【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 o. }& D" ?2 x: M' F) D. XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 P9 {8 [8 E: e& TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# p+ {* ?/ v  v4 z# rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% }; b6 e  Z* ~2 _- u! dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. d: ^; v) `4 @& @  FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 ^- O  U: Y+ G2 Q$ RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: s2 q& ^- }" _! T3 _+ Q9 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ B: Q' O) M6 r1 m: h! ~$ oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 W4 L, Y; d6 s8 ^4 {# `0 L# BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( f4 o1 y4 E$ x# `+ X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ Q: [$ o5 X. E2 e) L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- @) L2 I) C) q% ^, d5 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  s* r% F- }( i# k& V4 L& w4 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, ?* B( N( N7 L% R  N  O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! a% @& N' v, _' T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* Z0 M* F5 y4 _" Z6 l) r: C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- N5 N. b4 l4 {' ?# V: K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 P  M! ?- j. ?' f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 x. S6 q7 A8 y5 \% y2 z9 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ p9 n4 t# L! i4 {' h% r" h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 m  C+ ^$ v, e- x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( J  d. b7 `7 y7 {' P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 }, p/ D1 g0 {4 `0 H1 [5 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ d& g4 J2 d8 e1 q1 M! S; x3 f6 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* J5 S0 ?* k' o  Y0 N- K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 E1 R% E" J2 [* |9 J/ w2 b0 {1 \5 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( A& Y% x" f/ b; s" B2 ], I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) C# H/ b) G5 ^4 s' r) I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" z  e( J. Q/ j, w% M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, L2 t' n' I( o/ l0 k  S% K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& G% Y2 U* {# [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) V, \; O) A1 G9 x- y0 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ n+ _6 X# G' F. ~1 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 {% V, N) b5 d: `* p# Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, N+ Z' }% x4 @' k* ?4 _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* r$ T) }2 F1 k, P9 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 _) I# Z. L" |/ A) O" }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: v* c9 G7 k' L/ s! t6 o( c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( ]( I. y1 i  m+ X* t$ M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( @5 b! Q- x7 M/ p0 C, X. K' Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. |: ?6 c, ~) @+ @# V. v我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>