【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 U, I% W. I3 r  \% y" E5 q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* E5 c# W2 n4 o) s  [# C: l6 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& G$ {! ?( `& x  W0 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  C6 [+ r5 U5 c- ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: u* c. H8 @* i  U' e* S3 iSeeing the sky content with its love
( F1 {3 W9 ?. u* Z5 l7 T$ CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& F& R8 s. ?3 O( D6 y) q/ j: t& yEvery other word you utter is love
3 ~/ h: k5 V( NI really want to know just how much you love me
' C; Q0 p  a! E- N1 l) |! UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# w2 L. ^% i" ~( z  fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 T; K& W; s( f$ I/ ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ Z: N3 ?7 n, yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. J, W, y  X/ y% X" o  ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- @" U$ a8 V+ H: P$ D1 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; K7 h, X$ U. z; m- }" p+ EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  B& c/ l7 r. C4 k: }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 L  D3 `6 E* C4 j) B6 v' C2 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 j( W+ Q) d2 _; L0 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! E( U" X! d" j% ~  f; [4 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 g' b3 s' \7 p2 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 e$ m  @! B  J5 B: M# s# h1 y  @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( c% Y. e) r0 b( _. z& Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- B& U# f! h# B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: F; `! g% R9 c: Z8 J3 ~2 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. }5 q! r8 z1 ]+ e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ^  R" k' x1 I! R( J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 o2 l1 N. @! `: H/ i7 ^- E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& ~# S6 w" Q3 s, O! M1 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ `6 l0 {* Y+ j! t7 [; t7 x5 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 n7 w: @, ], i) O1 M8 C) m/ x& P& ]% A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- @: a" U" x! D% G# c! l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( P3 W& K1 I! n  Z2 C2 ~6 Q6 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ b( G/ ]6 T% s2 X/ X2 P0 C0 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ t7 ^6 s2 e7 x, t0 ]3 H; i- \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 N2 l8 Q- N$ [. \, T6 d! G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: J3 r+ ?6 R- E. {" A' \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( g( ~& V0 r  j- X( s2 ~  j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- O/ X  }5 h% l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 {4 k0 h* H& X) R( t& a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& x+ z) D$ a7 S% G! l5 ]: ^: Y. ?( Z/ @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ t# P' t7 d: z6 A; |: ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( k, H4 x8 ^7 R. @# Z9 S6 x$ v: r  @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" {' K+ F* O" d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ y8 y. Q. @) \* t: N9 n- L' W0 A( ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 R$ G' k/ h+ S" c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 h1 d- q- h7 R) ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 @+ T) q6 ^) B$ q0 q) W% I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 e9 S0 D/ j3 L# K: a+ n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>