【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ f+ o6 l2 Z3 D8 T  N& d. q: v歌词我附在后面。
6 G/ _% z6 Y. t; y% b; q: {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, W, d  R, R: Z& MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ ?, A! K0 F6 H) PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. o2 r: l8 {; ^( K1 rSeeing the sky content with its love
* V3 I9 J# M2 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 m. Q4 I1 ]8 }' hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. O' z, m1 X  P7 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' O% g2 I* U% |, nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ L! r3 }# r, m0 C' ?3 d4 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ {8 t8 E) B3 e: W. ]. X) RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; f! J: ^3 g) r" T- b2 U* D7 y3 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 Q  ?* a2 E, [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* m  s7 J6 T* m' v" q8 |- d6 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* u$ b: o$ m( h5 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; x; u) i0 r8 h$ J* h& h! Y. i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. J( k8 \, b2 G" j, e% x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 d& W0 B% D- J5 D$ G6 z, v$ M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 Q# q: o5 y9 h9 }9 i$ N/ f& y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( k6 G" j" o/ a' e' i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* x: u3 r0 {) u1 x7 S5 g/ ^* u2 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ [% m( ^0 \! `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( l/ }4 W' T. U% K2 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 l$ P% K* m; O4 P* M: p) @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 i4 x7 P& n/ }8 L" i8 [- n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, z" S( S3 X5 G% S" w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 I9 O0 m; n! f$ z+ a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, c* ~* B. U& A& ]2 J. g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% q/ I! B/ T- I7 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' x9 a# ]5 m' f0 Y( J, j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- n6 a6 r7 S, @5 y) r6 K$ y  ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 c- R0 F( v. G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 s) b9 A% C3 [: N5 d2 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; i( G; [' F* l! }, f# `. S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* {$ K4 D' o! U$ \- P, v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 t" O5 z4 W3 F/ b, K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  _) F- f! E9 V& s+ [2 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 G. s, p. J- u  ]8 a) U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- |9 G& W$ ]! ]6 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 J. U5 f  E* C" e' l9 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! P! [9 s  P/ d" _' F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 q6 }9 G% O& _/ ~6 }. ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 v! F* O; u9 Q9 Z+ u0 y5 _我请你剖开它

* U% P- S' S! u! ?1 A; O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>