【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
# N/ d2 ~- B6 |$ {4 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 W# t$ i- T8 T& UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 p0 J- E- ^$ Z1 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 r- y/ K4 @3 K& R6 g* J9 n# oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- Q' X2 O2 n  {6 dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 b+ t( k- n$ ]! K: p% t, P, ]I really want to know just how much you love me
# J% d0 r5 E- V& Z  q0 C& |& pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( r; E0 {) P  S/ P$ eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% a& W+ z2 f2 R7 E4 m  VI regret not dying
& Q. V$ e" n  a; ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% b8 N, t" K5 i$ ?0 i6 Y! ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 k% ~- s% j5 U: H- o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ p2 B8 O; H5 m! X+ \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  p7 J# s+ v: S3 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 A6 a: `5 @  y: ~6 W# f0 U' Y0 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ M/ b+ N' [) p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* ]. v! _9 J* p% m) X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% ?1 l. _2 ~) X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. T5 c( ~! c4 w7 }2 h/ X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 F2 j' ^! S2 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 g3 p; ?3 Y% C. E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* N0 K6 ]' t7 `1 e* Q, o3 k8 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& q' S7 \  _% G" K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, h& x8 Y9 F; S/ F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% f2 M; A) U! ?7 c* l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) g3 B/ ]; t0 Q/ c! k' g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ d+ J7 s( l# V) r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 c0 \; R$ ^* M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 I( X" m4 h( X0 @6 x% f7 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, R2 V. C. ^4 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 b" W: y( U1 c4 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- O* I3 c; b% w, j* y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( ~5 j# W, j3 E- `4 J7 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 l& D# T' q" W# i: ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  _3 }0 \0 Q& ^; _. c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: E7 g9 d( e% ^% V1 u% @$ b$ e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* m3 N2 E) G* R+ e2 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) K3 K- n& G5 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 u/ H! g4 N  O9 ]4 B& n7 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 `: w) K5 y6 U" W* w0 [! z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% E( P! ~; x1 n* G: X$ P' [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, J& h9 P* m0 t: f. ^1 ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>