【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 F* ]8 Z0 D) O" D( Q- n; nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ [1 T: k! i; s: Q8 L0 nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ _8 K% g/ i  X$ ]5 h, gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 N% `. \$ K: i6 B8 y7 uEvery other word you utter is love
$ {5 h) f# @7 X4 C, \I really want to know just how much you love me
+ H1 E. h2 [: WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 ~* ^0 z, Q/ U: \2 g. rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, B7 L5 d9 a) UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" l$ X* J& l: w/ E& N5 g4 NI’m still filled with fear
: M! B/ e8 }! X7 U8 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( {- p9 F) H, \' q* VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% l+ u* i; d. U% pWith such a tongue as yours,
; f4 d) {3 T( P, _( m* b4 }% qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- y7 [4 p' h& c' }. M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 C8 g) S4 k7 w9 ?6 h* y4 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 m% k; @# o1 E1 D: B" D4 F" H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. G, c- u  n0 I+ J& C+ F: V5 F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% Q7 c8 {3 z0 k8 V- w+ w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 Z6 t6 m: x. N! O0 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. O5 r- p. [  t0 j4 T- {, z& i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ V, t8 F4 ~8 g$ V5 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 U8 V- [& D2 C<P>你无需担心</P>
2 r/ q$ B+ u4 \% T7 [1 o+ Z9 A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ G  s. G* r3 }) h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 g! @& w( z& q* y1 C. p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& L# h  a1 \; K! m) [4 d9 B! {% S, V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% S* v# B6 G9 ]6 }; k$ \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% Z- r8 p2 X  ?- Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; m2 s9 W7 B% E% l& Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 j3 z0 A4 [. c* w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, r. o8 E/ Z6 a% T* n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 c' F, V; `% E; A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  y  Y( W+ C* m1 ?( u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ f1 Z3 {. \$ b+ C. s2 [2 c* D0 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# ]; m4 H, h$ Q3 N) Q5 [3 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ ]7 C* _+ s% t# O: O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 t4 l* n! G. C0 d2 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
% U. i, l) j% q+ Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# n) D8 Q# T# J! d  ~: k; _- L8 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 u4 ~7 H4 n2 |3 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ J9 ^9 }; A) u3 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( C5 g3 G) ~' W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) f4 Z* p3 @. k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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, G: }/ U0 M, R0 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>