【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# n8 K( ^$ y: F$ {- x+ [% l+ [The moonlight is shining brightly,
& B8 M$ k7 s- n7 \9 k2 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. j: J+ u, b- N- S8 D, M. Y2 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ]# B: d& S1 C* n4 P0 l' X8 TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; \, N" z9 F( a) ]/ C& NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ P/ `; u$ M6 B8 iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 q( ~, a5 ?# l8 i5 n7 N1 i* i: lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# \4 h. `6 v/ `; {# g& r+ T' }I regret not dying
% l& r) e( Q/ @* t* O9 @+ N3 R& GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 [) K9 y$ Q, j/ d$ ^; mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 W  ^0 \, Y* `/ O* P5 ]9 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 Y1 b2 K9 R$ x5 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 y+ ?7 E. n9 d, M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: M8 G& g7 |# z1 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 @/ G2 J0 T, A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' T! s4 G/ i2 B4 L9 m5 d/ u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 B! E4 \+ h8 i5 ~: G' \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, s- d0 \2 W  M1 T( ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# W4 u% U5 r5 m  C( o2 e! @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% H6 x6 u4 `5 l& E% X* E4 B7 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, r/ x5 @; n' ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  ^6 v. d% N4 `<P>你无需担心</P>
; o5 M! b1 D% U3 i. ^! v( a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: E9 D* M, K9 g/ e0 }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 g& k4 ?6 e  T$ A$ R. D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 N- _6 }' r6 L+ e$ I' D) [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ C1 G9 C6 s/ P# b  f5 g1 U; A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 Z/ j4 p9 L1 Y5 t/ G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 W& |. W$ p* I' u$ Z/ j9 e0 x2 R/ F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) N5 S& F1 p2 a# t- h: q1 ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- a, u' [$ i8 o4 T9 V+ n$ N( Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 g* U2 _) H" c. \7 L' `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( v4 W2 \3 v  A& b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ |$ `2 S3 N) c' a$ D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; a" p, v$ Z, I9 Z6 M' ]; Q8 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: ]" Z# x& e; ?  ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 g5 d3 Y, u/ N2 j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  V! F1 j5 M, L0 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 R& j, z( o, }$ A1 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>