【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 D, e/ v1 a8 p7 v% [0 R/ }; p歌词我附在后面。
# q# J( Y$ O, ]& U6 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" Q8 X9 B' C, `2 P) U, c# Q8 g$ mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 T: M( _9 e, A' h. B& e9 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) Q4 J/ Y3 {" P" X  A* ASeeing the sky content with its love
/ k& a+ n7 ~5 p% n" uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# b+ X9 s- q" M1 p6 GYou needn’t fear anything
7 s9 J, E# ]" ]7 q; HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. m" a8 s* l* G9 z. y! |6 \2 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ N2 m9 r9 a9 t( A3 P. d! FI want so much to see inside your heart
$ A, f5 C1 V4 }. ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( v6 t! Z& E4 W0 dI’m still filled with fear
$ C& k1 O+ w' f) s# o8 |* S, zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# n+ V" J- K& T4 H0 I/ DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 @4 _& M. g5 M, i0 y0 b3 W. aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 S& J  q. x# s/ U! Z8 M2 @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; {  q2 X+ r3 w6 _; N$ e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 [1 f" E" O" z' t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* u" U+ D! H& D7 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 i3 K% O/ z3 d: {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) _& b$ O5 S5 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% o2 C+ I) U8 \1 T$ X2 A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- Z9 M9 P6 z7 ^: @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! k; I5 Y9 D  J  j4 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ v$ _5 D' h) O2 @# M/ C  @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 e* J# [6 d3 z: ^6 Q; s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 q: t$ V5 a& D% b$ ?. y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; e% f% _8 e; f. X# w0 r- e% |* \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 b& H6 O6 C" H& N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ ~( x* D& Y' @7 \6 W/ H# [- Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! P& r' ^5 |& _* b. s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ v4 j. M: A7 ]! S; G0 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( g( l$ q& B1 h1 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! m" ^; d( J1 N& W9 S- w* b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, F; [# _! e. D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, g2 D5 A! q- R& x$ M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# X% q5 v2 d9 B* S: H4 ?/ y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# m% {* c9 O% e0 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& R: F6 H2 R( I0 r4 Y/ [$ s4 a# `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 f# d$ R0 M; `( _. a4 c7 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
' }' a9 i2 A, e; u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 @! g" G$ P- r2 w$ i# P! J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 V! i6 ~: t8 x8 V  s0 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" C- y/ W$ P" ~; ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 I& s! R3 t5 ]6 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 e* @. d. a2 |7 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. y4 b% o: m: |9 J% I4 @; @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ }( K( w4 d2 }2 |1 V" ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 [8 z- p, Y& y( H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>