【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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, p# t7 _8 ~1 x; F5 I我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, ]! `2 |1 h1 K6 I2 \7 jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( y9 d/ x4 ^4 qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ H9 G$ E  M# B6 K  `I would probably know how you feel
, S# F  M5 ~8 {' n1 K9 `) l% [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: K$ x: f* l& K; m! e& r/ kBut I never did
3 O6 J- t$ F0 K  X6 g$ l" c/ f0 lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: ~1 ~( O: Q- N4 W0 PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- x, s% X6 O1 T  s9 p% W" m# _% OCan I entrust it to you?
9 ?& ?& e# g% F) e" s$ ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 y5 m4 ?" o2 J3 s* Z, Q$ X# IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 P* I9 g  P& e( \' I! n7 `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 y7 m% z! I, F- Q  S0 F7 L# N' ?Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 `+ u9 d6 ?) [; yEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% ]6 v3 ?" i9 J" p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 S& o4 _8 [0 q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 E; |; z5 Q+ D/ F/ k# B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ X+ {2 `' \- Z, J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 n* [5 G. [7 K5 |. Z/ `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! q5 K& z/ Q/ W( C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 I/ |, ~4 H# V, U<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 @% P, ~1 T0 L2 ?/ ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" I' S8 \9 }; H/ Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ G  P$ y. C6 ]% _4 f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" l* |8 ?; K3 t, B, w% O<P>但我不会</P>
! u; t) A5 z( d# ]/ `- w' K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 `- q. F8 L! C. l: u- L<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 M/ l+ n4 }5 e8 Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ Q% ]4 k) b4 x- j1 ^9 E+ B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. p+ S: S4 x) F  ^7 b" v/ O' ?, j) ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 k& B2 f; N% U9 L2 H) H$ ?( H$ ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ G; G+ w  P7 |6 s* ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ Y  I7 |$ J2 }' ^. F. E) M4 Q7 D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" C1 K* c. \% v0 j8 X" W<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. u1 \; B  F2 R. P$ K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ q$ d7 s$ f9 `9 _6 K, i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 Y5 G6 E" g+ J4 H+ P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. V. F2 q$ t/ W+ T. {<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( C$ G7 ?: }5 A/ X! Y) B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; G2 k$ S$ z$ g; M- {1 }- y/ z) j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 e* m7 l. }, w9 i1 t5 X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" V' ?; @2 X; Q$ f' O+ @1 F' j$ z9 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* G2 {0 p0 |: a4 I+ O! {5 H+ x! z, a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* `8 Y% b4 Q  n& F# s( n& M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 Q5 I1 e+ x" E: B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- c; b$ T. X8 b% h( V, n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  D: P- G% y: r" @# l" ^4 f- }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% m# @- t8 ~9 d  j# @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* W4 j. t4 ^( A& |4 l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 |; M- ^5 H- }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>