【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, w  {$ a- b: q. C3 V4 E9 Q9 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 H: O2 s7 }. w: s6 U& G; ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 Y6 D7 l' T9 Y* k; v' z/ ^/ AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; T) `) M( ]8 f% EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 m; w+ O8 {. Z: N5 _* PSeeing the sky content with its love
, r  |; [! H  I$ t; c; UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 E8 Z# E5 G; I3 J, Y5 z  G- kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 o6 t8 ~& M' YI want so much to see inside your heart
; }& X; e! J* Z3 f) b. X8 ~! u* KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' ~0 o: N6 P; s# a1 F' W" ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( S0 ?$ J) C! X( g$ t9 [" F7 }. qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  g6 [1 f$ `. r7 D0 j* |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  I4 B5 Y7 `+ L5 h$ V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 e2 F& B. m1 }7 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 e8 w% s: u" A: g7 w0 g3 `$ @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* d" {7 w' y( b4 W" p7 A% w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! q$ b- S% T% D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( I  E4 T0 b! l' ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 j7 _0 l2 X( H/ s8 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; M# l/ E- V# D7 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, R/ Q% ]! V/ u. {2 |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- c: l; V, M% @& Q. N: V& c% A2 U1 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 v, j% v9 J$ ]  q+ c- r3 ?: p4 |" G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 I$ o, l: d" r) n9 ^' F% H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' ^' |1 v; [* H2 d4 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: k9 g; t. M( G4 y6 c. n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* L6 |" Z. i2 T% ?7 M  T8 A. A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* p1 V$ t. ], x$ A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: [4 q2 P5 u$ H# w$ w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* n% S  K1 p8 E/ y5 S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 t- G2 I' I3 C6 R2 m0 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" e; j& @& f. D; A0 r& H3 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! i+ J% B% W1 u$ g3 B- a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 ~2 \9 c+ z% Q9 J. ~5 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% r6 V7 K1 h& r3 X& e7 U; L! i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) _4 f, L# A- d( l& q. w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* h) j! Q# w9 g, A( A* ]1 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 e0 }- t: c# D& O& [* o  |1 z+ ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>