【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  I9 \, }4 t3 j* E# Y0 a; {, j8 b# JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- Q4 P# ~# k! S8 Z9 Q  H: LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" Q' k7 ?; [; mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% ~! s/ h! y) a2 a& R- ^Seeing the sky content with its love
' y$ g6 j& N' l7 U* [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' p: ?( k7 ~" v' }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" b4 r9 f8 p/ V  qEvery other word you utter is love
6 G8 E5 f: F2 @I really want to know just how much you love me
7 J  \4 C& m7 R% \) X2 iI love you I love you with all my heart
3 N! Z2 f" T( Q2 u* w, SNothing can compare to my love
/ ?" E4 ]+ ]9 l9 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 I6 z& _1 ^# D/ i- wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 p) h2 D3 y! SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* v. t! z. j4 ?/ xWith such a tongue as yours,
& _+ ~/ j8 D7 z9 P7 r( A* A% C- NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: D  c/ [, f4 P1 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ m. U. H. ]6 a) m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' O' \1 X7 @/ M2 x% J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: z" U1 s! j( f4 q, Z. A2 I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% g  {8 n. R6 r. \5 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. `; L( j5 A) E; M3 @" h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% b$ }7 W1 m' F3 ~9 m+ f/ @3 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 j0 J" `6 p+ w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 u& a4 J  ]" G' T/ H1 y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 ~8 \5 P$ U1 {  c( P$ w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! l7 d! W7 b& k& S) n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ `* {! R/ Q* ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  ]: L/ R' M# C3 M  u; G' }; i: M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 e+ E$ W! ?* f7 B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, q+ `; w3 Y1 a' h4 C( Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! I+ X, t$ [* U$ D+ u6 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 l$ H8 W0 @0 T2 M- A8 C- o0 w+ a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; M7 `$ q/ t- g3 W. |$ x! h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, ~& l" ]! I# e& z5 f2 P# `1 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 P2 o! w7 {, B4 d5 a  C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' s1 R) u, N" [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  q' K9 f% S/ S/ y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* F& \- J' D7 S" }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% F7 A. ]/ y+ P0 t6 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' l3 w7 D# h' }# I/ {6 n2 i1 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 U, P/ f% x$ m7 K2 Q  l; p: j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% {: ]. v* {, b6 @% P* ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 O0 A+ I- S  H0 X. O( P% O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& h- i' }" J# X; |6 C  H) p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 {% G$ x# h0 w* W! E2 u6 ?/ K2 t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- _# J* p1 m  t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ ]6 R. R1 o- g8 B3 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 k* K+ e8 t, H5 C; H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 M: H# R+ B' y- S3 ~+ e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>