【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ R- ~# J+ Q! @* t! k, i; \, N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ \7 Z6 I; d! M' N1 L, HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' C$ i( g. D; ^+ e" [: j2 G; jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" l8 u2 e& N: I: C! j: vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& s4 U& k9 \7 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: L+ n+ I. }. rYou needn’t fear anything
* O. _; P7 e! f' D' m2 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: b' C" Z/ f& t3 J5 j% bEvery other word you utter is love
8 @! c- {  S+ Z" PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: c0 E6 d0 m4 n' l/ NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  o) j9 u9 x9 t2 N5 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, `  K% R' t, CI want so much to see inside your heart
6 l+ t$ q( T( h& [7 ~* vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; n* h7 r6 |; v. e" @8 |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! k  ]. M# O( q3 X, nWith such a tongue as yours,
% w- e% i0 O* k5 n* sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  c& p6 O% q) r0 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 Z$ d5 F$ X* t) @/ I1 b+ P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; B: Z3 G0 ?3 i$ b3 x& g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' x% E/ N$ f7 Z2 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" v; j4 p; t7 T: I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 v1 Y! C7 w3 k" H, a- ^; a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, X3 l$ _8 n! n& @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, X( ]3 B! Q9 F1 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! g8 ~* C) A1 E9 T" Y8 S2 M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% P- {! {* w. u. B. q+ {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ [0 x0 U. N- w+ C4 ]4 c* r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. O. R+ W4 g$ w: h0 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  L) t8 {6 I( w# I  `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ d& n  i, B- k# K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% c( ^; i0 o9 m" D$ \! N/ A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 q2 C3 [% q  i0 W. |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  B4 S+ a" @" t4 o# z% L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 u! b$ D$ n* t9 I1 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! y* i/ }; m# T7 @; K8 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 G4 s; d& X3 }- w) }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. s- ?. `, V7 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% h/ Y& e( \3 k7 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* |4 J7 b6 P* l+ D8 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  j; m$ [+ q1 s  k- C7 ]4 R( N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ R* O7 M: M) R; J5 W  t! Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% W8 K5 `9 X+ O+ ?. Y2 Y' Y- S我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>