【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 u& P8 m9 O$ l5 M! Y/ pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 j: [9 w, m3 g# Q8 Y+ @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* ]* S! e/ u$ L" SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" ]" t  R: M+ R+ M& r! TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 n9 [! k0 V4 {. y; I2 t' G  G4 N7 ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' r" E. ?% [/ u4 Q8 S: PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! j7 W  A/ F( WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" b9 c# Y0 |4 F6 N* r6 l6 H* CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& j3 I# y) U# w! I. nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. q0 A2 K- `, [0 n9 a/ @$ zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% [7 m$ I( P. v1 \% g5 [6 s; Y) l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 t) ~& W3 D7 {) }$ \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 m3 I" c3 W% V' ~6 B' ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! G" r0 z, y: r% @, O0 J9 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: Y$ _$ b% a1 x- z2 ~9 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 Z0 b1 l( m! ^0 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- y2 N" k* |: p! p: r<P>你无需担心</P>
* g' P3 l2 F, ^0 }1 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- }; N# ^- p2 o+ R, b8 B0 d/ d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 ~* \3 E) v1 M7 [( L7 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) q0 Q3 {/ g! {- q2 m: `# w, q. R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* ^* |' _+ D6 B4 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" ^  h% r2 o. c! Q! J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ f# u# @, e9 I& C7 C- V* q0 k( s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. a2 \; S1 H  }/ B3 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 b2 U' `* H7 |; V5 q8 M6 Z  n5 a& M: S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 r  m. {2 M+ n/ a) O6 @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! A; t% e$ S% P3 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  }7 B4 ^' ?4 t# K7 w, l& Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 B6 F3 H% n$ F1 N: v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 a6 \2 P  n, s6 C3 K0 p1 C5 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' m; a9 X* b! d/ m! H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, x" [6 L" D# Z* H3 T<P>I regret not dying</P>
) l$ \4 m5 ~$ S' M1 c* H% m! y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 T* M+ X! n) l7 C& I6 ~0 P" q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 |( |: z8 @6 ^2 V0 F4 n$ b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) o3 i, a9 \+ n/ ]! L" ~; p" z! g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( j/ A2 B5 M* |& R5 D$ r/ W. j) B& \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>