【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# _: D0 F. ^+ V. m, B. B8 K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! c3 Y: z  g3 x3 P7 n; U5 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. G3 [9 D& s' ^" s4 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ A- U8 U) J# v& L- X2 }. Q( ]With the moon kissing it every night
% `8 l% ]) f3 w; x9 e$ uSeeing the sky content with its love
- k8 V& Z. T+ d: @& a: E3 \: QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' g! u: l. d  H5 mYou needn’t fear anything
# F! h! ?+ ~  k) ^2 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* l9 X" L: T5 ^! h+ ?I love you I love you with all my heart
, P. Y  P2 e" H8 L9 `& O( J# I/ X7 pNothing can compare to my love
: v  o* B/ b/ C9 d- S. H+ xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, l9 P' l6 g7 X% {  DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 q5 K) i. w# M% m  b% ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 d7 n! ?! y4 x2 ~) _With such a tongue as yours,
# E6 i3 k1 t5 o. lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 _6 Q7 ^  P' W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 \1 x7 {' m$ U8 A0 o, Q7 p, \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 I9 ]0 [* g" b$ n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( D- g# E4 U' t- F5 {, i  Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 _8 ]. r* d+ o( {; Q( j) G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 N+ S$ i$ x( P" d9 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 B+ E' T* r, l( o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 a5 s4 _' Y1 k% u3 V6 r& J9 x/ b3 A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( P2 j2 p- v: u+ A. b& S- f# F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" M1 ]# q7 J3 N: K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# b- e7 j* B, Q8 h# A! o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% _; f7 m; c! B* |; \& _) o4 o' C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' Q: M) v' F9 ?3 K% Y$ M  J, e8 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- W( p5 W% }: ~* v, J7 p6 Y4 `7 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# l8 n, g' r+ T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 W/ e. G/ F4 S1 J4 ^9 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- G: W( c& K: {- s) _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 M& S, I1 I$ @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 P5 v0 }; ?- Z  P! I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 Q" z; P: _/ U& o. V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 y2 n" p9 U9 g' w5 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- L4 V- q, R# O2 h; d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! D8 P3 D! R$ z- W$ P; g; C8 c( W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 o! n+ p3 x, p5 _: s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ G/ G" d$ _' z. w& r4 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 ]( m& \6 a2 o2 T( E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>