【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. [! s& ^( E4 y  ?' c  N5 V, _The moonlight is shining brightly,
) E  K3 a& y3 W8 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; P# I6 O2 G  R  QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: a. [( z: h8 ~; F$ ^. e+ ~& Z: FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 p0 D7 l& f8 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
, ^2 J% P: l3 dWith the moon kissing it every night
7 p8 J! |1 y2 S+ ~6 L! BSeeing the sky content with its love
& F5 A: L  E) a% [! i9 `! h' hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ ^) z: A# |0 v. R. |  @You needn’t fear anything
$ h, m1 F/ j! ~# T  DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! D: D% ^9 j" a) E. z7 qEvery other word you utter is love
5 X+ ?: T" W2 }! l; ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 i, O' `' H4 INothing can compare to my love
  _% X9 t/ W0 ?& |0 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( {" d5 i1 V, ^, u. Q( o4 o% hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ C1 k9 L% t% s3 R$ PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 P, O3 H+ }7 [I regret not dying
! C+ j4 }3 R( b; a, A8 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% p# {  v$ Q9 p6 jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) R. j, H* h% S9 G; Q$ L# jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 Q9 b9 v! y' @( S- H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 V. v7 x) I+ m. a. L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: T8 e2 n- \4 ^$ M; E: f9 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: Q9 Y/ O( b- \4 M5 v6 L! M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 {+ p3 I% m8 w. s; B1 j% t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 E6 |2 M: {3 R/ D$ |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, h  y. f6 T) |+ m- S5 k4 F& l- g+ x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; b  M+ `! [) ]1 m  M% W& v9 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( v, O( o( B1 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 T8 I6 V) G) E3 z2 K$ V0 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, Y: G! H, q' o5 c4 w! L4 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! r3 \; W' _4 \2 i! f  o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 J2 L. P) M! n( P% a" [" m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, Q2 r& ]/ I% H- s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ D& M; ?- d- I! Q5 D$ Z: l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ `* _. I7 C  t7 h$ i3 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, L  a/ X, t" b- U+ l7 c# p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" I) B' b" P. n# \6 N0 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, w$ d% |" B2 \8 U: Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) q, t& [+ ]9 z2 v- b/ c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: j( x, U* E3 Y' R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 ^8 b" n- h. ~. K7 }# }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; \* g! k- F7 y0 B1 ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" g5 x: h' `$ r6 _1 y' I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& E$ f) _' h0 x1 k8 \9 c1 s: ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 n2 A/ j, g# m) e/ j5 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>