【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: Z9 k; ~4 T1 u2 `5 |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ [* R$ \7 t* L  h8 Q8 h; o) FFrom the first moment we met,
5 R# V# {) h9 l! K! dI already loved you with all my heart
# y( r; Y( C3 N" E# }; t( b2 u1 n1 mWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 [/ ~9 s1 z3 a1 t- FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ @% R; Y1 n: v6 FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* Y8 G1 R8 x$ B1 |( h6 P( F" HI want to confess that I love you,
$ U! L1 e+ E# Y- I, N/ dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ [$ K& a' z2 l. o# c! z" PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" B1 X/ @$ `' _" _. [) ~- w4 ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# C  w9 ]7 r5 B9 s: O6 l- D6 PI want to confess that I love you,
  A8 M$ d! f+ L' ~" IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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) E6 B/ A0 z0 H! E! e: r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% c# R8 K; m, E7 f<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 M; K: i2 s  w. o) W  d5 z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 l( s: n/ B1 P& o: t& i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# B0 T2 C! A: [4 _& i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& \6 E  Y  B$ ~$ ]+ a. t& ^2 N8 V<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 Q1 s  {0 d' Q4 k4 O7 V2 l" c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% m/ A9 G- s0 P: S: e) O/ ~<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# G) l1 D6 ^; |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& n# m. {4 o5 {4 H: L<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& j5 B! X) n: {6 y$ Q$ u/ B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 p9 K, L- }, }4 ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  d3 A* t4 ^0 V- v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* @0 C$ M0 @* q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 p: S! I" @/ @* R# ?7 h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 g  ~) U4 q+ g1 E" @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; X3 N- N# p! ], ^" \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# L7 @) {9 M; B<P>但我不会</P>
% C1 R. y3 W1 c* ?8 l<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! J% p$ l) L7 V8 X+ v( s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ z, j* @) _: ~. z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 H: |4 ?9 o9 j! p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, q7 q% _- ~) O& t8 F/ v7 A1 b: ^# V# [<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 w  V2 u1 X8 `. W( ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; t" q7 G7 g+ o3 G9 Q* c<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 @; d6 f  n7 N5 s8 c3 p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 _' B+ p% h! N! S& H<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* f# G6 t  w7 V/ U1 x% ^+ G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ ?$ S+ p+ P# z) x' Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; s; V3 B: {5 t4 U0 }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 T% N: d2 j0 g( }; L) H8 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% o; G( F  |9 D; ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ H7 Q8 C5 g6 }3 o3 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) K( d; ^% y, U- @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 T1 _1 L5 h) o# t  T0 R; x5 Q7 O* n# |3 ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 Q: \6 h; U% T这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% E# N9 i7 V! ?5 E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( k7 v$ N& V, z6 g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>