【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 }% o. H1 j- TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 [5 H. \, a5 [. ^" K7 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 t/ s6 Z  N  c0 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 v, O( M" U" q/ aYou needn’t fear anything
8 \4 F# E9 Z5 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, E0 Q5 v2 S0 J7 O$ d2 q6 C' h6 BEvery other word you utter is love
( f) h3 ?3 x& z$ m  {. nI really want to know just how much you love me
9 q% H. j0 O: M9 xI love you I love you with all my heart
3 k" [- ^* @! A0 W4 E: [8 P. `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" C6 r: M1 i/ A" c1 C5 k9 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" a2 D2 x" B$ v- \; s. AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" h. K' b+ ~  @3 V; O8 QI’m still filled with fear
4 f& H* d8 P( i, ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ a( g2 ~! F) k3 y- gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. d! D$ W2 P1 ]: c4 t) I4 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 x* m( y8 ^7 v1 U7 P: J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. x3 v$ i0 h! j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; T7 `. S4 `! U' `$ S. r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  t$ a; f) F! m) s: J6 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( L& {) ?3 g/ D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 A. E, \1 W4 Z. ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 I% v6 u+ N& V, C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 T7 V4 t: V2 @1 [! P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 m/ f# N7 E# W0 z1 J# [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: v: E7 G( m4 G<P>你无需担心</P>
4 \2 C8 q! m; V$ I/ T: U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, T" I1 }0 [5 U" ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% v1 p4 a( f+ H) p7 X; c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! s. v/ j7 Y/ c: ~0 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! i- m8 e  q) e, M3 ^& \# ~5 K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 }5 ^: L/ l" }; f" K; _6 V  j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 G3 a( F9 Z: S, e/ R& J3 D$ u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 `: g/ d% m9 _4 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' {# [' t- x* G, a; Z( Y) p' c5 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 \9 j5 f7 B% z* ]7 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" R4 v& a; @' B  q" A% S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; F' \6 o5 X( }3 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. h; }, m* e3 Y9 \5 \7 Q* ]/ h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. h/ ^% F; e/ W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# M8 X) p5 t5 @( u; u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 G, A( |: a3 ^4 V4 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' h: l# y8 |4 i0 q& c: f8 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 v, p1 j2 }% C; i  G# }6 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 x- ?0 U6 _$ _; R  s4 e* u/ w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& P+ A% P. @4 Z. m) e  T% q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" D  t3 R" S* J+ C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% V' F4 k* I! I* q8 N# ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 i  s3 g* v& e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 B8 h3 r; Z1 y( a4 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  q7 q, {; S9 X, c! i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>