【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- {: j8 C- J4 o& n# X, S+ yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 ^; H; [2 F" L3 A7 ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 C! @9 O8 J- T7 {5 e: vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  b, w, H9 M1 G6 ^. X4 ^, mThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 L+ F+ ~& g# j4 e3 E/ R$ DWith the moon kissing it every night
" `8 ~1 ]- x- KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, t& e4 o) z; k" U1 x5 n2 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. M$ n) U9 P( }: _+ q8 R% ^* f# yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 k$ O5 X0 I3 L# N. qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! A; w4 y8 R/ [5 n/ m0 }3 z) ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 I3 U" k# T# b* J; mI want so much to see inside your heart
! S' R# B) s( UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# o* ]# C- h# L0 Q+ N% Z  P! BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 M9 S" Q* P5 c% ~1 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ u+ `! H  q, k' Z  c' _* \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, L, L" k. f7 w, W  q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 H7 ?( M; f) G" Z8 H# k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' G# k* N  B# M: b2 b- r, e$ y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 D  N& ]- K& h0 h/ |4 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 Y2 H$ {4 ~% O4 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; G# r0 S8 q* d3 n4 S3 j4 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ E$ ]1 |2 `& X. [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# B& |; d$ F1 z1 U& g7 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 e  ]" Z% O! Q$ ]; H- w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 m# [6 U9 I! T7 l; Z: r) S<P>你无需担心</P>
; w! ~% E* i* {" L5 Q% b9 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 \$ m. n6 `% `  \  L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- j3 P0 C# _5 q( ?1 f$ s* V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 R3 Y3 B' s' b5 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 J; n4 C% p5 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! {: ?' ~- S3 E  C  Z1 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; _* M) s% \7 A1 ]! b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 B" Y0 _2 ~  a1 p9 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 e& n) [4 \  Z8 ^  A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& W' Q/ }; y$ [: M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 P+ R+ _# c/ }# l, m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: a1 N9 P' S, x8 L. ?7 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, f# |# z0 ]3 e( n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& W: _6 l4 f, s6 {/ u% H: J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( y3 B& V5 t% ^; f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: Z1 ]; n( {+ b. m4 Y' h( M4 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 j* u2 ~5 ^% g( A( N( s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" b& M7 }" M/ l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, S' y$ x. J" x7 o# x* P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  E* O# u3 C  V! ]) r& A- }* l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 G* U6 N- d1 f( a0 B6 J& ?4 k# d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. O! R4 m6 S5 _- i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  D! o: M& g! g6 K. r. r# r/ K我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 j* d' q6 x4 h3 ~0 u+ u* O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>