【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ b' b9 N* T) q6 D3 |歌词我附在后面。
$ H; _* `$ w% ~; BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 `, m5 f% [: UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- p; W0 n# p$ pWith the moon kissing it every night
3 L: [8 Q, F5 U) U  F8 s+ Q5 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* r, L1 r! Q- b- l/ @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! I% @" O0 `8 e0 h# v( t6 K' cNothing can compare to my love
* l- }7 o: [7 E# Q7 i8 H+ ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- W/ T8 d6 L% n' {$ W1 U9 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( m" L! k6 {3 ~7 ^  c( e8 r# i8 ~9 WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 d/ S+ s+ ?3 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 q0 a; U7 b9 k9 mI regret not dying
% l. h+ r0 B# j4 V$ |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) R, h8 j6 V. U; w$ Y3 C: BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. T8 Z- A; S5 J& v2 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- n) U0 p" X* c; a" _3 _0 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) Q+ h7 z) q% A1 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- T, c+ w/ U( f- u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ x' ~- N4 \5 w3 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 Q7 c& \' R2 Q6 m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 U: Z/ y% q6 S. f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& B) Y$ z& u) u6 f) ^4 i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 C, k2 }+ c9 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 P0 U6 x% O- K0 s, ?! p9 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ {& p: H) l2 }% h9 ~" ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 f  |0 U% R0 W' B3 Z) j0 p6 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% V4 H4 w$ _2 C- w' O2 ]' L+ I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) }: c. L" \( ]# i& c" c( B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' x5 m3 F) o0 i5 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: U9 Z7 L2 {( m# S% w, ^2 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) b6 l5 @/ ^5 I; Q. n  W6 X/ A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 R! E4 [! u  q, n3 N' o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. t) q% P& r7 F8 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 O0 }6 x2 C% X( O: K& \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 I' ^3 e  D) R' P' ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ G! D# n5 I* X% r# l$ J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 D1 {! y: s' S( ^( n  U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 Y( H) ?! c7 d8 E* I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 _; ?+ [4 E! Q3 F( A) \  V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 i( B3 H% D* h* [1 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) y( q( W/ b0 B: q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 G. H6 V: ^) Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 G6 L7 @) e9 R- {0 D: ?. g. y3 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. B1 `) f. O, M( i7 H$ @  C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# D. a  ^9 r/ Q7 Z9 s0 S: H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# b! ?8 V7 L' u5 T' ~; H6 b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 h% h5 N+ o& t3 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>