【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% p; G- h. a: ~$ z" |! J* L- ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 W0 M2 l  D' i5 C1 zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# `9 I- t1 U/ G* e2 I; f* pI really want to know just how much you love me
& H. ?8 f$ K! _2 F, I" j0 Z5 dI love you I love you with all my heart
! N. X% i& g/ \6 I2 I$ RNothing can compare to my love
7 j: @7 g# _" L/ M- S# i& K5 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 o" k3 F$ ^9 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. s8 h3 t7 \: M' v# V$ r) }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 ~( |# a) z  u: v2 {) Z" aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. G" R2 l: t1 o' N/ j' UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( ]3 ?. j# R% a7 u. o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* T* h  X) }- I2 `. X6 y/ Y& B4 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 n7 [' e& j  k& K) ~" f, r: u( c6 T4 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 y9 g' |% U# }, a8 R1 T' ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 q9 Z' ], T+ m! }* n6 A$ W& _3 K6 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 q( y5 Z; h9 P0 Q. y  a( B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 G% u% ?, F6 W1 }& d' i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 Z0 D7 r6 c/ L* z9 a: C- r" X- [  a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" Z' P8 A: [! ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( D4 D9 g6 ]/ D8 d( n3 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# W' o! o2 K  f* O8 }0 }2 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  T" P7 b- x6 O4 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 f7 i& E* J3 E+ w9 {) @6 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 e9 I3 N; d+ Z! E  N& Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: R2 R) A0 R/ Z5 _; i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% o* X, ?( r8 D9 ?6 _, u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 s8 }" ?9 Q( i- B9 i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 j: B% {7 p& ?. y5 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 n- R$ X3 D/ u) @; b) [9 p$ B1 g8 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; Y  b( z$ J1 j& T$ J0 i# Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& ~! s9 v* }$ A9 c$ L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) |0 c  N( y- `' k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 a+ `4 u& F" X, ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 z3 H& o% N/ \( B' f6 Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 j1 i1 q9 }1 _( F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  G0 j. K! v( p- k; D/ J0 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& L- f, a6 q3 c# D/ G% C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 q3 w5 q2 R7 t3 E+ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 E% Y$ ~' V4 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 Q% W" ^/ a0 `. ]% K- O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ F6 n9 _1 x4 k7 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' o2 j7 k- ]2 u+ x$ X8 v7 w/ J# }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 D( ?# u9 v0 _9 X6 K我请你剖开它

! }' C* ^% C, p+ ]8 `* j& s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>