【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ Q+ E  b" O. s" C* p3 p  W, TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 o, y, M; Y4 A7 A  t' o3 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 f, S. ^/ w9 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: p, M4 }: i1 ^# dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 X9 J" v9 H) M$ y1 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
: F! N2 @. T9 J: b! g# HWith the moon kissing it every night
  T' ~  G  O0 B9 M' K& n- ~/ zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" H" l9 u3 s1 v6 u& u3 }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 K* r' Z+ _+ y1 O  DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 o+ A) T- K7 e. }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 r# G; G3 }0 ?6 b9 o% kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 }( O' k) K7 A) M* Z+ u# Z' PI’m still filled with fear
6 b/ [1 l$ P  G8 u* qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; B' |7 W+ p* ]( ^- _$ @7 jWith such a tongue as yours,
. D" g. j" b6 q4 Q6 K5 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 j  ^& b" |& _( j, \1 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  H1 T' P$ o% ]! E# r3 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) k9 h' g' }% P# M: W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: f5 F! v, v3 \( A: h7 A: L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 [: F/ [0 D" T# a/ d; v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, Z9 |' H5 J" I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" e0 M/ _' V  t/ |% g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 F+ `  A; j+ P2 m5 @1 n6 f! k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( Z  k4 {! F% W) {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 h# Y; o/ V# u) Z. h! u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ M& r0 Z; j: m. p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- C" b, }( u2 ^7 r7 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ E& R+ ?! C- U( A  Q, W2 P& J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& n" j0 }" x0 a' Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  x! V0 l1 }8 x- n* @  ~0 l( z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' h& |/ {- r1 H/ `( [7 S4 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- G$ \  l8 o* ]" o4 A9 g! H( ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( K+ P5 I! `+ m1 R! S' E; L3 }; P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, l" R8 @- u6 E, b; n* L$ y* ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 A0 Q& V& c0 o# w9 v9 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 `: Z9 i6 h; P  {6 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( h5 D; x6 n4 |: o" _* A1 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" A( n( Q) @6 p, A7 t7 b! E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 T3 ^; v7 X2 E' L( q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 E# f4 e+ l$ f- j, S9 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 |+ v. ?9 d* c, x& g8 W& |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 K: p2 {) K. q2 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ N9 A; P! Q2 h" y* W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 C3 W/ w+ _  B# w& g. I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>