【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; H* g+ ?3 l5 R# X$ `The moonlight is shining brightly,
' f3 V  N% F% pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 a! o6 u6 G4 P% y/ }: I1 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) `, r& o( ^! d/ s5 u5 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 J$ Q, ]/ Y% @: JThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 ?2 a  e: v! u! Z/ I% u) V5 PWith the moon kissing it every night
% [5 l) U! B& y' S4 {; p* |Seeing the sky content with its love
5 S% O) w1 m+ `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( P% o! X$ w% x( |. r' @: y3 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( X; ]! m6 {* t' wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: J" C" [: H4 ~+ XI love you I love you with all my heart
) v$ a+ h3 m7 E/ L) f7 FNothing can compare to my love
. k& P) C2 _" U) A" A  K  n& a) nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: [1 Y- r8 b: `2 ]+ u" l! S4 eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 T0 `: j( C% }0 zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 [" q. {5 d0 c8 d1 eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
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6 H( d8 |0 G! v0 KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& L, Z. `5 {7 p, |% C& c! E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* Y  [/ W0 k# u+ K$ P; q% x8 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ B& ?) n+ C( \: J  q& c. q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 K" Y' O6 M  Y- ]! {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* b" T; L* i" F: @; I  `: i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 Y1 N. I# ?% l' G4 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 x: h0 l  s' _, n0 Z# V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 C9 [6 I4 o- L. H1 h* K3 d+ Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 y- }( U9 z1 E* H0 i  M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; ?5 C, Y! e( q0 b$ S' [4 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' b8 ?0 j7 X$ S, b9 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) M  g: V- t* W4 H9 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 T; y8 e0 \3 u2 H% z$ }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ `% s) K  ]. a0 J- _" I2 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: t0 ^, u, H6 G0 e7 m2 R7 U$ {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ {/ w4 d+ h) y5 ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 y& s# ?! ^- k. ?0 b' ]6 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 r+ X' [2 Z. {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 Y. u; j8 E" |$ O+ B4 v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 o4 H7 |- s# K, F7 Z2 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 p: D# k4 F% m3 e! B7 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 `# t( X# i& e# e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* z, m4 y6 U0 S7 ^8 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  t* [( d5 c9 l* e8 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; G+ A) Y3 @& t* j# ~( J1 [* i1 W7 Z" I我请你剖开它
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- S9 Y$ M+ I5 ]& @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 l* {4 h0 e2 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>