【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% U' Z$ R  k! @: X# pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ ?" |0 P) c, q, I* z( O5 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( h; C- U1 @4 T) L) YWith the moon kissing it every night
- M9 H7 j, w) N' ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; h- B0 j. K' N0 J4 H$ e+ m4 C9 oI love you I love you with all my heart
+ Y' w% |3 O- Z" Q0 v; aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 L1 v0 c) K+ t7 M. V; Z/ YI want so much to see inside your heart
+ v4 L  s/ t8 G: ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' F- [" [6 G7 z5 DI’m still filled with fear
7 u, ?# [  i( i% V# R& {! v4 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 I0 x( @) z9 i" t2 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ S2 m- H1 o& vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; V. m( f+ H5 f! F& y" _# A6 u* M$ ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% p0 Q0 X' E+ {- q% O8 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ R. _3 H, Z& c( _- D/ K- t% F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 |. J' O5 V, L4 l& G2 ~5 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% h" W$ G" p' O! ]; t# G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ P% Q" S" V7 [2 Z9 e+ _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 r& o  v4 O! B5 i/ n" X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  b; e% l) n3 K% \( V1 j5 Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 l  r2 z- w& \" B8 d$ w8 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 z7 ^! W# C6 _4 h+ ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ @4 F6 N3 q, [8 b+ B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) o$ P0 I9 d" @1 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- D2 x8 v- @% J& @# Q" W& E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# V3 R& s# R4 x! k- x- |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; F6 m4 ?( V: H/ o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( V7 _) ^" U* F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! h# _. {& Y7 k# Z* ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
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<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, D1 E3 x' S2 B1 i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* ]# e0 C3 J: `3 h9 k& @7 _" T$ c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' |+ n& f0 b; V# B! R; u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ ~/ u+ y0 h/ F) w8 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 S2 l6 L3 Q5 M- @* n3 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 b! \! U! ?: D6 [1 V- J' h2 h' m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ j/ z0 z1 j/ V; x. c, S5 K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>