【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( O8 [0 q7 ^% i0 [$ @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. X6 i0 A6 C$ Q% C4 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. U* t6 Z, m, XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ U2 Z0 ^- Y9 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! t) \$ ?: d8 n4 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ b) b- Q- p+ Z! l' [# ~3 P" TYou needn’t fear anything
5 V7 H5 L! c  EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 J- Y+ e; n+ ]+ {+ @& yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 }) u, U6 D: TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: v8 {" F2 w2 T7 Z) n; ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 I" K0 V6 r3 s8 |4 n2 Z) ?4 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  v4 t6 ]5 t* b8 K% _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 A" a: b+ a( _1 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  P, y" e% j/ j. C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% `1 p6 I' L, l7 L3 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 g) d6 b. T& T7 W* t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 Y8 V- k  t! R2 B: ^8 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* i9 H  U" c2 e/ `! ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 v, ?3 `2 m8 P7 @8 R% ^# o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( `+ [2 [& i: b* t+ q1 c" F$ J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) g5 N. D' ?$ c3 B) W; |: B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ E7 \* m& F5 p% ~7 h1 N5 t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* y2 b5 @1 R$ ~- S1 {* B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' }% d+ n. j4 [& a0 ~9 I! @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: R* J: ~4 a& M* N) u* v7 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" c5 }1 \) b$ F& k4 k1 T" ], E: J8 ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' m) X' D; T& N$ _! o, L  _6 }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% b. ^* b, z9 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- U, O: l* E: Y8 G) a& x0 q( f' U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% {) e$ ~* C, S; J4 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! `: B, Y* Q! f. J* F2 g! \  ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- D$ T4 |) H) d# U9 u9 ^' K; [$ Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. }7 _# `8 d: H, k3 q; }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 e, h6 n) z+ f' T- K4 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ K1 z2 a2 v1 j% m7 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 `7 E& ?( w5 h% S! I* _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 C' Q& v8 q4 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* I0 e' G, f+ ~: J4 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) H! s  a+ N/ f$ O) D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% S1 N& H$ n3 A8 T# x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ x0 n! W  j) G3 a' K. ]- t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* u0 C- p5 J/ b/ M* J( n+ J+ Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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0 s) m5 O, i1 Z( ]0 o6 z) f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; p% p) G+ t) N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>