【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" r- T/ I/ n3 _& h. S8 t, |; H1 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 e" @1 K5 ~; p$ b2 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  ^" n2 J% [" X- KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; l, N9 D  {  n' w% \# v- MEvery other word you utter is love
' x9 F- ~0 [: E! XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 d  A/ G# V) g; }) V1 f7 y  L) X2 LNothing can compare to my love
, r, O. {% k. zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# v+ C7 B, c: z5 l0 l1 j- i+ aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 ^  |3 u$ Z2 W3 F2 PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 L) @0 E+ a0 t2 o( TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 F4 I' g1 X! c; F  h5 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. j1 U- T2 x4 R9 S" t; _With such a tongue as yours,
# R5 n& S8 ^4 |; B/ kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ K) E# T2 ?* g1 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 B5 d) g) I& T& `8 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ `2 I! p# [; G* e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ B: ]) H, o( }2 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' }) Y6 t" |/ g1 b: ?" w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  f; O0 m+ H+ ^5 t0 k1 m& i2 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' _2 R/ M& o# W" m0 i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 \" [- J8 Y5 d  u8 s1 |; V3 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 |: L9 C1 F; ?* X) n: L& ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% d( H# l/ F# _! }5 g: l8 W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* b/ D% @- N; Q+ F8 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 i/ o* |+ N# @$ c: k) {* @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ b3 |% r, T& y. p0 e& ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 |3 B% t! D9 [( A# V' w1 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; K7 C0 o. Y$ t: r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, M* k5 m% J  S  [+ T, I3 I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ q9 P3 J( D! N0 [7 m0 P' `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 r5 [/ D! @6 v1 h# ]9 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 h* j2 t" G1 c: Y4 z7 [0 S/ h4 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 ~# G# ]2 s1 `4 `3 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) z: v# J+ I& S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; s3 I# F) w0 Q; C' H- n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 R+ Z6 Q; G, m: q2 e% e# N. ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) g$ J1 r" x: l: \0 ^* p# ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 T. @, l* P0 J- D+ _, [0 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 R$ g( V- l  D( f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  ~3 p1 E* N. r  k3 `" j, s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 c, h3 y( P4 r" E0 ?1 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>