【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! K6 y6 |2 N8 G, q" }2 W我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 Q7 B  k! @2 X6 n; AFrom the first moment we met,
" `& T% E& Y: P( l( jI already loved you with all my heart
+ L: o9 `: S6 aWe meet and talk everyday,
  T0 W1 Y1 X, C- E& ?) c, U3 K4 ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 `  Q0 D" Y3 H2 V2 Y) S! Z$ WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 m7 h4 U; P- C! _But I never did
- M, |* v/ |. e& K! @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 f: l. ^' u" P$ a; V  cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 y: T! M3 D6 J' ~( [8 @  [' cLove… just the word love
; T) s# Y2 F9 O$ P8 K6 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
) i% u* L* G, P8 K9 KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 a  ^5 ^! [" N; V0 q8 G. kCan I entrust it to you?
, U; n$ v, z9 z# L! B* X! `Entrust my love within your heart
! L( h' Y: ]. O9 f! D+ g1 `4 E- MCan I entrust it to you?
- }+ s  D' ]- ^0 U5 c7 f8 mEntrust my love within your heart

/ _: Q" `9 x6 I0 O- W0 z3 c: @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) H; i2 M9 x: Z. @" j$ ~& l% R* m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ l+ I- a% D0 f' d/ T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: N- h* f4 _$ M<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 @: H0 X5 c! {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 Q2 v+ s2 ]5 @/ {7 }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- u  i0 Q0 R" N0 Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* F% i+ o% ]- `! g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 T' B8 V' v2 b0 Z( [+ P! z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! r/ E: L0 {# g5 S$ p6 ]7 O$ d<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# G% X! i7 \* A7 H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ V. l. g- x$ C3 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: h. k+ u% |  Z5 H( t$ t/ w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# ~& ~! T# y! H3 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. n, P( j2 p5 Q+ _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ W% C# @" j+ B" y4 B7 H* A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 H& h" w; f7 B! L2 S/ D5 q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 q; ^/ i; a+ K! Z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  |9 A+ [- Y, M* J8 F4 D3 e<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* n! O) i" }9 i) ?6 _$ X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ O) t$ U" A. p8 m% A" O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ f+ K- M7 d. _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: U/ p( d% ]! i& O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! w0 E9 @% R$ J4 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- P! E$ @& g! M: m; `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' K9 N1 v+ [' C& g, D<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ s9 U. i  k& M* q4 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" Y7 e7 P: k- I4 {  d, J4 R<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! r, T+ s0 f3 I/ S5 W7 d+ q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>