【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 Y% b5 \# {) u" ^( R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ T; a$ t. M& s4 iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. i  Y9 ~, @1 L# i3 R* XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& {- k8 _! p" \- {. g  iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' D1 w+ f3 h0 W( o$ H7 ^You needn’t fear anything
+ Y" h  }- W* B* kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 ]4 Y4 U- n) w9 o) U' u- i6 _5 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( @+ v; ~; {$ h: a% w. M- n2 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" C: ?" N9 J2 p+ O% @/ @9 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* a: I5 M) {1 f7 uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ]4 x: F) `) s/ C8 R3 W  sWith such a tongue as yours,
2 t: R# M2 d) `% f% b  J8 KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: |8 ?8 f) E. S7 j: o& k( \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 y; y! j; A2 {: A2 O; D0 ~0 ^) XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" G4 l  c" T5 Q4 x4 W: ^4 j1 h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ x5 K( ^5 }2 E6 u3 H: z( l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' X7 W6 H$ |4 f' P" l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* R& l# ^- r5 X9 H, O! O% v& V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 g5 c& V; e& |" V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! n: w, @8 G7 r+ s$ t% X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! V: e! e1 Q- S  P# p9 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# P3 c3 j- n, S# `1 G% g$ p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: s+ L& }2 Q, F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 d3 L) N  ^) |; _2 Q+ B& l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 B4 x, p  t; L7 N6 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 t* ^: i- P# `/ ~+ j: w0 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 v/ ]% ]) G/ a$ L; j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 S# H1 Z  u" D! d. h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# [+ [( K' M. P0 A5 K7 }( a, f. C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; V# \' z5 L" {4 V5 _8 e. p. m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' Y  ]3 X, J. ^2 \. R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  r% T, U& x9 l! c4 \8 O, }; T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ h3 {9 X5 e* g% T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- Z) G' d& z0 V, M+ A) Z8 e& M我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 C/ w, B! _3 c: X3 \" `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>