【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 E5 p0 }2 K1 g6 Q* {: u. NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 H. |) M# W3 k* KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 R# |9 W( |2 V# S+ A, w. `With the moon kissing it every night
6 V0 A$ b/ i/ t  RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 f8 a; r" e7 E3 [5 _# pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; e8 m" _8 ]8 G3 u2 {Every other word you utter is love
0 v- w! M  i4 b0 g" N8 dI really want to know just how much you love me
3 ^  s- P# k  m& Q4 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
3 }2 v0 k1 |* W  GNothing can compare to my love
3 V7 R0 R6 Z% B" {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ u: c5 Y! J5 g' MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* p* Q9 b1 }: x% D% o7 U% T3 C$ ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 f2 z" m1 t8 [9 ?I’m still filled with fear
( x# f% U' K& p0 A, B: K2 w1 f  j  \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ l/ z3 |  c/ I& d! x( D) }. s+ nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 |: d% U0 V1 d; Q2 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# K+ T: J8 f; B/ B# e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 K1 R# y" B# @# ]# e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 T: j9 U9 X* p  v) o( m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, W! i5 }' s) u8 G% D' f: d" G: X# u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ }/ k0 n2 m6 z' Q& V: [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! E7 S/ |+ u2 g$ h/ A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# f% U. o5 c2 M: I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 ^7 w8 R  n- ?5 `. b4 D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" a$ j3 d6 M1 r! m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& k: ~& w6 D  x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& u& {# ]7 s" ~$ m1 O+ Q( w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( [( R& B& P1 s0 b- I0 |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ A% Q" x2 O" ?5 ]! \* Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- \7 |" ?& ~6 @) A% X5 v! y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( I1 `: q8 [+ _* {, O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ C, v+ `; p7 j! L" {% s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& m1 A- d/ w; D7 K4 {) ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 V# K; d' w& l1 H' u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ i8 \  M* z6 a9 P/ T5 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ Y4 ]/ k/ }/ y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! a6 b* m; R2 N+ i' K& Z& i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 ^/ w" z6 T3 [  V# R+ o0 W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ R( l" e* j1 z) E5 O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) p3 J( V7 o8 I- [+ M. f<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 P; E, s( d" z# `/ w# F& P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 V5 G4 b2 n5 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. v9 p& Q* g' p% s- e2 l+ C1 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 k/ ?* G% \% y8 N' z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" f+ Z: J6 {, X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 p( m& P/ g5 D& q0 ?* M% Z5 W5 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ z& ~% K) t1 Q) y: ?0 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>