【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& s2 h5 O2 g2 I0 Q歌词我附在后面。
9 g! j# ?3 U& o+ z' ?$ cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- g! e+ Z$ y) [1 v* k8 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: _4 q$ ]' E4 i4 M! D0 R' ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 w* P2 Q) Z9 p  W# yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% y$ d8 r+ s$ ^, ^5 ^: VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: I: [6 F: j3 k5 ^- \8 ~  l- Y0 iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 {, ]& n+ Z- w, x/ @  FI love you I love you with all my heart
* ]3 O& k+ s" K3 H1 K' Y' A3 s1 `7 uNothing can compare to my love
1 @& k) j- `3 |# K" q* dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 c; m, g5 Q& U  wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; o$ A& q  E. M' m& L- mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 ]# o$ _- A; f5 y* ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" z, D+ _7 v8 Q& r; ^4 h, m2 AI regret not dying
4 y( m' ?6 H( {+ a9 L1 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- O7 k/ f+ p- \+ QWith such a tongue as yours,
+ K2 I/ N* X; B) j, K( m' lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* X' P9 G5 d1 U3 w# kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  r! j# ^( x/ i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* l6 F9 u# }( A% B* n- v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. m' I: q* j( i% I- t- Y; g2 i, M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' z# G- Z7 `8 Z8 M8 b8 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% N" Z7 c; j( x! ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( F0 P6 V6 k+ Q+ \8 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ R8 I" L+ x$ X0 u( J! t! K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ W( S4 n0 ?: v5 u( H+ C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 R! j6 A% B, v$ Z5 r, R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( p1 S& U! w. q. J  N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& m, n2 x4 r2 q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& V. }8 [1 O: l- i1 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ ?! t4 P2 n( g; M$ h& O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# I% U# k2 y5 w( b% U- v2 ~; b5 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  M9 J! H7 i. ], s# E' H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  s3 C+ Y, l; U3 ~0 H' ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 V8 y$ I8 h# ^5 |% w, F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 I* ]9 o3 x8 d4 }7 A' {* m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  L0 g2 p# O, Z/ P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ p; `4 Y, ]" J; o6 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 e& y( m8 z  r; Y+ p1 }2 V9 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" m) B( a4 F+ u7 \1 f: l6 `! |我请你剖开它

; c1 Z- |% y6 R* n8 Z6 [" ^) ?1 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 F$ P) E0 x. L8 }# E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>