【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 t' G2 {" y. V5 E歌词我附在后面。
. ?, \- u1 i- ~$ H1 ^, a  p* l9 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' ?9 H  _" W0 f& ~8 t, }- L) u* ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 Y2 A# v0 x; J, a" GThe sky is happy down to its soul
( [% q2 T. A% q6 L4 T9 CWith the moon kissing it every night
9 \' z- d* B6 T6 TSeeing the sky content with its love
5 `( F% b( o8 W. [, i9 U- K; fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 G2 \" r+ E$ ~4 ?You needn’t fear anything
- S. B3 Z% U5 S0 |+ SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; z$ G/ D% H2 y! C, FI really want to know just how much you love me
' M8 M) c3 j& F& Z6 |$ dI love you I love you with all my heart
) m8 @' A2 \2 ~9 i2 |2 i$ PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 I* K. j3 C! ^9 J0 @% kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 f5 x/ f1 t! O# c: tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- n' Q3 v* T6 {( r* d8 b7 T4 UWith such a tongue as yours,
% D: t8 B1 ^  b2 Q# ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 r9 }! W  f# b4 O: c1 _# g( }2 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 m  F$ @& f8 p7 v! Z+ ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. P. k3 d0 |" \9 x  }7 t+ ]( L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 u% F7 n5 H) L; ]( G. Y+ Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  R$ z4 ]) d: ~4 g2 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& {! R7 s2 [2 j$ |8 a- Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, S1 t% ?  x& t( ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; R* {1 S1 _3 p( E! l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! l6 }0 D1 u1 \5 ?- Y& ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 X5 F$ K) {2 P9 p$ O5 i' J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; H" d, E3 w3 q5 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* B& y5 }1 l+ ^' T* f% _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 t- P' K3 T6 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 [4 r  \; j, y! C; o; {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 o5 D; k9 }* u" {1 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  B7 D/ B6 Z2 ?9 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* u. ]% e. \  X3 `3 a6 h$ E6 q7 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 D8 g# C- u2 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 i4 J0 K9 h. p5 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, z; Z3 _" x2 z; {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ v) s& A0 y- v3 B6 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 {; P% R/ o! ]$ ~: v5 h& {+ ~, a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: [- @+ b/ z- l5 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' P9 M1 j  @; l. Q5 O3 h2 ]9 R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' q7 U* ^' P( r3 J2 H9 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  @' N5 Z4 A# @  P3 {8 u& Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ D1 [4 y3 H, q* v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# E: t* i" L& o, C( |6 H6 e! d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' A- f! z7 s0 K9 S# I8 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 z" T; z( m# R5 n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 w8 L5 t; S) Z& l3 Q我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>