【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 i' f5 H* Z" ^. a  A) `4 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" `7 m% Y8 x) T) R8 k5 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; ]; Q9 I6 D- B4 G0 A% tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 r/ w$ h" A" T# i$ M, eYou needn’t fear anything
7 F' |7 B/ L  J" K4 Y/ GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 x; u0 d1 {7 pI really want to know just how much you love me
* g" T7 M1 m3 o% x( o, h2 v# v/ vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 @3 Z) x7 w# O& @7 ~' `" c2 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, E' M% W7 @  H' t% t. P: AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 h. S4 g% }) W' R7 eI’m still filled with fear
, |/ ]- B. Y% t! v5 t& {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- \2 E9 f: I& j5 J& ~  DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ \& K7 e* ]# k. t8 b  W5 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 i/ x2 r: f7 ?6 Z- i: g! S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- p0 J2 c5 p6 y7 p1 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 ~; I; J0 E# C8 e3 h6 h; W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. X( X" S' u. Z9 t5 B- E$ r) o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ M+ G7 ?2 X2 P- L3 j$ C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* I% P2 T4 o' @3 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ s* U/ H9 @7 }) @) ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 S! `& x5 v- w. N) h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 x$ D, ~4 q$ U. V0 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ v- Q4 v% B# e5 c- Q3 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ c3 V. ], f. e  R/ _; K" b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ]- b! J7 ^7 ~) A* `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ^/ a1 ~! `! b* n' ?% p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' q  P" o  W6 y8 I2 M% Y& w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, d. l& g! C7 x+ S: ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( X& F( N4 h' G/ ^- }  n+ G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% d* j5 l* m% f3 c, k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 S7 O3 R$ m9 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 o; Y( v% u; l3 Z  ]& ~/ H<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 Y3 w' {: W) [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 S. C9 g; y2 D8 y/ Z6 @) i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 Y7 a  [  F. |/ J. g8 V6 w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" l1 L' f8 h8 h, m$ K. v4 L6 t' b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, L* j) j" l# |, P) o0 ]. ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# p) K( d6 \' j5 [& s) |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  F% t2 q" R# l! k, f: L我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>