【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
. w1 }( l. d! \: J! o3 a  v* H: sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  G2 K5 ~: u/ x. HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 E& @$ _- p& P* GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! w/ r. d& P, E# ^- X. ]! }- v3 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 j( e- G: l+ C$ l$ @8 |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) R1 O, z" J1 B' _Every other word you utter is love
3 |$ D5 a0 r6 S' k; f  t) D2 MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) j, G" h# K3 p+ {  rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 D( A( C4 V9 v2 i; |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ U( k) g* g/ ^, \8 g! N$ ^# qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: T  N  t# S4 j+ tI regret not dying
4 }( ]* S9 m0 P( WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ k5 n7 O' I2 S* K/ L7 J0 G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# F( A; y) r' d/ U/ S: l5 v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. Q; E, h, k0 T8 s5 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- t7 g  G  O# N$ ~! [' J! y3 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 K: w& R, p; O, ]: J" S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- F3 x0 ^  |; W0 V: g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 P% X" k1 ~. b' a4 V1 K, I6 l8 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  M0 l/ |& Z8 ^2 b* t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 E; S* G% R& s% T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; e- G$ N. e1 G( f) u% h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ x2 x' L3 c! h3 `% a, W. ~4 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ f3 ?1 ?. ~$ o+ U: ]: u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 j! V* \( d! P0 E" n7 T4 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 e9 \) G$ b. v4 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; _4 r5 o  p7 j6 D( ~. j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 p. x  Z/ M" o) G4 i( z$ m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* l" Q2 ?( b, L) y6 y8 U, ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 T. `1 c' J6 s' _4 [9 |) l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 G! t1 a4 h$ u  D1 f- k( k0 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* ?/ _  m  h8 [# _+ F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, [7 V% B4 e1 m1 t* X, L# N' H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& [3 {+ A6 k5 P. V# K; S4 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; F0 \7 ~/ H. m  L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 ~/ A, P$ K3 Z: U* |$ J3 I6 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  ]! v, h! X& |我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>