【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% {. B' x" ?! J4 h1 }" B  Z4 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' R2 G1 Q( |  v$ NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: }$ E! d. a" uThe sky is happy down to its soul
% z2 w0 H  z1 H& a: q" RWith the moon kissing it every night
( s; J- h7 g' o* T$ GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! y" x9 `3 [1 I7 [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 L: o6 y4 q) \& L+ ?/ [/ M! hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' G9 M3 u: @9 D9 mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 p( t8 m9 g2 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' s- D( H; }( L" m; p2 C+ g( ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ g0 i7 @# B: K3 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: \, |2 f4 l# H3 [$ S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! ]7 \3 h. d% [1 E) p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 F9 r) K: H3 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ?( X6 r' p4 q$ S8 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 U$ J# t  C3 l4 _: ?6 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 D, N3 K) L" l) Y. {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 z' f/ i6 d4 w1 p0 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( e$ s4 y5 E8 G/ U9 E: O( ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 X6 w, n0 I; `. n% j5 V/ z9 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 k6 w3 D! D6 m. B5 l1 p- m) q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 N7 M" D/ l! }. t  ]2 @) K/ d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: G$ B5 l6 L  z: s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! V) J$ w! J, g! }0 ?8 g0 p2 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, m6 X- o( a8 n. S4 l& L2 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 }" w9 r# A9 j; \  r; a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  O8 |( l) p( J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; s1 N. |% E- P% \( J1 J5 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 h, T" i; D, k# r- P7 p9 P<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 @! R0 T& W) I# ^( x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 j$ Q! f, p/ N$ ]' R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; a- x! I/ M4 _3 _8 ^- ^3 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. \, t/ w0 |- h0 H2 V- G0 P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 }+ F4 T. b1 O' m; F& z0 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: q' c2 v  c6 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* `' w+ C% U6 F7 ^0 {' |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ H9 i" k9 F( Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) |9 c' R" a, e$ k# o, f8 h我请你剖开它
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9 }3 S. A1 A6 G5 y4 }! W/ B- t! o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 R5 B. z! m4 J) c+ D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>