【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 `  w3 i' I8 w& B: t3 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) ?' Y$ L! U2 {8 RSeeing the sky content with its love
" [( M5 r3 h% z& N" T& z$ lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ i" u. f) C, o5 Z. K0 f; }3 IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 l5 W: I( Z* SI love you I love you with all my heart
) i& t; T( C9 x6 \# s; N! S8 xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; x3 M1 e  V) ~0 c8 {) TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 k4 h0 B6 h0 _' B, V, dI’m still filled with fear
9 J9 v" Y* `$ B7 S3 ?1 f& _5 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 s5 \! P1 h6 G, r) ^  \5 q; `' s8 ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( |. T, @% f& C! g2 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; ]- j. f7 |* S5 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  _1 }! {* V8 H% d. u7 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* b1 S: e1 e( d4 S4 I- p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- e4 M6 C; h' {- H& ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; h* b* i  s( H3 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ X8 R" p" v3 a# [* w4 B3 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- v/ Q5 Y5 O7 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& q9 C' e  V8 J. z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 A  i$ P2 _: E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 q  b& k0 P# ^* n0 m* B0 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 @6 O7 h  F+ c# D* o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ W0 Z" I# w) R6 M" u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# F- Z6 x: a- J7 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 {- o2 G3 U4 I: ?0 l" l9 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* ?. V9 A, g* @) y  ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 S( Z  y1 Q* C0 l  B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 g6 i/ {5 c4 S/ v  _) q/ O, w" m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 y9 Z# o; W8 Q/ i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. V% s- ~4 c) z3 k4 t2 r8 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' m" ?! i% i6 r; y; D1 T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 V9 F5 x+ R" u" @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 Z$ z. G1 L- {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& M" q: B4 g& z4 n) Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 J7 k3 h$ T# m* D9 F: ?5 g( ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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2 C* W( h  u, k, [) G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>