【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- {/ G( y3 H( o) y/ Q+ C; b+ JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, f! y9 E7 e' W* K# [! }! D0 u1 i) ?* l# RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% p3 e) b% G4 Y% a( r/ ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: r, y0 S* h5 Q5 C5 W. `! K, eWith the moon kissing it every night
. }6 O  N7 g& h( W+ |1 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& }* ?" V  F; B1 G, i7 T' v  @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. H) @. W  \8 A9 U' M5 C" gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& ~- e0 c: l/ h7 y2 s' C7 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" P+ O, e6 v+ F8 E% q- p) bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" o  ?9 U3 V8 _9 q3 x1 N3 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) b% Q1 j2 ]" FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, t2 ]$ I- m$ e% R- n# l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 z: H: Q" [9 w) _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 b% `' W, T5 @* j4 S! h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, Z, A8 I9 G6 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) w9 j( W6 }, F1 y% i4 z5 _: ~6 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* e8 ?7 G1 y, E/ G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 v% s. ]3 ~+ @; R; J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' e: |8 z0 _( H+ D6 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 f( V, {6 P, r# j* o! P2 [% k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 ?/ |) i: N& x( |/ S' i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- P8 q6 [6 q8 ]$ m! ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  C6 b+ t" A, d/ Z6 |* Q' D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 y: G& R1 ?! P& \; u  O6 Y+ s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 Y2 }& x7 ]; M: F7 c9 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 C* f% G. u$ d5 `7 m6 L/ n1 z5 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ ^! |' v) ?* M, n+ d$ z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" K% {- u$ t" {$ p7 q" W- @. S0 V" a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ J6 Q8 z  U0 [" L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 Q) @  H4 i) A& W0 e2 `* K* N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: Z1 d- Q9 r' E  N! F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  S% `! B3 S# B2 `, S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- k3 Y: T8 B7 f! t$ E6 k- t+ ^1 A' h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 ]( I" d  w6 E5 F! J# n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>