【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 i& `$ n; _0 H; OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% ^9 ?% }7 o0 i3 K2 B% g8 a( Z0 SWith the moon kissing it every night
4 D# C, Z" d0 I- Y" @& SSeeing the sky content with its love
9 i# k6 e5 }% z) I/ C) `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! a9 t; q& a- z5 c0 K: [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 D, Z  C; s. F2 T3 TNothing can compare to my love
4 o1 ^5 J  ~" K! I1 KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 m: c# v, C: V8 C) `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( G& _0 t+ i4 J; t+ ^2 S% CI’m still filled with fear
, W/ g% }  }7 X' i, C: L' AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( E% }+ h- K, B% C7 s) XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 i. x0 h' J% S& F2 [6 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% ~; z8 n7 J7 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 ]  D5 z: Y7 N6 z6 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 i; J/ [0 \: L% H5 y) Q* i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 M" V6 n9 V5 b9 m% y( T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" ^  W+ A5 `6 t* r4 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 W  ~* k- {! I2 g" }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! E" @. a5 d5 k& q) w- `' b: l& |: y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! P2 i' ^  ~; `3 T0 p. O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% q' n. y6 x) k: ?/ g5 {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. k; \& b! |3 J0 Q0 V% f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; R% d; f2 [$ g% V+ t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 c( n8 t+ X7 x( ?) q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ f' X- U& K$ J/ v4 H( d0 e. F+ r; b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# Q) R6 x. y) a) c; S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, o$ @1 w* U# V6 \5 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 d3 j3 b  {6 l, r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# n9 z( o4 W0 U7 w$ c, f* t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% r2 f: W" s+ R) D$ ]9 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 E: k" a0 E0 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( V& u! N. a- O4 `, O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* ]1 F8 H6 i7 T' x  p' r7 i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ Z: j' [, n3 a: {( O6 Y2 Y6 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
* Q5 |! x+ W$ h; w( T8 z; p
我请你剖开它
! C$ U6 _# b9 R- Y* X1 J: Y
& w' l3 _. M$ X, i; w6 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>