【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  n/ R8 \1 Y( P- xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. H- e  E2 S- x" j" _6 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 \$ g! ?6 O3 k' I9 T# X3 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
" C+ z8 x. q+ M! |- @4 pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) Q- x8 L2 s3 \- U3 g6 E* L7 lYou needn’t fear anything
) Y) X' h: `4 S) l. s! H: _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# S; x, V3 O& h* S' EEvery other word you utter is love
  D! c" \) j: q" ^' _I really want to know just how much you love me
0 C! a- u7 O# B( N0 U' oI love you I love you with all my heart
( ?+ |7 s& Z9 Q# Z( R9 m+ D6 c3 ?Nothing can compare to my love
, Z/ T9 h" _; {4 q2 a1 J2 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) h. Y' P' T! u7 G/ JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 t! a, f# W2 b- E, gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 a! Z- x+ [, \$ l& R; AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( Y. B/ `/ x+ S% g& Q3 pI regret not dying
- L7 p: {" j5 d* u$ D5 b4 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; }/ N; O* B4 O( K) e4 K! W: ~With such a tongue as yours,
9 b: `. f) e+ l  H- O; Z( Y% rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  M8 m8 f$ F* ]6 E2 S' |" KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& e' k  e! k; p+ A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 a1 Q6 r: B$ O/ c$ p/ V4 x( N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: z1 o2 g, ^$ A' U; r  Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 B* Z' O' x0 B: f/ `% a& _( {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 D9 L6 e: ~0 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) G% m+ F; E. f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  [6 e" w, I* O0 F- }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 j# O; D- e# H( r2 p3 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* O* ]; }% X; X9 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ N) X5 h: L! q, I" s% ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 }& Z  R% @( g# J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* s% `  k: [0 X8 }$ F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) I4 L' A  e3 R, A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, p) `0 y- a* t6 k- l* U" F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 h8 D- j! B! P/ u7 q* G9 [- N* x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 @/ \/ X# j' l. x: ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 F0 v/ W. F& q0 m6 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ A( x) ^2 H0 G) z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 N9 Q+ q$ K/ W+ z/ `/ \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 g0 O% G, b5 H  I5 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 H5 f) s6 x$ O" B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) G8 i2 d3 G0 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 E- q% ]( c& q# `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ d/ [9 V$ s! d2 K, U: U$ @3 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" Q1 ^1 Z# a7 V$ o" l- `( V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 |- e3 T0 X# W$ L% ^# h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ \! e5 h6 o/ _- h/ P: X4 g: L+ Z0 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ J6 B' g& q5 w2 ?3 F# q8 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' A1 c2 H9 l% W% h1 O( h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>