【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 [/ O- ~5 `; {, ^: x  s歌词我附在后面。
; K; x& V# J$ DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 T' j9 s, I. p# G4 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% s! v- ~7 z* X% H" YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 y. Z, p, V, kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 {  Q$ @8 o4 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" P' K9 i" H1 x* V8 pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) D7 L$ [' c8 ]7 ~* ^; CEvery other word you utter is love
/ b1 r$ @, z$ j8 ?" c0 _7 II really want to know just how much you love me
5 X$ C( L: n* ?5 \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- }  v4 `! |. W6 f) N9 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. `/ B7 X. `4 n% V7 s2 z% X; LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 s' k6 z2 R7 X. Z! A- d/ ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 \1 O1 n, x8 `+ D0 g; J; eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 X. @4 }7 u, o% ]8 c2 L0 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, c6 [! v& k% g2 l7 Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ t  D7 W2 M4 F; E* W6 J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, ?) n, P- `+ ]6 ^- ~3 @; o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. E7 C; S% G1 i, o5 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ N) D2 c  U# B6 z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ _, p6 W+ I3 D/ [! T* [2 q+ x; z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! |3 d$ ]  E1 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# w$ w2 p( @$ B" L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 r2 S. f- V! V( \  e% J( S5 t5 S/ V1 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 q8 W% f& \& L, h/ y/ {  O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: t4 C2 b2 E" V; p9 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ \5 U) }7 i. O! Y0 u3 b; B: I3 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! L( x8 u" G+ A8 W" u1 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; h/ p, U- a, j: z. L' f4 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 n. ^( g: Q  y& s+ |9 G- n8 M6 s8 L7 |) Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, G4 V8 K7 J- w$ n. L* M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& Y# E2 `2 a/ M- y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ j: o8 J& ^! ^; E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' X. u, F2 z, I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. t4 y+ `8 h$ W. D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; Q- {7 F3 o6 s. M7 X0 S# H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: E* Z8 @0 `. E, Y9 K$ R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  F, N' P/ _6 x! J+ U% T1 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 X: L( V# ?8 {' J+ v2 J0 q" f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 C* t. g! U. T/ u/ L' m- W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. l  U  L5 ]4 s- _' _) }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 o9 G5 R. u" e" |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! W# s0 F1 E( z1 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 m; c/ s* h) b我请你剖开它
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. S& ~% n/ M) b6 e% g( t% S: q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>