【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 S  |( g8 j1 B$ t9 I  {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* G' m! f" I; w  j1 ]! K" _3 q' oWith the moon kissing it every night
/ R' ^) s- k/ @4 uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 F+ C6 \! l* }6 Q. `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 d3 l6 F7 i' n# _1 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 ~' G* I) U9 H( i1 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" r  j; }1 d* W6 m9 X- }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ G4 R) G6 A) t! o$ G+ D6 NWith such a tongue as yours,
* ^# O; S3 c" x( \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% x* t$ x4 K7 q! O5 M8 g; YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ P1 \) |. f0 Q9 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 O! q# f" {2 ?7 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 y! Q' Y; Z& v" ~3 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ W* o; ^/ F- x. J9 a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ?( r7 g2 Z. o1 C. Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& I3 s3 T  Z  \8 x# K( d0 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* T/ T- F3 O9 e6 Y5 q* G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 q0 K$ @. G' V+ j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) x: b6 l- ^, v0 V2 S) Y8 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 l2 X& u; F1 M: ?/ M! \' X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% _: R. @, s* L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ f) ~- J6 Q) X3 K( |$ S% G0 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 N: S( h* v" y1 H4 f8 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 |' N! s* \' b$ q" b% e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ B$ y/ u' j2 F- e/ L0 }8 N) j% Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( Q: ?* N1 {' \3 X; b( a# v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% j8 ?) M; H' h: L1 D" W& f; x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 V+ F; h2 ^% `. O9 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 O" Q& ~8 F, Z% H) }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 ^3 {* G# S6 p* ?1 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
. }, l. n8 |- G! u3 k" i, e4 x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! c: q- N* L. \/ c2 v* G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 r# d8 k# Y: ]) C6 I, g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* _' d1 X+ @  b$ k9 T* Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 z1 ]: K6 a) b6 T7 u: Y! P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 `# R  U6 O7 }& X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. _5 E) g$ I2 b4 w' h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( P+ A& d6 L9 a% A& V/ h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( {1 P# o9 C) g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>