【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* a7 B$ F7 t' ~9 `, U7 E1 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' E! y0 e# H7 ]- aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- q3 Q8 f. E, g! R( H2 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: v9 @. x: q8 ~- H; [8 W+ [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" k: d; L4 O( Q. q' r$ ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" X; Z% Y, J% n8 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: T4 K2 R2 r# i* HEvery other word you utter is love
; r8 n/ g- Y# o+ N3 Y, lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- H" W  e( h4 v' yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ \* @; e6 k/ oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& A$ X- k4 z- ~% O- z9 |# o1 {I want so much to see inside your heart
6 _( i0 p: M% k- b$ h2 R8 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( |' o9 f# m5 f- TI’m still filled with fear
2 N. r2 n) B! A( p$ U1 N3 I3 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' _% t0 t1 T2 x0 ?* U' AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ H) T7 {3 D& ?: f+ g$ F  UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( t: O' j- J- d$ i/ I! l" O+ PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 \2 q. b: [( A) q4 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* d0 [* a* |$ s2 n# R( k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* \+ A9 ~" e& @3 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 N: g  u9 F9 R9 ], D7 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ z9 K; ]0 p7 E3 c- o! [$ l; `* B2 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 _. u: \$ R% _. ^<P>你无需担心</P>
& P' X/ p0 {: B1 m7 B: E4 D) y, W7 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; W7 A6 ]6 A5 o+ H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 K9 |9 f; X9 `, V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# C& n6 v: G$ G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 Q. K$ ]; {3 U2 J4 f0 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 x2 H/ U7 n- Z/ ~4 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ Q8 O- |1 O3 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 v( _% [& f* ?; T( [' H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 V3 @3 S2 a+ R$ O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 n+ x( V  |( `- w8 X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" @/ c' _6 L& U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ o8 t3 Q/ n  }3 ^# x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( P4 W& I) \1 d3 n8 {" [0 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! x; e- h7 a1 o3 |+ @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 I: \3 y3 V/ c) |, o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, s6 C* Q' k  A! C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 q  k- G# F1 U2 {4 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" T* M. F) o0 B5 z6 c/ [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" |1 Y8 M  S# [% J* \" H( s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 C, w$ d/ P" I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 \; J: r* {/ e0 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>