【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* J) |* o/ s9 t" `6 G; z/ sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 i) o$ m1 O+ s9 P- uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ m0 I- ^( r6 X/ n+ \: Y4 X3 j" W; ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, [; C4 c$ O, G8 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ {/ K7 s' e7 R4 N" I, GI want so much to see inside your heart
, Q$ y2 h& \: O' `! b. s8 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 q" Q0 D9 Q1 y" }3 t) vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, V) O' s  j" G, TI regret not dying
8 l8 Y0 j1 N: A" q* s7 A* Z+ n5 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# F# d9 N- g" ~5 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ E) _$ j3 H5 e1 ^9 {, p$ A& {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, S5 M3 S4 @$ {+ q1 w7 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: j& u* N( j$ b" V: k' v% w4 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( |* e$ [! W7 P2 V+ |7 w# C  x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; h8 l" ]/ N+ e1 t& _1 n8 o  k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 F; {' p  l1 Y" ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* S; t( i. x) j$ @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 i9 i; B5 a! W9 z) k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 Z5 F# c: y$ d3 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) |6 U7 W! H0 b! Q, X: ^; r. \5 F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( c# o" h( B% M5 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) C/ h0 }* N# R4 B5 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 H7 e2 B; s1 j/ I. \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 e7 f: S. o' L; j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( c% f, O5 J$ g$ F. t5 _. b- _% Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' J- H- U. C8 E* c- U3 j4 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' b, d9 ^1 N$ [* d) Q6 F' A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 [; X9 F; b" _( U$ a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 ]( l( K2 `! X5 I. ?( J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 K$ U+ V3 j$ B# L3 W; J8 j3 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 k: @$ Y  ^8 D/ j' @* r, Y7 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ v  a" Z; B; ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' W0 ?# {) [! c' E" C3 C( M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; O- {) n# w. E* h$ q! S( m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  q! W3 S9 t: l/ C( w0 W) D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% J/ I; T, n% d* g+ i+ ~8 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 u3 K( x# p8 W4 ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>