【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 z( e- n/ w9 F7 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& ]7 U; o2 y6 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' Z# O# L+ J0 I% P$ N2 n8 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 o9 K; ]% q+ ^9 U8 z5 P$ |( qWith the moon kissing it every night
$ P. j8 P; r" f* |) ^Seeing the sky content with its love
3 e7 U& H. Y" s4 }+ L: W- MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ I. C$ l; G+ r$ X' pYou needn’t fear anything
' ^7 n; R  B4 y  \+ @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ P/ g, J( ]0 \, f. rEvery other word you utter is love
: m+ X% f* d' I6 e" O2 QI really want to know just how much you love me
) c1 [1 B3 c- j4 N$ s6 cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ M0 o( N, y( u9 g8 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- f8 N+ F# [, T7 q! j& NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! c8 e) `/ F5 Q- w6 S7 RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ ]: M! k0 ?' o: _2 e9 d1 g% oI regret not dying
& V& P0 C2 G. g4 j* X! cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 R. l' y8 W4 V" U# ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! J, D0 I2 n4 E- j/ b  Z3 {; XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. |9 ?3 q3 i  dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 \  F- A- z8 s6 h, n0 h) R9 l& y4 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 P# j! U  V; z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- q. e4 E* V' c9 B2 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' A( W0 D* K  z( {3 S  |5 Q; s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 L8 p% ]( R9 P, u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 G7 r! R" R8 Q, P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ X  N' ~$ X$ c$ D' w9 g2 [) o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* @' x3 o  Z0 n5 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( C" X9 p* M7 y" h$ \2 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! G% i* n- _+ q1 W$ Y/ t5 X- i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  Q7 o+ y8 x2 p3 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' w2 S& d6 x) y  B2 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 i# `* F2 t+ J# ]; f: O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 H; F3 \8 J- d% T% u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 L2 c2 \5 y( H- |; j4 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 K6 p, F/ v/ p+ |6 t2 i8 M: |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& h  N) Z5 l5 o* ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 g7 \+ X9 C1 E7 p* S$ F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- W/ ]. w* H  Q/ c" c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. P  ~% [7 w+ R2 t' P- h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 [3 U+ L7 W: i; |3 K5 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: s2 l$ k+ ?4 l, h% v: K3 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  i/ `" V8 [  c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 [* I( K) Q1 C/ m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# v2 r# B4 K; Q% @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 O$ r! I" ~3 @. D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>