【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' s6 s! Y* B  v( Q& e- {. mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' J+ [9 D5 L8 E9 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 q* k  D& i4 c6 y% hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 c& r  E8 ]' R8 l$ xThe sky is happy down to its soul
% v1 K2 _) u4 G/ K6 x3 Z/ iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ A3 f/ }' {% w6 e' V% i# ?Nothing can compare to my love
# n: k( N5 T4 }/ J7 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: s0 w: \; o, W. E- e9 ~, `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 d+ D% ?, Z# {5 n" _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& m) U: j; J; p* kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- {( _! {& w* R$ ~With such a tongue as yours,
/ R6 j+ r6 [4 y8 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 z+ F4 W' _/ b7 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 F4 x1 e3 R4 ~7 q9 X7 q. r) h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 P6 U7 W0 U! m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# B( Y4 _4 c9 W0 v3 ^0 _. n( \( u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 v& X4 u1 y0 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' i& L! a' m; G4 d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( g9 L/ ]) `: `0 F" O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% K& A) D: I5 Q! K4 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 \5 l4 t$ g% P1 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. v$ [+ z( M2 E/ B( w9 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. o6 s& _! H8 C" M+ g( o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' G8 c2 ~/ [, |7 e8 C" v<P>你无需担心</P>
& x! Q: F2 n! N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ `3 I, r3 Q$ t; r' ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- B. Q' F; h9 t; p: t# C5 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' \! t; ~0 _0 ~: c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 ^, n. ?2 @' L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- @; p" @9 V0 S  I+ \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. l3 i5 q+ M5 `2 F; X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 R. `( W  D6 ~4 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: Q* o- n4 n; M4 t' }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. b  v4 m2 Z6 B; s1 Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 A6 V9 x! \9 g: x, U( j3 Z% V<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ N& Z9 B+ Y: U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* X# n1 s3 r  o7 E0 G: W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 R7 j; b4 `8 L# F8 i% h3 N3 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) Y/ ^) G+ D+ V' ?& D: e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ B" W- ?$ b$ m7 N) K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: ^$ C/ X) e  k/ r) ^1 e( r6 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ E2 L: _$ c4 X; R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* y+ e  Y% ?2 N( g' H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 `. [! f/ p$ B% J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 \5 s* H1 ]$ ]& O. ?$ B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ m$ g, }+ \1 J" j8 Y. P, Q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>