【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# z* R0 A6 ^- ~4 g3 Q$ B0 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- K) m9 T( d5 f/ f, BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! D; T* _& [8 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ g. ], Q* g; n' U) v7 t' M& z% yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 G# q5 ~! j7 ~5 P8 |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! N/ P. F+ ^: `  iI love you I love you with all my heart
% ^! H8 f+ j/ d. d4 WNothing can compare to my love
) M0 L5 ~0 F: }+ s- YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& s) i# l' {- b9 N" s' rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* _* `6 c" q  C  Q+ p( UI’m still filled with fear
6 y( W# y% o" ~; R; ?. x' \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 V$ t" _' ]6 M. a! w: c' p8 ZI regret not dying
& S3 \+ `  m1 m4 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& {8 g4 S* _* [' t) ~3 cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% U3 U% J( G, |9 j3 H6 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" K, c& i" K6 l" T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" g, e& ^1 Z# F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 ]4 L1 T; s' g6 N3 m4 F0 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% G: [% N5 q" |3 }. u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# Q# z  T" i1 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% d" z; r" [8 f0 E" t, r' A# D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ O  L& {# d, F" P0 `2 {2 K. v* j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: L7 {! p3 U& ~/ M" g, u! ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  H- ~0 y( _( A9 |" r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- b" X: s$ S! c3 _) F- ?0 n: q+ G! ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! L1 F, G; ^5 c" s) f; V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; s  a6 z: ]% P5 x! y+ o( @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 h( D+ i2 C$ m$ {3 C# f% T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) n& `/ }# M1 [2 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( d8 R2 J9 M- M  y. [+ H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' H9 X! S: @' y- w# u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* ^% v+ f) Z$ T! g' ^* [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, i6 M! L  L$ H' V  d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( j$ h! f/ s, ?7 z  s" n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. u+ b' T7 @/ y( g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 Y" x3 e* \3 R: Y0 S% i$ U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>