【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 |! l. Y) G+ ]: i4 q. O; K6 g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 }+ s5 n  f5 Q5 }8 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 h( j# e# o. L. z/ n1 v* L$ Q3 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) P2 W7 g6 j5 J* w+ Q) `5 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, b) ?: N) D5 }* |" |You needn’t fear anything
9 W/ ^  z2 k) o, R% r) PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ C$ j+ I8 c. d! z6 N: o4 SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. X/ _4 C- P4 n! [I want so much to see inside your heart
# ^9 [  p2 O; A8 X* N. I/ `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ H6 U  M/ y; X; e5 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 \1 }3 }$ _! Y/ B9 A, iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% V5 x, ^. A/ r" U$ R+ w- j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% x8 y3 S- w) U; m' _& N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 V4 |2 e& H) b0 Q/ m7 M4 M0 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- Q. ^( L* B$ l- p' R$ @! g5 T% y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# ]5 L; M7 T( w% t2 F/ Q1 P2 W1 b6 v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 p; v5 O! H% {$ s2 [) A+ |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. a- G* ?6 Q& \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 n, [, [7 Z  \7 _7 Q  v: o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 p! \. G/ w- n8 @: I/ |& [, }' |! ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ {) `. `# ?' `# e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ W8 Y6 V2 H% J- D! v$ @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: W5 ~( I& T! ]: t, Z; o: a, Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 F7 e/ T) F7 t) C2 H4 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 |) `- D* G' u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' [, J9 A" e2 y4 w: S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 B5 b5 w- F( {" ^7 ^  G- {" H/ {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# D* ~: Z8 Q. ?* a  G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- u/ `6 J4 n' z  G) ]3 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 L" E9 e1 _1 m" G: E4 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: i" Y4 G+ y+ h5 O# [6 m" u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, w5 j  E0 j: G0 t5 W% z8 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 l8 B2 `2 s& s! k3 h; b( L" ?) ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 g) {& x* x/ W" f# G) U5 q. Q7 p, _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) n3 B, j0 j. s0 Y6 g2 p0 @" N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. ~" {' I) s. Q$ C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( L' |- P2 r3 s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
9 R# m9 h6 N9 Q$ }/ ^
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>