【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ H" e2 K0 Y0 j: o. lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; p) F" U' T& M8 z# `7 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 m+ v: l) L- @  l' U" }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; b9 q* }# w. \/ FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 o8 T! P6 \+ c3 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ z! _1 J1 X/ D5 d6 y1 \7 pWith the moon kissing it every night
1 w4 H8 V* `" m2 ~: O3 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: ~7 G/ h6 n6 c6 s9 |. s# lI really want to know just how much you love me
3 v9 D: `( Z7 D+ J7 o" qI love you I love you with all my heart
) \6 q4 W% L7 n4 X4 J- A( `$ b* ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 I0 @; |: s2 w$ uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 A2 _, T6 b  b7 P- D) aI regret not dying
' I3 ]6 `; h. a0 w; q6 U% F2 AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 S+ a) _% _0 g$ p- v. G6 g9 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ h1 s* u& _1 l9 g* ?$ ?# C) ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 M) H  L0 g8 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 L$ G) C: `0 |6 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ s8 o' x- J( p9 ^( G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 b; A! ~: L: B7 z: p" \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 Y9 q9 @5 M. P* y7 b) h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& ~, B, O% p/ V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  f, i8 q6 q+ G6 [$ ^- f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) y$ m7 f- m2 _  \# w& R8 T3 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 Q; R7 G# _' u$ \9 x) c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* m7 z8 d! j# X& H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  _# |% t0 b0 v5 }8 s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 R  G3 T* t( R- D  U' x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, F8 M& V* i" R4 F' r) Q4 w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 j1 @4 C  r8 x0 h+ ~# X2 z; R- g: d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' k6 W4 `) n$ ]: C, |# `. Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& h  Q6 D2 g5 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 H+ J  g' V* I( U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. b9 v$ k# t& a) b* |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 r  G+ y- F9 C4 _4 a. ^0 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% Z* d6 F' G* s2 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# y& M7 C5 h* q; m. T0 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& r: k# d& h# U9 k+ K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ {+ _7 M: A% s2 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- g) G  [  E) ~& O/ j; R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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) a8 q" L. W! t) B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>