【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) P6 }9 @1 f, m5 k- T+ m1 ~# b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; n6 P1 A) X9 ^7 U. ~! c; i$ @Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ P8 j' _( _% s) \! x3 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 u4 n' d' l' [$ oThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ |6 _' i9 b! l4 f5 oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ @+ ~, j  s" n5 c3 v" T+ Y: ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# S9 a) L9 w( L) ]; v) DEvery other word you utter is love
: t. E# F: u4 E* I: N$ Y( ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 l3 @8 C* l+ d% P0 @I want so much to see inside your heart
1 U2 E" z; u1 S7 H: P" C* U+ ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 ~, g8 i) o) R( u0 {I regret not dying
  |3 ], Y) o9 O/ X& `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 r: v5 L: [; l/ {( p! g5 N' RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& p. a9 ?% a0 N. QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, `: ~8 X  ]. n( ?  uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* M, {6 r; V$ D% e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& X8 m+ Z# D5 E. D1 u! G! l+ F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 g# v: R3 `& e1 z* _' }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) e4 M& C  i8 F  H0 J# u3 @+ U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* p) y4 q$ _5 R1 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 N) V: t( ?' ^; h* z/ ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 S1 d9 `9 s; f- @/ j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ B" Z" }% i4 s6 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" ~$ S, W5 m( W+ F2 P+ M& {- ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 w' ^7 i# Q: H7 X1 X5 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  y, X8 |( ^  z0 x( V, {3 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ u/ g/ C- S; P7 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# \5 |- \3 w5 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" Y, ?& B( c# L2 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: R2 X: `  O7 k& L<P>你无需担心</P>
; X- u# u" M! P$ w7 r" ^1 u6 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 _% z; o% Z* U6 P; i$ _  a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: x  B3 P$ ^( e- i# m) j/ u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 t1 j2 H2 \) ^+ @& n& ~% J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, W2 s" V' s9 z/ l- N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- x! r; `: z: Q' f* h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. d* B& b+ t- o2 }" z7 \, p  n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# z% ^, S, C2 _" X8 [1 j' [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ ~) ^* i; }! u" G$ w& p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% C7 Z: U" n7 G, U$ |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 \* I) _1 v3 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& A  f' [  s2 A- J* A  L7 T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* V/ N. Y5 J5 M/ [, Z* ^5 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. c. O5 b7 F0 E, {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 h8 z1 e/ _$ H$ L  q/ ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 k% n: {" j( W- U& F' a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; F5 l2 \5 o( v- Q2 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 r6 I# g" G% f6 x9 d% b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 w9 \' r- _! O7 R$ u* ^# S+ A; c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ h+ z6 l" z) b- G/ a9 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 T+ u6 s! k( G% o6 Q# m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 }. P% ?6 m0 f. y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 p% ]" M$ c! h! T" l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. c7 c$ z- e: [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# f9 _% ?/ \0 D# r# ?7 u% c4 `我请你剖开它

! p6 F7 k& G) P& ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>