【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# a) e, }* g9 V2 O( o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 E+ j( a8 Y' e( Q7 q  S& IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 ^, H3 n4 ]; P/ S: ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 m, w9 u4 t6 a: D3 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, q9 F( O% A  Q2 u# LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# i7 Q9 C1 L7 H4 p+ d, qNothing can compare to my love
, `* m8 b. g0 A, \# M9 J6 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  q4 c8 v9 V% }' ?. x) k7 IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, F) ?( N: a: wI want so much to see inside your heart
/ s, f& m5 }2 ]% lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, \' Y/ k8 F- JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 G/ G2 ^5 a0 V5 i, }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- o5 H- z7 R1 s' X! \1 J$ oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 ?- Y# F; z: Y+ SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ k% T6 o$ l% n& z0 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! }8 {* e7 ^  C. }# C3 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- I# D+ K: j7 A$ C# ^' k+ n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( k; A+ Z' o! G5 l0 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; R+ k- N/ D+ b* c, c2 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 E; b, E2 L- i* a, c. C7 C( z' x+ O- y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 L% b8 j' a  x8 z9 |+ J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 h2 |7 i+ v/ U- K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ c2 ^7 {3 o: ]7 o6 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" u" {' G: y. g! q+ ^* c0 \# m( B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* H; Y" z7 V; m  x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 u* M, U2 a" o3 ]% R' p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 X- P. X- m& {7 X0 \# z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 o- o/ i" O7 N' U/ J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ `; m2 p1 [% ]0 ^$ M2 m% I. K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# l) L0 m$ N1 ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, _$ `$ [# E1 M2 p4 S+ P- [2 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# m0 u" `$ B2 s/ ]: W% k. L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& N2 {/ p! i7 i9 h1 v/ N: Q+ G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 F4 T: K1 u# d% w  z9 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& t% g: j+ f% y5 j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  A* r  V8 i# W# ~& d  }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: g+ ^9 q; V  l5 \8 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 f, l9 T6 I% ^. m7 o- Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ ?2 Z; c* v2 m# b8 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 z; p* {3 p9 z' Y* }1 z. k# n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; z. A' ^& s8 O4 Y5 A$ }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 [4 F1 p: ?6 y- Z6 b1 L- [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>