【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; J2 y5 H7 X' i* r歌词我附在后面。
- @* p9 N3 u  x$ t' G2 r9 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 X# J$ R$ j6 P! h$ ]7 J, {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 J( F+ M! ]2 O0 K- jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 _# o) `, z& u" E) |; AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ h+ {$ r% ]/ z3 i* G7 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* j2 q& S. z0 w. ]) O5 dI want so much to see inside your heart
- _. ]7 @% M  T) _5 S+ B# F; UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ r" D4 M# O9 i9 B, m5 F( TI’m still filled with fear
: ]  `0 r: ^2 o+ n# f, U  {( jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 O$ ~- m5 L, Q; }6 U5 y: l$ [4 P$ zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" s" N: \0 C: h9 WWith such a tongue as yours,
2 G4 q0 _8 o0 }) xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( M  F, V. G2 S+ W5 O3 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" w( C& B: e8 N/ U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ \8 M* n6 i- z& e$ X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" s- A& }# b: Q0 I7 [0 d: D3 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ \9 a  L' e! K' p6 t7 T& x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  C- U) E) K" S$ _. [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- I: Z% S) j* v, e6 h& s' Q! F% q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. I) y  I0 E3 \+ Q4 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 n8 i4 _0 b3 [4 n& D+ ?' y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" d8 W$ ~* X; W, e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) j2 V- L1 H9 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# M# X1 `7 Q5 _- J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 s* _1 j4 G5 e. t( B$ R) g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: v) a. _) _; d; |0 [8 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- N0 I% D& `: H1 G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 y# z% j1 M+ L. M- k+ W9 Q, d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. `9 O8 ^( t# C! p: t: Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 S; U; }' Y! j7 p: o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- h- U' I" ^7 _9 x5 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, ^3 V/ G2 v1 w, n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" d- h; V7 b2 \2 t9 ^7 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 S9 r- k) P) g1 W/ h6 F# y! n0 m8 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, O* z5 X9 A' G7 G- E; H% g' d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 |2 u& }8 d  s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, l, x+ y0 f) n2 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' V* V$ ^2 X8 c8 X! C/ S1 y$ a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  }. d& y) o: m8 P9 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: {5 V: {" c9 u( F$ @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; C+ `# A2 v! M; B* n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 \9 Y1 S: {7 i; B4 N( J我请你剖开它

; I$ t+ h; y( s, m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>