【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 B9 Q2 F8 i# c* a" PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* C6 N: ]2 E  e0 A+ r6 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 Q- C2 n7 i# h, R& _% o% @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 a) L0 K' {2 K, l$ _$ \- Q1 P) JYou needn’t fear anything
) s# g7 i0 o4 J% cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 o, u/ ]$ v/ R1 }; wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ s4 N6 k. c; F- v3 eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 S4 K0 h* c; j, t+ m, iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& N  `" U8 m2 h  m* DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# L) ~2 ?. F" S/ qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% @- K2 F( v' N% OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( S/ e2 E* T" m1 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; C- `4 F8 E2 L! N" S( Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) G( B" U  h- E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 V8 j! o& `2 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 E) ?6 L0 p! E4 i" G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: k$ q4 m; e* b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* q0 }4 e) a4 t+ i2 T; S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( q1 H. K! C7 _/ @1 z0 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ x) s- ?% k$ t1 z& x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ L# j2 |! O8 r% E7 j& m0 E9 }, s  r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ G( F; s7 H! U0 e, f, g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  d2 D9 L, D! C0 o" ~9 E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. D" y: f. m$ ]9 m$ l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 o3 t, v. ~0 T8 Z" l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ ^. n  \5 @4 O/ U% S7 u% T8 H! l. g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, X# n$ u* A6 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& i  _2 w" \! @  C8 ^6 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 X/ [/ g% i  e$ a  t1 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" G  \0 @7 g' j! q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 L. j+ }' h: y: H' N$ e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% d) w& i  O# k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) N, r3 {# f) |, C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 E# r, h- {  d, u9 M& V# S2 \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& u2 Y9 Y  U+ n4 W# t9 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 `6 |# G) [) f0 q& W* V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' x$ R5 i1 [" X' h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: |0 [2 [4 p+ ?2 @1 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 c& f3 H3 h2 z( R: c) B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 f+ d: B6 a$ b( D! q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- g" V; H* k& e, N+ G0 P我请你剖开它
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. k( P& \' }" f+ ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>