【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( [/ B5 Z! i" R8 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 t. q) v+ V$ X# Z& `3 P* H: N- kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ O- o% _4 j" Y) n# R; \" u/ y, T$ ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ U6 w. L7 {: YThe sky is happy down to its soul
, ^) x( l  K9 k/ p: X9 z* b' a* JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 V3 Z; ^( b+ [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 e  n& {# d  y( r- `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  y" Y( U+ ]' v$ z: [, F5 M# ONothing can compare to my love
# O7 D- Q. j% n1 X3 E' [1 T' m: HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 ~& u. K* t" d: ?% xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! L" A, J) t0 U; YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. X0 v% d9 s1 T( B+ P: `. I5 wWith such a tongue as yours,
& n1 ]' x* A! aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 U" ]# H! }8 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: l" A& P. S4 o; G& |, SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. ~3 a4 A& Z1 }4 ?4 k! U- H# h9 \* p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! k& c$ J. h% O( U1 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 u! ?* z# o4 E, V) V" t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 z. p% S3 p' r0 N1 a) ]$ T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 C: @% B. g4 j, P0 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% _  _* R" F/ o4 m+ {3 t" L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 E5 S* M; T7 Z5 H' y! k<P>你无需担心</P>
" U2 ~. ]$ b2 @8 I; [, j6 Z# E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! ?& T2 m5 U) E  o: R' u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, E9 u  q& ?4 Y5 M8 B! h3 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ W. v" N: K' B* e! c2 c( \4 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 A# V. v, A5 P; C% g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- U4 [4 C' w  U$ {1 u9 Q  O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 l9 P; V- p, c4 [) u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 f0 M$ ~- Y' U- _2 ?6 M! J2 k, N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) @( q0 \* ?  `/ z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& V4 m2 t% R0 w7 n9 Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( H3 S9 D! S  y. t3 v8 P9 i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ O! X3 A  A4 k2 u2 B; Q+ `: O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, _( V$ |" ^- U: b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 Y6 i2 S1 j- r7 {& Z1 d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( V  e, ~7 {' ~7 F/ v& z& a6 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) P5 B6 A+ O& g; A  P6 e3 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 y9 b( x* _2 e, F7 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" F; I! I" I" `0 k' _/ Y- \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 f8 Y8 K4 z' G  f4 j+ k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>