【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ G- x/ E4 B% R& I' Z" U! E歌词我附在后面。
3 l) u% _, t  X& K) x: g" IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 y: y8 z" f3 e  q- N1 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 `* X- ^! c. d' j; ^- eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. b/ m4 W; H0 g( |" `4 }The sky is happy down to its soul
% M! V' p* B7 H  O) [3 H% cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 {# L# p# `7 c2 Z3 C4 iI really want to know just how much you love me
% J$ [* L4 {  ~$ {) T* X# ^# cI love you I love you with all my heart
' O/ @$ ^5 H* V% \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ s' m$ Z' Y. O' H4 U  A9 F( DI want so much to see inside your heart
5 E6 i; _) g5 E' gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 {8 Y6 M6 C( {5 @7 l7 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( |) s" L. R) q8 {0 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- M; K) a# a  V' I/ _% F% |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( i7 A0 h. P) Z9 }, M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 z7 r7 N! F8 ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. t+ x. @7 i% C3 d8 J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' w; X, L. y; y; A( |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( E" U- Q5 ~$ c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ K6 ]; P2 S6 w1 @! v& b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 H5 z; n! `+ [3 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( m+ w) S- I4 E: @9 g2 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& r. J5 g* x) [" P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ c: J- N' \( D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 S) D) s$ u7 e  C! W, |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 v* ]: L. ?& s) z" V. G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 A7 U+ ~: G8 D; v( V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 K: i. F- f' i* f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% k3 d1 W( a2 f3 W& }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  [  Y6 J% a1 T5 O# G" k5 [- e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 E: q' Y. T$ W1 L" y+ ~8 E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 p( f/ D- }5 y! c: c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) l* L& k4 t2 n: W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% q" {$ {! s* P) }) j; X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 S3 ]/ I  ?$ S% N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, J# N, r' M$ T5 r* M% z8 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- a, v1 G) d' {: j2 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 _/ I& v* z, j) ]# z: W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& a0 X+ E: o2 b7 s. h/ Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( B$ e* b! {* I2 C% c9 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' p3 V1 _) k4 N" V5 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 m" j8 N- ?: i% f8 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% Q# U5 x3 i3 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>