【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( T: i& o3 {7 V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& A) ~8 p9 O4 D: W8 z8 d8 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 M: u% d& H# H9 `& f" _! mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 {2 B; G3 e/ a+ G4 B; C8 pSeeing the sky content with its love
; B; S' m, p# G. lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  y1 m' k7 y3 N* v7 G: a& ]5 u5 JYou needn’t fear anything
# l5 [5 s  l+ T8 m# LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. T" O7 e& c5 h1 m9 }Nothing can compare to my love
7 l) t, m1 s8 {# f+ ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* O5 F4 B9 T+ gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ k+ X7 T& j! [I’m still filled with fear
2 @* |, T' h% D2 \- D% @! Q- F, j$ nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% w6 j5 L( t5 j& I7 L! m& EI regret not dying
1 d& ~: r( @% C# v& h7 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 D3 U. ?" r9 p; B. p$ I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 j6 S! {* @4 y$ O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  Z- A1 p8 x+ b5 E4 c! y. A8 y1 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 p' J; y: O+ N  ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ n# h4 y6 L) `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: B, v/ q5 M& \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, ~. @4 M  B( X( {. J7 o. O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 p% h* a6 ~, m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( H* W5 @+ h+ y3 V" r) J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 e& N8 ~# ~3 s- v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 m5 A9 }- O0 ^8 k2 \# i4 z( @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( g, [5 U+ L* y% i; }) \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 l0 B0 U# B1 O0 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, W% W7 \4 _7 ?" _" n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; \$ U% D6 D* S% N( W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 r/ y. c- b" L0 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: w+ V8 u# z' ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# @0 w' X- a5 C$ c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 U3 _. {, ?6 E+ x" {  K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 ^$ f  }6 r" D+ c: L6 C  j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; m" X$ _! n1 l- K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& [4 }$ U! q) N  b, u0 O: p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 M0 d0 f% f+ F1 h- p  Y" H- h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ Z$ J  h* J. T/ A/ d& P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 D" _( B9 K$ U" t1 ]( {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) e7 c! u4 {" `6 N; f3 R# R9 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 d5 g9 W& c/ E1 W. u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* b6 [' o8 E8 K4 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; t7 d& Z1 R9 Q$ h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; C3 `2 |8 r  G9 l9 r8 |我请你剖开它
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% C( e* a( L/ q$ V) ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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