【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 f5 z* j* B) r6 ^3 f  C% ^6 D歌词我附在后面。
1 z- L  o" f2 `6 w& d. S: G% D9 q8 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# t$ j- |, J! H$ d; `" z. a% eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% t  W5 V; A, XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ F& \8 z- g+ h" D1 O1 h" e  o/ MSeeing the sky content with its love
3 z1 |% ]) F* S% NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! `5 Z  ?6 i# m& k/ t# }You needn’t fear anything
% g7 R$ M* F- V' B& |3 P# EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& J& e+ r+ s9 _+ K, l* ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# a. V7 H/ g+ B: V  H2 A2 B$ TNothing can compare to my love
3 v8 f$ _3 o# kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ f& n. F; y* |3 p+ d6 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 M7 L2 R1 ]! ]1 j- D( DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& X0 c# V; w, l$ cI regret not dying
& A$ z: p+ q  X  G3 ~3 T% T/ bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* `% r' j/ {( F5 A" l! _' XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! e- L# G6 U* l% S. d( E
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' ]6 ?; u/ F# m* g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: D- _( @6 Q! U2 q! V+ T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% a: d, K" g* w: a  \& K1 ^$ |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. [; ~( b! _: O) h& i2 j) w3 g* u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; Y0 c3 x8 L  x5 m/ N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& p  [5 _" w% w+ x0 q- j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( I& c- c; a, v) u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 K% x3 L7 ?* X( E8 v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 K: F  H6 ?1 o, D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 p  R% l$ R2 `6 {# e3 X( k) f1 S9 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" m! B) n: H3 U$ }- W% N9 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  p& f: Z% _% s( K0 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; _1 J( `) G; d4 Y% p$ w) V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 y) M- o* B* H  z, I3 o) Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; ^* i9 m, X) F: G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 ^0 v6 U# K* ]7 f# \6 [1 K& V/ B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 B2 I: S: [% }" r9 C% i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 @; q2 k- \! b7 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 p6 y+ L  \+ O, ?% w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 j; E1 s' i6 Y4 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- h3 |$ U' Z8 \) S' x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' m0 M  _! |0 n8 |- e& p% w" d, z5 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ @# D( \! T5 \  j% E& h- Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
3 x1 [" w/ T- o
我请你剖开它
! S: w6 y% w+ K
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ?8 K( N1 g' M( A& e3 Q4 B) \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>