【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. P. q! x9 v) X+ J% K+ h8 C6 y6 |& V歌词我附在后面。
0 L% {8 f% q; B! O" Z' h& mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" |% k+ N7 ?' Z6 B/ T0 t) jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 T" l7 R2 t% a% W/ l( N7 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" Y+ R' |  d& k# H% R/ L4 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% l+ h+ Y* i# m0 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 j- q& D2 I4 F6 H: A) pYou needn’t fear anything
7 w  T7 {# I% v7 h3 q2 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ r9 q5 s: Q& S* h) r/ I. F' z0 @) LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 v* o! b. S- T* wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! a. p; y1 n+ N7 t- _1 PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 L$ f# c" X  Q8 I6 x" tI regret not dying
+ N' q" J/ j0 D% |& R, x6 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, o7 {* r+ T$ x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) {- d3 ^. E% x3 U2 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! G7 R* E8 I3 j$ f1 l6 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" R2 Q3 F! R' }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" F; ?3 y# ]7 T1 b  o* f) k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' a9 c, B4 ?1 y$ b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: e7 P5 V: n, ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! b) z& g( y7 N& ^2 P% A9 e3 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' z. I  v9 F( s  V! s% X& S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' _# {- I/ d" o7 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' h5 r: n& L4 s, u* U( h# `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Z. j  Q( p; G; ?: H6 I+ X9 s4 w" D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ ^/ ~, T4 v; e+ s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& ~% |# o% W0 C( h. c! X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% F4 p$ `! F: U' b( C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 a: W- w9 n$ j# {6 r' t0 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! h7 k; k- q/ H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) o! P. G$ S$ a( a: d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  }4 k0 _! i2 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" y; w/ v0 Q+ n3 W# Q2 L# V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" ]5 F( _9 c- J' T/ y0 d: p" K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 D2 d& ^3 c& R2 `9 J( z4 l$ J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, x. L. H3 H+ r! S' F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  @9 _) j. ~2 T1 \) O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: W5 K2 _/ e* H3 i) y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 i3 V& c; ]- s, D, i/ L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 S6 r" J- ~5 Q& v# x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( ?+ N/ R) X% }9 m$ Y" U% N我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! H3 l# L' Y( ]8 H$ Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>