【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; c$ c  s1 Q, N2 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ u6 h1 w2 N+ d2 _  lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* w1 j* z1 t  z+ pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; q3 Z* N) I# N8 TYou needn’t fear anything
! |" e2 h+ W1 S! H( XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- z7 f7 f# Z( u( d/ D& mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# }( P6 N, I6 m& O5 x$ bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 ?4 Y% e, i, W1 M5 _# ]1 Z1 oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 y: u9 y; n) c3 @/ @- s* AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ N# O% Y  g: wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' M4 `, {# R- p, R+ q# G4 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 q' q( F/ s6 o/ u4 Z; k7 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( Z+ f6 d( u+ w2 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" p3 H; Q0 s3 U$ E( A6 W; B0 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, r' J- U  M1 r0 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ a. I' X9 D. R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: G6 Y4 d4 t" G; r" Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 Q2 N! _- Y% ^7 U% C/ I/ g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( o  W' `' C0 O, G6 h  F$ a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 d3 _6 b# @8 ]; l) V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 W. G, P/ R7 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. Y3 X; o* @% k' a' m9 R7 t3 e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 ~9 G+ o5 J1 m( m; B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. G) Z% h. D" Z2 n/ I3 T: `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ Z# L' I! i( N) S4 B+ @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" L( z1 e2 w- Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 S2 F2 z( Y/ \$ f1 u; B) R( I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 a$ g0 {2 J; r2 Q+ b7 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 S$ i- y8 ]* S# m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ Z) d; w5 I' t9 p( v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: l8 a% `1 D8 r5 {; K6 m$ F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. P3 J' K7 c  h4 ~- h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 D" ?& O, {* f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) I8 m* W3 p) ~( d+ g4 {9 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 Y  F8 W, r/ b4 {. p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 l9 d8 n1 o, E  ~2 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ^0 a- c9 M( W7 `$ C6 o+ `$ I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 q0 }; q- t" \9 z$ v4 k6 S" k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& v' P. o2 z$ B: P0 Q: ]- D. K* i4 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 x# z0 O  C: B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 p8 @: b7 V8 O# |) F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; F3 `- a+ q1 n: i6 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

) n1 ~7 B- V7 s  B1 r' N  i7 W# B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>