【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 e& a# X; X7 u" W  z1 f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# K# m- E, `( R: e- b' Z- ~( @& m6 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 x4 ]4 T5 _. O; Y& e& m6 Z6 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
% f) j3 M* v% W7 G( ]" `# zWith the moon kissing it every night
" ~, o! d( c/ I* }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 o  r5 \; `+ j6 n5 R; QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 k  T) E' X3 z0 z) v& iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, T4 i- o& X1 m. }6 b6 [' UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ x8 _' c  D0 v9 jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 t+ S- w5 z0 P+ b: X/ zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. l: B) e: H' |$ T! f3 r6 T9 q0 H. \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 u7 [: x! M6 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( j+ u" W3 u$ R$ y% u5 |* `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 L+ c, h; |% G3 J. x# ^  {* a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 d1 T- R2 Q1 D  n4 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! H* y' h" b- a$ D' q' ]. X- S8 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 Y$ i$ f/ Q8 m$ G, X0 L; m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; B1 i8 ?! c- [. Z$ N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, ?9 B& V- \0 \5 B" v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 G" V' Q3 m- r: T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: \, E  b" [. Z4 G' d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 U) X2 J0 l+ g' \8 S& _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; J& Z8 V! o, j- a+ ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ I  O0 ]5 u) X; N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 M% q* ?9 u8 U4 ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 k- d# _; J8 D- n0 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 I5 H3 L9 R, N/ O1 ~. D# `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% v  m4 A4 _+ T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 y7 q$ _7 X, y. B+ }2 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! N0 S# I1 z) Z; S1 e) p2 j4 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! a6 E: C: {2 ~; V! G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 @4 Y* i2 |* l& g! S9 G, B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  j5 x: v) U5 [1 Q0 `- j, y; s5 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* A9 j# |6 s8 O5 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ |  I+ w7 {$ S, N7 c4 E# \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 Z" w/ }$ _) P& B( v% \9 j" d' R% C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. q# z  C5 d9 D& Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 p: i. {# c. S7 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 O6 G2 B+ {: @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% f! j) W5 H( l. u' R! G6 M$ o; a7 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 z, N- @+ a- w1 r9 R9 Q0 h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 a, b9 [( j( G. s' o) D/ `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>