【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* o% ]1 z/ k$ g! c- t; i9 J歌词我附在后面。
  w- C' N$ [) B" K; tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 v; F  t0 f1 ^9 X4 W6 d- UThe sky is happy down to its soul
- p  C" a; F) w: ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- w+ k, g" U; V/ |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; F& F2 v$ x  j& n! e3 N" s6 ~* l" GEvery other word you utter is love
9 i& g/ x3 J7 X. A7 b2 E$ ^( `I really want to know just how much you love me
' Q* b4 \( ^/ m! ]6 k- g3 {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 s& U6 B9 c* ]0 ~$ `5 A1 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- a3 X7 B+ G- G1 T6 d8 Q2 dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' p' M2 B& \3 a! ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  c: _' v3 [1 W7 T8 [& RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  c7 N7 T" N5 j# e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 u8 e& E4 K5 e0 L3 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* l/ W8 D" P% I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- \% Q3 E2 [. {% F" n: C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ W2 B; k5 [9 a* P7 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  Z9 p" ~* I6 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 V% `2 h% r' f0 T5 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; r7 z! ?, Q6 W3 @# _# ~$ w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ Q/ h- h. M! ?) B+ @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% n- }# }9 `3 m# n% x! }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! [0 F# u1 [$ w6 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) ^5 ?) w* E. N+ D7 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) s6 @" y# [- h# a2 I: N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 y' B9 q* \* O; C2 c( k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% s0 g# K' o, Q& R& e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" K* A4 y; f$ v% y- `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 d0 c# Z) k/ v3 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 ~' J& L$ u: g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ N+ J0 T1 ~* `( x1 Q; F% {/ Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 `8 X" b/ i% h7 h0 h) j' L/ _) M% e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! Z7 n0 c( k, ?9 H% |0 C! H6 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% A1 q* N  x/ }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! R* Q! S5 F+ V6 X9 i! [' w$ q# _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ A7 {, A- |. J- N, K  \+ B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. {# O. n4 \8 \. C7 r8 e5 s$ P+ W2 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& N! w# C( @2 a( f' u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 p7 q; C$ M1 m& c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- e3 W# r+ @9 z. U7 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 l! Y5 _# w" U6 L我请你剖开它
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0 `% {1 W9 _5 U) C5 ]4 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& j. W9 R8 p( b* U' M8 n6 C4 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>