【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 C! K2 Y; R+ H, O6 \" C  j' H; B' uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% {9 T: K2 s+ L0 M2 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% g# n7 w5 b  F, m, J8 uWith the moon kissing it every night
/ W) H0 f3 U+ G: FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 b8 {* ], f9 C# ?- bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 o* }5 n* h2 c: }( x+ ?/ SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 c' f; r8 e& V- g5 l- R9 `8 l3 WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 @/ h, V8 Y& @4 SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& J( o1 V( U4 L# ^4 D3 x. C3 g- FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* \  l% a; ?' d! e. I8 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: O0 ?8 w! I* F7 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 @! H$ K/ a1 c& L7 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; Q1 x) w# b; n4 f* G; o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' [/ M, V  i# t$ k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ~8 g) R% |; v2 _9 p% A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 T2 _* `/ v8 E7 {4 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ y1 A/ M8 h6 `5 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 ]  {; F1 N" s9 _5 S- I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 Z3 e. \7 h2 m$ }' U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 r/ i% c1 y" L, w9 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ t2 ]$ t3 R' D. T& L) g! s8 r1 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# l$ Y- c2 w9 j4 d) N5 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 O/ k" G. p' V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! F8 C  s! ~( j# s% m4 s& j6 T) r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" h+ G$ R$ d# H. W. j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" @) j# O. L. w7 J! V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- d9 d: @/ q4 N& N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! m/ ]3 w* S/ i) y+ F0 d1 j. |) w# g. R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 r7 ]5 k; s  b) c9 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! m! A5 Z- _  G9 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: ?$ y/ n/ ?8 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% e, }+ W2 g) Q1 T; F+ l, f9 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ R& v8 |( y: \4 t. \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 b  I# I$ a& N# W- g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 \4 `* Y6 }% D6 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 T% t& _2 f, U; J! l- d8 l( y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! G* }2 i8 r  Z$ d1 E* O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 R+ T; b3 _% h6 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 X& A& M, W! E8 ]; {# C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 q" x' M/ r5 T9 l  G, y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 M. @5 G; `- m3 \2 Y, v* e6 `4 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 M0 A$ X+ F7 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( [# H9 z& C+ n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% ^& J; u# L& |+ J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 `  z; e. r8 i' W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>