【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 u  p4 j" }; `% Q& H! u6 T歌词我附在后面。
. O! M/ f0 I8 T3 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ ^- ~$ [% J- F. H' I; DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 N1 Q1 D4 o; P& h# x4 L/ |' o' _With the moon kissing it every night
" K& ^9 R6 W0 U1 RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& l+ \  K. C4 h) aYou needn’t fear anything
( \( c! Z" H  \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; q1 \# T- ^0 a: [- P( S" PEvery other word you utter is love
. J$ z- Q7 W5 z  k3 yI really want to know just how much you love me
9 q# f3 S9 P1 L7 |( F/ qI love you I love you with all my heart
$ {$ U( m4 Y# o) DNothing can compare to my love
' `4 j$ I# ^3 F9 x' o7 m2 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 u6 P1 d' o' P& tI want so much to see inside your heart
  z! t1 D: [: ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" K& q8 E0 ]) P! [4 K5 b" \3 w; A0 pI’m still filled with fear
) E" \2 c1 Y0 q0 B: f, ~* @4 [% \4 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 K- Z0 }+ ]; x6 |' n8 zWith such a tongue as yours,
6 V1 ^* j% z8 D+ ?6 \, w8 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) ?" k; m! [; v  `3 T5 ]& q5 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 D4 J4 i9 |. s$ RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ H; u6 m+ E9 @" M3 X) a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& s' C. j$ `9 u. n9 C4 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 d. f. _$ C! Z. ?9 K# S6 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# B  U) i  n3 [6 @2 p) e" _& M2 G0 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 ~, _4 A2 _' Q- U, j8 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! j3 I( U  X9 R  h5 l% F' L9 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& B8 i+ B4 |: j& n+ Q- x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) k% ~2 M2 Y% u6 u; F0 O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( j# j5 J8 `7 e) O% A1 n3 i$ S" m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( S4 l6 N* v# V. n  u/ ~7 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! B. ?9 M2 I! _- S7 w" Q& t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. N% ^( m, F7 {6 J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) x) Y) g0 C# R7 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 z) o/ I1 A, Q7 T5 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 G. P; q6 J, o5 O. ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 p7 Q0 |3 o9 K7 |* _2 t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, H2 v* V# m  T& b6 P6 w9 ~5 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# E- V# u% i- j1 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 X, t; j' w" R9 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ |$ Z4 i$ U5 V( a1 `$ T: F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 c1 j% g. m4 d2 U- ~$ @7 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 m; C2 ~" H5 U  e% ^! L) ~+ r+ J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 m2 g0 t' q1 k( y8 p. C& |8 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! t. L& t' O3 A$ y/ d0 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 G" b9 x+ u5 z2 O; n' W/ U3 i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( h1 V5 y8 }, H4 e2 x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ |/ Z/ s: [! f1 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( |. e' K/ T. p% C* i) Q3 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ `! l% m  A9 q9 I$ N* ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 \8 \9 U4 f0 @( F: F我请你剖开它
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7 Z# [$ ]/ r& w  X8 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% m5 o. f3 j; X1 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>