【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
8 k; v2 Q% M% b$ nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" F9 j0 \, x6 `8 M) w: v' I5 x2 CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 r" G. C  g5 i( `6 C/ x5 T3 W: nI already loved you with all my heart
) Q1 B& c1 X# E. W1 }5 A9 bWe meet and talk everyday,
# ]5 t! R5 L. xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 [  J: m5 O4 ~+ [3 vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 X! t$ x+ @: f3 O6 I4 X2 WI would probably know how you feel
" S$ n1 b8 N0 w1 J7 ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% |5 [+ H) h; ~3 n* Z$ mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% o# S5 \" y9 F2 k6 Q, e! MIf today isn’t too late,
6 q$ Y& A+ }/ L2 R; R- iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 k% Z7 ^: x+ r4 U8 u' CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 d% n! h8 J. r  jWhy is it so difficult to express?
: I; c; z/ Y0 b( z: Z5 }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& a; h$ g) y, l7 W, f1 qIf today isn’t too late,
% Q4 e2 w* ?9 z. iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 |3 w" F, _2 C- }0 x; EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. K/ m: M/ k/ sEntrust my love within your heart
" ]/ V: j0 p7 R& F4 z) UCan I entrust it to you?
5 k7 g1 p  z: A/ b4 b( N. h' y' pEntrust my love within your heart
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4 o/ s% o' g& z4 s# _+ w: k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  W; z5 S' {; F% [0 W<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 M) \9 p3 h9 ~* t$ T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: \8 v0 \- W! Z7 Z0 G' ~, v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ [- \- H4 V1 v. t3 B- E2 t" O<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 }- n3 J) d7 X  m( `. O  W  p* B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  b- |8 q3 c) R/ I. d% c' o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# O$ [( [. r4 ?1 d' ^<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% S, ]5 C$ M+ W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" _- I9 n% s) t' y' }2 K/ K! E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 w) R9 _" z( P) G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ p+ c  k5 Q. T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' H7 {0 p5 v: [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' r( e/ P; ]3 ?% g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 o0 U8 R& I1 v0 Q& g1 t0 R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& j+ f7 C5 `$ P, _1 y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 N& u" C; Y) K  u) t8 }" d2 ?1 g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 k* J2 x- }$ a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  b* r8 V7 L. e5 k" W- Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 z7 b/ R6 _. L' N. i<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 K7 }# ?  G  Z/ U# k1 ~' i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 }' ]' g: p+ A1 W0 J( X! E- a; d<P>但我不会 </P>
- u$ n4 f9 d( |1 p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 l! r# @  W/ I( r8 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 n# g. s1 Z# C7 _. V& q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( y' z( E" P. n0 I1 e* g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ @$ L5 G0 o5 y. ^4 h7 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; {3 H! x$ y& ]  B. b+ t4 t5 r: N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: j: M0 q  C# f, x0 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, y# A* P' A: ?+ H4 O! v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 K- i: f9 D  n) u) H3 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ t6 M5 D$ a; Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% Q' r( C/ D1 V3 P/ T& I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! i( s) u/ A+ H: i7 E8 F) H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>