【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& q0 N1 P0 p+ l8 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: n% U6 D) f3 J( H3 A( T# V, M3 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, o! B9 D0 Q; cWith the moon kissing it every night
' v4 i7 z* K) D" `% |- ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 D8 p4 Z4 R& k5 |) nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 f* @& E9 Q9 v7 FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* N4 L& f1 Y* t2 a+ s5 P% t6 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* F* `7 I' ^' jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 ~: d8 |6 N5 XI regret not dying
- y6 H, `/ T. j# z! x- Y9 f, zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; A+ q; o) Z. N- w. gWith such a tongue as yours,
  o7 v6 I( C4 Z0 q- \0 A. @' o; eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 H; j; K/ H/ L# ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ ?) V0 k9 A* R3 [+ M" eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 U% H( I# s  E5 W! E  D# A
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 ~; R( R8 [; M% ~0 P6 }2 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; F% z4 C* W5 k$ d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. q$ y$ T6 I1 L( Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 s5 l9 X; L* i0 ]/ k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: z& q" I0 p. d( j<P>你无需担心</P>
7 K& I0 S8 \+ f& [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ L- Y2 x# r, h/ J" N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: Q7 Z" {3 u( e% o& S" L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% z0 G. N/ I2 ]8 Q, p& g: K% ~7 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 o- V, o% _1 @6 _* c1 I* A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; J; g5 p$ z7 w- E* ]9 h4 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 i  S/ T$ K+ f8 ~4 B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 t  d' Z8 U) R3 y/ n7 n7 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 ^( b- F  m% W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ p# J" h) N: N! ~4 \5 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% s$ k7 c2 e' y) L2 \3 x0 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 l) h1 ]. s+ M* z: n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ Q( }  q3 T3 y2 t% k* @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" c# |$ m( x/ Q: r5 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 S( x/ o! d/ B, b& [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ ?1 C* C) K9 B% c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* i$ m9 l2 L; N4 Q: b6 k0 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 v2 U" |; z8 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ u8 [2 q( P$ m9 G, ?) p; M2 C8 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ I6 _+ Q( ]+ B) M$ A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 P- k  x! V2 f+ Z+ J8 }; V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( P* v5 |7 m5 x  M! Q1 J4 M1 }4 B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ t% O; C. ?* f我请你剖开它
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. x) ~6 t' O8 w7 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( a! m' r1 a5 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>