【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* A$ v$ X8 D0 L歌词我附在后面。
" z; j- h+ B# jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ v5 O1 |* A" k, n0 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 I8 W5 T; `5 b/ Z7 c, L6 u- `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 n( E# Y  T6 y- k. lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ k: T7 b- `1 R0 b# N. M4 rWith the moon kissing it every night
2 u; Y1 ]0 T  L; Q* I7 pSeeing the sky content with its love
( M  y) ]6 h2 ?7 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# t0 n& E0 m4 w" c$ M) [5 {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ V$ n4 S$ A: w( j0 y: H3 U/ `Every other word you utter is love
6 Y% P6 z3 Q& fI really want to know just how much you love me
; g7 u1 b. d; v: |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* d2 h$ o1 i5 }0 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 Z. z4 I7 \) g7 o8 v' ?7 m  z$ M" uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 S$ c- c: u  L, r  J- h9 ?. g# BI’m still filled with fear
' R/ z$ L! B( F3 z( G! h  O2 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 U5 v: ^9 {! V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 {4 D7 h3 z  M# I: g9 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" o2 I9 D, I2 \. {+ ?" q! |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ a0 q$ W; A8 x$ s7 B+ N2 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 G  i& w) P3 J  Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 l% e% S) m6 b3 w: m6 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( h. N+ k2 s4 y, x3 s+ x5 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! K2 l; i0 W, O" o, \4 X' Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 O7 a- `) @  ]+ t& {$ ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. F+ t( ]/ R9 F  ?5 K- `  h5 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ k: r7 ]2 e' R. k0 X( H! F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ G% \5 }# n6 {! P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  v2 ~/ n8 k5 K3 Y* n0 m& r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" A. m$ J; c: i! `* f9 N0 x+ a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ \7 j  G* X% v' Z" U( q4 C$ Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 j- S2 y8 j0 y8 g% n/ }, a5 e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 Y! N' q2 @% m% @( x8 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& G- R+ N* G2 u. x# s* n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' {8 j2 [, a% x! u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  a7 W- g  Q" k0 T* H9 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 u9 O6 C2 P9 l! N3 g5 H, q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 c' B- j1 O7 Y4 ]. L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  d& T+ f- ^( u$ a3 Q+ N- B) e! x2 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  Y0 ^- J6 C' `% s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 W1 }5 w, T9 d9 |$ Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ d; X% W. d1 B( P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% ?* D$ y+ A4 `/ U# `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 y' y2 f# K- D- L8 d; o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" v5 e: P. t" I8 S2 |8 Y( v# o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" j2 ^/ o/ g/ S# t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 A% m* b, L( C- T( c* {. G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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; T" b" [. `5 r& C9 U: W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>