 e* G9 @' y& k# Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% `5 k8 q  m& \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  b/ a2 k) k2 R; B3 |我请你剖开它

+ G, f! z# j, Z  ]& i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>