【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 i$ ~' l% @/ o% x/ v; d$ F歌词我附在后面。
) w7 Z  \) D: y% Y5 ?; t. dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" S+ [. `0 v' d$ k# w/ K  U, rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* ]$ o4 x- G2 r& l$ T9 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 \5 I6 S# j9 u, [; @) KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; Q. y5 t% D! y* f% FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ m# V+ E* e9 C2 J5 QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# l1 c! j  Y' L" I/ ~Every other word you utter is love
9 D! H' }( q: l" m4 _I really want to know just how much you love me
3 T/ d& k) ^5 \8 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& R6 }6 r% Y4 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 I* t8 T: }* zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, @2 \* b2 g. w, \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' J2 ^8 i, {3 N" c! w. ?; w8 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 K/ B7 a$ g* H7 K/ x4 v% KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 ~1 [  U; S; n( |. a' B! M  n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  q' `7 {* w6 A# t) `; j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' n3 Z3 W. c* O5 V* u) U1 E2 ^1 q  Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 {/ ~8 X% d& v* d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: _6 _1 w3 p/ \( Y3 k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 S. f' b2 `- U5 }7 `/ ~+ T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( q8 @6 v3 v! b$ [9 o% r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 ^0 h1 P2 G. a% X7 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 F& E; }' `7 n4 S" I( L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 U6 c% ~0 X# E- z# h2 n4 u; ?  C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 x) b  C  m5 k/ A( \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 i# }6 a. W9 n6 V2 S0 _- U6 L4 b, ?3 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. S0 e% e2 x+ i2 J) q9 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' N* v- N! a3 P+ v/ W3 i: P8 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. s: R6 ], a5 M7 A+ p' u- U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ e9 N6 p! `. q3 L0 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  p% J& e6 N  k' q6 S! Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ j$ f- l+ f2 O7 |6 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( D8 f& j  {" M% ^9 G$ A  l$ C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 v- H5 n" U4 V1 ~$ o7 Y! W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 m# Q" x: X0 o5 V8 a) t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* M. @$ R+ D% N+ b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ L/ l, x, j( f9 ?3 N+ J# u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>