【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( N; F, ~. o+ [) p3 A* `1 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 d& c& N$ P) ~9 E* n+ YWith the moon kissing it every night
+ e8 V: K, F, ^9 s( G  m. k* ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 [% y9 r4 W# H+ i/ C3 DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! L1 f5 D# y, {2 |8 BEvery other word you utter is love
" l( F% P* b9 r$ @3 f" D3 s, aI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 }. ]' Q' |. LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# c2 i$ d. G3 Z0 n! I) r# V3 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ k, `) Q& A& e2 l: [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; d% ]  F& H- EI regret not dying
' N& k; A$ n" mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( N/ K% l% Z' s2 F4 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# a+ I" h+ k9 l0 z) {7 o: tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) A. r$ Q. T+ l& t. T+ P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  U1 m/ ?! d; M$ t/ V4 k$ ^7 ]' n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 Q  d+ J) g2 E' C% R3 d) s' g" Q7 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 Y! p# b) v0 k9 Y) s- s, L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% y  E( I' R; n3 t# i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* @9 t. `. J' p' }7 w4 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 e# `0 l4 O0 W# G4 e% A8 _: w1 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 k. G1 ~. E+ ]6 |<P>你无需担心</P>
: ~1 ~% F# }4 Q. ~, ]! s- _# W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 f* O2 D5 W% m  o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' P: U4 E" w+ h8 i  R/ J1 P- p5 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& |% ?5 o& A! f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# N9 L  O" \! ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ ?, Q$ @* g, ~" x. d4 _9 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# @! z8 B' k% E3 w* y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( c7 o4 U) g6 `  J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 b0 {6 V# G* }5 s0 l! }) [6 T: a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ V, S4 X  h4 n/ m& Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ R" V3 X2 A% ?1 @0 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. L; S2 s) b. e' z! n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 _# l4 I9 C" [% e$ ?9 p9 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ C/ o1 V) c3 A" J6 l( R/ y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" \6 d% q% I; I4 O4 \% [0 Z' e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& S& v8 A, N0 ~0 d# L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 Q: e/ s" _+ H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 B/ s2 O/ i* ]% [# R7 ?0 e0 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& d7 x  X4 k  s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( o7 @  g0 h' _$ h我请你剖开它
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% L0 u$ t- D2 x$ d' _, [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>