【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  v. R0 q+ K6 v4 |' k9 b9 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  ?+ T7 N. ]. X% |The sky is happy down to its soul
9 Z6 P- ~! F8 g4 W  \With the moon kissing it every night
+ L6 j  U- U3 s% tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 C  O/ B" C0 U" E/ i0 @+ BYou needn’t fear anything
/ X# J9 e9 T& u; {% o) v% NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; D. ]4 S5 \9 I3 X* ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% L6 A' n! O; `9 {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 L: o! \% V( H% TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  f9 z0 w3 `5 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! z' k! J& L7 K9 p3 f; l6 ]- g' q8 J4 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 @( G) `' r% r6 w9 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" E; \! H/ Y. K8 [& l0 c6 n; J6 m3 `4 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' D, O. y9 q, n+ k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 B% j% S: L! L* @8 \& x& u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 U- p* O/ t$ i; _9 A& x6 X<P>你无需担心</P>
" ?+ H0 G- M. Z, C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) m6 E3 o8 K5 U# H5 ^9 F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 @: T" r' @) p# W' W9 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  M4 y& W, J* f: _: N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! i) Q; P2 d' F9 g( u( ^- s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, x$ Z+ e( H( Y. x& ^2 S8 \4 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" ]+ z1 h6 @1 I) D: n) s9 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 Z4 p' }5 g0 A7 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 b( \0 h9 _& C: g' T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! F, Q8 _2 z$ V# h. L: \1 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  _9 c" M0 o% L  V& ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 I1 x( _# w+ f% i# }! E; f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ i& `/ b3 H& D. L# C- Y, e8 @3 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# L+ E( m, u5 N: A8 [5 ?9 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  g8 R, B8 J1 z9 Q( B# N# @: |5 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% u$ a3 [( I) e. O" j4 ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; L1 @* Y" L! H8 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' \" C! G! [+ t( ?) H) y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* W1 W1 n/ r3 j$ C# X& @# ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ f) t( g! Y3 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>