【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  @- j+ z8 ]) r, _8 O( L; ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 c0 v* @2 j$ m- |6 x7 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 b1 c! \, R/ }6 M1 ?4 k4 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 o! _8 p8 z# b8 R& q* `; sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% u* m% g# i1 _9 V* x& uSeeing the sky content with its love
4 y& z1 p. I! h9 h! PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 \8 P/ M$ C7 _$ MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 _- j8 F$ v! N9 o7 kEvery other word you utter is love
5 H/ s8 [. B; l; M" U" eI really want to know just how much you love me
3 o! D( ?. Y; Y5 FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, ?" o9 t% P7 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 Q0 M: ]" K6 s' E2 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 x' ?4 G1 Q! k6 r+ W. {; nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 y9 b. y& k( N! {! MI’m still filled with fear
- s) V+ P/ n9 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& x' E. ^# Z. L. a* E" J$ dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ m3 T: n! x( ?$ i- R2 ]8 N( UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 K& n; N. T4 }3 B( v; I- XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 G* }3 j% B( }5 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 `: ]5 q- `8 n" {) H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- O% y3 p6 G7 h: ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 c7 p. R5 S3 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 e+ Q# F& V9 O: ?5 g! H0 e! p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) k2 v2 G* `( x& [5 t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ J7 u7 L& K' U- D# J9 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 G, f7 ^" t/ O% m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 n' X4 ~4 e. ~( t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# p% j8 \4 r6 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. P2 ~2 b  o$ c3 T# H; e# \) l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; |' ~% E; F2 e# d4 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  e7 q2 |5 y7 H, I2 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( f' l/ I' I1 A* l! e! h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: a( ?3 B7 E6 ^4 ~. j; ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 [1 t6 u* {: v2 J/ l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* b: b: Q2 {% k5 j( g3 p* t6 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- ^% v3 n. ~9 y- o5 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# p. \7 s; g: \; \' j* j, s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( V; \+ n* H6 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. O, _" }, I5 e) W' a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 W) j+ q$ o4 |% k- ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) ]; n2 F- }; U6 V0 p0 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; }- U! X( u3 M, w. _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  e( u" @5 U5 }" B1 ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ `0 \7 |; D3 k2 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 A6 Q, \- a" }4 r4 i5 [; T. t, M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 @: `7 h# q5 o' p2 Y5 k我请你剖开它
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) w1 W) L$ |1 _9 |. M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>