【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  S1 @* j( [! h  m. i% r) H' dThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 D# Y% t0 v  m/ u# Z" z' YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( S% G" @1 F! @6 }; `/ u. i" _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) {+ f. B+ E6 F) J& SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, N" v$ k2 y0 V9 D, ^% MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ a3 ~& n: M' L: ]- [! Y) wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ w+ _7 F0 Y& U: D8 {; _0 bI want so much to see inside your heart
- A( ?" _# X. f% ~5 gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' h8 u; g" ]3 C' r8 b, e' Q" x3 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( H% s+ h" u. Q' f+ E: zI regret not dying
/ U+ f. X! I- v+ d; ^8 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 k3 P" C- l# Q5 F# {+ N0 uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- x5 R2 l9 |2 e) Q* I5 }1 D5 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, x8 [: ?  \! I( }5 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 w" Z. D& x9 d7 H5 Z7 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 D" L9 T, U0 W  J3 @8 F2 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ \9 j5 Z! H1 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( W% J/ K' W% Q# g( f6 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  Q% ?; d- S: F& G+ c* P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 K* j9 q8 v. Z1 r( @7 g: m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" ?) H8 }+ x+ s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( s$ K7 m. ~$ N/ \9 O( m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 ]$ u& f) x/ x9 V3 v9 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; e! @1 U/ \* K4 O5 E1 r9 F6 f3 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* t  q# _! K3 B1 k* s8 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; a/ i7 I( A0 }3 [/ ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, r8 J' Y# @  u% j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 j$ v7 I- U+ P6 t- [* r0 ^+ e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 J- [3 e0 ]1 z& P; a/ D- H- i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ z) j2 h6 t$ k8 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, i8 _* A, ^0 I: B! [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, @8 z- \8 X! v0 y7 y* V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 t4 a9 X* W% c1 {* W; C5 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ X+ x6 F+ f% @8 Y2 ?  U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; |/ P0 P4 q( {9 d# Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 b+ p" K1 U$ Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) s2 m( ]/ i5 _& V) d7 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 b/ ?" q. c8 W# j& a% t<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 m5 r  j( w2 N* N; [9 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 t2 u# S6 L% E0 |8 z4 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# O- f9 y2 A3 r- L+ r1 U' E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 R* ~% B% ~$ [' E% A: \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ ?1 a( r; _! Z5 W4 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  F: C4 q, I% ~1 N4 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; ]. d  _: ?' f* H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 [( `$ t$ p. c6 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) w  L9 K+ ]: `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& o' V3 ?/ k2 T- x  W) _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ R& I, G8 S& \: y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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' a( l  ~, r# R$ [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>