【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 S9 r& o- I1 b) v歌词我附在后面。
) A$ L9 N! |6 {3 @% @The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& `7 ]8 C2 |& H$ M% S2 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, ], |9 j1 Z7 m+ l  Y, p3 w- i; rThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 M. j) t- r/ B5 c% jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. A$ A) d9 ]2 r8 z" pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ]! h( x' X- j; P# [* \( zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) T7 q  p& Y5 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( g; f- Z5 B; f, V4 x5 K6 x, x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% v7 K9 e# B) N" ^  r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 W- s7 ^; K3 S. G1 C( D% G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 Y7 X  [$ o5 ?- I) u- e' ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( I1 Y! r1 G+ X& O* V2 Q) U4 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* |; M5 W- F0 k; l! Z7 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" F/ N; L6 Z2 X+ H) I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% g. f( j* `& i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ O0 N9 a, C$ t& _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) O; ^2 {# g+ @% I- r7 ]! t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 f. ~; q" t/ u5 v( E# |* w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 w" `+ x0 m$ y7 @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% ?4 a$ O% a* W8 Y) v& V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ u- Z! `+ N7 Y& ~) l7 |) y& W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, o% [; k+ }6 [; x, |3 {4 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  ]+ x8 @1 P9 e8 \' l; T, `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 r: R+ |0 a) X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: k, m/ w, A$ s% o) C, @5 N  o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, N7 S8 X  d$ U: b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' w' E. s4 o4 o7 A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 d3 z; N3 U0 E, Z' \1 K2 B: ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- Y: z# D' Q: t4 |- d: L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 x0 N/ d0 y, w# t6 r9 @. C4 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ ?, \2 N$ u5 a! b3 T# f, T( i1 L% f* W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>