【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ G' c$ ?1 _- E- D) ~4 B& lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 o, g* V# h# A( e' S) [! B7 e3 nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: `. ]; a9 c' j8 M5 J3 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; g4 ~1 u6 ^( R* e/ J) L8 \" `( K! v& uEvery other word you utter is love
8 r1 b+ c+ `- M# k& ^I really want to know just how much you love me
. I- M5 f1 n/ d, Y! xI love you I love you with all my heart
- `* d" x+ _% V) tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ d- b, ~8 d, u# y5 c8 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; k1 I+ m; b7 m3 t7 u5 hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# y; @. h5 B. D7 ~I regret not dying
/ f- U( v1 g% FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 y/ s5 z; m9 x4 @9 ]With such a tongue as yours,
5 k; V4 r( L4 Z7 Z( j6 \& YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  h- V, K& M1 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# [8 `  t; H- d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  I3 i5 T6 V9 r' T) ?, |6 X5 x! @5 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' g' Q& ^! h# }3 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% m8 q3 `7 d, ?- Y5 \- \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& g& M5 ^' h* X$ I$ Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 J+ u. P" w2 p) \5 J0 ?2 ~& ]% Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 x: M7 u/ V$ x7 a( q, w3 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 B$ v9 v: ?6 F; }* t0 c+ P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 I. ]6 f& V: `7 [* x0 h# z& Z<P>你无需担心</P>
3 d7 `; ~. i( M* r; v4 R' W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 K% A" `! J- ?9 n& e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* N5 Z: v& `6 t( {2 N& w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 U8 S' M9 k2 Y$ v1 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 C* S1 C. k7 N9 ^8 Y0 ?/ Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) o; w  i) ^, Z! t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# T5 H, }; O7 W& ~: o  B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* j% d% Q; k0 h' [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 U8 z% K! C# l5 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) o* @) O! ]8 B. b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" H" W0 q4 E2 S  f, R1 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 B$ s# }( z5 ]4 A8 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  {3 \; p, ~$ c+ l# r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. v! q0 |# l4 m& F/ `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 t0 A3 n4 {7 [% v. f8 @8 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; g- h+ }: T8 V" A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! n* B4 _8 X$ }/ B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( h7 N6 \$ C: d" o9 c4 v4 F* K  j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 W" x0 N- J, L! E/ \- W$ e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

" r5 B+ ^% |4 F6 } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>