【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ W- T' l  G$ b5 z  F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% }  `/ A+ Z4 ]- q& pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- _2 U# r3 V7 o6 Q0 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 ?* `' X8 X) n; N- M) qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 [$ Y3 U0 y  ?: aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% |* T, O/ c+ t6 KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  M; ]8 J7 ]+ p5 U4 A/ [1 E- GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# A3 W3 _" D, ^9 CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 f) `! j0 v5 f( D3 S, G. O. ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 {* Z) m0 i  M  S/ A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# @* ]6 e9 q, Y( c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' D# l6 l* [/ V: T! T/ c, Z% {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' d, Z; [6 m1 g/ r, H4 W; r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 z1 h5 u$ |  D- r7 s; w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 W, {+ E6 B' s1 E% h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! @; y5 F. D7 {. X: M; I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: y. A3 v8 J! B- q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! }( A% s* m# l1 N, G% h0 f2 T/ c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ C+ C8 {- t! O  x5 I! i' ~$ J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# t, Z: I4 _! B' c: v: s3 Q" o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" K  v$ b2 D; F* ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' o' x) t" @/ y. y' K) u7 `$ H1 r& F9 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 I" E1 M: Y3 K" {5 a7 z0 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 u9 m" u9 ^/ M* z% m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  J: u) Y! ^( N5 Y# y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 I- G% s% N2 ~. ], l: P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- C7 V4 r7 ^: b8 D; j. K! ~% J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% L  x* p# O5 O% o% L9 f7 y# D/ H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% d  B- r6 b# z3 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) |- Q* @' f. A2 U% S* s# F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  K% c2 z! }% N9 S1 w. f  q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 C$ x% D: }1 C3 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ q! e( a9 O. }, F6 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, q3 l+ B, D9 x$ H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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