【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 a# z1 X1 a. Y7 ?! s歌词我附在后面。
. b& x' V" T) k8 j. yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, @# C  }1 [  h5 c: n+ QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" Z: l0 K# M8 r: h  zWith the moon kissing it every night
9 {# ~6 R. V+ A4 VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% d) @+ X$ C+ d" K3 I5 @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) p% ~+ j6 r& J( N5 n: l, K/ vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 Y; @) T6 H5 R; nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 q4 O( `& x; g$ ~# I$ |' [; x$ [3 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( F  W$ e1 R* b, y/ FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) f1 P7 _, k$ v' U$ Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 ~, q, l/ M" {: w" s2 ?+ Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( K1 X+ c2 ]* h8 U; S4 b! T# \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 E1 w9 k8 I2 l$ e% j0 o7 \. D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 T$ d- |; s  ^# Y! |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: i2 F! c* W8 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 O* ?) h9 C7 n8 E* a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 |, m7 b8 A# f3 Z9 [$ |/ D9 p$ Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" p* `) y, a- [$ e/ `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# T7 h, V, m+ s0 q1 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  @& @' e( }2 H: ~, N1 @. n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 F9 Q" h( Z2 ?1 D* _- r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) P3 O+ T$ ~" w. X; M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ {5 m, ^2 s$ G' u1 o! y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 B! {8 t1 q) Z% a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 [' Q0 `: X4 R( s! O" l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ j, `1 \" D$ Y- Y5 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 j2 x1 M$ j# p* U) S( i' ?4 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- f. X8 t9 w+ R1 Y% ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 r$ o4 x$ @- s' Z5 B7 L# O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; J. S8 X, o1 F1 g* M* x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 C" I& E3 O+ e7 ^* H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# V# R3 u" q* T0 e% ~0 E( V2 {4 T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 i8 t7 p6 e5 {; X+ ?  R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ d# P. ?6 K- r" D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% {8 x1 T( V/ _& T% H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( ]" ]0 b, d% F  O6 F% w6 x; d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# ?- ?  D% a+ q+ \# [* ~3 H! a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* F6 `, ?# }2 r  O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" u' @8 B2 [1 s; T1 R+ X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- G- S( ?, s: M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( E' A1 p6 e, f% E; a6 k  M我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% k" U/ }3 w) v9 w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>