【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 `) Q- r0 C# L' \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( j  K' `8 D+ K% P) [6 UWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 Y2 v9 J0 W# Y4 CI would probably know how you feel
6 K& _) ^. {# {! l7 DLove… just the word love
! P3 S; T% U* |3 m1 I# U( t9 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 s4 \2 f4 C, H/ NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( B$ N. Y7 Z  b$ O1 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. f4 ?( J" H9 b5 q5 J- V& O% L/ i! fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% e% l% a% A+ o. ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* I7 E. C4 M% W2 Y* rCan I entrust it to you?
& h8 s! W( w6 d% A; o$ P; z4 sEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
/ Y- f, z$ f! U" K# P. s4 tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# M5 a4 m) G7 X  N. ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; c8 C  Z( u! D" f- x% SCan I entrust it to you?
' V9 ?) P( b2 r; w7 O4 C& i% ]Entrust my love within your heart

  c/ v: V: J, {# U2 E; S[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ ~5 T* B8 F, `  n6 M- q3 u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& R. m, c% ~8 M$ l7 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 p, U0 U1 Q0 L3 S- X. {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" G9 ^2 y# a/ j  P3 }( H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 p; }) Y7 B& |4 X' G9 M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. w, F0 H% n) `5 K0 \5 Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ k& z% x: z, g. m/ c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; ?7 l* ~5 W" k$ u" A$ p& i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) U* t% [5 m* [0 F& N9 B' ?% ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ i* z( R" r0 b3 j9 M: z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  K) e& L' i* y& S& h9 ^<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  e5 o9 S" i& ~- G: H: [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 ~3 U- k: {: c. ?6 n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 O: d+ S) w( B5 V6 n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  {- B1 Z  |& J$ Y# c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) m. _8 p( c4 {. }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& j4 ^6 c  G% x* A8 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& o% U+ }' ^' O, X, W3 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
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<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
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% A* H5 j$ g$ k; i- H<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 @1 Q) `( A& C: j8 I; R; \0 L. w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 ~3 D$ U; }( V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- [. S( D" C8 L9 A' w# `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  q8 o! B+ U; B* W8 t1 e! P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. \1 O; x: O3 w& c, V( S2 N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ u/ U3 j9 |& b" F+ p3 T; c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ S' w4 f" p; _8 a" P( V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  I; @# b" R, t( I3 d' {( n# P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 x) y  r2 s1 P4 v, m7 v2 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. ^0 ~4 {# B' ?/ Z5 W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

1 g) a& Z9 E2 ]# l' R4 M% b, s4 [这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 ^/ _# ?: P1 A' x, i. b0 ^2 W& u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>