【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 w4 T. O. b- M( {: {3 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& G- |) u9 W( J# \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) p" G0 a# V( S3 F( w& JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 d- X/ \- e! ?3 I' z2 mSeeing the sky content with its love
2 D% @7 _# q8 ^% p# ?* H2 o. bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 i& ~- N0 g: Q3 \% \- H) yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: c; _4 g; `$ [8 AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 n2 p) @  \( t1 M7 U5 q9 F5 U) sI love you I love you with all my heart
9 g. j+ ]- E2 ?) h: cNothing can compare to my love
% q2 K+ U4 z# _0 [2 X: q" R  QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. L3 x: W8 _9 ~$ c; F, w1 |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 _( ?+ Y1 \3 f; N+ GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 ^( X: j' O% _' A7 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* h7 z; Z- k8 w7 l9 j, w8 mWith such a tongue as yours,
6 b  I, u! n; p' z$ ~; FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; V8 O$ \% v$ m0 p  i7 u& j+ [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# h1 y% n, |8 K& x; v' w3 }. @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 ]$ o1 D* M/ Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' U/ p) N) r- \" _7 R+ Y3 @9 f2 j4 d8 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, i" u+ Y- ?9 P* g. ~8 {( z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  a* D$ e2 T6 P0 ~4 k0 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  u$ v3 }+ v+ f  O( k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% c- z4 S1 N  ^) u, l( L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# C: H* D8 ?1 `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 k! q5 V+ L0 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! I9 Z+ f8 Q1 h" ^, d3 F" C' c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. ^, N, c- q+ B) H; A) G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 p: u- Y* j: p1 m2 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 @5 S# o0 b$ _; }6 r( g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 P, Y, m7 Z4 ?% e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  z4 C; M9 V) |+ H" [3 V; Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: C  o% ~! h* W7 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ c. P/ W; P5 y! i% n- i# P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; M( k7 z  O9 {- s, {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' {  U# x7 ^6 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* n- H' q1 g/ Y/ Q. H4 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, {' a# X$ e- T! o7 R- D$ f+ X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>