【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ J! G& z' V6 M' f0 `1 t3 a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 l) f1 ~$ }5 X2 `( XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" Q8 K0 U. b( s1 T( W$ \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ z4 x1 J- Z  l3 k8 r' C% RSeeing the sky content with its love
" ^; s5 z* O# s/ B; B- V- ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  y" Q8 g& N! x1 I4 }3 x: x( x. E. AYou needn’t fear anything
, V$ x. n/ U8 [' m! p; k( W2 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ K9 {2 U+ U* a, m* s( c1 t5 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& M7 O( \2 Q% g: yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' b5 o2 [$ d. \" [0 u8 B  kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ U2 }4 z! G! G, T# G7 L/ p1 ?: `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 i2 |5 d" G" n& y! U) G  {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 K$ ^0 u) U% u+ Q1 l+ D; }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) Y$ U3 X% a; i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& d9 `" q# E$ D/ u! ~% X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; j& j6 X* G( s5 e' s1 _7 h. @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: J; |7 h( t9 t: x+ s. K, o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 X1 E, [; o+ W# l. y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' d3 ^0 N, C: Z4 G1 m$ w0 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 I8 p7 V6 l" N1 ?; u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, N3 I  o# Q  S7 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( T/ O3 ]' m) R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 E( X, K; R0 v* }6 Q* |: n  P+ u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 u& _. M" @, L6 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# W; ?/ P0 T) O4 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ m; G1 m5 w, }* h7 o6 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 S, |7 F* H6 g8 k$ Q6 F5 P& d6 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 y; K6 b  V0 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 v" h! ~. q  ~; x) J/ _' Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& n, I, C+ T1 P( ^6 u% l<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 ]2 ?% H) C; N4 z/ ~7 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 {! W2 W% B! ^2 z9 p3 D# g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* t4 |4 U4 E* J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  o8 u1 q3 H) Y" @5 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& Y; ]- g$ F# E% }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# @, Q. i/ {% _* f/ k, A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ a+ D' c2 `6 P" l/ t7 U; D' c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>