【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 P' @( O1 q- F" x! {; l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ K  ^4 P- v  i* \- i; WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 d# @2 Y5 B* [: I, j2 L7 rWith the moon kissing it every night
6 \) v# |8 C8 P& |# L9 ~& N$ }; tSeeing the sky content with its love
, j4 p. z2 {5 j. I8 n7 e; gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" t: \3 |" n3 T1 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 l4 D3 @3 K; w3 DEvery other word you utter is love
+ ~6 Y- V2 W5 R+ h5 a! HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& `! \! R/ Y2 l, o; ^1 W7 t; ^Nothing can compare to my love
6 ~, r, f  G* H# K+ T2 Y+ q; r: R! RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ |- M+ @$ \& f5 u7 d( m/ O( X7 `I want so much to see inside your heart
) v0 U& i7 s3 D' ?7 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 J1 s9 v; B/ z' M, J0 K( O7 P* [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( d& F( e+ o* }9 h" kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 w# [" r5 h( |  y& R& \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; B: b7 F) @, U9 |5 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 f& C! y0 V" N  I. o& X/ I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- |) z6 q. j( P6 i# m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 m9 g, r9 o; d/ U3 ]8 W& D' a  U# r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 m) M* R+ s' N* A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 P  _/ W3 ~0 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 R3 }( @5 F3 s! }% x9 U9 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( z; P' P, I/ V4 M) U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- S# E. o6 q& F9 n) @8 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# e  Q, i: R: l0 h' v  A<P>你无需担心</P>
- }( E& `3 J4 I% `  W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ V$ s5 x! R1 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) |( p! J1 F+ B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! _) Y) ]- R' x3 H" ]' u) h3 P7 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 k; }  j6 k* X9 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( v# o: w* @7 }" |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 q# q% @* P( c0 ]$ H( w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 C- Q4 v2 _; n& n9 l: h* I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, s5 O* f. @' ~# x: v5 ?4 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 Q# r) H3 s& Y" ?: E/ f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, J1 ]# q/ {0 q, [' p: q1 A4 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# S- ?8 Q0 ~: A. b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& Q; i3 X4 ~0 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
) K* g- u, X# N6 a2 k3 W5 I$ k7 s% R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) l, u! n$ z' d6 w) r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; R' T/ L& v* k  o) w0 i, R) n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 P' o$ [5 h3 C4 h: c; O, f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' I) b# I3 b3 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 p1 k  I; S5 _* |( `$ i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 }0 R+ r- E) L( e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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7 c$ G: F# M0 ?2 T, ^2 @! m( w+ i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>