【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
* s$ d- S4 j. m: kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. Z8 |, k7 ?( e1 jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, g; k- u9 R4 G- n0 I: uFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ F; i: q: T) O* N+ E( k, e; f; QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" V! H7 P2 v# T6 A( cI want to confess that I love you,
+ q9 x: Q0 M4 k3 v% uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- z; U  b) I3 O& ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 O9 [. e" i1 B7 \9 O5 Y: Y+ ^5 |Love… just the word love
1 F) b+ S- V6 A7 ?; Y# Y# z$ OWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 \/ B  r, \  f' Y! K* iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  p8 ]3 K  ^& d2 R  [% G9 eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: G% j/ K' H0 w3 xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: c; h5 W7 Z, P+ n) Z$ Z% `# PEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% d5 A8 }; m3 E1 h) w) K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# Q& A( v: y, ^9 w( v9 H0 b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 }* M6 R. C' V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 d4 r- z) f: r: a9 k- Y" M4 v. N  ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ Q6 R7 c+ h3 S  @2 ^- x% Y" ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! W3 g8 g1 R5 g$ F( i$ z) t4 I' H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, H0 k  D* r8 ]( M# l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' Y) m/ W" n7 Q( W0 n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 x$ p9 @) X  n9 U: n3 ~  ~. Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) X, u2 r& T; D" V2 c; B1 y- ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 \6 D9 e+ z* i( ?7 G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 h* t3 H; t! B4 R& m. A* I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% X8 V  |6 t( b$ c& Q& A" W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! o; U7 A! ~2 ~9 O6 d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ?0 m2 ]+ N* n4 Z: W" V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ W1 X4 e4 g5 b( [3 J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# j6 H  S( n! H+ V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 x- j, Z% Y9 s8 S# k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# p2 d1 X1 H8 k, h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 L- d# ^$ z* _* G5 l0 {  {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 G* K' i" P( D" S+ P8 V<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 B4 k6 h; z; h+ y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 ~1 H, [  |- L2 S# d4 p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 G$ s" f' j" [: K# }( c: E' g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 c& I+ K/ y5 Z. z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: i, K2 A0 Q9 O4 y. R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 |$ D. a% o- ~, E2 L- r1 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; x/ q$ m# M7 H2 P7 j3 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ p6 `( y: b+ X) E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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0 s9 M* `& a, Y# O3 r这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- N' r# v( o6 [% z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>