【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 P5 N7 [! q% ^$ M" I4 x; P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ k- i. g# t( z: }) f0 D+ g6 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& U% W( W9 e* jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) b( }. c7 n% Y! z% bThe sky is happy down to its soul
% `9 Z! E! q) f, M& o/ y+ t/ [1 |7 uWith the moon kissing it every night
& D, S: J% G8 g/ l- QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 v0 d6 k$ u; a6 L9 ]# tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 i) N, Q! e1 V9 X$ e" GEvery other word you utter is love
  t6 k9 i. A: \; e* PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& z7 n  k; I$ }$ eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. Y* G# f6 g4 o( r2 T& w1 E/ IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- h) n# h6 x2 ?8 b% qI’m still filled with fear
& A  \6 n: c2 ~0 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' [" N" ~. {. p5 Q% f/ lI regret not dying
* S# S+ m$ C- E% |* G  x- o4 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 A8 C: O" p, }7 QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 ~; H2 S& k$ f3 p- jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ U- F* t* x! L( z! f! I. lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( D; W: W' L/ ^( I( h% T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 G" a; |3 f& K2 Z; b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 X3 ^2 `/ H8 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; D1 l" B& B! y+ M  t8 P' G/ O2 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ F- C6 M% }) N4 B" S/ e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  j+ @9 w$ {5 e; c+ T+ d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  Z8 r' ?, X1 R* p. V: a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 X9 }5 e- e+ e' @9 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) C1 |& x. Z" O2 j6 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 Q: l9 y+ @! C( D1 Z7 T- K<P>你无需担心</P>
6 [) W0 d. V1 a$ W+ R& Z' b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  y; l  k& m/ Z+ P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; \# R7 f! ^/ C7 ?  j5 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 M; w0 {- F, k- m# H; s9 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 J) ~/ C/ \3 w& z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 R/ W4 {- E6 V) C8 z( u; S4 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 N, A: L" |' S% i7 Q) g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ d* X* m. v8 o/ t! B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 B- u3 K) F; g" e- ?) h# j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; q9 U' F! k& C# w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 f+ d1 `. m  w) _9 R; P3 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 ^: \/ p" l, n3 e: u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  h: r1 z) q5 e  a+ p! [* e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Z( r' H) \5 k% T1 c5 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& Q; N5 c) L4 F4 ^8 G. i# }9 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) ?' d$ v' W" W+ m$ Y8 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 F# n3 Y! Q% C& e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ ^* c# q- A" e" w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ V0 K+ k! O, m* b1 T' r# s+ ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ O3 U7 }( s' F6 z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# e1 J$ |$ e: o  O3 t6 r" r9 P0 y0 L+ O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, n) H2 C6 b6 A! Z2 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>