【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
% s9 {7 M2 s6 ]- h7 ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 k- \2 _/ |- V  CI already loved you with all my heart
$ y9 d7 w) q+ u5 k! wWe meet and talk everyday,
5 X& M! Y) |, R  iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% H) u/ _, @/ RI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ D! ?% D3 M$ H: `8 y- q4 c2 WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 v; U7 U7 Y- }Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- G2 a2 H6 D" D* q/ V9 |9 sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 Z* \' j' A0 l. kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! x0 R* ?* X* bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ U  _0 R6 \) j; A/ ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 ?# F1 O5 l& v; h$ `Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& p! f5 q7 ^0 {9 a# M7 vEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* c/ I' e/ _( x+ |8 g3 T6 `<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 }+ k" f, c( P. M" T; {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! p& P9 K: G% t, M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" j8 t4 X$ X: j, J/ e# v- y$ Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) P/ c, N" b. t2 N# ~2 J+ q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 {# o* v& S& l- D- o4 y* \0 m: i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! q6 [& o& H# _; x$ g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 @: g5 s9 J6 F. y+ n  L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 Q/ p7 i; B$ b. p' o/ f! w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 C  q) G) g# z. i: x3 @( I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' o/ {" D. v# `, Z- A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* K. P9 t" Y% Q- g/ L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 I, a6 s4 \/ Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 R- N4 l- O& M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
: u* g  P' I5 Y0 c0 \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% ^$ q$ c) z0 o3 F0 P$ r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 B% N0 w4 _& S" O3 A' u: w% S6 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, S6 v, D6 D. Q( \: U; {/ A% M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 Y; M0 ]7 f& p/ o% I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) n" T0 n; N/ M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* M8 D4 U( b8 ^6 a8 ?- ?% u1 Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  _. k1 l& @. ^* Y+ }/ a0 S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ H1 H% A5 {$ S, T5 [, Z4 b( p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, C; `4 k; I9 n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. P5 Q1 C* E- Z. h" y# r  K. K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" J, ]$ c: Q6 v9 T6 P" U3 C<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( c9 J) g8 i* c3 z# \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ M! w0 B* V+ q& B- V8 c8 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& H$ H( A+ P# R0 A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ C) Q9 k7 f% m/ n2 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( t5 @/ o& G  q5 ?+ u* @, C0 F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 u- k1 e) d% a3 H0 ]* m( U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  n4 F* w2 w  G, U$ V- t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>