【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" u9 k2 X" \2 y4 Z' l% P8 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 \$ f* m9 h5 p6 Z0 Z/ G9 P$ [$ cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 S: J9 S$ q. w: ^0 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! j$ b9 J5 p5 H. LWith the moon kissing it every night
% B. k9 k9 n) z7 [" g8 YSeeing the sky content with its love
6 T4 ]* e+ {4 Q" GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ W+ Q* `; Q9 c7 o) D: x: X% w5 D% ^You needn’t fear anything
& F8 V2 H" H  ^3 h3 p- r8 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( Q3 @. C% b3 z( @% T, hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! W# ?/ D0 n2 K. t% Z8 SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 Y: J% b* |2 l9 rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 W( g" \+ ?4 U  EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 S, R. m5 l: dWith such a tongue as yours,
! e* R( n# Z2 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. d5 D! e1 X. c# s2 f$ oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( m: R( ^9 b: H, j2 B' t: i, l5 e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. q8 s8 w2 h& A9 x$ N1 h8 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 r& v0 H: k: b3 Y  l$ v% i7 I2 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ r( M0 w+ h5 ?5 m" ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( w7 A- V9 @" {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ m4 f: Y8 G3 n' z: k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. B7 }1 S4 _/ I7 \' s0 T8 V: d, H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  [4 O( l8 S. X9 h<P>你无需担心</P>
3 z4 X2 \2 O/ o% N% m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: ?' E3 i& ?; U$ _+ K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 y$ e) F2 W* V! b# R3 c6 \  \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# N2 X3 x( x3 Y7 z* c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' s9 u4 ?7 I6 l: F  W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, `3 d+ m5 b& G* Z* P- u0 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: b# O8 a) C! q" W- H# k. `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* L& g% _4 j, \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 ]. T* |& x& r# E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: k! j' u9 i3 P' U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 X  o2 [" B0 b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- o- }' X: P/ ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" \5 v# O! T! s/ {4 M, C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. B7 ?7 n7 Z0 N4 K8 u$ B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 s2 H& e, j2 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' b1 n7 ~" L  d. U$ p/ u8 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, z( ^9 ~6 [" l3 Z2 ~* R+ n, A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 U+ \9 H  T4 ~2 k) y1 j( K8 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ C% T1 v+ }) r" ?1 c  i+ l( o* X0 ?2 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ I0 \0 g9 H" @! }7 w5 u: L; x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' O& Z. V; c/ Q: Q7 n: I5 M$ F$ y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ O- d$ C! i/ A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>