【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 X, m" d. L0 p4 H7 p0 j) T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 _9 S( o" E* G/ F, ~( rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. m2 U% L0 w% E# p' j- _Seeing the sky content with its love
4 s5 g" h* D$ T7 `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) h2 W1 y( X; Q9 O& K6 j0 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 V$ C, |. h3 s* t3 PI love you I love you with all my heart
* p% [0 b  g0 r/ v  [$ w2 hNothing can compare to my love
, [0 O5 F! Y& p3 z: _) @, ?( bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% \8 d( p+ A, o/ {  l( [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# c9 ~% C' j( @5 aI want so much to see inside your heart
: L$ S( X% {5 v! {  L( Z% ^' xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ V2 u, O/ {* K$ F: `# H; GI’m still filled with fear
4 [2 A( A$ Q$ l: o, B2 V; qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# K4 d4 L+ Q- [. Y( U) i6 A' jI regret not dying
6 B* h8 M5 [6 M8 p% k7 A/ [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% }2 P" e8 e, v9 N/ f: g) Z9 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ u( J" L$ r, |( }- x& y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. ], U$ M, k. h* p) N' q* o/ t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ ~4 l! Q! J9 P+ d3 b; i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 n+ Q8 [: l% I8 Y. C6 ?/ p$ p% i; K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 O' ?4 a4 {) s& e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 ]! _+ c1 ~5 Q6 }+ m# x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  L+ f( G# W! |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 e; z4 n, s% e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% T! Z7 M! _8 G  I' S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: {& j. T+ }( W  d& c/ ], V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- \: j8 h3 Y* i; B, u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* X' G- d' [. A5 @) |, U0 H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 J& m! Y4 ?; h2 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  e+ L  R3 L: ?& `0 D0 j) w; h6 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 z0 \/ h1 O. \: v8 H' U: w% y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 o7 Q  q" x, t. j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! V4 y7 H. r8 B. `9 |% X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: r3 ]/ ]2 \0 k5 ?+ n! ^& c; C; w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 r" g, q' w: `7 Q! `1 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! ~9 g. h  C) `( y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; H) K3 c4 A, l# h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( C4 w8 H7 F6 q) N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! {, L+ y2 u' l$ t) D$ ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" Q. |0 V9 ]9 _& S9 z; d! B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ G4 E9 h! z, X- ~1 Y. n5 \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* N3 Q) _; e) E$ B6 {3 C; j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>