【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 k4 V# ~5 x2 |; G1 S% g& J; B) S歌词我附在后面。
. l* @. A, ?  d0 a: |7 c+ S( B. eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 y7 b# h" K' N. o# vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) l$ z  _; Z5 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, A' ~) o* o2 d- M' Q$ OSeeing the sky content with its love
) a% L7 m1 x( X  vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 ]) m, d6 M3 B: n! yI really want to know just how much you love me
- X) O3 W- ?0 T! h3 n3 R/ XI love you I love you with all my heart
8 V# l2 w0 J1 X: L/ yNothing can compare to my love
% b1 P6 K- P; h  L( ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; H8 F# V$ n% s& h5 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: ^: @6 y% e+ {* T8 f7 r1 O# XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  n$ o) s' A) d+ s' a0 j; U+ SWith such a tongue as yours,
- V7 J" }8 r6 d( U! E2 ~% NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 T9 P2 _  S+ \/ x* V  Z8 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: q4 A' y; _" W8 v! x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; }3 M4 X: N+ S1 g$ J5 T  V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; D" k9 O3 g  c) S5 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& M$ B% U" w9 P- j7 N5 n/ N$ A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 A& k0 C* T) ^" V# r) f. Y+ T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 g! [0 c2 }, [. C/ M1 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 ~! z, d7 x  C& \6 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 a( E4 [% F' @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' W  W7 Z/ a/ C( p# v# k0 \3 `$ B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: T- ^- v6 e! _; ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 ^* K* Z! @% D" v% h5 a1 K  j2 ]6 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. X4 m7 {& v( u/ n6 q% U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- w# n" r" V# ~' r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ y" Y4 Q: D! z3 q& A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; ?  w% g, y/ {( h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 ?4 D% h" V2 G9 l" j( R$ V# ]1 H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ ?2 E4 g& h* l: _! v$ }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 V- G# @0 N5 J9 m; k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 W& E1 ^4 q$ \* U4 d1 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 z) V; \. @' G4 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 t8 }6 E1 Q: \! K5 o, J/ C4 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 a! O5 I- q5 T4 S# y( {  N<P>I regret not dying</P>
! n) l8 i# ~& S: l9 }$ r6 }/ o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 L6 Q$ c& ^6 x" X" H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ n, J  g4 r) @! w! q" ?6 R0 B+ ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 d  [, T* o: t2 w, @3 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 {8 L/ `9 ~- v( ?  X: R5 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 j8 m) n1 p2 }* x% T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 U: Z6 b( D/ S" o* a3 b& G& z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" A- c2 h( ^' P) @  U! G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>