【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 V, n4 |2 r3 C# q( Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" ~  R8 w6 m5 d1 K: @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 x7 H8 [2 Y4 }, d( r! j8 [: z! RThe sky is happy down to its soul
: X% w* l# d  C% l# UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 m0 d& V' {# J% j- ~9 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' Q7 L3 b, r- H7 e' VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 l3 C. W+ q5 Z2 X0 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 i' L- {/ R" h- @. p4 T& _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; e" M  `+ V" `. kI want so much to see inside your heart
/ W8 }" ?$ p( f* O8 q& x/ PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- q& i/ k. g+ [% _/ _  {+ KI’m still filled with fear
7 m. U1 \' o  i4 i1 b# J- WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( B: B$ z  V4 }& e4 @) ?/ u$ t% ]5 EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% y0 d" u$ ]0 e6 n$ |! l0 f$ n! TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 M3 N: c& a- L" t8 Y3 {3 @! vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; I$ X! R# l  x  h6 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ S8 J, n3 D6 I0 }% A, e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! Y( m, T# [7 `8 q" S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# B/ V/ i; ^" v5 O) z5 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ X: z1 w6 u( w/ z# d9 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ Q7 l$ `2 Y  d! w' W( c) H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ }. r; p/ X4 Y- J# b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 S: }% c- U: `$ i- i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 G7 o  N; g9 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 E6 l3 ]7 Z, d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 e1 n0 O: d8 u+ [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- d. y! L4 F, X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. P1 _& Z6 q0 t( I3 q0 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 R( r8 E" i, |# ~/ ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ u) x4 f7 B2 W( Z2 W& |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" m1 O& m# b7 L6 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 X* r5 }9 o- \- x" }% M* ]0 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; v( l0 L0 Y3 V  O' M4 g; m) l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>