【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 l. R: P7 ]' _4 N% M4 P4 c. r; \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- X; N+ W4 o, l& t$ N1 B8 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
  m1 j% ~; p# z6 ?2 ?9 u! aWith the moon kissing it every night
5 {6 N* ]- t3 H- O& jSeeing the sky content with its love
" z6 ~  A9 F4 g  O; {' nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! W4 }8 Z5 G& l/ x1 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 {, C2 O( B) eEvery other word you utter is love
& M) f& }: q' j8 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
" d# K. |% W! F$ }) s4 \4 TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. E$ o. _! Y) NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ U/ c" X0 x* a/ t' BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 G& c+ S* F' W) U# \! E+ s9 ^) K3 g* kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 h% `# O+ N+ r, k' Z# ?8 v9 B8 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  O( i* n, M) q% bWith such a tongue as yours,
0 q3 s( \7 ~9 I" s0 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 t( r* Q: a" R7 F. `5 S3 d; U) l6 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- G+ G( i; J% C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 w& q+ Z8 K8 V2 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ K' t2 Q4 @/ E, |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# x# ]& X( ^* i9 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ W/ B7 }! X- q& S9 V& {5 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  X& I  O" r7 G; n! C6 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% D2 }' }3 m. J7 Z4 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
* J* `& R; [& @  g% a/ k# @( ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* ~4 z  v1 n" ~8 h4 V; h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ c; C9 H! d) K$ H7 H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# S$ ?$ s* W, _- ?% L& m- H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ |; B- d! `: W% H4 c3 F4 U! }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 `4 O, D$ C" e, e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 E9 Y, p; l5 @  }: o$ G( a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- P3 F- M  t1 C; c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" i, B6 F  [& Q( ]% B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; G" n: v, }6 k) R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 ^0 d; A: o' J+ d+ F- u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 [' G( ^! J" B2 E* k7 ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' S2 X* o8 ~1 I) w: Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 g& y; {4 S1 |$ p! S% n6 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 W* o9 g( Z+ J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 w0 L" g! s0 s8 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& ~% G7 c. q; E- K1 i) Z; U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 j3 }( N% e, l' T% f$ C, ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; b* H+ c. B/ `7 r8 q; [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 g' n: {9 S1 E2 ]3 l5 g" b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 s8 N- J' k* }" p4 _  H8 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>