【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) S7 i" T0 U2 @The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, ?  M6 K2 [& N' s& KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 n0 G* d7 u% C* I; H% TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 {9 ^* E/ ]7 f6 t& b  p% f+ CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ n+ h# H6 Y( p3 GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" k$ g6 N% `" F8 b' U4 NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. G- E$ p' Q  \" E9 @1 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 x2 y' _8 {: ~! T$ y7 j* FI’m still filled with fear
! o% r* L  e- i' g& [* ~* @5 fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: i& [1 K; Y2 r( s3 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) o$ l* c) E6 T: }2 i6 H# _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( O* S( H2 p% l% H8 i' n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) g/ J, [8 X4 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  N1 n$ h# \. G. r# g7 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! N1 v( G5 Z' i# E) ^! }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. ?; K# C! V( V) y4 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 |1 ~% N) S. o" J2 |* s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# l8 u6 g  o  q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ o4 w3 |5 L7 E" @: T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, ?6 L; }% g4 `( j, i; u4 B" F# Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, ?- |* B. a2 U( `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% A" @0 }/ b% d) A, ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% ^4 A  X5 }3 G* o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; E0 N5 X* X. x) m1 s0 R0 T+ ?+ [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" c" D' j  C. h* M! ^+ m' E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! [- |) O6 @+ p6 [4 G( ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" }1 O  P! I$ P0 d! i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& ?% _- F0 [6 c! \3 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 p* a3 e7 I- @4 e! R4 ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: C" f1 r0 V+ m2 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 S4 d% \! |# ?0 O- }, E8 Q7 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ q9 E0 w; ]3 i) o* s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& G! l* O$ U) C, o/ y1 A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 r$ ~0 j% V) [* W! ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 \1 H/ w  f9 n* G8 x! f% R7 G* f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 c  E4 y8 G7 i8 K- l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 f" P& U# h" D' Y% ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 V0 K2 |1 ~: P, |+ W  z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>