【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* q2 ~8 B& H9 ]4 q歌词我附在后面。
( J6 D$ w; Q: {( S1 ^& w3 D6 m+ B/ LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 h% H8 d( d$ [$ S% J8 W- TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 U% ^# V% x& R9 K0 O. V6 Z; c7 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# A( s7 T2 }; I' b" {3 S; S; V1 [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- O. {, s& r$ p9 {; TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  P6 I% f6 W) Z; \You needn’t fear anything
% y# {. o0 d" R" [  U+ AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. F4 i2 `4 o* T/ z% ?2 F- VI really want to know just how much you love me
; R+ R+ O! q# y5 w3 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ x3 N5 T- h/ e- {* D2 i' mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# n3 N" @: L! p2 K1 [  }, Y* vI’m still filled with fear
1 ^+ N0 ~  C' y0 _9 y) QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ B7 [0 C/ y4 N/ R& K% r* T3 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) L) v, _1 v/ P* u& L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 ^8 S6 G/ l2 ]1 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 `7 F1 d/ [# J0 h; z1 y. e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 @  h$ l; `  l, @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( I/ H: _, k5 K9 |8 \1 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) t7 f) d* ^1 f! c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ p( `% P5 l1 A2 V<P>你无需担心</P>
- x+ z' P& H9 U5 c2 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- ^5 ^  \) b4 l4 c. w9 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" H$ @1 A3 i- u5 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 A$ K- Q8 t! K* R' k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  z2 {9 {( e/ d; ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 B2 X# y9 ]2 o4 _# s. Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 f; @! U) }/ N' D" j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& A1 L/ v* W. E3 x0 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 Z, p+ \: U+ d4 g" I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' b8 x7 C2 Y; \) w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 r- l% ?; q( A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 ~1 q& m  z+ D) L* A3 z* b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  g" w3 |: s% x' d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ E  f4 |7 o7 O8 v7 o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, {. \7 q# G  N. w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 v# J- M  f4 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
* _/ {  B% f) n) j- ~- ~9 ]6 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 I& f. M. N- B! t0 e. S3 I& k: \$ k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 o3 d2 K: o' H  g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: X3 Q. L. {/ t  b( F1 I9 o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  p; V' A9 z1 L) x9 Z& D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 u: }, Q- W# v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* `9 e, Y! i$ n  Z# d2 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, X0 K, Z  E$ ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. j$ _1 |6 \" E/ j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. V) a6 b) L( f! S3 z  H8 m* X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 [4 l0 n5 R. j, Z( |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

& v: ]/ v& E4 _/ i4 J+ z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 `5 V2 A* r5 [" M/ L2 [6 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>