【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 W( x& t  a) v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, S( U6 b+ D9 ~4 t% k2 @* SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 Y4 o# ?, W( c$ m6 hWith the moon kissing it every night
1 n+ t) B- u' q8 W1 S& r- ?Seeing the sky content with its love
( v" |  M( E" S& o$ gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# W$ R9 h" _; p5 N- g4 z' }8 a4 QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  j9 N' M, w- g4 P- @5 c) q+ QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* H3 l1 k$ _; A2 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. Q. e8 m/ C: q0 N( i% Y1 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, D* n' }0 {- w' E/ W! U* Z9 XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" C% ~( G0 q# h& bI’m still filled with fear
8 r# z8 X9 T  h0 t6 J' |: }; `/ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( ?; Y( B! J# X) aI regret not dying
2 v! v' K6 D7 T# E* A: R  xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; [- H+ x% x3 SWith such a tongue as yours,
! \; [9 }- [9 D2 p) R5 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 b8 ]) C, B+ M) pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 e- Z7 q! n4 M' f7 f4 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ _1 F3 g' D4 z/ U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  j) V  ]- j' n  o5 a8 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ X, V/ M- c2 B& t/ S& Y. X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; j8 \: I: A& B( A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! ^" ]/ d# @! z, o% W/ H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* K$ B$ v# U0 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 z( b4 N4 x# Y1 Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& R! V1 r. t( V! L; p0 W# m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; ?, }3 P9 v$ [4 M. T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) Y8 y% }: U/ ^* {& G: o/ ]: k' j6 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( B5 t+ R3 ?, j5 z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 }* }6 w: l0 ]/ u* E) F% w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% P- a3 n6 F& P' s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' [, i" y) ]3 C! Q% [) T# ^9 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" M2 Z. n' z& ~- ^. p7 t; `9 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 c, j# H4 C8 F3 U2 A2 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 I: ^" k* q, g5 C: s6 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 c% P& t$ s# q& R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 w3 O* s0 A4 p# Q" x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 n2 n0 T1 c- g1 z& E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ f" W; Y& J5 n  i1 B, r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* M" O6 r$ |8 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  P% ]0 F7 D. y+ b2 I. n  S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% ]6 Y( C2 y/ e+ }& p* e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 E+ p' @1 }( `* q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% s1 K! j( m- j+ A% W5 f3 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ B' X( c- ?9 \! R+ |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. @8 \% Q- f8 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 T/ ~/ O9 y% e$ S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 K) R% W; H% C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, w. _2 j# x3 s- v1 d) J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>