【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# i* e# m7 M1 q! d歌词我附在后面。
9 u: m% N! g( d- R; DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 ~* D( {& N. w6 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- @  J# J: z! w0 w- z3 }' kThe sky is happy down to its soul
; s' Q1 w  f, m, [+ f3 cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( o% Q7 Z9 s, P1 _' y* b' p# b) aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- v6 g' D% v! S" wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) p; r% x! E6 M9 z- ^9 k( S+ `* SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 |& _; Q: B9 P  x, N4 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# F: ~( c& M, e5 E) j' ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 l9 V  Q# U( ~; j# V5 x; SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 G9 [; l; O5 l* U( O- A+ f; aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( g- U9 y! t, R2 P. m' d# NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ N( n" O; w- D8 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) F6 {' O+ F6 {' w' Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  |- \/ _7 b" x1 S# q. U2 E: S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 ~3 ]  ^- Y2 J( e( U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 s' i4 V: W8 O8 t4 ]1 c) A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 j6 w" s, G+ r- X9 h' w9 e: `) T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 D. i2 d( L% Q9 c' L) d, Y5 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! p+ G1 t" C' l# S8 z+ g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 A8 R. l5 D5 E! o: ]. I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( R: Q( d" t  `: X+ s* _4 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( j9 g7 w& b) _: i, w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 S& A1 R5 M( O0 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! d+ Q. A4 M2 y) M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: Q' L& x) A. ~* ~# i# V, g$ {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 p& U4 f) d3 C. F+ r3 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ X( \' p# K; b' E- Q' U* B, C( _$ l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* V% v2 ?; M# j; O- k6 [7 h$ O5 g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ Q1 ?/ S; d7 m9 v% p2 U- A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 |9 n  K: q3 a( k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 E; E: V% z: `3 m! c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( \6 m; [. S- K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ L) h) j8 S6 Z5 B* l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ c0 }4 D- `0 \& \+ @5 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. v( Q! G' }" x) C% o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( v* J& Y1 l% \* D8 K" m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ i6 d! P" J# ~4 x4 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; O2 J, r, g- v0 e7 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ e, D8 w1 `$ }7 Y$ t( e2 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 n) a8 B& u  A3 ^' @5 V4 Y: `8 O我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>