【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& J- Z8 s6 Y+ XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( L! |3 f9 {2 H3 Z% SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# z7 J) l9 p7 I) @1 B6 D( E! NThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ e2 d7 C" a; T6 F% K2 eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. N& l9 X6 F7 NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- X2 a7 u* T! C2 pYou needn’t fear anything
1 [( C% H* v. f" pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 p: `4 u0 T% \+ h% v/ |+ L' V( VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 d/ t. k* j' C) G% ~I love you I love you with all my heart
2 \4 U9 E- z9 j. _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& s- {5 p1 g0 Z+ P9 xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 F' I% ?! ^9 [# d; {$ mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' R$ y2 y; y4 n9 J1 p: L7 lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- ^" g5 ^+ z3 J/ V- j1 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ M6 r# y; m6 T! EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 J. e! N$ c) t& \1 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! I8 |1 x5 x% B; I- h) S6 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- S! w0 u7 `% T: l2 P3 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 x' e( K! C. N& @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, ^  R0 M/ q0 z; o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 x2 H" {. [7 W  w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 x7 p* V+ r8 h; T( _3 N& B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 `9 v) Y( t2 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 o2 u+ z. K6 G" ~( R1 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 z2 A& x9 Q7 L# c; {( J( A: z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! a( f- F  c; M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, ^* \* B/ y) \& m  ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' j+ D  ~" N7 [5 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 d; }1 @5 z" q$ c- a7 \( l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% \/ n8 v4 f! _: g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ s2 X3 P7 J+ q1 p* B3 _& u/ n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 s; P+ {+ ]* h2 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) i& i0 h, p6 L6 C+ h  ?6 K- @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  T' B$ g0 B4 t; ~7 V1 n- ]7 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* g; d; g( [) v$ C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# n6 E9 ?- J; A" w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 Z0 k( B; O& e. h( }" h3 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 L* B1 _4 E1 v4 O7 ]7 e& `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 n* w& ~) s1 ~3 x( m) R0 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- U2 H2 `' ~1 r+ Y' @& U; Q; `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 b7 P+ v' ]% v- F, U" ?4 {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* }- p; H, n0 L' @. ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 y) Y4 \( R5 c  k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% S, z3 A3 q5 U/ e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- i% S: W3 m9 w" M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ i% d# [  n4 e! I7 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 z3 J: ^" y3 h  [/ v* x: F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>