【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* Z3 R; U2 I' P: ?& rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ F% k/ p1 W1 p: o/ f* G& A% ^" hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! [, y: k. o2 Q4 K) I( hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" ]! l% Y* s# V# b& ^The sky is happy down to its soul
4 H( d0 H) P4 [; T! f" v5 HWith the moon kissing it every night
2 Y: }9 Z- {6 e( n/ q6 ?Seeing the sky content with its love
  {: T) C. \8 {- x5 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' f! L# `4 r: d- j& TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ s% f. _/ f  G* H# _5 p: Q) WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ b& T8 ?! a+ ~3 e& T" P# a( O- oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 ]5 f+ E9 b5 t9 J# x, W3 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& E; a3 t8 c1 T: w$ M* D5 l) dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* T! h# |7 R8 s* z5 [% f# }1 x# M& [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" @" H: U8 ~/ n- p$ ~$ }% c' ]! w9 yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 p/ E! R' A$ H9 d4 EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 p5 x# c3 a+ E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% ?* n. q1 r" x1 l! A" g) _; L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  V# r7 e% H! a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( n9 }5 L5 s' X4 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- o; }8 M8 K* g/ f+ f! y: X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; `9 p9 _8 H# H7 t4 _- K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 y! X- v, _7 z2 ?6 u# C7 z! ]3 b$ Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 g7 V1 `4 |# C5 {! r( z! }" Q4 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* i( f( Q8 B6 ]4 V+ G+ U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# e: D. s9 u9 L2 G2 X# H: z6 R# Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% T, @. @* ]/ T<P>你无需担心</P>
* \: a1 g4 ?% D) C$ v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" v- m5 n. ^% c8 g1 e4 p2 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; a: s) [/ o8 e$ G% l/ h; z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. e, s$ p# \# K& R" k# B( I. Q" C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 A. I7 y: v7 o" C+ V* Y/ U3 t! N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; T/ u& }) J* Q) |* K/ i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  g; K4 I1 N) y8 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 d( T& m  @6 Q" K, @, |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 C! }% M# C) o3 E9 X9 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 l* U. w9 D8 e; b1 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 m, Q- V$ a+ ?& c9 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; r/ t4 X( W- {4 x- d; e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ a: F( C7 d  p. |* N/ r) O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 F' R$ w+ y, ~7 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ B, ?/ u5 ?6 [9 Q# i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) V) f/ j2 I9 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" F0 e4 s8 f" M/ f. |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>