【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
8 ~. \( r* G1 Y2 t! B
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

7 _; P6 H9 ~$ o
歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 Z8 d; e! o( O& U3 x" m2 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ V8 [! b6 D" B# ?" Y$ M; AWith the moon kissing it every night
# }! L' A- d1 }( XSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. ]0 h# Q8 h4 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; d8 ^. ~; }2 [6 E5 y3 JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 `& [; m8 L# H1 w! J& e/ BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 W. n* a4 |% K2 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& z; P, D  R+ p5 Q2 _I regret not dying
5 K5 E8 O8 g6 Q& c9 ?; o2 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ ?, O1 \4 t; xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 X9 ]6 t# |1 u0 S5 f+ y, m; O. [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& [  F2 I% y2 b3 w/ _" e
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 H& y) {7 b; @" |. S- |8 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' {7 A, j. H0 A% J% o9 f1 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! B- N- i3 k7 F# F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ h# t' l2 r% K( l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% h6 g0 S! T+ v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, p8 I, T2 {: M7 ?( R. Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& ]$ p( q5 A# {3 x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 i/ o2 j' Z6 t; P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ x2 ^: l2 {9 V2 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 ?& L7 m1 n( t3 t, Z  C6 }; y4 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* e7 s1 D/ G/ W7 _3 E  T$ S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" m: I- g# u% O- Y7 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; R4 a4 ~. N4 ~% ^+ n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! q/ l  ~9 M) C% v8 q9 N9 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" c! ~6 ?1 b, Z6 g: v" W+ k) H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  I2 K/ f8 g( ^) O- g/ h: A+ W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ z8 d; t$ ]0 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* \2 I- z  s7 h: s" @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 ~8 T1 x9 h/ B9 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# a! h5 ^, w. k/ V# z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ }) \2 b5 u6 X8 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 |9 g) F5 r; e, M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 g6 _6 l5 p' d: Y- ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( s! e* q/ u$ @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ e# O; I0 q% l1 }3 I6 h5 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 q/ M/ {' b$ Q# l# m% X1 @. c& [! r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% C" r  W* l( F6 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% Y% [/ n4 H: R9 H; V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& Z- \; `* {% T1 z$ E% P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
* i. {2 F: p3 H% T2 O
我请你剖开它
  M4 {# Q. \" N1 H2 x' y& V4 O
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>