【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: e" u1 X  }& {" g5 rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 J+ B: W2 C% t, DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 V7 f4 ^& j8 Y( G6 K# J# A8 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 U/ H. ?' R+ Z+ a6 g/ VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ r6 }* a4 x; ]+ RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) s# u. k: R, g1 T& i8 r. MI really want to know just how much you love me
: O0 U- N& r( a6 l) j5 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! @+ d; A9 S8 I! C/ F9 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, s- g7 Z, j& [9 G; qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) m+ c+ Z( K/ z9 x4 }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' V( l9 R0 i0 X; u3 i9 U3 YWith such a tongue as yours,
2 t" g# U! j0 J6 C8 J: {! ]; |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' c2 D4 g9 C3 L& N2 k9 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( q9 L/ [4 _  v# oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& B# W4 M7 Y; I/ O0 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ ^5 l7 H5 r2 Y9 L/ }+ G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 ^& p, H2 l. n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! J- n3 s/ Y3 J' t4 L& ]# a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 b9 C% e8 G2 U7 r9 v2 K4 V0 d  ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 R- A+ i2 S/ N9 i2 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. e) n3 z8 h6 a# I4 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  ^" b0 l- a  z; n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 N/ j4 J9 @4 w* L) {3 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# p5 I  T6 L/ ?6 r8 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- _/ n: b) }  n* b0 [1 ]3 D. j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 ?  n6 v  A1 t/ y8 g# S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 e3 e$ z" ]/ J/ v# F* X' \0 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# y! u" u$ t/ Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" q# j4 v3 k" }* `7 R3 T& o/ s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. c3 y- D4 e6 F* e1 r" h( ~# f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' ~. @6 j6 T; [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: `6 p6 L# Z; H" o! f2 N; S' K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 f+ k0 t; M! f/ y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 p" U! n# I% H  e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 @- o9 b! C$ A* {/ u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, b( d$ o' I$ g7 {( A0 ]5 i8 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 h/ h! o/ y! S, ?, Q$ d<P>I regret not dying</P>
. L+ [: q4 P( t) `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* \4 y$ n8 F! t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) L% Y7 M. n2 \/ [6 i8 U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 _8 z% i0 F, x* k2 t) `9 J0 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 \% g/ N  ^& R$ R, c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: \! Z6 u5 N) k: G$ T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; e& N" b8 o0 X  X0 i" | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>