【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 U) s% D8 E: C0 m4 ]8 |6 d9 A3 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 Z% L" i" B7 y3 _& ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 `$ v4 B: e" W% k- k5 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ N5 g' q& O$ w9 `% ?2 l( aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 n: D5 {  n( j9 V+ L0 S. tYou needn’t fear anything
+ X1 |* ~  E" h& V- _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ i0 j$ g3 ?& Z# J0 vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- X4 v' h( F4 H/ {# ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( e* D( F* \5 p# x0 [( _$ K- zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  d. Z& B& g% M2 p6 PI’m still filled with fear
6 _' t& S/ q) {4 {5 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! P* D% n  f+ ^. CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 r: s4 l9 N& l: h5 oWith such a tongue as yours,
3 f7 ]- Z# P* A+ W4 H$ {; B& ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  h/ p" h' n' l7 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 H1 C) T1 o8 f/ p6 q- e7 z0 x4 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; s8 Y9 {, d& v" ]- \; s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" r5 v5 S( |' F5 H1 J( g: x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ L( ?& }8 h0 l7 s; [- V: v1 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" M' y7 E# l! z- b' m) S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 |9 z# U4 K: v1 Y. M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ P) _2 S9 y/ E0 Q( L% m; |: K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, o1 H4 s$ k) i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ e& S% H6 O# d  j, G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  N: r, Y0 w- d7 ~! R1 ]0 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& s* c: o2 l: ~; G4 F; L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 `: {8 x  H: m* L8 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
. d, p3 Z; i7 a& C/ }% N7 b- }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; n8 U) i1 G  c$ \, b. I* v4 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 C* B& j8 ^9 a6 T8 Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- r: Y! ~& U$ ?# |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& ^. y% w8 u7 F/ }# i) g1 W& L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' _3 Z' D2 S7 M1 e$ N$ A( n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( d- i' V3 T+ _) w1 b; |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ @3 J( b$ Q; Z5 h4 A6 j+ K5 g* U; D+ @+ l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) Y: p, J/ O/ ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! n) s9 J! y% ]1 y- g! i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 h( H% `! R; W+ G% i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 j/ P! H8 {/ C. U. D5 ^; i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 L/ B0 @  }  `$ o7 [2 K' c! @<P>I regret not dying</P>
# F6 v' Q" C/ |) ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. U% @0 Q( o0 y+ l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 Q! U: S! ^' @- K( O0 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) |) w6 [. s2 q/ q" u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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# X- o+ I& i% u9 Z0 X7 F: ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>