【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ `% S! V" H+ @3 F8 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ \- C' d/ Q1 h  t2 [! `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- N; m% U( f: K5 @2 RWith the moon kissing it every night
# V& J0 A# g( i0 h  V% gSeeing the sky content with its love
  m4 M& A2 d* x0 K" x3 C0 e/ tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- f- x% K( H! B# I5 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 g) E& |, A( V6 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ P3 E+ S0 r* a# L& i1 u5 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ I  s( [5 B0 ]I regret not dying
: c; ^* l/ w, T( ^7 i( o$ tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 C5 u) [$ a9 b- w# \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 y) C7 Q# ?* ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& e: ^+ D2 e; a' _2 ~. RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' |4 _4 \7 R  {9 }# _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ {' \) X# V9 w3 R  }5 b: W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 Q9 j  e7 M# j) {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ E  H7 d' U7 e8 b/ n. h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 H5 Y7 `- I( n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- N3 P0 q% I. u2 I+ X" J' R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; d& _$ q4 M6 o" X$ l# I. u; \3 x% w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 B8 d" F' s* V1 m. W/ h<P>你无需担心</P>
9 O; x, ~' }6 H# ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 V% i  _5 B. K3 |1 j. K6 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: i/ t/ Q+ u3 e/ m& l* s$ N7 A4 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; C2 Y( ]* a8 k( \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 p; E3 e6 O* ?# k& U8 @& v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' F1 h0 z+ b) n+ W% K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) ]$ O: H+ e1 o- ]8 V2 H) W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' z/ A& @2 {( I; e4 k& x4 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( Y$ S$ j% I, k% q* }9 W* a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# K+ P* k( u& G" C/ w% p5 u& `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- Y. q# H& n3 Z7 h8 F& F0 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) `1 P' X! }9 H" T. L  @( v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( G/ }8 S) M+ d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. ?& V5 b" ^/ A4 a0 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; a. v. ]) m: u# u& q0 B5 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
* ^9 q1 |. w' z* _7 R1 j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 G! Y4 R- z* x* I% K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 P  Q  m2 `- X" K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; t- @# a6 `2 |$ S0 |1 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- o0 x* H( D9 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 Q0 j' y% h9 g# O  b5 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 d8 c0 G/ h& r0 ~8 B: o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 W' J% b7 N8 y' E2 k# p6 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 C1 g. X/ `' Q, P+ M, x" H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>