【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* Q" ~( J( l3 I( i5 I0 q2 ~歌词我附在后面。
/ o) |; V- n0 t: KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, M9 T6 `$ H' }* L$ |3 \. |Making the sky glitter like gold,
% v. F! y# b: r( \+ DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; k% ]% v4 e* J$ F( LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 J) j* M5 b& g$ k) MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 ?. m/ y" V* S/ c3 N+ n9 ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- W( a  E" Y+ O! v  t0 z# TYou needn’t fear anything
& j2 s  H4 ]2 A; k: QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# v# @& y5 g( x& u0 y" `* \3 UEvery other word you utter is love
2 n" v4 Z. u$ UI really want to know just how much you love me
8 d: {. a2 O2 X; U; O1 s" E1 x6 c+ WI love you I love you with all my heart
1 B- r$ ?5 h/ q3 i2 m2 cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 S$ K: L' L; r+ o$ jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 s  h5 q6 @* A- S6 P' HWith such a tongue as yours,
' C/ D0 Q6 f7 `6 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, Q/ b/ h1 g1 {8 v& E2 n1 y8 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ T! ^$ S) h% r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( t7 C: S8 j8 E7 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; h) Z# ?$ Y  T0 m/ h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. G4 }+ Y' ^6 E* _' {$ O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; y& a, O: S: v/ H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! R8 S" q3 ]' v3 F# y# u5 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: ]1 }& _' y- ~) ~2 k<P>你无需担心</P>
) P0 u2 ]$ @5 ]6 D. ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ p, u' f* H1 z/ |0 e/ H( Q! I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* j- ~  a# T# r, W* D1 Z6 t; O" T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# `/ `% J2 P' e3 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ^9 J8 {/ _/ x# f6 n" l5 C5 r  G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! \) x, T8 [2 d5 G5 q$ H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 _# A+ c7 U  J/ E& E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( e+ @( b  W8 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' x$ z+ t, C0 c. h: I# M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 Z6 y( b- |. S6 E7 X9 P5 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. C% ?% M5 J2 j  i- v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% {- }- T. x' P, N6 K% X" X2 G8 @8 ^6 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 O% Q9 P; x6 G9 g8 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( k2 f3 O9 n: Z$ p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 T3 o. {& r4 F( \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 X, @8 u; F8 T, G  R我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& M7 w5 X) @$ f+ l7 R$ e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>