【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; }- {4 R2 r" Z$ }* d+ tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! ~+ q; f0 R+ q3 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ F. t( e6 P: L/ J9 z  oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' f' A! Q; u( v+ [; oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 P( e# M, w4 |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) p& a/ }& g- ^+ LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! }/ U9 H. v7 y7 FI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# {+ O- c. i* G1 R9 z: qI’m still filled with fear
3 P: a$ W7 }! L6 V: n" tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  @0 U) l: [; P( s: vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# G1 G. e8 T: y7 W) O8 _  QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' |$ Y8 K( z! z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# d4 Z  z+ ?6 v3 Y2 X5 u8 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" S' V4 r, Q: D6 `* I7 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# S0 x8 c2 {/ O# c% Y* e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: u' e4 ?" R3 H* q8 e  v* q0 |2 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- ~7 E) D7 R5 |) q$ e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* Y8 z+ X' p& g) S: L7 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 R- \0 M: x/ a$ `- e2 [; a<P>你无需担心</P>
" f& U% [6 i  k% Z0 y" X- H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 ^% A. ~; A8 [5 g: F) w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: ]( X9 @  a. Q* B1 q9 C  L. l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" U5 i$ {+ M3 t* |  U( k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; U7 B3 l% N  H1 m6 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- A7 @$ ~: r% W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' }) p5 f: P' ?& }# q- h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: T" U9 Q+ H( O# h9 E; h9 p  d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 g! a# d7 Y1 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# Y* I7 Y; ~3 R/ u/ i  G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ H9 X4 S1 A1 T9 b2 c) y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" T/ U  w2 Z5 v# j% B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' y7 Z/ ^' V+ H: r3 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; y( {3 _! \& e) g6 L2 u2 K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ d8 ^+ K2 @. Q2 Q+ L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! A  z/ P& J4 W- R% H0 Q, O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- r" ~# T6 X% D5 x3 ]' ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& V# y0 {# U. C: q9 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 }! }2 o8 w4 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ C/ `+ G! z# s" F  e3 z: ]+ N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: _& {1 O6 j2 V/ d$ k# K, J' c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>