【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% e! w6 d2 \' A/ XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) z5 m: n6 t0 U: i& FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( d$ K$ \! O9 q/ o; x* T; rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ N1 v' W4 T) v$ _- f$ Z. @+ E( }You needn’t fear anything
* L' q9 u; n+ YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 u' K& g# x9 I3 s, Y$ e6 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 Y3 F9 v8 f: [* W- b6 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* ~3 ^3 y: i+ u% y) sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. D, l4 s9 l. @$ T2 S# z) IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ Q1 V( n$ b* H2 F1 i; \* ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& L( G6 R+ ~  R( Z6 U0 k" \, ]% YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* J$ q: E& Y2 }5 F! w6 C/ ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) U$ W# R2 u& ^( D( @1 H6 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; w& a! K% N* Z/ e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 p! _, b" W1 t% a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; l+ [$ t& A$ A- y* e0 v, F9 O/ D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 g3 z9 F! i# m0 r  h& L7 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 U! U2 _! s2 @. H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 O$ V3 _& v& ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  H/ X9 P9 ~4 O; Y0 W8 J  N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 K5 Q5 N' A- n6 C" D2 }& I<P>你无需担心</P>
" ~+ }+ }6 |0 Z9 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( q! I1 o4 }/ {! m4 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. Y1 T3 h( n8 _0 Q% @+ t1 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 l) @) q% ]2 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& Q/ |% |  e9 Y, J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 G( X' J) \5 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 _( f7 ~9 I9 X4 U* \  y3 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ z5 u" R1 S; \4 r' [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! C, ~' @! O3 H0 \" v& @# x& _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 r, M" j: q( b8 ]$ |; l& c9 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) L$ i( ^# }. l# z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 u0 x5 ^6 E% @7 R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 K. Z$ {+ F: }( b: [: O4 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' ^) M' s$ [. o$ ~" [4 v$ I) \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ p: l% t8 T  `) N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# n7 |) e. j/ g6 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' r! f1 w  Z5 |- b7 g: w我请你剖开它

0 m" h4 a: Q% y. @! j, \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>