【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 C8 R8 O+ U. g5 u+ p  w歌词我附在后面。
- U4 C* F% K2 ~! c3 N" ^) G# CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: G- ^0 T/ l: k* wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 \% G) {" x0 x$ e$ iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# H. O2 P7 ^2 z2 hSeeing the sky content with its love
" u# M5 `; u' F% _& ?* }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" I1 C- J1 D8 O: r, R* {' QYou needn’t fear anything
! i1 S7 y' M$ a7 v6 X! pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 P  L  H; U! p' q) j4 n; aEvery other word you utter is love
" @( S% {+ F. T% oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* [* B7 S3 Y. N# |" BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- F5 h% V' o" F- |  v* Q! CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% l3 B& t* n$ e; U2 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ w8 C6 q) `. _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* Y; Z8 o: L7 {( [+ ]/ ~1 x: R  m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, g1 t  [6 `5 U) \5 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; T% k6 b  S7 Q" `6 i4 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, k6 G, G; p- k: S$ ]3 z7 }4 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 u4 O$ u5 }! G- Q8 z/ b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 ^3 Y. t2 E. J  |- D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# V/ c# {$ W* x; K. e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 S( o' Q5 s. u& [' h* s5 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" k# b* [8 h0 g1 b. |* n/ J% u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ ?( z. n% P+ a$ q9 b+ S  \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ H( b/ z$ X$ H2 g9 n/ E3 C2 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# c8 g+ o6 a+ [, {, B) X" h) K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. w6 Z, n+ a3 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- ?, I( H# W9 d9 E+ J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 x. i  Z8 a/ U% |6 c# O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 `; F1 y2 m' b9 ~. a6 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* k! [* I5 L! v, D$ V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. L9 k4 W6 [- H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( D& q- P- \% b+ }: @  [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 V( E9 O, e4 I, e/ l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ D# o! C/ ~  @" V1 j  [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, G, \, b7 [  N# w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# ~/ K  ]9 F* t+ r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ X! N0 T: X2 X9 a6 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) @+ Q- N. z' R4 B* X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# K& V2 W) w- I' W7 k( L9 c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>