【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; ^' M' o3 u- l+ v' w6 v0 \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ Q4 C# {2 F. gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 @5 U% W6 c: s8 e2 g- J1 y5 @Every other word you utter is love
* Q9 N* i, K1 P3 _4 O1 yI really want to know just how much you love me
8 |3 e! w. [8 n, BI love you I love you with all my heart
" C" `% F$ B& j0 F6 A. ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 V. `* J( W9 O% `8 eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 Q# y. j/ h' o' T. m. `& b  ?2 LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 a: F' Z8 m, u& D1 fI’m still filled with fear
$ ?0 C+ v! s! d& |0 I4 k; nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 D" n: b( t8 W4 V9 HI regret not dying
/ r. `7 g+ y/ i, m% Z, e; MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! c9 P6 X& S+ [) p( |  tWith such a tongue as yours,
: i, d& q3 H" Q! \6 V$ }5 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 @8 `2 v3 c8 S. d7 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 I$ N0 {$ P, s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 m" {$ k- [5 r7 P5 i) g, L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 a" `: K3 D( o- v+ o3 P$ J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 Q, C/ s$ A) r$ K: L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 J& t! |: X% \, m. O, {% a. a3 o- g' b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) F# e( m& |; ?$ H6 s' P; A' ^* A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& E, i; G3 S" g/ k+ S5 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! J4 t8 P1 k6 W5 X' t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- |6 g0 u5 a, f: p0 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 }$ C/ J" W0 f1 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 s$ }0 @9 W* ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 j4 ?& N, j" u! z/ `# G* t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& h, W& J1 F' t' o8 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( w4 {% T# J0 D. Q# O/ l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- A% y3 Z5 j0 `9 i8 I) ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& e2 v) b+ Z' H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 e2 |" K$ i  j  g) H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  K! v+ W& ]( y. h* d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, p0 D7 M, c( E5 S7 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" X9 Q" i* W% o) |$ ^) \; t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* \+ N' C  c  y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, I. B0 J" B4 ?5 M- v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 i( T9 S6 S2 V; F/ A% Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% p) @3 v* O' Q" a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. y' R: G+ A/ U0 \* j; c) l4 q, D2 r1 `* A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ J2 {8 d+ Y, Y- f5 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 u$ ?3 f- H. l5 j- d7 b- j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% l9 E" ]! U5 ^$ d& G9 P我请你剖开它

2 y7 u0 N7 w3 T' n- L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>