【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# |5 \. x& o! _. KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! r; Q5 U3 I% Q' q" vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, G2 g4 i: `( L9 z7 E9 RI really want to know just how much you love me
5 O* ~6 {) w, N7 M4 p" HI love you I love you with all my heart
. L' M) r& g$ Q2 ]7 s+ S1 ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 N1 A  }4 j3 i& L" |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 M- j  ]& R' I" Z0 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: f0 `5 \! X- tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 {3 J+ b% S" D0 I, n: u0 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: Q, |7 G0 [' h2 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* R7 b. L5 ~% W/ @$ ~1 a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; n$ E) i8 x, Q9 h/ g* {4 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& |, x6 }. ]- w; Y) G+ [; r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" W4 z% b) N' T. f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 w% z0 H; D$ l1 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 j8 _# u8 j3 x  n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& i( p! M- T4 n8 y) W9 B7 u/ P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- p/ z9 L: {+ C' ?3 I  {: x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& C( L) G" C8 H3 ~, g* P% N  h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 Z' @7 i$ F- ~" V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 [( H# U" q, `0 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 W/ U! t8 ~; h4 h) W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 O) j* {& Q+ S+ Q. M$ o2 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" ?* P1 j. u6 i% \& r6 S1 H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ J7 }4 m& r( h3 f# {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% I/ f0 g6 x' s4 n* Q% E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 i3 Z# J1 V2 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( e( G- o3 c0 u  Z, \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) o3 e  C9 J- A' R1 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 T# e( b: I7 Y$ B0 _: t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: U7 r* h! ?& b0 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, v) M) H2 H% z0 ]% X; Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 o0 _. G4 R$ O( ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! K3 H# x" @5 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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) J6 k5 O# `4 N( ?2 \! U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>