【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ y2 j0 h# K" _6 P& _Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 p( L! E% X4 E" t; ~' ^# u4 C2 U7 {: JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 {! V$ M' R8 H& m6 `0 g1 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 F( `8 D2 E: f) c  ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; p/ W6 g; U, t) F- E8 ]. MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& X: B5 I$ b  i* G4 `+ m' [Every other word you utter is love
3 H9 u) D1 N+ u* |5 kI really want to know just how much you love me
, V8 [- T4 b" F2 v) QI love you I love you with all my heart
2 x9 h: o9 W: p0 O9 f9 sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 w; ~$ b. W0 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 {1 V1 {6 V9 g6 T& u1 n. P9 b& ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" q; I# f/ y% o. o/ k9 p& ^# W- tI’m still filled with fear
# C* S9 w. R) L+ GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 S9 q4 V- n7 J  r  z; J+ T& X0 zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ B/ n( M# n9 pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' n& ]+ d# U0 @% i, i# S6 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ q* K4 F; s7 s6 p" h/ T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# B' M9 h# T" E3 \9 G4 i8 G$ c% O6 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 N, u- p- ^8 y+ S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! n+ C1 E: @4 a. u7 z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' a2 B3 U: w  _2 G* L" w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# `. \) {# t( c1 _) j# F+ d& x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 M& `/ V( |$ W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- e/ e( w' y- w# N* {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: \# P. j  |7 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% {; r' u- ^! |- n8 O1 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! I" @: G; ^$ T$ r# j6 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, o8 j+ L$ t) n8 J" y8 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 S5 ]! t& I! I: G+ Z" s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 y% }: |  i3 D" c+ \) J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 b7 l5 f" U* H( G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  A. ]4 ~1 z* A: J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: w4 U' F3 J2 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 x, S3 y1 M' s  {8 Z1 ]4 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. U6 o% d4 d4 h* Q3 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ s6 b6 e9 D+ \* l- s3 d" Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 ?% l, ?, r) w" _, P1 t1 Z; ]2 [4 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 r( \" Z% ]% N! m( `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ t# j( b3 ]5 q7 X; c3 W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* l, k1 d$ w+ F. m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* ]  o7 ^" \0 S; ~" |# y" A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! a2 i9 [. V: ]7 L: m( g5 A: J6 n/ j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
8 a* x6 X! G  ^( _
9 R0 M1 o/ n) z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>