【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 [; Z: D, W+ M) d% u9 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 e( j3 z6 p; w8 s( H4 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 \9 ~# b. s- Y7 ~/ n: R- `The sky is happy down to its soul
- Q8 H+ |/ g2 t$ a- I6 W. H  aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) L; h9 Q4 Q8 U( o% R/ C, e! C) [5 J, A* QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& K8 N+ X- ~" i0 HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( m9 N. _! x/ A8 E. lNothing can compare to my love
- d/ f2 H# T% S* l+ f# cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) m9 s1 q% _+ u! T$ \# L1 vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 J3 T8 K  x/ ?1 ]3 V4 Y  TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 N; K! |7 P1 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 j, a, \9 }! M) b% l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 i# D$ M- u2 j2 K% X. I/ ?, j9 S7 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! `) W) C, d- @5 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ r2 l3 _$ g5 O6 t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% i  w7 Q9 l0 f( j" u' g1 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* a" I# }- }! `4 I2 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; o! y1 h! \8 `9 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# N0 l* t; C, v7 A. K7 |7 E/ J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( G5 U- N1 [1 q1 |" a% k! T8 I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! }( M) w5 X1 }$ X: N; D; E& p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, g6 @% g- F9 ]; P' L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, H1 {* D$ {& q1 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 W: O- |: B: T. ?" a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& @  M! r' c7 e. W7 \/ J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- d  w* M/ i$ k: D0 I7 {: a- R5 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* [! E+ U( \) g3 V7 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( q, {- P5 k/ J* p; [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 n& T, @2 O' b" q$ H9 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% ~, n3 k  i" M4 W: j2 C1 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- Y! ^9 G& R2 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# g" [# M9 P3 V' _  ]8 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% {3 R+ {4 u5 k- x' I* E  s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ R# w( v# H, z2 {/ p- y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ m8 i$ f, L7 E" A" y; c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) O7 @' t' U3 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( Y# r3 [1 t$ E0 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 ]* v/ r% o! u8 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>