【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' S5 a4 p5 Y9 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! m( y! K1 }8 a7 `5 a+ X& {0 S  sSeeing the sky content with its love
8 _9 Y# u& t$ K/ `+ g1 h6 m0 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 O8 p5 s- V( x6 S2 I4 rYou needn’t fear anything
. \7 Z* P- v* C0 n, ]+ c; C; MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 @+ L1 Z. ~6 p0 fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 @8 B8 E" M( @6 f; y( VNothing can compare to my love
; Y" w# F& p3 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; o6 l9 H/ q  c- VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 o5 S, O# w! b9 ^; ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- u; N8 ~! z" c& F9 zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 a3 l) I" J* l. Y, j& PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; D1 P; C# K0 V# M- i* SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ h: z- D6 Q* L. a7 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- T2 j6 i6 E$ h$ u3 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 Q/ E- F% \! y7 {; F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! ]2 p  z9 C' \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# o& I, Q9 g' ?9 i- Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 n9 w- M: q3 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& E  b4 x% ?. E9 S) ?* [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 M% v  z' G1 H+ ~# f; f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ B3 a: Q4 t5 P6 Q2 K- }" [* V+ Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( `- U. h: X+ S' j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 E  q  ?9 g/ X+ S* k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 B; N) c( g, g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 a8 z7 b+ t2 q4 G4 H4 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 L. C5 g0 A/ p0 r2 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 p- B$ ~! Z2 ]" ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 A3 c% k2 |) f( T# P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- ~5 ^  Y6 f) `, @+ G% ?* A% Q& L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ s' ?9 r% m! U: O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' G& B% @' j! Z. [; z( P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- v* f9 \6 ]3 [5 E# F. i# k) C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' _0 N5 Y6 ?% b/ T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 j4 o+ ?0 P$ {3 e2 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  R0 r. Y8 X, Y. }7 Z4 T6 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! a; b6 q6 K, [: f& T% z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 X( V$ h; X( m3 u7 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  W, D( N' `! V. \( x/ N: f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# V5 ^! G8 J9 }& j, g* _" c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 h6 o. f) i: U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* V0 R5 s5 [' Z# m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' \9 w. ^& o' d/ s- H' X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>