【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) d% H( z- [- O$ D/ ]. MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ F0 Y# K# `1 i6 m' G) O( c5 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- E/ l  k3 I0 h) b* z4 g) X) VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& J5 N! F- W7 m1 h6 c* QYou needn’t fear anything
  x8 v: Y% k2 }- z- T6 Q$ T; jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( K, ~- v/ z! W# LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 l5 S2 e% l2 @( s% E% s  cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; L% I" m% c7 b1 b+ x3 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" L/ x- Q: Z' |4 T, |I want so much to see inside your heart
7 h  A( d4 [9 [( N) Y; }2 A  UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: F1 u0 d, n$ ~5 K1 PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ l! _7 Y* L0 b: q$ V$ f9 hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( G6 H0 h5 x' F0 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) L( d. U, B, B8 C. YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( K2 J* r0 ]- `; H* K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 M8 I, L+ H$ K* ?; z9 N. }4 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 I5 s  z8 K0 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* Q5 H% `- q% j7 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 ?$ j. w; r' O' k6 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ?/ t3 L. b8 Q! W1 M0 n  \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* |" t8 ?) U7 F3 `5 u* p6 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 ^! h. Q. \) y8 H$ T0 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" y, }  D# V# T: J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ z2 U+ {# Z! r1 n+ _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ p3 g; K2 x0 \/ v0 |5 Q+ K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& ~, l5 R9 u$ q& ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 e% C3 U, d  p1 D* o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* u  K: V( u/ E0 o9 d3 U/ U6 _) s& k" g* ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( W+ K( {7 q3 t8 l# e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 B9 H2 S- D5 H! Y/ Y6 q/ B% T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( [6 f6 _3 L, J& t* k3 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 u  \9 w9 L. o' ]+ P- F0 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* V. b. K, P, m3 G+ j9 n+ {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  L7 Y# D4 ^& K1 `6 }* x/ L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 Q  ?) d) t. f7 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; e) G0 G3 k9 H+ l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ]+ l- A/ y5 @. u3 D6 A) {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>