【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ P" q& O2 l9 f9 ^1 G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) C( _' F1 z$ I$ _" |0 q- y1 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
- U/ v- U' U1 v0 x- H: LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% \7 a# y! P% ]$ I* xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( v! y0 q" O2 R1 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 M3 N' r7 [/ F; [4 @9 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 Y! _0 K* ?8 A" C$ R* N% x2 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) s0 a. q+ P  m6 v4 E& t" E0 r+ s9 VI love you I love you with all my heart
* N  Q5 s3 r, CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, `& S$ r2 ~/ B( T" Y/ Q9 x7 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 k) }" r; ~1 t+ e  oI want so much to see inside your heart
& A& [% p+ x4 N& J) Z  `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ J2 L$ z7 l/ t+ _- r) T& WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 U& e& v6 i# u" R7 k" aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ A" u7 b- A  [6 @0 ^% ~$ xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ t% h' ?# m) ]4 K" n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 H% J. Q8 }: y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 R9 H. K1 w* H3 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 E# W6 \; q- U$ J' B+ L7 Q& a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) b2 n+ f: l5 W) Q3 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& F% k5 v/ ?$ q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" u* W( ?+ M; ~9 R, X8 O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 s7 `4 y7 [& C. X; ^; \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% d# @+ P& O: B. I8 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; [8 C5 D! ~+ v) y( `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 V0 j5 W. [4 D- D  y: p& ^' |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 \+ T, c/ P5 E  Y. I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  M' P8 k, n5 {5 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ y1 L. @3 d9 d5 ~( Y3 f2 G' f' Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# R" A) a& W( S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, X) N; X+ m* @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 T4 q6 X. l  W0 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& n0 ?1 b3 C8 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* ^6 c9 [3 F4 Y- A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( I( M" }: g7 Y% f$ B' S" b5 g( H7 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* Z& d) `" C. K/ K; h* O8 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ z/ B& ~7 S# L3 p& A6 u1 S" M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) Q+ C: \; q* y4 ]* z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' w- b- B9 Q9 e( _: {" V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. A6 V. ?( p( B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& {- W5 _( z0 \/ ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. ^$ u5 e" ^( r6 X' g) s  N7 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# m  u' R2 ]4 S5 L  [- o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. @* H% \; e9 Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. y4 J2 R; S# g1 k  I- |3 B9 e4 c  z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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, r# N3 U3 H! l) F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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