【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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' |9 U- J, c, V% i  w我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; u) }' R: L/ u  J1 O- h: wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. H. k; F: X. ~( R. }8 y/ cI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 d) U0 q8 D5 d7 f( m+ J; g1 H6 i! QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 N4 F9 E; K% X  VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 d9 j" q& z; N5 Y% p) M4 `7 q9 UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 C: F" ?4 c* Z) E0 }$ c* t! LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; Y+ c  u' V% }) I0 c- o3 n) [, ?: zCan I entrust it to you?
5 J* m4 O, V0 Y" K+ X' z) R" GEntrust my love within your heart
% B- p/ F# G- b4 f$ F6 b: M+ QLove… just the word love
* l( S: a. d; ?+ V9 XWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 o& `+ i, D+ C" v/ p  ?! \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' e9 Z3 \; g4 s8 |5 QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 }, h8 Z+ `4 J/ p& @( T# ?& E+ ECan I entrust it to you?
7 e4 N! R! L( J6 K: T* H5 qEntrust my love within your heart
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3 F- v+ E! N1 F; s- v4 N6 Y% A8 Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 M$ Z8 B+ g) t; M2 D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 n2 D) s2 m$ ^0 y: U: g' ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 d* ~: w% c6 P" B0 j* B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  B& Y" z" a1 e% [- F. W0 Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* _0 M2 U# ~0 m8 }6 O! J' C1 [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% h+ L3 m+ r% X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( g: K' z) H5 W2 Y; d+ U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. E7 u4 O. U2 W' i: y# _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ s' o, u6 q& k! V7 u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 \  N- m4 b; T5 I1 S% ]+ q4 y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' u4 ~' b' c1 z, k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 e, q& i/ D# N2 h. i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: R# S" @4 E% C; P- R1 @# _# u9 I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. W% D' h; m8 k8 ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; `& Q# y0 s: Z7 D9 L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 L# z1 d6 Q6 v; X4 t1 O" I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 P+ p# V( |; u9 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 T/ J: A# F4 U/ b" J) h- B7 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 \3 C' X4 w2 ]* J! M. w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 o/ G- g8 f, s6 h. l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' a# {9 R" \* M9 Z/ C% v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 a8 p7 U: a' [: @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: Q; y+ t+ n2 D$ Q9 b* b6 o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& O" ~+ [# N0 I3 t" n5 `5 ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" ^; P9 ]: C8 ^' O. d/ C<P>But I never did </P>
  Z+ w7 n6 y+ b- d: K% m# N$ _3 l<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: D! N, j1 I; K' k# `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, [3 z# ^* ]( l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 o9 U* h/ X' G5 F5 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 V3 }3 D6 u& m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; H! V! q9 w. ]& o: j9 |  y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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7 r) @: d4 S/ q& p这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' [8 r& f- o  W3 R5 v: I+ x- o2 p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>