【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& G( d* u- ~4 t  f7 u4 _. c6 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 t/ B6 o- @2 L. Z: HThe sky is happy down to its soul
  Z* g. A4 x3 F! B5 E& n3 l' WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 M( t8 N5 d5 h. t4 X$ }5 t. IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ G9 z4 a( [* S% ^6 d: V0 }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, T5 V. ~* V4 P+ K' }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 s. g1 W( ^) K9 ^2 r5 F  HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; H+ N: @1 F* `# v/ RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 Q; |/ u" b6 e% }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 w2 A9 j- G! z; ^+ m. x$ t5 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ C) Q" t( p* E) j; O) _+ ?& zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 h. p' L  e: F9 Z5 i0 A$ S) c- S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! |( l/ o( \; r  p* G2 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% H* T# v$ u5 R9 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 w5 j0 ^, a7 a: B# y; s' g+ F, a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. u% O# F& ?7 O; R/ n; d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# ], {4 d. C; P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  E( Z  q4 L0 o# S" {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 K3 v- M$ h1 Y7 h2 m6 b9 t- U: A& r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; }' q- e3 Q+ k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* X4 ?- t5 v# r( ?* n! w  e& s6 C  _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( s! I' Z; Y/ R+ t) p6 `5 I( @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 [3 C) t+ z& Z( Z1 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; a& E7 ]/ s1 u# n, B* a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ q! M' D2 I1 a) A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 g4 h, u) O" Z5 f" a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 \+ u. v# Y; D; k4 @) H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. c/ _: k7 ]' S) |, k6 C: w* y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: W& M$ K3 s' Z8 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* S, R3 M) H# Y& V+ G5 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: [% a' k* M0 a* M6 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: R8 ?) ~& h2 c; p! `  ~8 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; i) V) H9 y  r( V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 r4 J; k2 ?  P+ ]; D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 n' {0 o4 a( _$ p; Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ H; F+ }" ~! q' N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) z) t8 E8 Q& {5 f9 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ T! P; B! g5 n  U9 J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: y. o1 l) q9 h% i) K) k' E& M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( e/ D4 _* j) s. y; j% Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 b1 b0 M. ^- h1 _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ J  W$ b) T- C7 j) u8 Y3 P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>