【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ c$ @# p( c. M' ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 w& R0 {8 c# `) y% @) {* pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& g. c5 Q* V# P4 a: ?! zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 X$ U" _3 b) B# n  ]' oWith the moon kissing it every night
" B% [6 b3 ~- OSeeing the sky content with its love
# `* [5 F/ z+ ^) B) _! y8 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 ~- I8 M' ~; N7 D+ ^Every other word you utter is love
7 w1 }8 v  ^* z, pI really want to know just how much you love me
# }2 W3 p7 X1 W3 Y5 \& FI love you I love you with all my heart
0 K0 H" W* V( Z2 {% Z" yNothing can compare to my love
4 J$ e3 a  |! G' ?- h7 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! [, X& g7 ~( x6 Y# [4 q& hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" e4 p. `0 i- @3 L# b/ b% SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! n9 w! p( J' a# ]$ Y) J' M' oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  Y: k$ B8 ^8 }4 v' ?5 A& ?$ i3 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) ~: L/ G, Z, l- i$ O2 N" c% HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 p$ u8 g+ d4 M  v& v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. \9 s7 f" G: J8 z6 R3 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- C% `! \! U$ H4 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 G3 n! s( w+ u) [1 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 G" C. ?" X1 F/ G- S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. k6 K/ g3 ~9 f) v1 L: L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ l% f' o2 H/ A/ o% [$ ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  [, T' a3 U3 u1 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! d9 n$ ^# w" C! T+ ^0 k8 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 Q% F) V5 S; {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 g7 \- ~0 h# J8 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ Q) i: I* `/ t3 P6 D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& v: y3 V4 @8 C! A3 E, _& b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) d+ [( D& ~1 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) p, o$ @, ^" r% D- ]+ P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! N8 j* `" b* v9 n/ p; d2 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" R4 M: H# x- c4 U' ~% w) J5 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 {3 ?; W3 T1 h  b% r) }0 M: G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; ^" r# Z0 H" d1 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 }& n! w- k: j' g0 b6 n+ C4 C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- g% u0 I: N) M- \& {& m5 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ J3 C; r( y0 a# \  |5 K/ C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ V2 r' g! N. t( ?% T1 _& a; o/ B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 N- P/ j$ l' }, z& p3 f$ F+ F) R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* ^6 ^5 A0 d: d: f' `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 O: I* y+ H/ v: }9 p  j! n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" v( [  M" ^7 T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 l+ w* Z* F; H5 @4 W6 x我请你剖开它
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3 I6 \& t% i1 ]7 s$ I# i! W; y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, k+ B3 }2 @; f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>