【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" P% @/ U7 ?& lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
' y0 q1 k$ R9 N/ tI already loved you with all my heart
; |5 q, V& ^+ \5 b& J) XWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 b4 N& S, D3 _0 i9 MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 e. b% n' J7 y3 K  l& cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 B$ p) h: V3 ^+ o: cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 n: ?- u1 ^# ~4 V3 U. W6 {& GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- I" y& p0 J) ^, Z2 `3 E. q+ pCan I entrust it to you?
$ g/ n" \/ C2 ~) u! rEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 G" c' T0 f- c6 H( I4 U8 [' tWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ D. J! Q5 q$ {2 fI want to confess that I love you,
0 {- u1 C. c4 R7 v: m, j8 s# aBut I never did
, u% T2 k* M- I+ h" c1 uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ K/ O5 l. N5 _3 ]+ a6 b! O+ O% LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" i4 d- A. h& j! R* L2 t0 bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. a' T* _4 Q* p' N  O+ H) c9 OCan I entrust it to you?
) f+ y& d6 ]5 e2 B& G0 iEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- T+ m  f2 g  q7 Y8 l- Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: h0 O9 N8 |" d( X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* R# e6 c& H" q, o' E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" }7 A, s2 A  N$ v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" c/ X: w' [0 n# X8 Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ q7 N) i7 N8 ^* p$ j4 w/ T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& i4 O9 r2 P0 [! M- M* ^: B6 R' L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 ?+ M2 n: h# q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) w/ W0 P9 H& y8 v( b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ g$ V$ ?: {2 ^& i/ p' v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ y$ ^5 y6 n3 }7 U) h( A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) C# o# _# O2 v9 |3 g) ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 V6 c; E: z1 F/ t2 h5 H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 n3 n) h( s" p: a& |5 t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  c( s" K/ k" ]# q0 R- }+ L  `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 x$ W9 ^3 m- D) R* r# _1 h9 c<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 H3 P- @9 k* H' m' r9 {: k( {1 H6 @5 X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ A6 B8 K1 _( {# t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ F$ y6 X0 S" \% A: a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' y4 k) N0 F: D+ s4 r; F4 e8 i# g: _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 y. A# N  e- n; I; b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 _5 P6 E' h& R2 Z/ B. l- t! D" H4 J+ G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# t  ^! T( L: H) F8 H4 V3 \% p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! V. C* O2 t% M$ G<P>But I never did </P>
3 A5 I; S1 M- c! x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( }: q- F( A: V  x( Q+ L) q) I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  U3 w3 X9 @- {4 x# n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: p8 i1 M' N. L  \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ n/ m" q5 Q  l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 h. ~$ j# s9 V* R6 P/ F9 \. b# y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 u  X5 K7 y! D8 i1 Z/ s5 a4 p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ U8 g8 `; J* c& f; A1 F5 g( ~<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& J/ s8 G! t3 O- w8 W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>