【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 Z0 ?* W" t$ z( q: U4 Y' wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: Z% W( y0 ^' e# kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 P) l. ~) @  M6 W. V" ^. q* m7 NSeeing the sky content with its love
5 J8 `( G% |- \3 x- R8 Q; @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( g$ o5 Y9 P9 Z6 O3 {* O6 ]' RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* J. O( P5 b0 Y# a$ ~) B' rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% S2 D2 A2 ?3 G  j0 f" ~; nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; Z+ h  f- S% X/ \" s/ @2 m4 o/ jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ i' n! S; ]$ ~( u/ p" P9 L* X$ lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! l8 ^* k3 L: d( KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 N( f! y( {" g2 S2 }1 u5 g6 gWith such a tongue as yours,
) r. }5 [2 i9 w( Z  j- e, L. D9 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ r0 X2 W& [" q# I' w" ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; _& I) t) s5 |6 ]# w7 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" h: C1 `" o3 Z8 E6 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% l% |2 y9 p1 `7 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 f7 F9 Q- e, S2 F) @$ r$ U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# C4 w* ]( L! r/ G; g3 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: l' {2 s; h# c' h5 ^; n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; Y$ q7 Y' D' g2 x: ?/ k1 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 \2 D* \3 e7 U! I9 w: b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& N- h2 j' d& B4 ~* b: t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ m* h" ^1 y0 E7 T8 a! p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 y4 V' y# P2 N0 U: m3 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% Y/ {& b. B3 B7 E. a<P>你无需担心</P>
2 a# \; A- Z, S  m" y* R* v. h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; s7 r( _/ v% s: K- P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" K( e5 @7 T: I! ?1 w$ W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# w9 j2 h. X4 |( ~& a, l5 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; K, E" N; v: _: C3 {! X( ~6 z' H) Y% O! {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 v8 r7 u7 m4 A; S0 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  l5 E, _$ ^8 f3 M! V; ~& U, ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# }5 A5 P1 |- A5 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) `( A4 n( M7 n, [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 H3 V) j8 Y: y: m& z& ?3 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 T6 q1 g7 c* e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' z& [" O( q) j. b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 m$ T. V% G( a) r/ ^- f5 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 L# D- i' x" g0 r% I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- P/ x1 ^# s. E6 b% z4 E6 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" b3 `! b$ b6 x* D( }' F2 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 R' v5 }+ N* R- p7 J我请你剖开它

# l- Z. @# }! U  U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ f" J& e' |7 k, L+ ]( F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>