【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 Z3 t: P2 y; y, U' V9 c3 V- Q, mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, d% I  {, [$ v: y4 h: QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( p# _# L, W) NWith the moon kissing it every night
3 b7 W6 k4 q' ?  r  m9 U- V! c- s4 DSeeing the sky content with its love
( V  `4 i) s+ J6 z( J7 ?, |+ k" AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 s8 N8 S1 C: B0 Z1 U4 @7 X6 z- X  W! IYou needn’t fear anything
2 e- P' d9 j- \2 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ E% }, A5 M- SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( m- y0 W5 P' M0 lI love you I love you with all my heart
$ n. C( m, e$ }; h4 h( @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ |1 {/ o6 ^+ a4 `. H) U/ j' q& F) OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' g) \" L% H% tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 |: x1 T/ H, f2 K* S0 pI’m still filled with fear
+ w$ Z6 s  T: N' RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ d+ ]6 C# q( f2 c% T& jI regret not dying
# U1 g% X# @7 O; c6 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 f" U1 `) `  A& b( q- MWith such a tongue as yours,
( X5 H3 [% P- o+ U. i1 G' uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% x6 T- Z  i0 o0 A/ @5 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' _  j) U; I& b( rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ p' F/ a# J: @' L3 |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. k4 V. U" l! ]( M) Y' K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; q! l2 v, v3 Q; L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 J8 `3 H5 \/ j! H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 x+ I* R/ C: N, @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 F$ C3 Y, n0 b1 l2 k/ I, C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: @+ v, i* C. k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 V- Q2 b7 ?; C) X+ D0 a7 J9 {8 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) B: g) A% C# H" t9 E) F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ n7 L4 \. B& x) D2 y' b9 R" X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! X! h: B7 S9 x& M8 b+ m. W* a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  F9 i0 p+ g7 Q. V0 a% j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 t% T( p6 Q% m  V( e' S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 H4 f1 e# c8 P0 B) s0 h, |; }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ N# H0 b9 T. m* x& U  Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! D& C% g8 N2 u. x! b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# l! J0 g: c: l; ]  G& P1 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) ^, L' d! {7 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 H: y$ T& d+ _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  I2 R% r% a- k6 u$ w0 f# h- P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% e( F2 ]5 T9 g' x- E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 `; j& f/ V7 h# T' [. h3 C$ b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# n3 N7 }$ u$ g) j1 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 s$ W: i) }" r2 Z! b+ _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- T  ^+ [$ K6 V/ ~4 L* N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 A! X/ m+ |6 I0 Y* m, h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 _! a0 [, r% A. |& u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; _7 r# ], z% G6 r2 o' w0 h+ r; Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 t& ^! D5 ?- s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; m& c! T# i; H& l% l3 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ r+ r/ V' G% X( F0 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! ^  C1 M" k. G$ ~% s( c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. K0 e( ^  q$ k* _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 p* h) W4 Y/ c( e5 U/ F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>