【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 j* f2 c: j! A; X" X; J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& e/ Q% _" Y6 I" B" n$ ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* m1 C# z; {: S7 f% U; F5 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 H8 H6 V* O+ y: ~1 T, ^7 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 \% S( p1 [2 c, ?" b  MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 o6 \  }. t$ hYou needn’t fear anything
4 h$ O# p2 E( C% oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# j& U* I! c7 S' t# w' J1 y8 B0 X* GEvery other word you utter is love
, ?" M' |, i! F  {$ D; o9 h1 o* L& NI really want to know just how much you love me
( e7 @4 _$ l8 I9 W1 t# z" S1 e, d9 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& O8 O. D9 U( O: |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. d' A8 o1 O+ k8 c$ nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ L; K! N* I# b3 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) a. b9 Q! N) KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 t3 y% n3 M( w% ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 M* j0 W& j4 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# s% Q0 g- Y, H; b( ]( X1 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% D) z6 e0 t: T0 g: S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 C& E0 Z% V! C" w  T! C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- f2 T3 G) j6 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! A. c* }- @; k8 |& E3 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: I8 G+ i3 k2 R) k% q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; \  ]8 u( r3 P2 D0 ]* B' T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; l( D* |# g! W, K% A8 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 `, `* J, E0 j8 c( K! d- A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 V" S; n" l  ~7 Q' K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ e$ A- D" g- v# c2 u" |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 C$ m5 X5 _& H" B4 Y$ R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 Q3 t- B3 ?: v/ K5 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, ^" ~9 n2 v; u" ?! Y$ }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* z. t8 E' W' b; T# U" u7 s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) |" v/ }& ?$ a! L& G- v# d4 _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, F; g; \# w8 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( R# j9 J2 X! q& F% N) W$ ]0 A. S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; Q/ T" P* n: z- D2 _7 ]! F0 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& @/ M2 E1 m1 e: l* C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) J7 F& n! M- G. d6 f( t0 @6 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! a8 \* i* E# g9 D' T6 w  S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; Q- q4 l& S2 ~6 M, \: C' u3 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  A% q  F( k( P; ?5 I2 l5 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& k: k( V* r: b" q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; r% v( P% c  Y; L) c/ P0 k, G0 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( c" Z9 M  Q8 {4 C- C* ?0 H" ~& U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- m4 @- I! T* _/ f- d: w( \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; m' K: a" L" V4 m% ~9 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 ^6 z+ \& f, V4 V) ^& G* l# u+ d$ n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 O: ?- ?, c! V0 _, v& i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  x6 a: _, h! E: `' {4 j2 v4 R: ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ v  o- s6 d5 b8 y2 f+ d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>